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Okay so I'm reading through CSC23 to post Weds or Thurs, and I just need to get an innuendo out of my system RIGHT NOW IMMEDIATELY so here you all go, sorry not sorry 😘
"Wait, she grabbed some apples?"
"A couple, yes dear. Why?"
Blaise frowned, his forehead wrinkling. "Is that why this bowl is nowhere near filled? I saw that, Jack."
Jack shoved the slice of apple in his mouth, feigning innocence and looking away.
"Oh, Blaise. The bag Autumn gave us is rather large. I'm sure it'll be fine. Besides, I can always drop her a leaf and get us some more, if need be."
"We may have to. Between Jacqueline taking some and Jack stealing the slices," Blaise said, glaring right at Jack as his hand hovered over the bowl, "I'm not going to have enough for the filling!"
"One or two apples less won't make a difference."
"You don't know that! Are you an expert in Autumn's pies?"
"Only in eating them," Winter confirmed, chipper. "Besides! Everyone knows it's how you season the filling, not how many apples you have."
"So what you're saying is it's not size that matters but how you use it."
Jack choked on the apple slice he had just pilfered. Blaise smirked, happy to have satisfied his "embarrass the son" quota for the day. Winter looked between the pair of them, idly peeling the apple in her hand in a manner that was both helpful and conniving. She smirked.
"Not that either of those things are a worry for you, Blaise darling."
Both men wheezed. Blaise in laughter; Jack in embarrassment. Winter grinned, continuing on with her pie-related duties, delighted to have struck the killing blow in today's battle of wits.
#i am a little sorry about sharing this information#i mean. we already knew blaise was dilf. well. is he EVER dilf#dani writes#dani is being VERY silly and making it everyone else's problem#ANYWAY this will NOT be in chapter 23. but i couldn't NOT share it so VOILA#cs snips and wips#also andie. i have seen ur ask. u got a storm coming honey. once im home and in front of my pc making that size chart#it's over for you hoes (affectionate)#bc i figured probably i shouldn't do that at work. BUT I CAN! SHARE A QUICK SNIPPET AND WRITE DOWN IDLE FUSION AU THOUGHTS WHILE WORKING#my barcode printer is fixed. i am SO BACK BABES
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Writeblr Reintroduction!
So hey, it’s been a minute. (Read: several months)
A bit of a reintroduction is in order as I get back into this space that I miss very dearly.
Me: So I’m Larkspur, you might have known me as Jenna, or Dove, or tiredbard, or the Magician, any of those things really. But I changed my name a couple years ago, it’s Larkspur, hi! I like that one much better. I might change my url again at some point but that is still up in the air, I really like bardicbeetle. My pronouns are they/them/theirs (and I’m kicking around zie/hirs somewhere in my brain but we don’t have time for me to unpack that rn I’ve got too much else to deal with).
I’m in my mid-twenties, I write primarily character driven fiction, a lot of it focuses on the ideas of finding a home you truly belong in. My primary project (Safe in the Dark) has been in the works for well over a decade, and still involves vampires though kind of in a tangential plot device way and the focus is more on overcoming trauma and learning to love life again and how not everything monstrous is really the monster. My newer WIP, which still doesn’t really have a name but we’ll call it “That Witch Lives and Breathes” for now, is about an exiled hero becoming the village witch on a new planet and how you move on when the people you saved vilify you for it.
I post snippets of my work when I have them, reblog shitposts about writing, and sometimes very rarely make moodboards.
I also write fanfiction, specifically for Doctor Who, the Lost Boys, Kingdom Hearts, and most recently—2008 hit children’s mmorpg Wizard101. All of that can be found on my AO3 account under the username “oldestenemy” which is also the name of my fandom blog on here. I’ll probably reblog my wizard101 fic posts here, but keep posting them on my fandom blog, that just feels like it makes the most sense.
WIP introductions coming soon, and I’ll link them in this post when they’re up!
Safe in the Dark (contemporary fantasy/vampires) - Tag - Intro Post - bad CS presentation
That Witch Lives and Breathes (Sci-fi/Fantasy/a lil’ bit of horror) - Tag - Intro Post - bad CS presentation
Anyway, thanks for sticking around if I’ve known you a while, thanks for stopping by if you’re new. If you wanna catch up, introduce me to your new projects and characters feel free to send me an ask, or a dm, or tag me in a post. I have a lot of new snips to share once I get things on here in order. I love this community and I’m excited to be back in it.
— Larkspur
#writeblr#writeblr intro#vampire writeblr#writers on tumblr#writeblr community#lsdente#the magician cries#meet the magician#larkspur will write later
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tales from the cutting room floor - a CS Collection
Hello friends!
WIP Snippet #9 may not actually belong here... as it's all Captain, no Swan... but whatever.
I have a deep need to write an origin tale for Hook which looks at his time in Neverland. this is a short snip from that Tale; a look at Hook and Tink's friendship before everything fell apart.
