Clone Wars Escape from Kadavo
Well this is certainly a
scene change and one that doesn’t really make sense,
I mean I thought it was a Camp of Holding for slaves
Where they got transported to different places on the island to do
slave labor, per
hap
-s
Now there’s apparently a lava pit under it,
How?
That
-doesn’t make any sense
Also wtf,
Coal, metal
Since when was
refinery really this place’s
MO
(Like this is really starting to feel like they got the
Mandalorian
And
This
Set
-ting
s
Switch
ed,)
Not to say they can’t be a
coal/mining industry,
Just, that the setting should
reflect it,
From we saw there was nothing to indicate this was anything but
an ar
chai
c
Soc-either
With no flues
Or fu
-mes
To indicate
that they were burn
Ing combustibles,
Honestly some kind of stalactites
mine,
Or someplace where they
dig for
“valuables,”
-like
prized st-
one for
Jew
elery-
Would
make
more
sense-
-
Anyway, I’m getting.
way too
focus
-ed
on
the
se-
tt
-
Ing-
-
Again Rex is
just straight up chilling,
This is
n’t
his first rodeo with abusers,
Ok, seriously what was up with the
Wil
-h
el
m,?
(Like I don’t honestly see anything
steep enough to fall off)
You could say
it was a whip but we haven’t seen any
Of
That,
Ye
t-
I don’t get the
screaming-
Also that
dude just attacked him out of nowhere,
Like
could we have gone
establishment of that?
Like,
What was even his ber-zerk
butt-
on
there?
Dude was doing his job
Like if it was a faster thing you kind of have to establish that before hand
-
Also then the environment, the ma
jor
ity,
Would be working at a
breakneck speed,
With a sense of anxiety,
In the
air,
Then,
the whip,
He-
was?
(Like that was just
plain - pointless
Not even an emotional reaction
Like that told us absolutely nothing about the setting
and character
The mate didn’t even have a reaction
It’s one random guy that just decided to hit
someone else-
Like that’s not even calculated never mind
systematic,
Also I like how Rex like yeah
I wouldn’t know anything about that,
feck’in
Jedi
-
Also
“Effect?”
Not really more like
“ Dave’s having a real rough day and I really don’t want to talk to
(In that
state)
Like they didn’t wince.
There was no antici
pation-
No
anxiety,
Like no signs of this is had a
permanent
psychologically
damaging
affect
(Note all toxic behavior is
harmful,
The difference here is
Between
The intensity of the
in-dentation,
It can get pretty
bad
And enabling
tox can have serious effects
(Pretty
bad)
(Requiring a lot more time
to undo)
From;
Dave is really an
asshole,
To
I am really an
asshole,
To
The world is really an
asshole (And Dave is the
savior-)
(Apologies to anyone who’s chosen name is
Dave or similar vernacular,
It’s not out of any Mala-
cian-
Just the first identi
fication I could think of,
And tox-
ic logic is really not something you wanna enable,
Again what the Frick?
(This is really not an
or-ganic way to
introduce
your
rules
Like, “oh yeah
speech is for-bidden,
Have a nice
day,”
Like
you
think
dude-
Like you were pretty damn path
-etic
abu
ser-
(s)
-
(Sla
vers)
Wow,
There was no emotions or anything
-be
cause the set up was so poor,
W-
h
-a
t
Again the emotion
is non existence,
Also what the fuck
happened to Rex over there?
-
When did he
go down?
(Like don’t
get me wrong
I saw a flash in the corner?)
But why
him?
[also did the scenery just completely changed because he was on the far end of Ken-
Obi with something in between
Some thing they were
shoveling the stuff on?
That’s just
gone in this shot]
[Also,
From a narra-
tive,
standpoint wouldn’t it have made more sense and been a more engaging concept,
If the guy had threat
-ene
d-
The clone
in Obi- wan’s
stead,
Seeing as of the
republic’s version of slavery,
Rex pos
s-
ib
ly
Reflec-
ting on the
(Other
Species?)
And
contrasted with them,
On how much
Obi-Wan views him as a possession,
(Or his reaction to the people under him getting hot
,and why)
Allo-
wing for more heart,
“I’m
sorry,”
“No
Wors
e-
Than
The
Kamino
-ins,”
Rex’s
Sub
Cat;
Seeing the people he was trained (and order-ed) to protect
Harm
-ed
-
Much like the people (under him) were harmed during the Kamooin.
s-
Groom
-ing,
?]
