#hey i'd also take fanwai. or more info on how the ml is fucking gutted every time mo fan has to die early | Explore Tumblr posts and blogs

arytha · 1 year ago

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me shaking this author and asking for something coherent PLEASE i've read too many chapters (195 out of 308) to give up on this now but im DYING for something more interesting than your tell but not show writing and asinine timeskips and weird scene jumps

#mara reads #not all of these are winners. it doesnt even have a good enough overarching plot (its quick transmigration) to keep me #interested for that. lol #mo fan was more interesting before he decided to love the male lead #and also. the author has admitted that they're making this up as they go #and have been quietly complaining in the authors notes for like 100 chapters now about inspiration to keep writing #nothing wrong with making it up as you go! just have like. an end goal or something pls #really good quick transmigration (and even ok ones) have something more than just the world hopping #hey i'd also take fanwai. or more info on how the ml is fucking gutted every time mo fan has to die early #but nooooo #not even a bit of angst im sad #the most interesting part was when the ml had enough soul power to follow mo fan to the next world #and then spent time in the modern world like :tailsgetstrolled: and has to watch mo fan die again and leave to a #place where he couldnt follow-- WHERE'S THE FALLOUT ON THAT #HE DOESNT EVEN HAVE RESIDUAL FEELINGS OR FEARS ON IT #i miss the one where the ml was highly afraid of the mc doing things that lead to his death in their previous worlds #even if the ml didnt remember it was a subconscious thing. where is that kind of angst. cmon #idk anyways i might drop this if the next world isnt fun

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