#having SO much fun. especially because the fair folk au is pretty heavy at the beginning and there's not much humour in it anyway
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current knight/bard anderperry au has only two moods:
1) knight experiences gay longing so hard (ha) he has a divine revelation
2) knight (twenty-one on the outside, several middle ages at once on the inside) just trying to have a good quest has to deal with cringefail nobility. pour one out for this fucking guy lads
#having SO much fun. especially because the fair folk au is pretty heavy at the beginning and there's not much humour in it anyway#so i get to chill with this one#i meant it to be a small oneshot... it's 13k already lol#well. it happens#anderperry#dead poets society fic#dead poets society fanfic#dead poets society#neil perry#tristan writes
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Every Game I Played in 2020, Ranked
2020. Boy, what a garbo year huh? Didn't actually play that many games this year all-in-all. Happens! My backlog is getting pretty big, but I just find it hard to focus on games when I could be working on something. Or put off working on something, as it may happen to be at times.
My arbitrary decision from years ago to only attach a numbered ranking to same-year releases is getting increasingly silly, especially given my propensity to wait on playing games until Iām in the right mood, but whatever. That order matters than the dumb numerical numbering anyway.
2015 | 2016 | 2017 | 2018 | 2019
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The style of this game is very cute, and the jokes are funny enough. Butā¦ ok, look, Iām not one to be precious about what is or isnāt a game. But this really isnāt a game. Itās a series of disconnected, unrelated challenges clipped from Atari Free Mini Game Collection 100, wrapped in a very non-interactive adventure-game. Itās cute, itās kind of sweet, but itās dull. Dull dull dull. Thereās a pointless, mandatory sliding block puzzle early on that infuriated me by its mere existence. Them giving the ability to skip it because āwow youāre bad at this huhā, which, while accurate, also just sold the whole point meaningless of the āāāinteractive experienceāāā.
Also: when a huge part of your game is WOW WE ANIMATED EVERYONE REALLY GOOD, text boxes that reveal word-by-word, far away from the animations that occur when said characters talk? Kind of stinks!
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What Carrion does wellā the whole āYouāre controlling The Thing and just rippinā people apart!ā shtickā is really neat. They made that bootleg The Thing animate real-ass good.
The actual game as a whole though? Kind of garbage. Imagine a Metroidvania with zero actual exploration, where every opportunity you have to venture off the path instead results in immediate railroading with constant, utterly inexplicable one-way pipes. Itās not that itās linear, itās that it actively slaps you when you attempt to explore. Itās very frustrating! Add the fact that the tentacle-monster-shtick makes challenging to actually, yāknow, move around and control all your bitsā¦ Ā the only reason I finished the game was due to foreknowledge of its extreme brevity.
I think if the game were more open and less obsessed with constantly handing out upgrades, as well as having less of a focus on pure combat, I think Iād have enjoyed it more.
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It is well documented at this point that I am both an active Gundam fan, and as well as an on-again-off-again tactical RPG aficionado. A SD Gundam game appearing on Steam with a good English translation and localization isā¦ exciting, to say the least. That said, I have never had much context for this game series beyond the basic facts that the combat tended to be pretty well animated CG, and that itās vaguely similar to Super Robot Wars. Turns outā¦ itās really different from SRW? I dunno how the rest of the series fairs, but Cross Rays is weird as hell.
For one, thereās zero tutorialization at all. None. Almost all of what Iām going to explain here is me figuring stuff out by trial and error, or by reading junk online. Gundam is insanely popular, youād think theyād be interested in explaining how it all works, butā¦ nope. Even Super Robot Wars has multi-level introductory bits for new folks to show them the rope these days.
So: Cross Rays is a tactical RPG where you can playthrough the storyline of various Gundam AUs. You can play through them in any order. These playthroughs are fairly literal translations of the stories. You take control of the lead mecha from those series, fight enemy mobile suits that show up in SRW-like tactical RPG combat, until all reinforcements cease. Pretty straight forward. There are occasionally mission variants like āprevent enemies from reaching Xā or āprevent enemies from destroying Yā, but even those can be just reduced to ākill everything very quickly please.ā
But hereās the thing: while there is a story progression, the characters in the story itself actually have no character progression. These characters and mecha are actually considered guests, despite it being ostensibly their story. Instead, you are able to field āpermanentā mecha and pilots of your own choosing, which do have progressions. There is no plot justification for this or anything like it. The game does not recognize that itās weird that during Iron-Blooded Orphans intro where nobody knows what a Gundam even is, you can have 25 Gundams show up at once and just fire lasers at everything. Thatās because this game is actually about repeatedly grinding the same set of missions over and over.
Pilots are recruited by completing certain in-mission requirements. Mecha are acquired by either by getting enough kills with the progression-less āguestā mecha, combining mecha you already have gashopon-style, completing certain quests, or by leveling up mecha and then āevolving themā. This is the actual core of the game.
SD Gundam G Generation Cross Rays is basically Disgaea, it turns out? Youāre grinding story missions at various difficulty levels in order to complete missions, try to recruit specific pilots, equip them with stats and levels to make them stronger, and then hitting mecha together in a sort of quasi-SMT fusion system until you get all the powerful mobile suits you desire.
The combat itself is kind ofā¦ bland? Thereās a lot of systems, but they mostly seem in service of making an already easy game easier, or burning through tedium. There are four different difficulty modes, because thereās not actually that many different missions you can play through. The expectation is youāll just work your way through every story beat while ramping the difficulty up over time to where the āguestā mecha would not be able to handle on their own. In fact, letting the story mecha act out the story beats is actually bad after a point, unless youāre still trying to get those lead mobile suits, or if youāre trying to complete some mission requirement in order to recruit Named Wing Grunt Pilot #246.
