#delvindeep

[knightofbalance-13]

AKA Insult The Audience and Characters While Wasting Time

http://delvindeep.tumblr.com/post/164570714739/ive-been-thinking-about-the-world-of-remnant

i’ve been thinking about the world of remnant series and how they could have implemented that worldbuilding into the series proper. here’s a few ideas

Which are all just the same version of “one guy asks another guy for exposition” same as literally every other show in existence which WOR is able to subvert and avoid the pitfalls of the ordinary exposition.

dust: the story literally opens in a dust shop. show ruby buying some, having a chat with the shop owner. “is this for raw use, miss, or ammunition?” “yeah, it’s for my baby.” “your baby?” “the scythe” etc. if you actually need us to know the history of its use and how humanity doesn’t know where it came from, give it to us in one of port’s lectures. we don’t have to hear the whole thing; just a couple of key lines, then it fades into background noise as jaune starts hitting on weiss again or some shit because that’s apparently more important than establishing your lore

Except why would Port or anyone be teaching them such basic elements of dust when they are already in an advanced school for this sort of thing and thus would have already had this drilled into their skulls years ago? That’s insulting to the characters for thinking hey are that stupid and insulting to the audience for believing we wouldn’t catch onto that. Also, i guess you’re fine with a shit ton of flaws in the animation since they had to waste time getting lines for the teachers and the students as well as animating all of that. Unless you want to nix a fight scene or a plot point because RWBY is already stretched for time as it is.

kingdoms: did we even need this one? the show already tells us there are four kingdoms called atlas, mistral, vacuo and vale, that atlas is militaristic, that huntsmen academies train huntsmen (no shit) and that life outside the borders is dangerous. see, they know how to do it already!

Except we don’t know WHY Atlas is built that way, we know nothing about Mistral Vale of Vacuo, we don’t know why their actions of treating Huntsmen like soldiers is so looked down upon and why peopel are so on edge with them. That excludes a lot of the tiny details that really enrich the lore such as Atlas having risen up from the snow to become the new captial of the Kingdom or how Vacuo has a different morality than the other two kingdoms due to the harshness of their area. COngrats, you wasted time and money for a much worse, more boring, more drap version of what we already got.

grimm: instead of starting with the dust shop scene, start with some redshirt nomads. one complains that he doesn’t feel safe travelling at night, another makes fun of him, they start arguing, someone else steps in and tells them to shut up because fear and anger will draw the grimm, which it does. if it’s important to know that they don’t attack animals, show some animals, which the grimm ignore after killing all the humans. the shit about older grimm getting smarter is already in the show, the shit about them evaporating when they die is in the show, and the shit it being impossible to keep them captive is contradicted by the show

Okay then, fork over about a thousand dollars to cover the cost of the voice acting and animation. or better yet, do it yourself so that the CRWBY don’t have to stretch themselves out even further. Oh, and listen as the fans complain on and on about there being no new episodes or anything because there is no WOR to tide them over, thus weakening their suspension of disbelief, thus forcing you to maker more detailed lore, thus more time, more gaps, more annoyance and so on until the show is dead.

aura: this is all in the show already. pyrrha gives jaune a hamfisted exposition dump about aura that he shouldn’t need.

Except what exactly it is, what it does, what Sembelnces are, the types of Sembelnces asd well as build up for Salem.

vytal festival: work the origins of the festival into ozpin’s speech instead of that stupid attempt at explaining the colour names

The listen as people bitch on and on about the color names as well as the info they will inevitably forget about since that means they’ll get it a whole yera before needed. Also, that takes longer so cough up more money or time or have a shitter product.

huntsmen: nothing of substance here that we didn’t already know

Except that Huntsmen aren’t the noible heroes that we see which helps ease people into the tonal shift of Volume 3 as well as humanizing the product.

ccts: look, let’s be honest. the only reason this is here is to explain why cinder’s plan is going to work. like, was there even the slightest question about what was going to happen when they ended the episode with “if one tower goes down then they all do”

the point is, it shouldn’t be so difficult to hint at what the villain is up to that you have to shove it into a side series. just stop having your villain be vague as fuck about everything for the sake of cultivating mystique