Any
-way,
Again,
and what was the emotion?
-
M-aster
Rex must be like,
Kar-
ma
If he’s
not,
[Never mind
he isn’t asleep
just one frame
made it look weird?]
Ai-
gh -t
Oh yeah seriously check up on that one guy instead of you know the person under the command,
Also;
What The fuck?
IS THAT GOOGLY EYES?
What the feck,
What is with that
expression-
What is with that
facial-
(Seriously someone tell me what
emotions this is supposed to por-
tray!
What?
Also yeah
they completely waltz.
-ed
past the ab-
us
-er.
Be-
Ing
-
Con-
fron
ted-
by
the
Con-
Seq-
Uen
Ce
(s)
Of
their
actions,
It’s not pointed out that Obi-Wan totally caused this by (not)-
listen-ing,
To dude’s
initiative
to stay out of it
(Or, what he did to Cody
Rex,
and basically
all the clones,)
(And what could’ve been a good moral about negative effects of “Pos-
itive over-
invo
lv
e-
Ment-
)
so I am slightly big mad
Not com-
-pletely
But I’m
get-ting
th-ere
Drinking
my
slightly
bitter
ju-ice-
Gett
-ing
pr-etty
salty
Which is odd since I normally don’t criticize
aesthetic differences
Like
This-
-
The problem is it isn’t the aesthetic
that I have a problem with,
(You want to have a Obi-Wan show more compassion to the slave of similar generation then to Rex?
(That’s per-fect-ly fine and could even show how he values his job and Mission over someone he is actually wound-
ed-)
However that’s not it-
(It doesn’t
even do that)
My problem with it is that it shows no
emotion
No emphasis
No moral
It’s - empty
-
Watching this scene,
there is absolutely nothing I get out of it,
Also wow that was a
quick turnaround,
Like seriously
it generally takes longer
for that kind of behavior to be indented,
This is literally the only Jedi
he’s seen be there
One time
This is barely scraping
logic,
And
even
then,
not
really
requiring-
pre-knowledge
of the emotions
and general plot
(before
hand)
I know that I should feel bad for the
slave because
slav-ery is a bad thing
And any real person would be
pretty upset it/
Suffer for the toxic environment,
Note; it’s not from the
medium
I didn’t gain that
knowledge
from the medium
(In which the chara-
cters
actions and emotions,
Make me
conclude,
“oh wow,
slavery is a real
bad thing!”
No the characters are wooden puppets
with no emotion,
Going from;
Point a to point B
Nothing to connect them
(No preamble)
No emotions
No motive(s)
‘why is Obi-Wan doing what he’s doing?’
‘I don’t know’
(And I honestly don’t think the wr-
iters did either)
And no damn interest
Barely scraping
logic..
‘Why is Obi-wan
doing what he’s doing,’
‘Because he has the rescue the slaves,’
‘ why does he have to rescue the slaves,?’
‘ because you have to rescue slaves,’
It’s literally circular
Rely- ing completely on the cookie
cu-
tter,
Resulting in it being as flat as a cookie when
rolled over by a rolling pin,
Where
It
should;
Be;
“ why does Obi-Wan want to rescue the slaves?”
“Because of his dedication to his moral compass/ because of his dedication to his generation/ non-
clone- ena
blers,/
(Whatever
you want
to put
there)
(Hey that was almost emotion from
,Rex)
(We’re
2:29
Min
Ut
es
In,
And I’m already
salty about the episode refusal to be
fun,
-
That’s nice
exposition
*Palpatine*.
Sidious,
Tra-
dition
(S);
Mill-
That’s literally all I
-heard-
-(I assume they’re saying
“millions,”)
Which would actually be neat if we got to see some you know human soldiers on the Darkside to counterbalance the whole do you know clone troopers, contrasting the dark side’ s more ethical but none the less toxic practices,
To the light side’s-
Gen Break-
De-
fiance?
