#i also think kolosten needs some changes but again i dont have any specific thoughts though

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hi3 things i would change:

wendy arc. she deserves better. the pacing in these chapters is so weird and i feel like she shouldve felt more dangerous? but i also get that they were saving that for HoV. idk she should still bee more difficult though tbhes.

chapter 19. add more owl and ana prior to this to create extra impact to their story.

elysian realm. augrhrghr. I WANNA LOOK IN THEIR DRAFTS SOOOO BAD. i like elysian everlasting but dear god that drained me it made me hate open world hi3 so much oh my god. i hate not having a linear timeline in hi3 why the fuck did they stop doing that. anyways i wanna focus on more flame chasers than just elysia yk. i also think giving elysia very human flaws or emphasizing her experiences with the horrors of humanity wouldve been soooo oughoughghghhgh.... yk. having ely go through more grief herself and that being an extension of mei's theme on grief since theyre linked......

moon arc. do i have to say it.

MODERN DAY KASLANAS IM GONNA DIE WHY DID THEY WRITE BIANKAS REVEAL LIKE THAT.