#her vouce was so pretty everytime she sung u to sleep animals and bugs would crawl into ur hospital room

[moonsaver]

Hi i just read your latest sunday fic and its left me crying. I loved it. When I read lesbians in the tags and from the first scenes I thought the protag had a crush on Robin and at least a bit of attracted admiration towards Acheron.

Also, i loved how Sunday mentioned not liking the rain in a casual way, but then it's revealed that when gopher is mad, it thunders and rains. And then Im not sure if I read right, but it seems like Sunday also got that same power, and it was raining until he and the protag passed away (Acheron mentioning it as a coincidence 💔).

Im guessing Black Swan is able to read/recognize people from their past lives. And Im assuming the cat Nico is actually Nico in his new life 🩷 The fact that they kept Sundays painting and then see the couple anew is so heartwarming.

Also, Im thinking that Robin, Sunday and Gopher (specially gopher) werent truly divine (?) Or maybe the two siblings were but once Sunday reached his breaking point he turned into what Gopher could be and that is why he felt his divinity wavering and his ability to curse the protag. Like their own humanity being their weakness but for Gopher its the insecure, evil type of humanity and for Sunday it was the ability to love only one. Just my theories. Now im wondering what happened to Robin and why was Sunday switched with her.

I have too many thoughts, Im just saying I loved the fic, I loved the writing and its left me a mess but in a good way. Maybe once i get my thoughts organized i may write to you again.

Hi hi anon!!

I just wanted to let you know i read this before bed and thought about it all day,, this is so sweet of you! I really appreciate each and every ounce of feedback you guys give me <3

I knew when i added the lesbians tag it would first and foremost suggest robin to many readers lol,, i even thought about it being a possibility while writing but eventually scrapped it to replace it with acheron.

As for Gopher Wood and his correlation to the rain – it's a little more symbolistic (if thats a word?). He's described in Sunday's memory, first and foremost something like fog, and i decided to run with the whole idea since in my head it gave such a nice scenery to reflect the conflicted emotions in each scenes; with the only exception being when reader and sunday dance in the rain (although i doubt its thundering in that scene). BUT, the idea of Gopher having mysterious rain powers is, in a little silly way, a favorite of mine. Sunday having similar abilities, despite the themes surrounding him, would also make for a nice contrast.

Black Swan – I actually didn't even intend to originally include her. Back in my previous drafts she was just supposed to be hinted to, but then I thought; "since her whole shtick is memories, and recording every precious moment.. why not I make her a hippie". Which, if you can totally not scrutinize, makes sense in my mind ^^

Nico being the cat in his new life is honestly such a good idea, im almost jealous i didnt think of that while writing !! But thats a very cute idea i would have loved to incorporate

As for Sunday, Robin and Gopher Wood's nature of "divinity" – i don't want to exactly define it, and i really like the theory of your own that you've put out ^^ im very happy to hear your thoughts on them and how they were displayed. If you do return, i will be happy to welcome you back !!