#fic rewiev

[roseraintears]

https://firerose.tumblr.com/post/660430640313958400/fanfic-writers-directors-cut

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Yeahhh

So this is a scene from my dark fic a cruel new world where Gea wins in Boo and keeps Frank prisoner as only human survivor:

“ You see I created a world where only the wild exists. Mortals demigods and gods, you all damaged it but now the earth can heal I can heal.“ Gea said in a reasonable voice and Frank would have felt sympathy for her if she hadn‘t murdered everyone he loved. Once his first impression was over he saw that the landscape looked dry. There were no trees just grass and grain mixed with spots of ground.

“This place does not look very wild to me. More deserted.“ Frank replied very aware that Gea was still holding his chain.

Gea turned towards him, her expression was weirdly satisfied.

“Well, I did not expect you to like it. I mean this is the place where I captured you.“, The goddess replied with a dark joy in her voice.

See this is how Gea should have been in Hoo! A hurt mother who has spend too many centuries being tortured along with her children! Her lust for revenge should have driven her crazy bringing her too manipulate demigods like Leo and Hazel!

She should have mocked the seven loured them into trapps were she tests out their fatal flaws,she should have played games turned them against eachother so she could see them break, so she could win in the end

Wouldn't that have been better than her flat plans and huge ego in Hoo

[natashxromanovf]

Fic rewiev

I’m here to give @fives-cup-of-coffee a fic rec, because why not? With time, less and less people give you feedback, so why not give it to each other randomly? You can read her fiction here; The treehouse

Work is hers, so please, go read it, it’s amazing.

Winter. The best time of the year, when snow falls from the sky, burying the world in pure bliss. And with it comes all the activities that make everyone’s lives brighter; snowball wars, snowmen, gingerbread houses, and sleighing. Things that you’d never grow tired of, even as a seventeen-year-old.

The way you described winter, it’s beautiful. I’m not a big fan of this season, I don’t really like cold, but you can do some fun activities on snow and you perfectly described it.

“Oh, y/n!” She exclaimed in glee. “How wonderful, you’re already here! Come in, sweetheart.”

I love the mother-daughter/son relationship between Molly and the reader. I feel like every close friend of her children, is like another of her kids to her.

Then, no other than George Weasley came sprinting down the stairs to hug you, but stumbled over his own feet at the very end of the staircase.

Okay, let’s be honest, we all now the twins were probably clumsy as hell. I like how you captured their clumsiness.

You were shocked, to say the least. He never kept anything from his brother or Lee. They were his best friends.

This shows how of a good relationship he has with his twin and his bestfriend, and I love it. I always imagine Lee, Fred and George as a trio, who can’t live without one another.

“Am I the first person you’ve shown this?”

“First and last. It’s yours”

The smile faded from your face, leaving nothing but an expression of pure shock. Were you hearing right? Did he build this… for you? The cold air suddenly wasn’t that cold anymore, and your heart sped up. His words played on repeat in your mind. It’s yours.

“It’s yours” PLEASE, the butterflies in my stomach could not be felt more. He just made the reader a treehouse. If you ask me, this is an act of true love, because the fact, that he even thought about making something for them, putting his time and effort into it, it's just magical.

“Oh my god, Fred!” You beamed. “I love you so much”

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Oh, how you wanted to leave, and oh, how you wanted to stay. You didn’t want him to reject you, but you didn’t want him to stay quiet. You wanted him to say something, anything, yet at the same time, you hoped he’d just forget it and move on.

“I love you, too”

If this was a movie, I feel like, here, at this moment, the music would be playing, and it would suddenenly stop, making a dramatic pause, the pause lasting until they finish talking and then the reader wraps their hands around his neck and the more loud and happy beats start to play.

“Y/n L/n,” he said, his expression confident and a vibrant smile on his face. “Would you do me the honor of becoming my girlfriend?”

My dumb ass thought he was gonna propose, but how could he when they just confesed their feelings, please I was so invested in this, I forgot they weren’t already dating.

The relief, the euphoria, the love. All of it. It was there, in the air surrounding you, between you and inside of you. And you hoped it would never fade.

Hkdkfnghogujehjegghrtgr, this was amazingggggggg. I loved it, I loved it, I loved it. Please, how can you write something so beautiful? The fluff, I can’t. I honestly have no remarks, this was just purely beautiful. I’m gonna melt from the love these two radiate.

Overall, this was awesome.

[flowers-of-io]

VARIKS

[baz-writes-sometimes]

Hello! Hehe do you mind if I ask for number 1 and 39 in the ask game?

