#feel free to critique

[eloquentsisyphianturmoil]

It’s time this post gets a Silm version.

Which Silmarillion characters say Fuck:

Feanor: Invented ‘fuck’ and always critiques peoples’ use of it (If you don’t use it to make seven children you’ve done something wrong).

Nerdanel: Has two sides. One doesn’t know any swears and the other… you don’t want to meet her.

Maedhros: Swears to make his brothers feel guilty about the fact that they’ve made him swear.

Maglor: If he swears at you you’re probably about to die.

Celegorm: ‘Fuck’ appears to be the only word in his vocabulary.

Curufin: claims he doesn’t swear. For safety’s sake we shall leave it at that.

Caranthir: swears lazily. Nerdanel tells him off more often than Celegorm.

Ambarussar: only swear ironically.

Fingon: swears as a compliment.

Turgon: swears when he’s upset. Even people who witness it aren’t quite sure they haven’t imagined it.

Aredhel: swears purposely to annoy her mother. Has a surprisingly clean mouth alone.

Argon: mostly uses the strange colloquial insults of the youth instead.

Finrod: No.

Angrod: likes to emphasise his points with unexpected ‘fuck’s.

Aegnor: swears quietly. More often than you’d think.

Galadriel: will smile dazzlingly, look you in the eye, and call you a spineless fucker (you are feanor).

Luthien: she thinks it’s a hilarious mannish word and only uses it for fun.

Beren: was so embarrassed when Luthien heard him swear for the first time.

Turin: even if he doesn’t say ‘fuck’, most of his discourse gives that impression.

Beleg: feels horribly ashamed whenever he lets one slip.

Mablung: can swear with alarming force when his temper gets the better of him.

Elwing: Her ‘fuck’ has the potential to kill.

Eärendil: Is the reason why the first thing the twins said to M&M was ‘Fuck, it’s you.’

[e-farmer]

So I'm working on this little Bestiary thing that'll showcase all the different creatures of the world of Undergrowth, but I'm stuck on the design right now. So, i figured I'd show you guys the concept art a friend of mine on Discord/Xbox drew up!

So this is our current design for the bestiary pages, it's very nicely made, don't get me wrong. But i feel it could use some more space, y'know? One thing i want to made add is a size comparison, kinda like how @cosmopoliturtle does with their fanmade monster hunter designs (love your work btw if you see this)

Come to think of it, this whole bestiary thing is just an excuse for me to write about ecology and flesh out the world of the Pale Earth (that's the world's actual name btw, never mentioned that before, whoops!) and give some proper fleshing out for the different creatures and beasts that roam the lands. Like for example, "What ecological niche do Tiktiks fill?" "Why are they so pale compared to creatures of similar size?" Ect.

Idk, what do you guys think? Feel free to leave any feedback or suggestions on how this design can be finalized.

[chelleinyy]

Lawson + Abigail Headcanons

TW for Death, Bereavement, Violence, and themes of PTSD

Met each other when Lawson was still a law student. They were introduced to one another by a mutual friend (Walter Cumberbatch), and Justin, back then, was a good conversationalist. Abigail liked listening to him talk, and in turn, she remembers every little detail he mentions.

Yapper + Listener. Except Abigail likes sending him things that Justin talked about ONCE. It could be a very specific book that he wanted to read, and she managed to get her hands on it so that she could give it to him as a present. A brooch that he could pin to his tie, or flowers that are always displayed in a vase by Justin's desk.

They see very little of one another whenever he's busy. This does little to deter Justin from sending Abigail lengthy letters, detailing what he does in a week. These letters always ask first of her well-being, then gradually goes from being general about his days at the courthouse, to being specific about what actually happens. His side-comments amuse Abigail to no end.

Abigail responds to his letters by doodling or drawing the things he describes, or caricatures just to tease Justin. These never fail to include a small Justin at the bottom of the front page, or a portraiture of him that she managed to sketch from memory.

Their honeymoon was supposed to be in Switzerland. When they were engaged, he took her to the country to celebrate their union.

Abigail puts flowers in his hair for no reason. He mumbles something about decorum, but the flower shall be kept and pressed in the pocket watch he keeps with him.