There is something to the notion of āI want to get N and N and N and N on a team, piloting weird but powerful mobile suits, and just solo every Gundam AU in a row,ā but the whole premise seems kind of against purpose. Why bother recreating story beats at all, then? Itās not like the game even acknowledges any of that going on.
If the point is that Iām supposed to be, like in other grind-heavy tactical RPGs, breaking the systems to my own end in order to proceedā¦ why not make the missions you play challenges focused towards that? The story progression literally only exists to facilitate the mission-based unlock conditions, which makes all the energy put into making them JUST LIKE THE ANIME really damn pointless. Ā
I like tactical RPGs, I like breaking RPG systems so as to beat hard challenges (I beat all the insanely hard extra bosses in FFXII for crying out loud), I looooove Gundam. I should like this. But I donāt really have the āgod, I NEED TO FILL THIS LISTā gene that some folks haveā¦ except as an excuse to continue to engage in gameplay I enjoy. The gameplay here seems in service of the collection, rather than the way around.
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Pokemonās first foray into actually doing DLC isā¦ a mixed bag. As a positive, theyāve improved the Wild Area concept I liked from the main game, and even brought back buddy Pokemon walking behind you. Thatās neat. On the other hand: the actual progression in it is completable in like an hour, it doesnāt scale with you, so youāre bound to be over leveled for it, and all the raid stuff, while still conceptually neat, is just as flawed as in the base game. And so, youāre just left with even more new Pokemon to RNG grind on to continue to catch-them-all. Nah, Iām good.
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Platinum knows how to make good character action games. Theyāve made a bunch of them. Bayonetta, Nier: Automata, Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance. They also know how to make some kind of mediocre character action games. Transformers: Devastation, Wonderful 101, their various shovelware character action games like Korra. Astral Chain falls somewhere in the middle, I guess?
Astral Chain has all the production of their good games. It has some stylish, cool action. It has a neat core mechanical idea, in that itās essentially a two-character action game where you control both characters at once. It has a lot of the old mechanics from some of their best games brought in; witch-time last second dodging from Bayonetta, Nierās shooting-and-slashing combination, the Zandatsu mechanic from Metal Gear Rising, even Wonderful 101ās multi-unit shenanigans. The setting is different, and thereās some neat world flavor all in all.
But, of all games Iāve played over the past few years, Astral Chain made me more vividly angry than any other. Itās not that itās too hardā far from it, really, I found its combat incredibly mashy. No, the problem is that it has so many shitty mechanics slathered on that it become a chore to get to the āgood bitsā.
Why would you put forced stealth sequences in your character action game, especially when your movement controls are not suited for it?
Why the HELL would you put platforming sections in your character action game, constantly, especially when your stupid ghost buddy can accidentally yank you off the edge, your auto-combos can just throw you off the edge, or literally anything can knock you off the edge and make you lose life?
Why would you put so many constant excuses into the world to force me use the digital sensor in the game, that also makes it miserable to walk around while using it?
WHO THE LIVING FUCK THINKS THESE SHITTY BOX BALANCING MINI-GAMES ARE FUN???
These games are supposed to encourage me to perfect everything, right? Why keep putting fucking fights you need to complete in order to get an S rank behind backtracking, or Legions I donāt have yet? That isnāt adding replayability, thatās just wasting my time. There are even in-level missions that have fail conditions that you never even know about. Surprise!!! A lot of them involve chasing after guys and catching them with your chain, which is really obnoxious to do!!!! SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is just Bad Evangelion, straight up. Every story beat from Evangelion is here, executed worse. They also make your character have a twin just so they can have a character who can talk and feel emotions, because your boring-ass protagonist is stuck being an emotionless audience cipher. Cool!!!
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Itās drugs Tetris. I personally donāt use, or have synesthesia for that matter. I imagine this game is better if you do. Itās an enjoyable enough experience but it feels incredibly slight for what I was expecting from it, or even compared to something like Lumines, which has tons of replayability by way of its difficulty. Tetris just isnāt that hard, unless youāre forcing yourself to do weird shit to get points. I WILL NEVER LEARN HOW TO T-SPIN. Never.
Castlevania Anniversary Collection ā 2019 ā Steam ā ā
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Kind of an unremarkable Castlevania collection. Neat that it has an official translation of Kid Dracula in there, but alsoā¦ look, I prefer Metroidvania Castlevanias, OK?
6. Spelunky 2 ā 2020 ā Steam ā ā
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Iām not entirely sure why this doesnāt click for me where Spelunky 1 did. More annoying intro levels? Too many fiddly requirements for different ending-progression? Gameplay additions that just make things more annoying? Spelunky 1 was hard, but there was a kind straight-forwardness to it, even with its weird secrets, that made it much easier to grok and continue banging your head against. Iām just not having as much fun with this. Difficulty should be challenging, not a hassle.
5. Stellaris: Federations ā 2020 ā Steam ā ā
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This is the year that Stellaris just broke for me.
Federations itself is a good DLC; it adds some really interesting mechanics tied to various types of multi-national unions (the titular federations, as well as the Space UN), as well as the addition of unique āoriginsā that allow you to further specialize your gameplay. The origins in particular are a great addition that allows more specialization and roleplay.
Iām just tired of the sheer amount of busywork Stellaris forces you to do. Every DLC adds more junk you need to keep an eye on, and the fact that the AI doesnāt even bother with it (compensating with copious economy boosts in order to keep up) makes the whole thing frustrating. Itās like playing fetch with yourself; you just get tired of chasing after your own ball after a point.
I have to wonder if theyāre pivoting towards a notional Stellaris 2 at this point? Might not be a bad idea for them, though it is weird with all they talked up adding more origins when Federations came out. Ā
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This is probably the fighting game I got most into over the past few years. Thereās just this nice, almost Street Fighter-esque ease of execution to the controls, and that Arc Systems Works 3D-as-2D style continues to just do work. I donāt give a single shit about GranBlue Fantasy (frankly, I think Iād enjoy this game more if it wasnāt attached to a property) but the characters are fun enough to play and look at.