Hi! Thank you for asking, bestie. 🥰

1. Describe your comfort zone—a typical you-fic.

Ooff. I love ones that have smutty themes in them. Especially when they are a slow-burn kind of thing, friends to lovers (also rivals to lovers with lots of underlying sexual tension that goes through the ROOF) and you just die to have them finally realise their feelings and can't wait for them to go feral about each other. Sometimes, a good variation of the soulmates trope thrown into the mix makes me giddy. Also, give me the overused miscommunication too. 😫

39. Do you ever get rude reviews and how do you deal with them?

I am yet to receive a negative rewiev, funnily enough. So far all the comments have been positive and the criticism very constructive. Don't know how do I manage to fly under the radar for that long. 🤔

I have received an 'end yourself' type of anon ask once and just... reported it and deleted it. I believe that if you want to be a cunt, at least go off anon and own up to it, because otherwise it just shows you are a massive coward.

Whenever I see my besties get hate asks, I wonder how in the hell do people have so much time to waste on writing shit to other people unprovoked. Wish I had so much free time to fuck around with as well. 🤷🏼‍♀️

[littlerockerao3]

I was tagged by @howblunt and I’m honestly so happy about this because it’s the first time I’ve been tagged in something like this!

Also, I’ll take advantage of this post to tell my readers that “Losing My Religion”’s next update is coming, slowly but it’s coming: it’s a long one and I’m not feeling good these days (period cramps, nothing too serious lol), that’s why I’ve been a little slower. I know you don’t care but still.

Okay, let’s do this:

AO3 name: LittleRocker

Fandoms: at the moment I’m writing AUs based on Game Of Thrones/ASOIAF but I’ve also wrote a (unfinished) fic about Teen Wolf that I would really like to forget because I’ve wrote that during the worst time of my life lol. I don’t really have the strength to delete it because it was my very first fic ever but I’m glad I’m not writing it anymore.

Tropes: about my writing, I tend to have more inspiration regarding modern aus that usually involve lots and lots of fluff, but I’m also trying to write a spy!au and I don’t really know how it’s going to turn out, honestly. But truth to be told, I tend to imagine many different scenarios (aka dystopian AUs, Disney movies AUs, movies/books I’ve seen/read AUs, things that happened to me AUs and so on) but I don’t think I’m able to write them yet because it’s too difficult, especially a dystopian fic, even though I still have an idea I kind of not despise that much. But most of all, I have too many works in progress and I absolutely must not publish another fic that’s not a one shot. About fics I like to read, I really enjoy everything that doesn’t involve a major character death: I can enjoy the bloodiest and most violent fic ever, as long as it has a happy ending, lol. Especially because I’m dying over Throbb fics atm and I need those two to be happy. Lol, this turned out long as hell.

Number of fics: 4, all unfinished and I hate myself for this lol.

Fic I spent the most time on: uhm this is hard. I mean, I’m spending a lot of time writing Losing My Religion because I love writing it, but I’ve also spent much time writing Livin’ On a Prayer (why half my fics have religious titles? I’m an atheist!), but that was because I didn’t like the story anymore, I forced myself to write despise my wirter’s block and it took me months to update.

Fic I spent the least time on: again, Losing My Religion because I love writing it and at the beginning (when it was still summer and I didn’t have to go to school) I wrote 6k words long chapter in a day and posted every two days. But I would count also Need For Respite, I wrote the prologue in an hour or so right after dreaming about the whole story, lol.

Longest fic: Losing My Religion (330,180) and there’s still 24 chapters left.

Shortest fic: Need For Respite (1894), it’s only the prologue.

Most hits: Losing My Religion (9620)

Most kudos: Losing My Religion (331)

Most comment threads: Losing My Religion (I guess replies don’t count so it’s 155)

Most bookmarks: Losing My Religion (31)

Total word count: 402,088

Favorite fic I wrote: Losing My Religion, but as howblunt said, I put my heart and soul into everything I write.

Fic you want to rewrite/expand on: again, as howblunt said, all of them. Every now and then I tend to re-read my fics and I always find stupid mistakes (why can’t English be my first language, why??!!) or small incoherences. I’m looking forward rewieving all my fics once they’ll be over, and fix these things.