She's one of the few people who actually knows his birthday (the other two are Arthur, and Walter). Justin is not one to fuss about his birthday, yet he always comes home to Abigail having prepared a small surprise for him.

He's always alert, tense, in his element. Justin was surprised that he could find himself at ease whenever he took his place by her side, or whenever Abigail took his hands in hers. Always a serious man, but one smile from her is enough to lighten his mood.

Justin tells her everything. He keeps himself closely guarded, even then, and was not fond of divulging details of his personal life to his peers or those he even considers as friends. Yet Abigail was the one exception, and was probably the last person he poured his heart out to.

After her murder, Justin was not able to bear anything that is connected to Abigail's memory. Her pictures, the letters they sent to one another, the last flowers she gave him, even the color blue (including his own eyes, prompting him to avoid mirrors too), were objects he couldn't look at for a long time. Eventually, he chose some things that belonged to her to keep, only to store them away in a box that he'd never open.

After Slayer's End, Justin couldn't cope well when Abigail's murder was brought up again. Four years he kept himself in work, serving the city, avoiding the incident, and he made up his mind that it shall stay that way. The letters he stored away were burnt after the case concluded, then returned her belongings to Abigail's parents, and he destroyed the obituary he always kept in his wallet.

One would always question why Justin kept that obituary instead of a small portrait in her wallet. The snippet reminded him of her death more than anything. He believed that he could bring justice to her name, when he himself started to forget what Abigail looked like.

Justin saw Abigail every time he had to sentence a killer, showing that those innocent had suffered the same fate as her, which planted a fear in him while he was a city judge that he cannot stop such injustices from happening, no matter what he did. His perspective on such turned even more complicated when he had to sentence Timmy in Burning Bridges.

After the events of MoTP, Lawson's body was moved to a remote area, far from the city. A quiet tomb that was isolated from the cemetery of Concordia, on a lonely hill. Coincidentally, from the view of his tomb, one would be able to realize that Abigail's own grave wasn't that far.

[vvyvernicus]

My personal rankings on Black Butler characters. I may have left minor ones out/ones that didn't leave much of an impression on me. I have not gotten past the Public School Arc (yet), so I can't properly place characters who appear afterwards.

[whenzdaylunch]

You catch yourself a guy and bring him to what will soon be his new home for a while.

You tell him that he's actually a girl and that you'll make sure she accepts her new self. It starts with you giving her some treats whenever she calls herself by her proper pronouns.

Soon she'll probably also complain that her clothes she wore when you first picked her up are starting to smell. You of course give her some panties and a cute dress. She might complain at first, but it's not like she has much of a choice here.

You tell her how pretty she is and catch her blushing, even if she doesn't wanna admit it.

After some more pampering, dressing up, complimenting and showing her how pretty she's become, the memory of him has completely faded. She's now just a pretty and adorable girl, and loves you for showing her!

[uselessnub]

My trolls oc!!!!!!!!!

Basil is a nature/plant and pop troll, he often spends his time in his garden taking care of his many plants, when he's not in his garden he's in his pod or at the library reading about troll history.

Basil has always had an interest in the history of the troll species and he considers himself very smart and thinks he knows a great deal about history.

Basil is a bit shy and quiet when you first meet him, although he will warm up quickly he is very sensitive and prefers to keep to himself.

Although Basil can be a bit arrogant and begins to brag about his knowledge, he doesn't usually intend on it, as he is often in a world of his own.

[medaart]

more potential backstory for my tav, feel free to leave feedback

I've always wanted to delve more into mental illness with my writing, but I've always worried about coming off as "scary and unhinged," or by giving characters who I consider otherwise "morally good" traits like insecurity/clinginess and jealousy

I sort of see her and astarion's relationship as two people who saw each other as perfect when they first met (her in an adoring "you're so good at everything I wish I could be good at" way and him in a "ugh, you're an obnoxious little goody two-shoes" way) and then growing closer as they realized more and more that they're both just imperfect people and actually have a lot in common despite being very morally different kind of a "we're not so different, you and I" thing, but in an affectionate, sincere way

[rapscallion-rumble]

Kyosho Nakajima

Feel free to critique, I would like advice for digital art.

