#have THEM discuss the nature of Fyodor’s power instead on fyodor literally stopping to monologue for 2-3 pages | Explore Tumblr posts and blogs

ahli-stuff · 22 days ago

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WHATEVER YOU SAY BEAUTIFUL!!!

Bsd 120 raws

Fyodor’s little stretch…!

My thoughts? Honestly, it’s a bit of a nothing chapter (I say as I don’t know what any of the dialogue is but I know it’s just going to be Fyodor explaining more space-dimensional bullshit manga logic). It is exciting to have Fukuzawa face off against Fyodor, but Asagiri pulls this SO often man, where it’s like “A new challenger enters the ring” every chapter and multiple times per fight.

And this fight really should’ve been Akutagawa’s time to shine. I know he’s going to get back up, but man.

#ahli spams bsd #bsd 120 #bsd spoilers #fyodor dostoevsky #I love that black haired bimbo!!!#someone needs to stop Asagiri from undermining his own writing #this is a problem that lends itself to the medium but you can absolutely work around it #I get time limitations and. just not killing your artists I get that but #if you need an easier going chapter this easily could’ve been a pov change to Dazai chuuya and maybe sigma #have THEM discuss the nature of Fyodor’s power instead on fyodor literally stopping to monologue for 2-3 pages #that would fix the pacing not be difficult to execute and create anticipation for the next chapter where the fight would then happen #easily could fit into 15 pages or even 13 or 12 honestly and would give them a nice break #then in bsd 121 harukawa and Asagiri could put their all into depicting pure action that doesn’t need to be interrupted by exposition #not to mention that . while I like him. fukuzawa has had TWO fakeout life threatening stabs #that’s egregious writing work he’s just going to go up against amengozen and have ANOTHER life threatening ‘fatal’ stab before he gets up #AGAIN #writing so ‘…’ you have me agreeing with skk shippers. yeah maybe they should show up for once the writing calls for it

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