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[lesbiankoby]

i need to actually play sunless skies all the way through i need to know if positing “nika” as a rebel judgement (a dead rebel judgement? alivedead? neither?) works or not luffy’s bag needs to be fucked up and partially unknowable

[evanescentdawn]

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hi !!!!! i know this ask is from like. 6 sep 2022 but I wanted to save it for when i write a line i Really like and fjjfjfjfjfjfj that time has COME. :D

like okay, okay. i was editing my alchemy of souls wip, the stars & us, i think. i actually don’t know what the wip is called lololol. anyways, so there was this line bothering me and I FINALLY fixed it. and oh my god. ohhhhh myyyy godddd. IT FKDHDJKSKDKDKD JUST FKFKKFKFKFK

so here’s the line

Jin Buyeon jolts. That voice. She snaps behind her, swallowing. “Jang Uk.”

screetching, because it came out so perfect for me. i Love the moments in canon where yeong calls his name, either in s1 or s2, i have a personal dnhdhshdhdhdjd for when characters call each other’s name. and just it’s extra special when she does it for me. aNYWAYS. so i wanted !!!! this line to be Good. and yeah, okay. the first drafts of it was…..okay but DIDNT HAVE THE OOMF that was looking for !!! but today !!!! no, it’s yesterday now, isn’t it. so yesterday !!! was apparently Perfect alignment of everything for me to write the Perfect line i wanted !!!!!

okay, maybe I’m being dramatic but also this is perfect Reaction because hhhhhHhhhhhhh sO PROUD OF HOW PERFECT LINE THAT CAME OUT LIKE. I’m so <3333333333

my fave part HAS gotta be to be “that voice” like *screams* when i was rewriting that line — ik i keep saying line when it’s More than one line but wait is line supposed to mean a sentence or maybe it’s just….that. a single line. I’m defintely getting off topic — so like when I was rewriting that line and then, wrote down “that voice” IT WAS LIKE EVERYTHING SLOTED INTO PLACE PERFECTLY. THAT WAS THE LINE I WAS WAITING FOR. EVEN THO I DIDNT KNOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cuz really, the only things I’ve added was that line and “swallowing” but THAT VOICE. ADDED SO MUCH TO IT. it was !!!! the OOPHM I WAS LOOKING FOR. so v glad so v happy I Found it because fjdhdjjdjdkfkd hi Hello this is most definitely my FAVOURITE line out of the entire wip so far !!!!!!!!!!! like, my god, do i Love it when characters call each another character’s names. ESPECIALLY WHEN YEONG DOES IT. and this was so absolutely perfect im so ^^^^^^^^^ <33333333

it’s even Better in context. cuz like she was reminiscing about her life being Prisoned in that room and yeah…….he had…. *BREAKS INTO FEELS*

ik u absolutely don’t know anything about alchemy of souls, asker, but thanks for letting me ramble LOL

ok so apparently the word I was looking for Was Not OOMF or OOPHM but in fact. OOMPH. but anyways, yeah. that’s close enough.