(I think you mean that other Zygerian’s death because we have literally not seen the queen act even remotely rebellious,
Yeah she
con-
templates possibly free-
ing them,
But we haven’t seen her openly communicate with either of these 2 to inform them
And she still wants to keep
Anakin,
So she at least
has one Jedi,
With the others possibly be blamed on a
-prison break-
And literally nothing that we’ve seen
com-municating the concept of open - rebel-
lion
Or any of the connection between
her
and the separatist,
Again seriously
how am I
supposed to feel about that
��(Also the one person that gives even the slightest bit of emotion and it’s the villain,)
Like I’m surprise’d
Dooku’s surprised by that
(Er-)
O-k
Whe-lp
(Also, now there
are flues).
(Don’t recall
seeing them
last time,)
Or just sticks with gold
on them
(I am very
con-
fused,)
This seems pretty different
And totally safe
(Also wasn’t the castle
blue?)
But I’m not against it because it could work with the
symbolism of wild,
Or just.
Wor
-k
(I know I’m being way too hop-
- eful but I try,
Re-
hash-
Easy-
So why is there no other emotion
And why do you look like a
caveman,
(Eyebrows
constantly furr-
Ow-
ed)
Also what was with the
pro-nunciation and
emotion?
Bare,
Also literally no
one else is paying attention to that guy?
?
‘ he also doesn’t
cause me to have any emotions’
Like seriously I know that it’s a cat person but you still have to show some sentient emotion here
If there’s no emotion,
there’s no risk,
(Part of
sent- ience)
Att-
end,
Again that’s not the cha-
llenge I think they were trying to make it out to be;
(Un-accountabili-
ty)
Aka
What it would work best as;
Remix;
“ I’ll would never turn away from a challenge,” Anakin said snarkily,
The queen se-
duct
iv
el-
y
Taking his light saber,
-
that works better;
-
Ser-iously
-
Um-
No,
(Last time someone fall from a height that
high, they died,)
(You have to play by
your
own
rules,
)
Wha-
Also again wh
-at-
Sky
-walker
When
?-
-
Would be nice if you ever
feckin showed it,
(Seriously the concept of Obi-Wan having to come to terms at least temporary that his Over-involvement has
hurt people is an interesting concept,”
Also bullshit
that you know that
(Pretty)
(You’re all enabled and you haven’t spent any time around
Obi-Wan)
(That’s a stupid plan
and the animation really doesn’t help,)
Zy-ger
Perm
-
R-
i-,
Oh yeah so no reserves,
about using the term,
“master”
After this
schism
?
-
Y-eah
-
How?
-
W-at
[The emotions are off the roof and I have no idea
with the scale of escalation
W-at]
Lesh
-
Li- fe
You did-
n’t?
-
Emo
tion-
?
Wh-at?
Who
called-
the
guards?
Seriously if this is such a constantly abusive (tox) relationship than how do they not know,
(Unless the previous guards got killed and these
are the
newbies,)
Because you don’t act like it all don’t have any of the characteristics generally associated with constantly rein-forc
-ed toxicity,
Show-
ed no emotion including
(anxiety and anticipation)
In that previous
fight,
As well as no negative
con-
seq-
uen
ce
s
for your behavior
-
Even now your voice is just
“ oh I’m
dyi-ng-
-,’.
.
Meep,
[Something
happened
not a Tumblr refresh,
Gist;
There’s absolutely no emotion in the scene and the fact that she just dies after that being the threat is just kind of cheap,
[and the fact that she had absolutely no expression
(Or emotion)
during that entire fight
Not showing any of the general signs
-
Just no)
And that expression is a weird way way to end
The scene.
not the movie that still going,
(Un-fortunate-
ly)
Uh, why
Off to you obviously evil factory,
land,”
Kick,
Hey
isn’t it that minor antagonist
that hasn’t showed up since the last episode?
. . .
Why?
. . .
And he included
the clone
why?
(Oh yeah I want the
Jedi Knight
Obi-Wan
Kenobi,
And especially the to my knowledge
(default)
clone.
-
And Rex
who is honestly a lot more intimidating,
K-i
[Again this is supposed really be about.
Ken-obi but I’m really focusing on
Rex,]
Wh-
at-
-
How?!
They were on a
bug?
I-
Ok-
Sorry my memory
gave out for a moment at the whole
Anakin durp face thing
-
-
W-h
W-
Wood
Again, how is he supposed to do that?