The big problem here is two things: no crossplay, and no rollback netcode. In the span of a month, this game became a total ghost town on PC, and it doesnāt sound like PS4 faired that much better.Ā
Ring Fit Adventure ā 2019 ā Switch ā ā
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Iāve fallen on-and-off this game all year. At its heart: it works, itās a fun exercise game. I donāt think it really feels like a āgameā (in the sense that Iām not really coming to it for riveting gameplay or anything) as much as just a guided exercise experience, butā¦ thatās fine? The in-game story is kind of flat, but funny in the fact of it existing at all. Buff Nicol Bolas and all.
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XCOM2: War of the Chosen is a great answer to what XCOM2 struggled with. As I discussed back in 2016 (Jesus Christ), XCOM2 tried to push against playerās worst instincts by incentivizing them to keep being aggressive through a whole bunch of timersā which, kind of just werenāt fun given how much accidentally walking into an ambush could āruinā dozens of hours of play. War of the Chosen dials that back in some intelligent ways, by instead making the encounter designs themselves, as well as much more grab-and-bail mission types, encourage players to push ahead instead. Smart!
The addition of the Chosen makes the game feel more alive, and they really do make missions harderā particularly early on. But theyāve somehow accidentally fell into the hole, where XCOM justā¦ isnāt that hard? Early on itās challenging, particularly with the resource restrictions and all. But they keep giving you more and more options (that arenāt especially meaningful choices) that make your team more and more powerful, without increasing the strength of the enemy as time goes on. By the five-hour mark, you basically know if youāre going to steam roll the game or not.
The amount of additional character and variety in the gameplay is great, I just wish it had a more challenging difficulty curve. Maybe make the meta-layer of when enemies show up more targeted to where players are at. If a player is doing well, ramp up the difficulty, if theyāre struggling, pull it back a bit. I should always feel like Iām just barely keeping ahead with XCOM, not like Iām bored. And by the end of War of the Chosen, I was kind of getting bored, really. Oh well.
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This is probably the video game that I spent the most time with hours-wise this year. Iām not entirely sure why? Itās a nice evolution of New Leaf, in that the crafting, environment shaping, and general quality-of-life improvements made are quite nice. Thereās clearly been some thought on how people play these games, and ways to make the experience less frustrating.
ā¦ and yet, they kept so much tedium in the game. Like yes, the schedule stretching is the point, I get it. As someone who for some reason decided not to play with the clock, I only just recently finished the fish, fossils, and insects for the museum. But thereās just so many weird, little things that just make it hard to keep coming back to it. Itās likeā¦ to what end? When Iāve unlocked everything, and basically seen the entirety of the item list at this point, and the holiday events all being the game meaningless collectathonsā¦. Why? Iām not going to try completing the collection; the museum stuff is about my limit, really (and even the paintings I can probably pass on).
I guess even an idealized, digital representation of a quasi-domestic life has the spiritual emptiness of consumerism-for-consumerism sake. Thanks???
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I grew up on the internet of the early 00s. I had an AngelFire website, mostly consisting of shitty sprite webcomics and hosted Gundam pics. I remember when Google wasnāt really a thing and you would heavily rely on website compilation sites like the Anime Web Turnpike in order to find anything of value online. It was weird, it was wild. It was exciting!
The internet seemed so different back then. There was a ton of garbage online, but also, likeā¦ there was a sense of optimism to it. Folks were shitty, there was plenty of bad stuff online, but it felt so disconnected from the fabric of the physicality of real-life that it was at the same time a perfect escape.
I was young when I first got āonlineā, something like 12. I remember having this notion that the internet was going to be this great equalizer, that it had infinite potential to change how people behave and interact. Boy, huh.
Hypnospace Outlaw is essentially a splendid alternate universe GeoCities recreation, where youāre a volunteer moderator of a grouping of websites on HypnOS, an internet-analog you access while you are sleep. At the surface level, itās mostly about poking around the weird alternate-historical version of the internet they created, full of kids feuding, bizarre historical divergences, and plenty of amazing bespoke weirdness. All of this is great; thereās an incredible amount of content thatās just great to poke at, listen to, and explore.
Below the surface, thereās also a rolling plotline about the ethics of this industry-owned platform, those who run it, and the way corporations handle new technology, new platforms, and emerging digital societies. Thereās a late game turn thatās pretty damn affecting. And as someone who has moderator his share of internet forums in his time, trying to balance ādo it for the communityā and what your ostensible ābossesā require of you, it was kind of a weird throwback in more ways than one.
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Turns out, Minecraft is really as good still who knew??? Started playing a bunch more of it this year due to Giant Bomb deciding to do so, and yeah: still good!
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Iāve said it before, and Iāll say it againā Supergiant makes damn good games. Iād been holding off on checking out Hades until its full release due to my tendency to burn out on games easily, and Iām glad I waited. Hades is a fantastic rogue-lite experience. The way it makes narrative progression part of the reiterative, randomized rogue-lite structure is just perfect.
Itās got all the usual Supergiant bullet points. Great characters, voice acting, narration, and music. In terms of gameplay, itās probably their least ambitious gameā playing something like a cousin to their original game, Bastionā but itās also been polished to a mirror sheen. It just feels really damn good to play, over and over and over.
That being said, the second (final?) ending feels kind ofā¦. Tacked on? Itās fine as a goal to go for while continuing to do the gameās relationship mechanics for additional story bits, but it ends up feeling kind of unfulfilling compared to the payoff of the first one.