Then spend an entire season having the villain detail every single step of their plan with the complexities and all the twists and see if there are still people around. Also, that doesn’t explain why the CCT is so important so you still have to do that so fork over more money or time.

four maidens: this is more of a standalone short than supplemental infodumping, so i dunno if it should count. not that it would matter anyway because the maidens subplot already comes out of fucking nowhere

So9 impliment it into the story which already has fast pace for no reason, kill the pacing and the mood as well as remove the story book element about them. Also, personally work on the series to make up for the week of time they lost because there is nothing there to fill the gap, fork over the money to cover up the removal or personally take responsibility for it.

vale: mostly boring geographical waffle that is unlikely to ever be important. no elegant way to work it into the show, but on the other hand, you don’t need to

Thus the world feels flatter and emptier with no explanation for what happened when teh series gave the tone of doing so, thus losing audience interest and something that made the series unique.

the other kingdoms: we know everyone’s headed to mistral. presumably they’ll be spending some time there. show us the culture when they arrive. are we ever gonna visit the other two? if so, do the same for them. if not, it doesn’t matter much

Wow, you must have some deep pockets or as much free time as possible to be willing to foot the bill for all of this new footage and audio and voice lines and brainstorming and editing that this would all entail. Surely you wouldn’t ask a studio to bankrupt themselves just to do stuff you’d never ask of any other show right?

between kingdoms: it’s in the show! grimm running wild outside the kingdoms is in the show! bandit attacks are in the show! grimm moving in afterwards is in the show! it’s all there already!

Except the specifics of the grimm attacks, why people move outside pof the kingdoms, why there are bandits, how they get supplies and their interactions with the Grimm.

faunus: you know when oobleck is talking about the faunus war? you know when he stops for a minute to ask if any faunus have been discriminated against, and velvet raises her hand, and he’s like “oh, that sucks. anyway, back to what i was talking about”? you know how that part was a total waste of time? cut it. talk some more about the origin of the human-faunus conflict before everyone starts going on about night vision. you could even work some development for blake in there. oobleck asks if anyone knows how and when faunus exploitation began, and blake gives a long, bitter, opinionated answer

Ah yes, because one minute of dialogue to segway into a plotline can  be cut out and around ten minutes of exposition about fanaus history, biology and interactions with the humans can be shoved into that space. Except no, it can’t be so that’s more money and/or time you must be willing to give up to add in what no one asked for. As well as teh all teh angry fans who will yell at you for thinking they were stupid enough to think the characters didn’t know that as well as making all the characters into people with the memory of a fruit fly.

schnee dust company: i feel like this could have been a character moment for weiss. she probably never met nicholas. the only sdc she’s lived with is the one run by jacques. finding out that it was once an honest business run by a good, brave man could be a big turning point for her. “i want to be out there overseeing expeditions like granddad did. i want to change this company back to what it was.” and bam. now being a hunter isn’t just about annoying daddy anymore

Except that why she would even fight against her father in the first place, why she would consider the schhnee name noble at all or how she would miss all this, make the plot hole with her mother even fucking bigger than before, makes Weiss look like an idiot for not looking into her family’s past and, again, kills her motivation so we have a walking contradiction in the show as a main character.

And that’s not even getting into how there are some people who PREFER WOR over ordinary exposition.and thus changing that pisses them off as well as kills the pacing of RWBY. Thus changing something for an, at bets, equal result as before.

Yeah great job on the suggestion.

[tumblezwei]

It's less "hey look Hbomb said shitty things in the past" and more "hey look Hbomb claims he was a huge fan of Monty and the original trailers but when Monty was actually alive and the trailers were new, he mocked both and seemed to have no love for either, what a two-faced asshole"

Hey, I’m sure you must be really tired of Hbomberguy’s video, but someone on the RWBY subreddit just made a post that makes him look even more like an asshole. - https://old.reddit.com/r/RWBY/comments/idkcam/the_hbomberguy_video_genuinely_upsets_me/ - Seriously, this user brings up some posts that Hbomber wrote about Monty years ago that are simply disgusting and I think it should be spread around.

