#i absolutely LOVE hearing what y’all thought about specific instances or how you felt it’s seriously one of my favourite things ever
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I got a lump in my troath when they had the argument. They way he compared how reader treated him to how they treated Tomura got my heart aching.
I love how you write their toxic relationships and that at they same time, it's not too cliche, not like the wattpad ones that I've grew up reading. They feel mature and real.
Dabi's jealous and fucking other people while thinking about reader was quite heartbreaking.
I forgot about Tomura for a moment 😂😂😂
I wish he was a little tougher with Dabi, he seems to have a soft spot for him. He's the boss and still he didn't do anything even when he certainly knows about reader x dabi "relationship". But, I'm curious about their last dialogue and see what will happen.
Your characters are so cool! And unique.
I loved to see reader acting up, even if they were on drugs, and Tomura being surprised. I hate when reader is extremely submissive even in a toxic relationship, to the point they let anyone do whatever they want with them.
I'm proud of you for posting, and trust me, it's just as good as the first part. I love your writing, how you describe Dabi, and your delicate descripitions. Don't feel pressure to update it, do whenever you wish, we'll patiently wait Clari.
Sending warm hugs 💛✨
eeee hi bb!!! thank you so much <33 throwing my response under a cut bc it’s long!!
aaah i’m glad to hear it had an emotional effect on you!!!!!!!! that fight is very,,, idk i’m not even sure how to describe it exactly, just that i wanted it to hit very hard, and i know that if anyone said those lines of dialogue to me i’d be sobbing in a heap on the floor :(
oh thank you!!! characters + relationships between characters are my favourite things to write, so anytime someone compliments me on that i get all giddy ��🥰
that’s actually the scene i want to rewrite the most (dabi fucking other people). i know i can do better than what i posted and i know that lil scene has so much untapped potential so i’d like to go back and revise it quite heavily soon!! it is a heartbreaking concept tho :((
tbh right now tomura’s coping by simply ignoring it all. he doesn’t want to think about it (yet) and is kind of in denial that something’s budding there, and that’s why he hasn’t come down harder on dabi yet. the next part will actually focus on tomura + his feelings quite a bit!! and then this is all on top of taking over a massive corporation, which is extremely stressful but provides a very good and much needed distraction (for now!)
aaaah thank you so much!! <33 it was so much fun to write that scene, it’s so *dramatic* ehehehe but tbh yeah i like readers that are mostly Babie™️ with a bit of flair/brattiness to them. this reader definitely has more of a backbone than touya-nii’s reader, tho!
aw sweetpea thank you so, so much <33333 you’re so incredibly kind to me and i appreciate it more than i could ever tell you 🥺 sending tons of warm hugs back!!! <33
#aaaah ALSO thank you so much for leaving such a detailed lil review!!!!#i absolutely LOVE hearing what y’all thought about specific instances or how you felt it’s seriously one of my favourite things ever#so thank you for that <33#it’s very fun to see how others comprehend and interpret my work#and if it’s hitting/coming across the way i want it to#ANYWAYYYY you’re so precious and sweet#please take care of yourself <333 i promise i’m taking a tiny rest now#clari gets mail
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