Haha, when you look back on your work and go "wow. This sucks"
Cause I really am not that proud of some of the stuff in the original Bodata. Like god.
Like the original phantom had Stockholm syndrome.
Battle of Fairy tail just had Laxus being weird and completely all over the place with attacking Gajeel because if he didn't he'd look bad or something I dunno.
The recovery arc has Gajeel essentially cheating on Natsu by accident.
The Silas arc is just disgusting and I hate that I wrote that one chapter that I do not want to name.
Oracion seiz has both Erza and Gray out of character and Cobra is less sassy than I think I realised.
Edolus just kinda drowned a quarter of the way in and just never had the potential I had in mind.
The Eilian arc starts out good, a little wonky then ends with the weirdest spit ever.
Tenrou is kinda all over and slightly OOC for Cobra and Laxus.
The Home arc and the 7 year gap arc(what exists of it) are definitely my favourites probably because they are the most consistent in tone. Although there is a lot of time jumping with nothing inbetween that I hope to fix a little bit with the rewrite. Also the two arcs that I plan to change the least I'd say.
At the very least OG was a good experience and definitely helped improve my writing. It's why I have a PDF version of all the old chapters saved to my phone. So I can look back on my old work.
Also funnily, I looked at it and after editing only 14 chapters I have went from 265 pages for the 108 chapters to 302. With each new chapter averaging at around 4 or 5 pages in length while the original was lucky to get 2 per chapter. Definitely improved that's for sure.
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Watched Episode 302 "The Third Seal" with Amanda
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A face only a mother could love.
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“Bein’ huge is pretty awesome, huh? I’ve never felt this cool!”
“Could you turn him back?!”
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Brandish: I don’t know why Lucy, but you’re the most fun to mess with.
Natsu: (Extreme high pitched, overly excited voice) AIN’T SHE?!?!
She really is his favorite person😭
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Oh yeah, and...
BROKE:
WOKE:
Kiss my ass, 2014. The lipstick and red eyes are back in business.
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