Holy shit. Like, putting his criticisms aside, this man really tried to say he was a huge fan of Monty that admired his work so much and then said this shit when Monty was still alive. The audacity. The fucking gall.

[careforacuppatea]

i'm not throwing a fit, mate. i'm just confused. and you can call it a strawman fallacy if you like, but considering the guy himself read my examples of physical violence and said "yep, those are morally grey", i dunno how you're gonna act it's somehow irrelevant. like, did i mindbend him into saying those things? am i a jedi?

You brought in physical violence, when really it had absolutely nothing to do with the original post. You started with strawman fallacies even before I stepped in. I also said I could not argue for the physical violence aspect because in general physically harming someone is usually considered extremely wrong, especially in the examples you provided.Actually, I could agree seeing physical violence morally grey– what about the assault and possible murder of a child molester? attacking a supremacist who had started some type of violent rally themselves? War can be considered morally grey, because of who is the “bad guys” and who are those fighting for the “good.” It can be seen as vigilante justice, justice, or the common good of the masses (i.e majority)

Humans are not 3 dimensional creatures whose morals are completely black and white, the real world is fucking complicated as hell.

No, you brought up a strawman which he politely decided to respond to despite it being obvious you were just trying to make him look stupid.

EDIT: Well I fucked up and pushed post instead of send privately @delvindeep

[internetcoward]

@delvindeep I'm on mobile, so I can't just add this to your post, but I might have something that would interest you.

[rumbutt]

Your activity feed when xekstrin is done with you.

[knightofbalance-13]

http://dudeblade.tumblr.com/post/164841848506/delvindeep-im-going-to-choke-to-death-on-my-own

Delvin, let me expalin this to you:

I have made one post about you after I blocked you and it was on something we discussed in the past, where when I bet you in the argument,m, you refused to admit it or debate my points and instead tried changing the subject to make me look bad. Not only that but yopu’ve done this multiple times: Like on the crtq blog (https://team-crtq.tumblr.com/post/163582959484/when-does-being-critical-turn-into-being-hateful) so I eitehr A.)DOn’t addresds you and have people think your bullshit is okay, B.) unblock you and watch as you refuse to debate properly or C.) Keep your ass blocked. Nobody forced me to do this but you.

And Dudeblade, you literally block people the instant5 they negatively respond to you and then blame me for it.

You calling me a hypocrite is like saying “That guy is an asshole” and pointing at the mirror in front of me.

[knightofbalance-13]

https://sokumotanaka.tumblr.com/post/166264494904/cryfarting-delvindeep-knightofbalance-13

TL:DR

Just gonna show that you’re  aliar by debunking your links:

First is off SSSN denying that it was about RWBY....but his blog is a RWBY blog and his history says otherwise.

Second one is lying about two posts.

Third one has no connection to what you are saying and has no examples of me doing anything wrong: Just OP refusing top listen to facts.

Fourth one also has nothing to do with your bullshit and in fact shows a member of the RWDE tag suicide baiting me.

Fifth also has nothing to do with you and in fact shows nothing about me and proves my point right

Sixth is contradicxted by what you said and has nothing to do with my post.

Seevnth does nothing and shows you lying.

Eigth has nothing to do with me and is slander

Ninth has been disp[roven as that member of RWDE was caught lyi8ng and accusing a CSA victim of pedophilia then winning when they get called out.

Tenth is try6ing to get the whole fandom to ostrachize me for no reaosn and has nothing to do with me: Is more slander

Eleventh has nothing to do with your point and in fact OP’s sources are all biased in their favor so you’re being the ignorant one.

Twelth is something you’ve contradicted several times

Thirteenth is 106 examples of a person lying

And fourteenth shows a clear bias in your thinking.

So out of fourteen sources. 0 of which actually work and three of which actually have no bearing on your post and 2 of which support me.