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I never could get into Crusader Kings II. Despite my interest, the sheer mechanical heft and unintuitive interface made the game a wall that I just couldnāt get over. Iām sure if Iād dedicated myself I probably could have learned it, butā¦ ehhhhhh.
Crusader Kings III, on the other hand, has a good tutorial, a cleaned-up UI, and a very helpful highlight and tooltip system that make it much easier to understand how to actually play the game through resources inside the game itself. And, as it turns out: I rather love this game.
I mean, conceptually itās an easy sell, isnāt it? Historical politics is something I enjoy broadly. I liked Stellaris but wish it had more narrative, roleplaying elements. They outright say that āwinningā isnāt really the point of the game. Instead, itās more about emergent storytelling and playing with the different systems and seeing what you can do with it.
My current game has had me taking the Haesteinn dynasty from its Viking origins into England, forming a London-seated Northern Sea Empire that encompasses all of Britannia, Iceland, Holland, Norway, and Denmark. I am currently working on hegemonizing Norse religious control over enough Asatru holy sites to finally reform the religion, such that more unified feudalization can occur. To that end, my current rulerās predecessor invaded West Francia and conquered the whole of its territory, substantially reducing the foothold of Catholicism in mainland Europeā¦ which seems to have kicked the hornetās nest, given the Crusade Iām going to need to contend with next time I boot up the game.
Of course, a complicating matter is that my current rulerā the Emperor of the North Sea, King of Ireland and the Danelaw, liege of the King of Denmark, was elected from the extended Haesteinn family via Thing, the Scandinavian council of his erstwhile vassals. Where the previous emperor, the one who manufactured the invasion of Francia, was quite religious and beloved for his adherence to the old ways, I discovered as I took over as his successor that he really, really is into just boning down across Europe. Weāre talking constantly attempting to seduce neighboring Queens and Princesses. His vassals are not thrilled with this. They also donāt care for his propensity for torturing people to death, constantly.
I had no real say in this; attempting to stay on top of a dynasty is kind of like riding a bucking-bronco, so many things are only tenuously under your control that some weird shit can happen. This is especially true when you use the systems that make it easier to maintain the coherency of your domain. The Norse religion encouraging concubinage results in you having a lot of kids, which means thereās a lot of domain partition going on (someday, primogeniture, someday). Naturally, using Thing election reduces that, but also makes you sometimes end up having to play Emperor Stabbo-Fucko because they thought he was the best candidate at the time. Hell, I thought he was the best candidate at the time until I discovered just how many people heād be laying with on the low. But you just have to roll with it.
The way the game forces you to play ball with character traits is great. Doing things that match with the characterās traits makes them lose stress. Doing things against their character increases stress. Too much stress can force you to make the character take up vices (which can make them suffer health or opinion maluses, as well as altering their aptitudes), or even die outright. And sometimes those vices and attitudes can be boons, given they open up opportunities for different character interactions.
Emperor Stab-and-Fuck-Kingdom is perhaps the most relaxed person alive, it turns out, because his sadism makes him really enjoy sacrificing infidels, which makes the gods happy. It also freaks the fuck out of all of his vassals, so theyāre a good supplicant mix of both appreciative of my religious sentiments and also utterly terrified of my skull piles. Some especially brave vassals occasionally try to assassinate me, but my lovers keep jumping in front of the knife and saving my life mid-coitus. Iiiiiit happens! :D Ā
The game can be incredibly fun to just watch, as it becomes emergently weird. Georgia right now is incredibly Jewish in game. Iām not sure how that happened; I guess someone made a random Jewish guy into a vassal, who somehow moved up enough in the world to make it a movement? The Byzantine princes elected a Coptic as Emperor, which over the course of the decade resulted in very accelerated balkanization as Byzantium just lost its shit. The Middle East and notional HRE havenāt really unified in a meaningful way, so Iām curious how things are going to go if/when the Mongols unify and roll-on in.
Itās one of those āJust one more thingā games that can completely devour time. I have more than a few times checked the clock mid-game to see that itās 4AM and that Iāve totally ruined my sleep schedule in the process of play. Oooooops.
I highly recommend checking it out if youāre curious; the introductory, pre-release video series Paradox put out showing off the game does a pretty good job of showing the core gameplay loop and also how weird it can get.
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Ok this is super embarrassing but youāre one of my favorite writers in this uh.. whatever this blogosphere is so!! I wanna try and take a crack at writing my own fanfic but.. I got no idea where to even start. Any advice?
Oh man, I feel awful about this! I didnāt know my inbox had any new messages, so some of these asks have been sitting here for . . . some time.Ā
Anyway, first off thank you very much! Secondly, the most obvious advice is just, you know,Ā ādo it.ā But thatās infinitely easier said than done. I started writing fanfic when I was around 10 years old, so overthinking it wasnāt an issue, since I thought I was the worldās greatest writer.Ā Assuming youāre not 10 years old and as blind to the concept of literary criticism as I was . . . well, the first step is obviously getting an idea. EDIT: Holy shit, this is long. Iām gonna have to break this bad boy up with headers, like itās a real blog post or something.
Getting Ideas/Inspiration
I donāt know if you already have something youād like to write about or if youāre still at theĀ āgee that looks like funā level of fanfic ruminating, but if youāre having trouble coming up with ideas, turning to the existing fandom is a great place to start!Ā
1: Filling in fandom gaps: Iāve found a lot of my best fic ideas by looking through what already existed and seeing where there was something missing; when I first started writing for Camp Camp, literally only @raenbowsofficial created anything for Gwenvid -- it didnāt even have a ship name yet, and Iām pretty sure the 3 people into it were still throwing ādavenā andĀ āgavidā around as well -- so there being zero other fics for it meant that if I wanted it to exist, Iād have to be the one to write it. (Thatās also nice if youāre kind of insecure, because when no one else has tried the idea youāre interested in, you have no pressure to compare it to anything else.)Ā
Also, you could take a popular/already existing concept and write it the way youād like to see it, if the existing fanfics do something with the story or characters that youāre not thrilled with. Thatās handy because it gives you a general blueprint to work off of in terms of tropes and broad story beats, while letting you explore something new. Obviously, donāt rip off someone elseās fic note-for-note, but being inspired by someone else is a great way to kickstart your creativity! If you do have a specific author or story that youāre using as a jumping-off point for your own writing, I would strongly recommend linking them in your authorās notes at the beginning or end of the fic, and maybe gifting the story to them! You donāt have to, since the creation is entirely your own, but itās still always nice to acknowledge the people who inspire you the most.
