#deathtip

[cerberusdailynews]

[MISSING] HESHTOK VORCHA FOUND ON BELAN

by Pazort, WORDS OF MEANING [NOT OUR PLANET!!!] WARCHIEF PAZORT FOUND ON HANAR PLANET! NOT HESHTOK PLANET! HANARS PLANET! SNEAKED ON SHIP FOR GUNS BUYING! “NOT KNOW IT BLOOD PACK SHIP! WOULD KILLED ALL IF KNOWN! TAKEN SHIP FOR WAR, MORE GUNS!” PAZORT SAY FROM HANARS PLANET. SHIP NOW PAZORT’S AFTER MUCH KILLING. GLORY FOR PAZORT! PAZORT NOT-DEAD-BEING IS GREAT GOODFEELS FOR PAZORT WARCLAN. PAZORT WARCLAN THINKING PAZORT KILLED BY DEATHTIPS GANG IN BIG FIGHT! WAS TO BE FIGHTING THEM IN BIG WARCLAN BATTLE SOON. NOW PAZORT WAR-CLAN FOCUS ON WATER-HOLE, CLAW FILING, MAKING NEW FIGHT-EXCUSES FOR WAR! WHAT PAZORT PLAN WITH NEW DEATHSHIP? “NEW WAR-CHIEF OUTFIT!” HE SAY, POSING WITH MANY STUPID-SCARED JELLIES BEFORE LEAVING. “MANY CORPSES SCAVENGING. MANY OUTFITS TO TAKE! SO MUCH NEW ARMOR, PAZORT WARCLAN DESTINED TO CONQUER HESHTOK AND GALAXY!”

[kaanes]

Writing Tip: Character's DEATH

If you want your reader to be REALLY upset about the main character's death or an important character's death, do it unexpectedly and in the middle of their character arc. Prolong the update after the "death chapter". Do not leave an author's note after the said death. Make them grieve for a long period of time. Make the readers fall in love with their actions and thoughts. After that, kill them. (If convenient [mwahahaha] and necessary) For the funeral, make it really shitty if the other characters could never really care less about the said person's death but craft the funeral flawlessly if the person who died was loved, adored, and cherished by surrounding characters. MAKE IT SHORT FOR BOTH VERSIONS, THOUGH so that the readers will crave for more details. Kill them while they're doing/about to do the main thing that they are passionate about. (What they are passionate about since the first chapter of the story) In short, do it in the middle of their character development or arc, while they're showing their weakness, and while the story can still be felt as light-hearted.