#i just read jjk and edit it in my head and redo the fights to make the weight of the hits actually felt... its so painful..

[nicomrade]

this is simply not how u do this kind of gag like identical repetition for comedic effect does not work when ure just cloning a full page ?!?!. this sucks to read my eye has NOTHING to look at since ive quite literally JUST SEEN THIS...

like i think fundamentally jjk is deeply unaware that a page is supposed to have at least 1 panel that holds ur attention somewhat- that looks interesting or cool or good. and more than that its seemingly blind to the fact its a VISUAL medium and therefor the visuals r important. the plague of blank pages is proof enough of this (pages that r 99% blank panels w text over em with very little actual illustration on em- sometime even describing very visual things instead of depicting them)

which is like unhezrd of for a comic artist to me like why do u draw if u apparently dont particularly like drawing ?!?! and also are so clumsy as a writer?????????? artist who only cares about the fights BUT THE FIGHTS ARENT EVEN GOOOOOOOOOOOOD

people r interactin w my tweets too much tonight its scaring me so im retreating here to hate on how badly made j/jk is. manga that is so bad u stop putting it on the authors failure and instead start blaming their environment for creating circumstances that allowed it to suck this bad