2: Fandom inception.Ā If you want to be a little more direct and literal, thereās always the option of writing fanfic of a fanfic or fanart that you really love, if thereās a universe or story idea that you like, and you want more of it. As long as you give credit and notify the original creator, I think youād have no issues in terms of fanfic etiquette, and I imagine theyād be honored to have inspired your own writing. Fandom is a very collaborative experience, after all, and weāre all in this together! :)
3. For more generalĀ āI have a vague idea of what I want to do (the ship, or maybe a tiny plot bunny) but Iām not sure where to go with it,ā my biggest recommendation is music. Especially folk indie-rock music, which is 90% angst and 100% haunting. And again, looking at fanfic/art is a great way to get inspired -- I have a tendency to put up a particularly good or emblematic piece of fanart/fic in another window when Iām working on something tricky to write, just for something to stare at when my ideas start running dry (shoutout to @doritofalls, @ellohcee, and the aforementioned RA for being my go-tos when I need to stare at something pretty to feel inspired; there are absolutely others, because this fandom is filled with absurdly talented people, but those 3 are my heroes of inspiration and if you SOMEHOW donāt already know them, fix that immediately).Ā
Wow, thatās a lot and itās literally just all about getting an idea . . . which you might already have. Yikes. For the sake of people who have to scroll past this, letās put the rest under a cut:
Fleshing Out the Idea: An Ode to Outlines
Some people are able to just sit down and write something incredible from a vague idea, and the story just builds on itself without any sort of planning or organization to guide them along the way. These people are named Cipher/Campernetics, and we hate her for being unfairly talented.
For the rest of us, outlines are essential.
My outlines tend to be insanely specific, because Iām very afraid of letting a single idea slip through the cracks, and I build on them over time as I get increasingly sure of where the storyās going. The early outlines tend to be extremely vague, with lots ofĀ āand then something happensā connecting major plot points. An example for a current WIP Iām doing right now:
(Seriously,Ā āJulia and everythingā? Future Forest is going to be so pissed at current Forest when she reaches that point and realizes she has no idea what sheās doing)
And as the story starts to take shape and a plot eventually forms -- they tend to take at least 10 chapters to materialize, but they do generally show up! One of the great things about fanfiction is that plot is largely optional, though, so no worries if youāre starting without a full story idea -- I find myself writing more and more details down, if for no other reason than that I want to make sure I remember what I was thinking when I finally get to that scene (because I have absolutely gotten to a point in a story and forgotten what Iād had planned. It sucks). Hereās an example from another ficĀ with pretty significant spoilers if you can figure out which one it is oops:
Iād recommend keeping your outlines pretty simple, at least to start with: words and phrases, rather than whole-ass sentences like the above. The complexity will develop as your ideas do, so no need to wrack your brain trying to write out the entire story in bullet form.
I use the bolded ideas as stepping stones, more or less; Iāll write out the piece of the story that each line represents, which can be as little as a sentence or as much as 4 or more chapters (RIP my most recent long-running fic), then delete that line and move on to the next.Ā
Bolding them isnāt necessary, but it does make it easier to differentiate at a glance what needs to be written. If you keep everything in the same hundred-page Google Doc like I do, this is very important.
Your outline doesnāt have to be well-written, and you can 100% use fillers likeĀ āand then something happens here.ā I do that all the time -- again, another completely different story:
Now, the vaguer things are, the more annoyed Future You will be when it comes time to write whatever itās bulleting -- thereās a reason I havenāt updated this fic, and itās because I have zero idea what the everliving fuck āPinky-and-the-Brain-ing all over the placeā means -- but itās really good for when youāre first getting started sketching out the vague outline of your fic. The more you panic trying to figure out all the twists and details at the very start, the less likely youāre ever just going to sit down and write the damn thing.
(This might be why I donāt write plot-heavy stories, to be fair. Mystery writers very well might have to have it all planned out from the get-go, and Iād recommend chatting with someone whoās a bit lessĀ ācoffeeshop AUā and a bit more Agatha Christie for that kind of advice.)
Knowing When to Post
There are people that exist, who have amazing self-control, who can wait until their entire story is written and then release it in sections, at regular intervals, until the story is completed.
I am not one of these people, though I try to be with literally every single fic Iāve ever written.
Personally, I do this until I reach a point where I get stuck and need validation, and then post what I have in a giant chunk and then donāt update it for several months. This is almost universally known as the worst way to write fanfics, both in terms of getting interaction from fans and keeping readers from wanting to kill you, and if you have the ability to write the entire thing and sit on it until itās ready to be shared, you are a hero.
Alternatively, if you can actually stick to a set schedule of writing it as you go and still update with a new chapter every X days, you are not human and Iām terrified of you, because if you find a way to weaponize this power you will rule the world.
Honestly, a good rule of thumb? Post it when youāre ready for people to read it, whether itās done or not. Not all works will get done, and it seems mean to deny people the delicious little stub youāve written even if youāre not going to finish it. When youāre happy with what you have -- or are so tired of looking at it that you need to post it or youāll throw your computer out the window -- just do it and let out a sigh of relief, then either take a few days before going back to writing or just jump in immediately like a goddamn masochist.