-
Ter-
-
I-l
Sl-av
es
So Ahsoka goes to rescue the slaves while An-a
kin,
stays here and carves a hole,
En-ough
No emotion!
Oh,
I thought he meant
Ah
-soka
-
Oh so yeah let’s bring a warship into what seems to have been
intended as a stealth mission,
Screw
Fitt
Ing
Re
Action-
And-
W-
.
How
did that change the fact that they have the button that can kill all the
slaves,
(It didn’t)
Obi-won just apparently stopped giving a
fr-ick
-
Ray-
Well then they were impossible to
take out,
F-a
-
S-l
But only the
Tyger-ian
(Apologies for any misspelling
I mean Ahsoka’s
kind,)
“He
-at,”
“Cut,”
Ge-n-
Rex did more than Obi-wan,
Also yeah
completely forgot about that,
Also he said
kill,
[Not further
im-prison,”
]
Rex had some
rage-
Also you’d think that be Obi-Wan
considering how much he’s gotten
,screwed with
This entire
,time
-
Wh,at
Wh
-y
-
-
Wh
-y
-
H-ere
-
How is Rex still fighting
guys?
-
Also thanks a lot Obi-Wan
you useless
piece of shit,
[Again, would
n’t it make
sense?
.)
W-ell
-
You just came into a door
just hop them - over-
-
Lan
d-
Wait,
How did you just get in, there
though,
.
Co-
vert
-
?
O-Kay,
new character,
W-h
-
(Also oh no they gave
plo another fleet
Great
)
Ser-iously,
what
where are these guys coming from?
,
You’ve literally been allowed this dude to heck around the entire time while Rex did all the hard work
La-me,
Also seriously where was all that
-
,coming from-
-
Wh
at-
Where
was the
emotion?
-
Hey that had no meaning, symbolism
or emotion behind it -
whatsoever,
I
?
A-i
-
W-h
-
-
-
Whelp, was completely boring
Covenants of a good,
fun story;
- Set; Excessive in instances that don’t directly affect the story’s
up, cohesivity
-Tone; Is appropriate
-Emotions; And appropriate, and consistent and manage to keep a consistent tone,
(Un-nessary,
Typically switch-ed for a
more logical tone,
In works of
non-fiction,
Though may be in both,
So long as note
is given,)
This
film
(Movie
-
Gets absolutely none of it right except the basics for a
good story
It’s
co -
hesive-
But damn
boring
and empty,
Story
-
Re-write.
-
(I needed something fun after watching that
boring documentary,)
So let’s
get into it,
-
(May
feature
episode
-overlap)
Obi-Wan emerges from the carrier,
With R
-ex,
(Obi-Wan possibly sub- con-ciously
mov
-ing
In
Fron
-t
Of
Rex-)
[Or
Cody]
The
minor
antagonist
welcome(s)
them;
Obi-wan trading some banter with him
-
It
being part of a plan to get captured,
Unfortunately somethings went ar-ray and instead of
Cody being the back up plan; he got taken with him
The minor antagonist
-
quickly cuts the chatter
-
By having the guard
(S-
bring Cody forward, introducing him as
Obi-Wan’s
Slave
Giving a veiled threat of
“ would be a shame if something happened to such a
,pretty specimen,”
Obi-Wan getting
def-ensive,
The atag,
Com
menting,
“ Pretty protective,
Of your toy,
Aren’t
You,”
Before
having
them thrown
somewhere,
Next time,
we see them they’re getting e-
scor-
ted-
for gem
Min-
Ing,
(Possibly some black humor from the vil
-ains-
about how people
will pay,
“An arm
or leg
*Pos-sibly
yours,
For
the
stuff,’
On the way there one of the guards notices Rex
(Cody)’s
ey-ing the place.
warning him
That,
‘He’s
not
the only
one
under
ob
-servation)
Possibly
causing
a wincing
or anxious
reaction
from
them
.
