#everyone else that picked on original!siwon would meet their destiny because my joshua would NOT turn a blind eye to all the injustice
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ngtskynebula · 5 months ago
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I just finished the At The End Of The Road webcomic, by Haribo. It's, uh... well. That finale was anticlimatic, but it's understandable seeing as it was the creator's first project; everyone's first everything is always dumb.
I found out about it because the AO3 JeongShua fic writer @/authormin wrote a fic based on this comic's plot a few years ago, and since the fanfic has been on hiatus, I looked up the comic to know what happened in the story. The premise is creative, buuut the narrative could've been handled a lot better, I believe.
If I were to work on a rewrite, those assholes involved with the gang rape would've suffered everything there is to suffer. I also think the younger brother's character felt flat, and more annoying than anything. In fact, I'd have to rework the entire cast...
This webcomic's greatest asset is its premise, because the execution was kinda meh. I don't really recommend the reading, but I'd enjoy writing my own JeongShua rendition 🤔
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