(I have tried to get far enough ahead that I can start posting the already-written stuff on a schedule, figuring by the time Iām caught up Iāll have completed the entire story and wonāt have any awkward gaps. Ahahahahahahahahaha that has never once worked.)
If youāre not certain about your writing, get a beta! The fandom is full of talented people whoād be happy to read over your work, and if the person you ask doesnāt have the time or spoons, they probably have a few ideas of other people you could reach out to. You donāt need a beta, but it always makes me feel better to have another set of eyes look over my writing before posting, and my beta always catches things I completely missed. Plus, you get a nice taste of that sweet, sweet validation we all crave.
This . . . is a bad guide. Just in general. The advice is . . . not good, and I think itās largely useless. But I keep trying to think of useful things to add to it and coming up empty, so I hope something in here helped, and if youād like to bounce your ideas off of someone, feel free to shoot me a message! Talking ideas over with friends is a great way to flesh them out as well, and I am happy to be anyoneās fandom friend.
#ask forest#forestwriting#legit no one is going to read this and i'm not saying that to judge anyone#in fact i'll lowkey judge you if you DO read all of this because why#Anonymous
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RULES: Answer the questions youāve been given, then write your own and tag 11 people.Ā
//Under le Read More, because 11 answers for 11 questions is long!
1. Whatās your favorite thing about your muse(s)?
Oh goddess Iāve answered this twice already, but hereās me gushing over his clothes, cuz the face is just cute. Thereās just surprisingly okay/good design with Momotaro that is overlooked because of all the pretty ladies that do the fan-service.
2. Whatās your least favorite thing?
About Momo? Or ever? I would say losing close friends, over drama. Thatās impacted me a lot, and why I can get really anxious over rping. But if you mean an actual object/show, then disposed (but thereās still notable remnants) food. Yāknow the stuff in the trash. Iām allergic to bananas and thatās the most common thing rotting in the there. Makes it real tough to breathe, particularly when it comes to class too.
Donāt worry, I do have an inhaler for those sorts of things but...itās only one inhaler and I end up mixing up where I last placed it. I just hope to the goddess that I donāt have to deal with a disposed peel during class...
3. Seeing how theyāve lived their lives - if you were in their shoes, what would you do differently?
Honestly, Iām not too sure. I wouldāve said I wanted to speak up against the others (i.e. bullies, the girls) more often, but thatās just against Momotaroās nature...and how Japan culture works. Also I would totally try to (re)tame Momotaroās mutated friends. Come on, that Chimera is awesome! Let the boy have an awesome steed!
4. How independent is your muse(s) from your control? How much do you approve of their actions?Ā
Hoh boy, usually Iām likeĀ āMomo noā, so thatās pretty clear that I donāt have all le controls over him. Heās simple minded so thereās not much I would need to fuss over, I suppose. HOWEVER, I do have to restrain ourselves from doing too much in the subject of triggers/pstd, because Iām still learning about that...and not many folks are fine with muses suddenly attacking their precious muse just because they tried to be affectionate.
5. If you were friends with your muse(s), what would you do together?
Weād probably go visit animals at shelters and zoos...and befriend the crud out of them. Help care for those buggers, if possible! Also I would try to learn how to cook with Momo too, if he had my headcanon-trait of being a good cook.
6. Whatās one of your favorite fandoms, and why?
H.ow to K.eep a M.ummy is one, out of the sheer fact that no one has produced r34 of it yet...or at least something thatās easily found. Also the fans are pretty cool with their enthusiasm and arts. Iāve seen some cute plushies of the main critters that are fanmade! ...I probably ruined that streak didnāt I?
Also the anime is adorable, and I look forward to reading the manga. I just donāt like the heavy focus on the protagonist. I wanted to learn more about the other peeps in the gang, AND THEIR MYTHICAL FRIENDS. Especially the baku and dragon.
7. Are there any fandoms that you want to interact more with? Any AUs that you havenāt gotten a chance to try out yet?
Utapri, and kinda Idolm@ster??? I donāt know Iām working on interacting with folks in this fandom because theyāre neato folks, and I fallen in love with the idols! Gah! I had this headcanon for the longest time that Momoās guilty pleasure is idol music, but heās only remember how melodic the voices are, and not the names or faces! It would be really cool to well, have the boy be weak but not in a depressed manner, ya know? Actually I wanna see more muses fangirling over each other, particularly if one has a publicly known job.
An au I havenāt tried out yet is actually...Pokemon Mystery Dungeon. I did rp Momo as a pokemon...ONCE, but nothing mystery dungeony. Just aĀ āwhat if he was reborn as a pokemonā orĀ āexperiment gone wrongā thing, and he had a human trainer too. Now I wanna actually find a better Pokemon to suit him and do them mystery dungeon stuff...maybe someday. There was this cool group verse!
That and I wanna try out a verse where Momo is a live-in servant/butler. Seriously I gave him too many traits that fit that sort of job...and I watched too much gakuen babysitters which has the amazing Saikawa. I hear Black Butler is cool too.
8. What was one of your favorite video games as a kid?
Lemme see, Melee is VERY popular, but I loved fooling around in that game, not being a competitive smasher with all them wave dashes. Actually thereās a fair amount of games I liked that are still popular amongst the internet so letās go something more obscure:
Mario Party 3
Dunno how the fam got it, but that was the game me and my sister played a ton of as kids, and we still came back to it when the Gamecube was around. It was part of our like strange pseudo rping thing to jump around the games to emulate the activities our characters partake in. Start in smash bros, kick some rivals butts and go on adventure! Then visit Mario Party 3 to celebrate with a giant pizza! Oh no, we need to collect some goodies, letās go do a round on one of the boards! Kick the impostor starās butt again! Jump to another Mario Party to run through the dungeon and ride the bus! It was kinda our way of playing pretend...I think. Good times, which is why I see the appeal in rping, ya know?