Goes t5o show: You have no sources and you have no way of proving your shit right so you lie constantly.and throw around links praying no one looks into them.

If you can’t even provide links that have any sort of connection to your point, let alone ones that work:” WHy should you be trusted? Especially if you choose an old post taht was self admitted perosnal and biased as fact?

[knightofbalance-13]

http://delvindeep.tumblr.com/post/165845105384/delvindeep-delvindeep-sokumotanaka

Same exact thing as last time...which isn’t surprising because THAT’S WHAT I TRIED LAST TIME. AS I SAID.

And sure, that’s different. Specifically going after me, refusing to debate properly, calling me names, disregarding me based on bunk “recipts” and continuously ignoring my points time and time again is totally the same as me going through the RWDE tag, going after whatever indiscriminately and addressing every point while not using the logical fallacies. Sure sounds like you are worthy of unblocking just for you to steer the conversation off topic and personally attack me like last time (https://knightofbalance-13.tumblr.com/post/164225869050/colorblind-or-illiterate)

So ona  scale of 14-15, how much of an ass do you look like now?

[knightofbalance-13]

https://sokumotanaka.tumblr.com/post/165825230299/delvindeep-delvindeep-sokumotanaka

When I tried rebloging because SOKUMOTANAKA, the OP, has me blocked so I can’t reblog no matter what.

So on a scale of 9-10: How much of an ass do you look like?

Oh gee, the guy who does nothing but project is calling me a pedo, a bully and an asshole. Says more about  you than me huh?

[sssn-neptune-vasilias]

Blogs like you and delvindeep and chibi-rwby need to get over all your whining over rwby like it's so fucking stupid to waste your time over something you obviously can't stand, and quit crying over you precious faggy characters because they're all obviously straight anyways

Blogs like you need to nut up and stay in your lane :/

[knightofbalance-13]

About the whole KKKob thing since I know for a fact I personally have seen it I went looking and a simply google search brings up your response to Internet Coward who actually DOES have the KKKob in the tags

Yeah, I know. But Delvindeep doesn’t apparently.  Although I did the same google and most people who post regularly in rwde does have the tag.

[knightofbalance-13]

Nope

http://sssn-neptune-vasilias.tumblr.com/post/160492822453/tbh-at-the-very-least-i-can-thank-the-creators-of]

Tbh at the very least I can thank the creators of the CRTQ tag for making their own little space outside of general FNDM tags so that the people who frequent that tag don’t feel the need to attack and belittle others anymore.

What delusion are you living: You asshats have been assaulting people long before I came here. It’s just now people are sick of it and are pushing back. Not to mention: We’ve tagged in the RWBY tag, the four main character tags, the rwby analysis tag ect. We just don’t tag rwde and rwde alone.

One of the biggest issues during last hiatus and even during v4 was people who don’t like criticism of the show (or people who don’t like “certain kinds of criticisms” as they say) coming on to other’s posts with the same contrived, antagonistic bullshit arguments.

Really? Because if this is talking about us, we have actually criticized the show. Very first post by yours truly and another post, a review of Volume 1, is in the works. Meanwhile, all you and the other rwde posters haven’t made a balanced critique in months if not at all.

And why should people stop the arguments if you never debunk them? Because none of you have ever successfully debunk anything I have brought up. And what you call lying about Jaune’s screentime, taking Sun’s actions out of context and manipulating eerything around Taiyang if not contrived, antagonistic and bullshit?

You make a post asking about the change in Sun’s characterization during v4 and there they were making excuse after excuse about how people were just finding any excuse to hate on one of the boys or some other bs like that.

What change? Because seeing as I have watched just as much as you and unlike you I have no reason to bash the writers, Sun’s character was the same as it was first shown in Volume 1. Sun has always done stupid shit and not known his boundaries, you can just attack freely because Monty is dead and the fandom isn’t as protective of Miles and Kerry.

It felt like people were combing through the RWDE tag or other tags just to find something they disagreed with and attack the blog over it.

Or the common  misconception about rwde being for criticism brings critics there and some of us like criticism and we just get mad at the bullshit. Or maybe the rwde tag is spewing bullshit and no one else is countering it. Because that’s my experience.

