#despite the fact that i've met my fair share of aggressive weirdos at night they are very difficult to write because there just is no way
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rewriting my cringefail first act which had many scenes that were much more like my summaries in act 2 than actually fully written scenes
#currently i am revising the last scene that has this issue but it is 5 am and i think i will save the rest for tomorrow#i set the tone and fixed up the premise but... it's the scene where jessie commits her first murder and it's a random guy targeting#her at night#despite the fact that i've met my fair share of aggressive weirdos at night they are very difficult to write because there just is no way#to write them to sound Normal. they are not normal people and normal people don't say or do these things#they Always sound kind of like a weird one-off saturday morning villain's henchman even in real life#i think i'll have better luck writing the rest after some sleep
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