9. Whatās the best song youāve heard for the first time in the past few months?
S.O.S, by Weaver. Holy cow itās catchy, but like so amazing in its beats. A close second would be Nijiro ā Over Drive! by Otoya Ittoki...I mean his va. I love me some energetic beats man.
10. Whatās the best meme youāve found in the past year?
Okay maybe itās not exactly a meme but it can be a culmulation of memes...of sorts... Anyways, thereās a channel calledĀ āColeyDoesThingsā and she has a series of videos where she visits a room containing a representation of a fandom...represented by her donning various personas based off of personalities found in a fanbase. This series is called āEntering the ___ fandomā. While she canāt catch all the quirks of a fandom (because some are so freakin huge), this woman catches a lot the traits Iāve seen in the places she visits. Itās hilarious to me at least.
I highly recommend the Ship Wars video, at the very least!
11. Is there something youāre looking forward to in the next few months?
Yes. Hatchimals Season 3...oh okay, not a lot of folks are into the collectible toy things. Fair enough, YouTube has fostered the growth of creepy toy channels! I am hyped for obtaining Bayonetta for the switch sometime soon, the end of the semester...I think Blade Strangers is coming out within that time period and Iām hyped to see Curly Brace in that games! Also MORE AMIIBO. Thatās all I can recall, at the moment.
Eleven questions for everyone else!
1. Whatās your favorite toy from childhood? Do you still have it around?
2. Do you like to collect anything? If so, what is it?
3. Whoās one of your favorite YouTubers?
4. How did you first encounter your main muse?
5. Are there any headcanons for a muse that is related to a trait/experience of yours?
6. Whatās your favorite thing to look up when it comes to researching for your muse?
7. Are there any characters (or muses) that influence your muse?
8. What is your favorite, very random, headcanon for your muse? Like something that seems improbable in canon, but is too hilarious/good that you gotta keep it?
9. A memorable, but sweet moment in rping? Could be a thread, or having fun with another mun ooc, or whatever!
10. Are you more keen on rping older muses, or younger muses? Are you fine with rping your muse at different ages?
11. Whatās your favorite meme-related song? (i.e. Caramelldansen, Numa Numa, Levan Polka, Momotaro, Kobini Store, etc.)
Tagged by: @notevenjupiter, thanks a lot!! :D Tagging:Ā @maracanight, @ultimate-impostxr, @plumeriaxskull, @patixntia, @gattaimuses, @pinkdressed, @yesfxckyxu,Ā @inkybluez, @embersiisms, @niji-iro-melody, @zoolinguistics, @queenxfjustice, @ahogedetective, @hopeprevaiils, @jabberwockis-lupus, but anyone can do this, or not!
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Allen Rambles About Fate/Extra & Extella (Allenās Rambling XXXV)
Usually, when I do anĀ āAllen Rambles About [Video Game]ā post I wait until Iāve gone through roughly 20-30 hours of it since I mostly play JRPGs and it takes quiteĀ a bit of time before I can safely say Iāve seen everything about the game and have an informed opinion it, but... Iāll be making an exception for the Fate series.
Originally, I was going to talk more about Extra and Extella in a Video Game Update, a monthly post about the video games Iāve played and plan on playing, but since these were the only two games I was playing this month, I think a Rambling going in depth about them is more appropriate.Ā
And so here we are, the Fate/ExtraĀ series. Iāve spent about 15 hours on both games, so I think itās fair to make a Rambling about them now. And I have to say, Iāve got some conflicting opinions about both these games.
Now, Iām a casual fan of the Fate series, and I plan on going deeper into that in December, but Iāve watched the original Stay NightĀ by studio Deen, the UBW movie by Deen, Fate/Zero, The Ufotable adaptation of UBW, and all four season ofĀ Prisma Illya. The only thing I havenātĀ done Fate-wise is invest into Grand Order, and thatās mostly due to my hatred/weariness of gacha/mobile games. When it comes to Extra and Extella, I was treading new FateĀ territory. It heard it was basically an AU of the Fate series with more technology and technobabble in it, and Extella looked flashy as hell, and published by Xseed and Marvelous, the folks that made Senran Kagura, and I loveĀ Senran Kagura, so I figuredĀ āwhy not?ā
And... well, letās talk a little about that, starting with...
Fate/Extra
With Fate/Extra, Iād say that this game has a good story, but bad gameplay. I originally picked up this game solely so I could have context to Extella. I originally thought ExtellaĀ wouldnāt be trying to have much continuity in it since ExtraĀ was aĀ story-heavy, visual novel/RPG game on the PSP of all things, that handle literally no one has anymore, and Extella was a Musou-clone where you could take out legions of enemies and typically had very simple stories because you were too busy mash the attack button and throwing lasers and fire magic to care about said story.
But I was wrong.
Oh, how I was wrong.
Not that ExtellaĀ directlyĀ talked about stuff in Extra, but there were a lot of winks and nods to it that had me lost. The Moon Cell Grail War, how Nero was so affectionate toward the player character to the point of being a typical waifu, and the technobabble, dear lordĀ the technobabble of how the Regalia and Moon Cell operated was just sleep-inducing.Ā
Most Musou-style games outside of Dynasty and Samurai Warriors are usually pretty simple, and even Samurai and Dynasty Warriors is pretty easy on the story stuff. But Fate/Extella was pulling no punches with itās technobabble and visual novel-style cutscenes (more on that later). I felt I neededĀ to play ExtraĀ just to have a decent grasp of what was going on in that story. Thankfully, the game was only ten bucks on PSN, and works as a download on my Vita, so I bought and was playing it side-by-side with Extella.