They’ve all migrated away now and made their own little hideout. There’s a lot less antagonism now.

No, I haven’t changed my schedule or actions one bit since then and if anything, I have seen more people speak out against your bullshit than they have in a long time,

Sure people disagree on things and there’s healthy debate, but there’re no more people who are still questioning “why do people hate Jaune” or try to defend his actions after watching v2. It’s p great

Then why continue to attack us thus drawing us back to rwde and thsu breaking your little pieace here? Because you ahve attacked us, Dudebalde has terrorized us, Sokumo has lied about us, delvindeep tried to make us look like instigaters and Motoi Ryuko has been attacking us as well. Seems like you like it because it makes you circlejerk faster but accepting that will make peopel rip you apart so you say one thing and do another. Nice try.

[knightofbalance-13]

Mob Battle: Round 1

https://sokumotanaka.tumblr.com/post/160351135834/dudeblade-passivefan

Ah yes, the good old circle jerk.

First up is delvindeep

there’s this new #crtq tag that is exclusively for the Correct Type™ of rwby criticism, spearheaded by that weird angry dude who thinks #rwde is a hate monolith poised to destroy roosterteeth

No, the #crtq tag is for people who don’t like the criticism in the rwde tag and is a tag that tries to be as professional as possible.

And all I have said is that the rwde tag is selfish and that they complain when things don’t go exactly their way and thus selfish intent is going to destroy RWBY as Miles rejects ALL criticism and never improves.

P.S. Mod Regalia is the leader: I’m what you would call the Lancer.

Next is Xeksrin

people are amazing.

No, people are awful, evident by the fact that the rwde tag has been using terror tactics to shut me up and alienate me because I dared to critique them. And this circle jerk is evidence. And yes, I know this is mocking but since so many decide to ignore the subtle of my work, I’ve decided to do the same and make a point through it.

Third is SSSN-Neptune-Vasilas

It’s honestly hilarious tbh I’ve seen a couple posts in that tag that specifically sub other blogs or posts just to discuss them to an audience other than the RWDE tag because it’s p much the same small circle in the CRTQ tag

... What? I have no idea what this is meant to convey other than the generic “Haha, people I don’t like.”

And small? The blog has been up for about a week and we nearly have 30 followers, half of what my year long blog has. So the one line that makes sense fails.

Fourth in line is Passivefan.

They think they’re doing great and it’s funny because it’s actually the complete opposite.

Mind explaining how? because I explained how the rwde tag will damage the show in this very post alone so at this rate, I’m more trustworthy than you. Or is this a potshot meant to whore out notes?

They say that they don’t condone harassment, but they have someone who caused people to delete both posts and blogs. I have yet to see them call him out on it (it must be such a privilege to be the neutral party).

This is like being in a vegan club, but one of the members eats a quarter pounder with cheese every other day. Only nobody calls them out on it.

And this is coming from a person who repeatedly tried attacking the blog to alienate and silence me through threats and false promises AKA Terrorism. So you talking about harassment is hypocritical and made even worse as those people were caught lying and calling other people (myself included) abusers and pedophiles which makes you look even worse/

And everyone in the rwde tag says they hate terrorism but egg dudeblade on as he terroiszes us. In your way: This is akin to a group of mexicians saying they don’t condone racism and demand everyone stop doing it, one guy shouts the N-Word at every black guy who walks by and everyone in said group cheers cheers. (Note: this is not calling everyone in the rwde tag racists: This is showing the hypocrisy and double standards in the rwde tag.)

And now Sokumontaka himself

This is a good post, an accurate post and a wholesome post

Says the guy who knows the people were lying about me forcing them, I have actively debunked his statements about crtq in the past and told me to kill myself in a painful manner. Yeah, his endorsement is more reason to call them out than not/

This is just a massive circle jerk the likes of which they would accuse us of having, despite the fact that I actively shut down circle jerks in my own group. Nice try and good show that even with the odds against me, I can still beat all you fuckers up.