[dreamzghostz]

Danganronpa Talent Swap AU

Idk man, writing about my characters has really motivated me lol, so I did a few more designs

First, we have Ultimate Princess Kaede :)

She looks like Princess Peach at home lmao

Then, we have Ultimate Inventor Hajime. I gave him more of a typical inventor outfit, yeah

Then, there's Ultimate Traditional Dancer Gundham Tanaka! I tried to make a kimono the best I could, so if in anyway I need to fix how it looks, please tell me because that would be appreciated :)

Kaede Akamatsu - Ultimate Princess

Hajime Hinata - Ultimate Inventor

Gundham Tanaka - Ultimate Traditional Dancer

WE GOT 7/16 CAST. WE'RE ALMOST HALFWAY THERE

[beetlebugdash]

Twisted Wonderland characters and their college major!

Riddle- Business, grad school for law

Ace- Undecided????

Deuce- Criminal Justice with a minor in coaching

Trey- Culinary

Cater- Photography or any art major

Leona- Animal Genetics

Ruggie- Accounting and Finance

Jack- Sports Management

Azul- Definitely Business

Jade- Hospitality?

Floyd- Liberal arts but he’d switch it up every week (I feel bad for his advisor)

Kalim- Dance or Theatre

Jamil- Dance but would switch it

Vil- Fashion Merchandise

Rook- Chemistry Major with a minor in Art

Epel- Agriculture

Idia- Computer Science

Ortho- Also Computer Science

Malleus- Undecided

Lilia- Secondary Education with a History Concentration

Sebek- Criminal Justice

Silver- Psychology

[jargonautical]

Tumblr help me

I have a full graphic novel sketched out in my head (where of course it is perfect and complete) and I'm trying to capture it in actual media so other people can see it.

The problem is, I can't settle on which medium to use. I need to commit so I can stop dithering and get on with it. Your opinions please ... ? Line and wash, or digital?

[real-levyanno]

A small comic I'm in the process of making for my art class. I have to get the final draft printed soon, but I'm pretty happy with it!

I can't decide if this is a Ninjago comic or if it's Paxterra. Either way, I really do like how it's coming along!

[ryhmefinancer]

Study doodle? I didn’t study anything but I learned some stuffs! Feel free to criticize or give tips, by the way this is digital art if you can’t tell already ^ v ^

I just wanted to draw a weeping willow tree from my childhood home’s front yard but also I wanted to test some of the new brushes I got!!!! :DD

[lore-grandma]

Ok I know no one cares especially since there’s kinda likely it going to never be another bayo game because reasons but here are my lists of things I would appreciate to be touched on more

1. I would like some better explanation on Luka and viola being part faerie (even though one is likely only part faerie because of likely being a resurrection)

2. Just give Luka and bayonetta some more scenes. Listen I don’t give a fuck about ships. And I know I’ll be hanged for this but I never got the feeling Jeanne and cereza were together. Like it’s more evident in bayo 2. And listen I’m not surprised that they’d try to pair Luka and cereza. Because Luka does eventually develop a crush. Now does it make it any less weird that a bayonetta gets with Luka despite the fact that in probably a lot of timelines Luka met cereza when she was taken out of her coma, when she was probably at the lowest mental age 18? No. Listen it makes sense that bayo 1 and bayo 2 doesn’t get with Luka, because they’re different from bayonetta 3 because bayonetta 3 is heavily implied to be tiny cereza. The tiny cereza that bayo 1 created a split timeline with. So of course the experiences with Luka are severely different. Maybe bayo 3 met Luka (not lukeon, it’s pretty clear that bayo 3 has either forgotten about him, never met him, or never believed that Luka and lukeon were the same soul or whatever. This lore is confusing so it’s likely wrong.) when he was waaaay older. And not like 7 or something. I just want more scenes with them being cute instead of Luka low-key being a pervert. And nothing else connecting them basically. I get it they were adorable towards the end but there wasn’t a lot of that going on. Like I’m sure you just wanted viola out of the way and to make sure that Luka doesn’t get hurt but you’ve seen him get out of tricky situations (yes I know bayo 1,2,3 aren’t the same same person but shhhh)

