#feedback from regular readers makes my heart go brrrrr

[valaruakars]

i read through all of LGP again and i really enjoyed it! :) it is really good!! i am not sure i spotted all the changes but imo it is definitely improved :) i especially liked the changes at the end of chapter 6, it makes the feelings that they have clearer. also the lines in-between time jumps/changes of perspective made it a lot more comfortable to read.

AHHHHHHH!!! Seriously, thank you so much for this feedback!!! 💖 I love hearing what made it easier to read and understand; that really reinforces that I made the right choice for both myself and readers. 6 definitely had the heaviest changes, but tbh I got frustrated experimenting with the present to flashback structure and didn't originally edit it as heavily as I usually do. Clarifying what I was trying to convey with their honey nut feelios was a HUGE weight off my shoulders going forward. Happy you noticed!

Also real clown shit: This whole time I thought ao3 would convert my little dashes denoting new sections into full lines. I only recently realized I had to put them in myself 🙈 Oopsies, don't ask me where I got that idea from, but glad that small improvement helped!!