#fuuuuuck this didn’t help. welp um what do now
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friendly reminder to write down ur ideas as they come to u bc i may have figured out a way to solve this issue ive been having in my wip while i was laying down for a nap yesterday and i foolishly believed it was something i could not forget, i’ll definitely remember it but now for the life of me i can’t remember sobbing
#WHAT THE FHCK WAS IT#gonna start blabbering down here about it maybe it’ll jog my memory#i discovered that it may not be the captain’s characterization that’s stumping me but actually ororon’s#i’m so used to writing childe i feel like the things i have written are more in line w him#ororon is a lot different in so many ways#and while i do like these scenes they’re just not right for him#childe is combative and straightforward but also a bold faced liar lmao#ororon is a gentle soul. straight forward but only seems to lie when it’s necessary#and when he does he’s extremely apologetic#so i think in this situation childe would go for a rougher sort of approach while keeping his feelings close to himself#and it’d end up devolving into an argument where they (zhongchi) have nasty sex steeped with angst and yearning#(i have realized y’all don’t even know what this scene is about. why there’s a confrontation. why they’d be arguing in the first place lol)#ororon wouldn’t hide himself as well or maybe even at all. his hurt and insecurities will shine through#and he wouldn’t go into it guns ablaze and ready for a fight#so what does he do instead? that’s the missing idea hhhh i figured it out and now it’s Gone#fuuuuuck this didn’t help. welp um what do now#this is what i get for writing about characters i know very very little about lmao
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