#everyone else that picked on original!siwon would meet their destiny because my joshua would NOT turn a blind eye to all the injustice | Explore Tumblr posts and blogs

ngtskynebula · 6 months ago

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I just finished the At The End Of The Road webcomic, by Haribo. It's, uh... well. That finale was anticlimatic, but it's understandable seeing as it was the creator's first project; everyone's first everything is always dumb.

I found out about it because the AO3 JeongShua fic writer @/authormin wrote a fic based on this comic's plot a few years ago, and since the fanfic has been on hiatus, I looked up the comic to know what happened in the story. The premise is creative, buuut the narrative could've been handled a lot better, I believe.

If I were to work on a rewrite, those assholes involved with the gang rape would've suffered everything there is to suffer. I also think the younger brother's character felt flat, and more annoying than anything. In fact, I'd have to rework the entire cast...

This webcomic's greatest asset is its premise, because the execution was kinda meh. I don't really recommend the reading, but I'd enjoy writing my own JeongShua rendition 🤔

#cw // rape #seventeen #at the end of the road #fanfic #original!han siwon suffered so much and for what? i know life is unfair but this isn't real life #and those type of stories are just irritating to read #the bullies turned fans could have appeared again too #if i were to write an AU based on it it'd go like this: cheollie as the redhaired bully-turned-fan (but he'd appear more later on)#joshua as yoon taem!n and jeonghan as that underdeveloped blonde male lead #soonhao as jeongshua's sidekicks just because #an OC for the younger brother because i'm not putting my sebongs through that shitty ass role #that miserable excuse of a human that orchestrated everything original!siwon went through would know hell alongside the younger brother #everyone else that picked on original!siwon would meet their destiny because my joshua would NOT turn a blind eye to all the injustice #and jeonghan would help him which makes him a much better love interest than that blonde yandere wannabe will ever be !!!#in this house we ARE making sure justice is done even if with our own fists YES

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