Share a bit of a WIP or a story idea you’re planning on: okay, I guess I’ll say it. One day I was watching Mulan (one of my favorite movies ever) and I couldn’t help but make a few parallels with Game Of Thrones: I mean, (this is based on the show) Jon is obviously Mulan, Tyrion is Mushu, Pyp is Ling, Grenn is Yao (the one who hates Mulan/Jon at first but then ends up being one of the best friends) and Sam is Chien-Po (the ones everyone adores from the very first moment, no matter what they do). Not to mention the scene with them being like 20 and the “enemies” being many many many many more. So I was like: I ship Jon with Tormund so Tormund has to be Shang. But Tormund is a wildling and I love Throbb, Throbb has to be here. So this idea came to my mind: a dystopian Au where Jon’s half brother (aka Robb) has been arrested and sentenced to death because he’s in love with another man (aka Theon). Jon has to rescue him before it’s too late so he joins the king’s (or whoever else has the power) army where he meets new friends and this quite good looking commander. In the meanwhile, Robb and Theon have to find a way to escape.

Lol, this is just too complicated and hard for me, I kind of like this idea but I don’t know if I’ll ever write it. So I’ll leave you with the last sentence I’ve wrote (for now, because the chapter is still in progress) for Losing My Religion:

And Theon enjoyed every second of that kiss.

That’s it. It wouldn’t be me if this didn’t turn out long as hell, lol. I’ll tag @evax3 , @estrangedandwayward and @northernfieldsforever if you want to do this or if you haven’t already done it. But whoever reads this and wants to do this, pretend I tagged you lol.

[natashxromanovf]

Truth or dare

Fic rewiev

Written by @fives-cup-of-coffee 

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You also despised his smirk. Oh, how you wished to just wipe it off his face! The way his lips curled up in a mischievous smile each time he’d made a stupid comment or pulled a dumb prank. It made you crazy in the worst way possible. Not to mention that glint in his eyes when he knew he’d got under your skin. You hated how he was able to anger you so easily.

Ughhh, his stupid smirk. I love how you described why the reader doesn’t like him, I feel like this makes it even better.

“Sure,” he replied, raising them over his head instead of handing them over. You shot him a glare, jumping up to reach them. That was to no use, obviously, since he was taller than you.

Yea, I’m smaller than you, don’t need to brag about it 🙄

The moment his fingers touched yours, an electric wave shot through you, setting every particle in your body on fire, and suddenly, it was hard to breathe. You seemed to have got lost in his eyes, drowning in the stormy orbs.

I think that this is the moment where we see how much the reader actually likes Sirius, and once again, you wrote it amazingly beautiful

“Everyone’s an alcoholic in seventh year”

I 100% agree😂 I love how you sneak in some humor in your fics.

And that’s when you freaked out. Your hands were full of sweat and you hoped to his no one saw your heated up face. Your lower lip quivered and you were almost sure you’d start crying.

Surprisingly enough, your behavior didn’t go unnoticed by Sirius, whose smile had faded at your reaction. Instead, his eyes filled with worry and he grabbed your hand, pulling you out of the common room. You vaguely heard some people complain, but Sirius ignored them. All he cared about was getting you out.

The way Sirius knows the reader is probably gonna have an anxiety attack if he doesn’t get them out, shows how much he really cares for them. This is the moment when we figure out how much Sirius cares for the reader.

“It’s okay. I just didn’t want to kiss you in front of everyone”

Smooth

“You can kiss me now”

“Keep dreaming”

The smile you sent him made him feel weak and he could slowly, but surely feel himself falling for you. Although he didn’t want to admit it, he knew he’d do anything to get that kiss from you.

Omg, this ending is so amazing! But no seriously, where’s my kiss??

I don’t see the reason why you didn’t like it. But, most of the time, I too, think my fictions suck, but they actually don’t, so I understand you. You don’t have to worry about it, it was awesome.

[fanfictionlive]

My first fic I finally posted

So recently I posted the first few chapters of my very first One Piece fanfic. I got a few comments and I was really happy that people actually liked my writing! I mostly write the story for fun and gaining experience. Today I got my first negative comment though, and although I won't stop writing the story, I still feel a little sad.

The person said they liked it at first, but now they just hate the way I treated the canon storyline and they are confused about my story planning, it pains them physically to read it. It hit me a little in the heart, but I know I can't meet everyone's expectations and srandards. It's a new experience though, finally getting comments and rewievs on the things I write, both positive and negative.

I'm just a few weeks in the writing and posting process and I already started to see my flaws and mistakes in my fic. I don't want to rewrite the whole thing, because I planned it like this originally, but I kind of do, because I don't want to let my ideas and hard work go.

Was the first negative comment for you like this too? How was your experience?

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