3. I would like to go back to the lumen sage arc. There’s so much we don’t know about the lumen sages are it’s kinda weird that we never see balder attempt to rebuild the lumens even in his evil state. Like a lot more sages would help you with your goal man. Like is it possible that balder’s bad experience with the whole being separated from your community, lover and child enough to make him not want to practice or even take pride in his culture? Yeah. But like we never really explore the how of Rosa and balder’s relationship. And it’s interesting how Rosa takes pride in being an umbra despite being locked up. Also something we don’t acknowledge is that because of the split timeline thing. Bayo 3 likely never experienced the loss of the left eye, and also the loss of her father. Hell she probably didn’t experience the killing god twice. Listen it’s possible that after cereza wasn’t sealed away that they eventually killed balder. But it’d be interesting to see father dearest again, merhaps trying to bring back the lumen and also tries to bring back the umbra? Hmmm? Maybe balder would make a proposal that he and cereza make a secret magic school that teaches both the umbran and lumen ways. The school of eclipse or something. (I’m thinking students are taught both practices instead of one or the other so that way if there’s a mass extinction event that there’s no disproportionate balance of power.) (though of course because the reason the why the witches have contracts with demons is so that way they could kill angels it would never work. Because then what benefits would the demons get. Though I guess they could just sorta do what they did before war and like be more involved with each other.)

4. More friends for viola, I think proper non family (yes unfortunately Enzo is family) characters that viola interacts with would be really nice and probably help flesh out her character. Because now she’s being awkward because years of war have prevented her from developing social skills. (Also low-key the good Connor siguard in the opening scene, you know the one with the gun was kinda hot. And it’s unfortunate that we never acknowledge that) (also the fact that it was just kinda this one siguard decided to fuck up the universe is so funny actually)

5. Ok I know I’m probably the loudest person demanding we go back to exploring the umbran and lumen history, but I also think we need to acknowledge the human world a little more. I would like to see Enzo’s wife and kids. Actually a quest or section where we can see Enzo be kinda sweet would be nice. Enzo seems like the type to talk about a lot of big game but folds quickly when his kids cutely asks for a lollipop before dinner. Also I do also see him defending his kids to the end of the earth. He will go against a Karen parent in a verbal battle if their kid were bullying his. I just want to make him more fleshed out. (Something that would be kinda funny of an idea is that viola discovers that Enzo tap dances and performs tap dancing and is pretty good at it too. Like I’m sure that Nintendo will tone down the cuntiness because Nintendo are cowards. But I’m imagining that Enzo doing his tap dancing routine is at least on the top 10 of cuntiest scenes in the entirety of this hypothetical game that will likely never exist)

6. I would like a better idea what the bayonetta family does for a living. Like yes they do jobs for Enzo so that way he gathers information and does labor. But we kinda never know what those jobs are. And I understand that it’s never put into much depth because we’re always going on a religious experience. But this goes with my want for proper exploration of the human world I just want to know about these characters lives and history.

7. We need to Luka writing and publishing stories and interact with his coworkers. WE NEED MORE NORMAL HUMAN INTERACTIONS.

8. I would like to see Rodin forge his weapons, also upgrades to weapons would be so cool actually and since it’s likely we’ll never get weapon variety with viola, I think upgrading weapons would help with customization.

9. More people in the gates of hell. Like yes it’s a secret bar that mostly criminals hang around in, but in bayo 1’s journals we do know other people chill at the gates of hell.

10. Gates of hell boxing ring sounds pretty cool and would literally explain why there’s a giant practice arena in the middle. Also how the hell do you actually get inside? We know there’s a literal door, Enzo walks out and there’s no way Enzo knows magic… unless ENZO WAS THE LAST LUMEN SAGE ALL ALONG, GRANTING HIM THE ABILITY TO KNOW ONLY THE MOST BASIC OF MAGIC!

11. Does Rodin sleep? Where does he sleep?

12. I kinda want viola to take up making plush toys. And that’s how she summons demons, kinda like her mom in cereza and the lost demon.

13. I’m a little surprised that no one has tried to actually contracts with faeries, like here’s the thing, the obvious answer is that faeries are such assholes that more respectably person would knowingly do that. I would say maybe viola could do that but I’m sure they’d fucking hate her.