And after about 15 or so hours, I can honestly say Iām more invested in Extraās story than Extellaās by a mile. Iām invested in Hakunoās struggle in the Grail War, how sheās slowly coming to terms with killing people for her own survival.Ā I mean,Ā goddamn, after winning the first match, when you saw the 128 active/living participants drop to 64 in an instant... damn, it was chilling. The world-building is nice too, Iād say even simpler than Extella. The Moon Cell is basically a virtual world where the Grail War takes place, and all the bits and particle effects tell that. These people arenāt mages, but gamers and hackers with magic circuits and whatnot. Really, this is leagues easier to grasp than Extella. And while Nero was more insufferable if anything in Extella given her forcefulness on you, in Extra I get the chance to see our relationship grow to that point. While I despise the fact that she looks like Best Girl Artoria and has a god-awful voice to show her inferiority to said Best Girl, I love her personality, her haughty and explosive natural is really endearing... I just wish she had a different design. I think this story and characters alone is enough to play through and even recommend you guys buy this if you have a Vita and the memory space for it.
However... when we talk about the actual game, I have some issues.
Letās start with the gameplay. Iāll be frank, this game plays a little too slowly for my liking. The load times are fine, the frame rate is fine, but I hateĀ the rock-paper-scissors, turn-based style of attacking, and I especially hate how you need to grind on enemies to read patterns and prayĀ youāre right until then. I thank God I resisted choosing Best Girl Emiya!Archer went with the more Physical-focus, high attack power of Nero because the grind in this game... goddamn. Dying in the arena isnāt fun when Iāve grinded for an hour to gain three levels only to die and restart from outside the dungeon because I faced a new enemy type with a pattern I didnāt know about. Seriously, quick save would be nice to have, but this is the main reason Iām playing this game with a guide for both story progression and enemy patterns.
Speaking of story progression, gathering information matrices and how hit-or-miss that process can be is worrisome. Again, these enemies rely on know pattern recognition, and collect Servant matrices is top priority so I donāt get wasted in boss battles. Iām using a guide solely for that reason, but... to give credit where credit is due, the game isĀ giving me hints about where and how to learn more about enemy Servants... so far anyway, Iām only on week three, weāll see how it goes when things pick up.Ā
Again, Iād say that ExtraĀ is the better story, but the has lacking gameplay. I recommend buying if you like visual novel-style games, but Lord alive, please find a guide for this game, both for enemies and story.Ā
Fate/Extella
With Extella, I feel like this is the opposite case. I loveĀ the gameplay of Extella. Itās a little repetitive, and I swear Servant enemies have little to no hit stun, but itās not bad. The story... well, I went over that for two paragraphs in the ExtraĀ section, but thereās a bit more I want to talk about.Ā
I... reallyĀ donāt like the visual novel style of storytelling in this game. Itās fine for ExtraĀ since the gameplay isnāt engaging enough to play the game solely for that, but ExtellaĀ has great gameplay and a lot of fast-paced action. The long story cutscenes and My Room events just bog down the pacing and have me waiting longer and longer to get to the next stage and bash more enemies. Honestly, the story could just be summarized as Nero and Tamamo fighting over territory in the Moon Cell and possession of the Regalia with Altera playing both sides and being the final boss... oh, and something about an meteor and Colossal Titan with Archimedes rubbing his hands together and evilly chortling. I dunno, Iāve still gottaā play through Alteraās story mode and the true ending, so maybe Iāll get some context to why all of this is so complicated, but I donāt think Iāll like the answer given how much time is spent trying to get me to care about anything but using Emiya!Archer in Neroās campaign.
Also, Archimedes being the Chessmaster in the background does nothing but annoy me. Liz making a sudden Heel Turn makes sense, especially in Tamamoās story where sheās constantly abused by the group. But Archimedes? Honestly, he could be cut out entirely, Altera could had been the final boss and a third faction holding the Body of Hakuno hostage, and nothing would be lost story-wise. This stuff about the Umbral Star, Velber, and all that... just... makes me skip all the story cutscenes because I donāt care. I care about Nero and Tamamo and how they want the best for Hakuno. I care about some of the side characters since I like a lot of their designs. I care about Altera and her deal in this situation and why sheās holding Hakunoās Body hostage. But outside of that... I could care less about this technobabble about the Regalia, the Moon Cell, the Umbral Star, itās just... pointless to me.
But again, itās the gameplay that attracts me to this. The chance to take out thousands of soldiers with Emiya!Archer and Medusa, beating the stuffing out of that prick Gilgamesh, using all the cool and flashy Noble Phantasmas? Did you guys seeĀ how badass UBW looks in this game?
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Seriously, Emiya!Archer is the best.
My only real critique gameplay-wise is that some more characters in Extra should had appeared. I think Francis Drake would had been a greatĀ addition to Tamamoās faction as a mercenary unit, and honestly, Medusa has no range in her moveset, so having a gunslinger would be nice. Having Robin Hood replace Emiya!Archer, while tragic to my inner Emiya!Archer fanboy, would make more sense since the game is assuming you used Nero in Extra, and Robin Hood and Nero had some pretty fun banter in Extra, seeing more of that would be fun.
But again, Iām on the opposite end of Extella in terms of my opinion. A fun game with fun gameplay, but a story thatās more suffering to go through if anything. If it was a little simpler and pulled back on all the technobabble about the Moon Cell then Iād be more engaged, but even ExtraĀ has less exposition than this game, and thatās a goddamn visual novel.
So yeah, those are my opinions on the Fate/ExtraĀ series so far. Iām looking forward to seeing Extella LinkĀ come out, and Iām praying its story is simpler to grasp. Iām actually going to be taking a break from Extra for the rest of October and most of November to play Dangan Ronpa V3 (more on that later), but Iām glad I got into this series, and I hope to complete it by the end of the year.
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