(I would generally
encourage flashbacks to be
able to - show the emotion
em-
ot
ion,)
(Under-stand
what is going inside their
head,)
But for now
I’ll stick
with
the example
given by the show
which is no flashbacks,
The
guard
making
it clear what will happen
Shock-
-Ing-
The clone
(Eith
er)
Ha-ving
a bad reaction
to this,
Knee
jerkingly
reaching
out,
The guard
grabbing him
and
holding him
back -
-
Forced into a
distressing circumstance of
fa
il
-in
g-
The
Miss-
-ion
-
Those two are
pretty much out of the action
for the rest of the episode being
stuck
Obi-Wan can’t do anything without hurting Cody
Cody can’t do anything without hurting
the slaves
-
Most of their part is
contrasting
the condition,
Most of the
action is with
Ahsoka,
Who talks down that dweeb
(Maybe someone near-er
to her age)
And they go break
Obi-Wan out so he can back up, Anakin
In the Dooku fight,
The most consistent and
clear char-
-acter
Being
Q
-ueen,
Being a
slaver-
If
it’s
Ana-
Kin,
Anakin having to begrudgingly put up with this
slaver’s nonsense
Be-grudgingly
- Her talking about how life is slavery
and him just not...
Then
Dooku
Shows
Up,
(The whole transition between the mine scene and the Anakin- slaver scene,
Being a cut from the sparks in a mine
To the jewel on her finger
With extra focus
being put on the jewels,
Possibly all done with all of them
Zy-
gar-ian
(Or of all
the planets that
she’s taking people from-
Zygarian
Heir
loom)
A black stone
(in the middle of her chest)
By a pendant
(Generally
implied to be by
Count Dooku)
Toxic
court-ing
implied,
Count Dooku
announces
a surprise visit,
The Queen is pleased
but nervous
(Hands
behind -back)
“I-”
Putting
a wine glass down behind it,
Dooku is immediately aggressive
The queen
offering
Anakin as a consolation prize
As the youngest and newest to the-ir possible
rank,
Dook-u snark
Ing,
Dooku threaten
-ing to kill
The queen having issue with that whole main characterization being the collector of rare things
(Possibly a reflect-
Ion about the no speaking rule)
More likely Dooku dismissing her con-
cerns just saying that he can always get her a new one,
“The Queen possibly wincing at a raised hand
- if we want to go for indications of
physical tox-’
Poss-ibly a conversation about why she put up with
him
“He treats me well”
Focus on the necklace and pendent to
- contrast with the choking necklace-
Possibly a poison
Sub-line
-
If you want
to go there,
-
But focusing on Ahsoka,
they broke those guys out,
Ahsoka finding a heartbroken
Jedi,
Explaining that their res
-pect
ive
clone friend,
Has given up on them
Ahsoka finding that person,
Who manages to explain that he can’t
move either-
To be cut off by the guards
who has really had enough of
every-
thing-
Decided - screw it if pain isn’t going to make you stop and then might as well put them in a life or death situation,
Add-ing time on the clock
(Or at least a new var-
iable-)
Ahsoka possibly
does a whole speech thing
(Since seriously
we’ve seen none of her involvement or even care about
her own
spe-cies)
Via dem
on-
Strat
Ion-
(Very likely leading to a
riot situation,)
As they didn’t plan on the
Tagroatians (?)
Rebell
ing due to
crush
-ed
spirits,
That happens
-
Those two re-
unite and go to fi-ght
Dooku
(I never.
really cared for the
Zy-
ger-
Ian
queen,)
If she lives in then,
she’s grateful for them driving off Dooku,
Allows them to get off with the slaves,
(Necklace might have information
might not,)
*Honestly I felt it made more sense for
Anakin to be the one in the mine;
The Zy-
garian queen, and Obi
-Wan hav-
ing boomer ban
-ter,
With Obi-Wan a lot more
aware of that stuff,
(Show-ing
worldliness
by identifying the stones)
While Anakin compares
the circumstance to the one that he used to live in,
And the one he enabled Rex living in,
While Ahsoka, could team up with a
Zy-ger-Ian round
her age,
Possibly some conversations about
enabling-
May-be Ahsoka talking about getting a clone
command of her own-
(If we want the clone commanders to be a constantly
featured theme
here)
Boomer
Bait,
Busting Anakin out of the
mine,
Obi-Wan getting hidden behind a
cur-tain,
And going to heck over Dooku,
(Slaves recovered-)
Both the Zy-
Gar-
Ian-
(And a flirtatious
promise to return
By
Obi-wan, )
[contrast
Mandalorian]
Gets
Free-
Dom-
-
End-
-
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