14. I wonder if any of the bayonettas/jeane (because by the end of the fight cereza would’ve been in a river in most timelines) buried Rosa’s body. Like halfway through writing this I remembered oh yeah the demons drag their body down but no it’s actually their soul. And we know that tombs that hold witches exist. And I’m sure even balder in his most evilest of states would bury his wife.

15. Playable Luka would be nice especially since he’s a furry now.

16. An actual proper storyline with Jeanne where she is playable, has a separate story from bayonetta, I can move the camera around, would be nice.

17. Zero is a weird character that I would love some more references to.

18. Viola gives off such open world character energy, like maybe something kinda like the new Spider-Man games (I have no idea if that’s a good comparison, Ive only ever watched jacksepticeye play the miles morales Spider-Man game.) like I know realistically it would be a bad idea to have 2 other characters have stories that is basically the normal bayonetta formal that is walk down corridors, battle, corridor, battle, running away, battle. Especially story wise but viola seems like a character that would thrive in an open world game. Of course if you did that no one would play it because everyone hates viola.

19. I just want viola to get better costumes. Listen I get it viola has went through war, good and different clothing is a hard thing to find. I think something that would have made this better was if during viola’s sections that she would encounter buildings that have clothes and if the character really wanted to they could take those clothes. And viola would leave money on the counter for the owner despite the fact that the world is ending and IF the world got restored then that money and clothing wouldn’t matter. Anyways I think in the newer games it’s just going to be buying proper outfits OR buying from the in game locals.

20. Ok I’m also getting exhausted from multiverse madness but since bayonetta made a whole game surrounding it, i think it’d be an interesting story that portals to universes are opening up the gang needs to close them up before more people get hurt walking through them and getting displaced. Kinda like glitches in reality. I’m honestly just making an open world bayonetta game. Which honestly would be refreshing honestly. Like I do have gripes with open world games, but also the walking and then battle simulator gets boring eventually.

21. Literally any possible explanation as to how cereza is alive, it could be lazy and it could just be a different bayonetta. I’ll take it, just don’t give us a bayonetta and never talk about it.

22. Viola meeting the grandparents even of just them being spirits.

23.ghosts would be such a fun thing to acknowledge.

24. I was going to say that minor deities would be nice to acknowledge but that’s debatably what the angels and demons are. Sooo maybe but this one would be the one I be the least disappointing about not existing.

25. Polyamorous cereza who is dating both Luka and Jeanne, this will not quell anyone’s complaints about how Jeanne and cereza not being end game but it’s too fucking late now so might as well commit. Also does cereza seem like the type for a monogamous relationship? No.

26. I know there’s no point in it but I would love to see viola’s beast within form, kinda similar to classical bayonetta’s but of course different. Also we really had a loss when viola never had a form where her and Cheshire merged like bayonetta does with her demons. (Of course that’s likely because there’s no contract between them)

27. So do you think the two Cheshire demons are the same? Like do you think the Cheshire from the lost demon decided to possess viola’s Cheshire doll? (That Cheshire doll was likely a gift from her mom)

Now will any of these happen? Probably not. The last mainline game got mediocre reviews but also was the best selling game. (As far as I know) I’m not sure if the fandom is big enough to make an official 4th game. I do think the franchise can move on from Hideki kamiya, it’s possible to make a game that’s just as cunty as the original and expands the story without the original creator. Now would the game be to kamiya’s liking? Idk, but I do think after 4 games and still a kinda confusing story, I think we’ll be fine. It only gets worse from here.

[medaart]

Trying to work more on lighting/shading and/or getting Astarion's face right, so I did a screenshot redraw for practice. Bonus edit:

[octoir]

it’s time…

Harry Potter.

oh, and tomarry addendum: I really wish there was a time travel fic where there wasn’t like a Tom “redemption.” I think Tom has a 50% chance of slowly corrupting Harry and turning him alt-right, if he really wanted to— imho books show that Harry is pretty ambivalent about social issues unless they involve his friends, like hagrid

"he would not fucking say that" but its about a character being a leftist. he would not fucking believe that