Neverland - A Captain Hook Tale
bye for now! xox
Tagging:
@elizabeethan @donteattheappleshook @sailtoafarawayland @teamhook @wefoundloveunderthelight @caught-in-the-filter @batana54 @ultraluckycatnd @veryverynotgood @snowbellewells @hollyethecurious @jrob64 @kmomof4 @artistic-writer @gingerpolyglot @xarandomdreamx @justanother-unluckysoul @zaharadessert @xsjax @karlyfr13s @tiganasummertree @wyntereyez @klynn-stormz @onceratheart18 @rkrbirdgirl @ouatdaily @blowmiakisscolin @courtorderedcake @winterbaby89 @pirateprincessofpizza @superchocovian @deckerstarblanche @jlsadphoenix @alexa-fangirl-forever @stahlop @undercaffinatednightmare @lostintheskyfaraway @anmylica @motherkatereloyshipper @last-tsarina @lfh1226-linda @hookedmom @yikes-00 @midnightsuki @paradiselady19 @jonesfandomfanatic
#tales from the cutting room floor#the darkdragonfly#i have so many wips#a neverland tale#captain hook
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!!!!!
#THREE DOWN FOUR TO GO! AYO!!#dani speaks#cs snips and wips#26 is only about 7k. what a time to be alive!
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y'all I'm fucking cackling I think Blaise is giving Santa a bit of a gay panic
#dani speaks#cs snips and wips#I'm trying VERY HARD NOT TO LAUGH AT MY DESK ADSJGKDJ#squidward OH NOT HE'S HOT dot jpeg? i think it was squidward who said that about sqwilliam lmao
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I am having. SOO MUCH FUN with these goobers. (CS Spoilers abound!)
Pyros is being thrown around like a MUPPET when not being out quipped by his twin and outsmarted by his niece and nephew. his revenge plan isn't going very well right now, I gotta say 😏😏😏
this chapter has been SO FUCKING HARD, as an aside. I've been working on it for like, 2? maybe 3? months at this point. Every read through I'm like "this is AWFUL" because describing motions during elemental based fights is HARD and I only know like, 7 words! (I'd like to thank not only god but also jesus for microsoft word's thesaurus feature)
Like, how do people do it? Write fight scenes that flow so well and have such lovely, DIFFERENT words that evoke such FUN and FAST PACED scenes while still sounding the way a fancy garden looks???? It's INSANE. IT'S SO HARD. I WANT TO EXPLODE THINGS
#my god the fiera just jumped out there#anyway i'm on the last third of this chapter and it is KILLING ME.#i've had to rewrite jack's cool scene twice now#and read it out loud a bunch to see if it sounds as good as i thought it did#richard's been enjoying it IMMENSELY#and it is reassuring to see it's reading well!#and snips i've sent people have come back with IT'S GOOD IT'S NOT REPETITIVE DW#but y'all im dying#i think i've stared at it too long but i dont want to jump ahead just yet bc everything i've been writing for this chapter#has ended up V DIFFERENT FROM MY NOTES. ISH.#I AM. LOSING IT#dani speaks#venting in the tags#anyway#plz enjoy this twin princes snip#twin princes#they're OLD and OVER IT rn#cs snips and wips
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(looking up from my work) hmm? what? oh yeah! yeah, no, chapter 27 is going so great!
SO great. yeah! I am keeping track of all the various fights so well!
SO well. um. yeah! most definitely! i know EXACTLY where the cold front is!
EXACTLY WHERE THEY ARE
#where are these mofos#dani speaks#cs snips and wips#this chapter is actually going VERY WELL#i am simply laughing at my inability to keep track of what buildings are where#where tf is that map post when i need it#Id in ALT#im excited for u guys to read this one lol#it's only like. 1/3rd done. it's gonna be a LONG ONE#IT'S THE FINAL CLIMAX BAYBEEE! THE ULTIMATE SHOWDOWN! AH!
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27 and 3!
HEYO THOSE ARE DIFFERENT NUMBERS! HERE YOU GO~
Warning! This one has HELLA SPOILERS. If you don't want to know who The Man is until it goes up (or you somehow have not picked up the hints he has been dropping) I'd skip this one 🤫🤫
Chapter 27: Scene 3
The explosion of snow across the way very briefly distracted the twin princes.
It was large enough that the fallout came pretty close to the pair of them. The flakes sizzled out as they barrelled towards the fiery pair, the air too hot for snow to stay snow.
Magic ran hot. So did both summer sprites. One of which was simmering as the pair fought. Smoke wafted off of Blaise’s shoulders as he and his brother darted around one another, flinging magic back and forth like they had in their youth.
Laughter and teasing as they threw spells towards one another, growing sillier and sillier as they progressed. The goopy explosions that’d hit the poor groundskeepers. The lecture that entailed.
But the laughter was gone. The teasing non existent. The spells serious, and potentially deadly, both warlocks meaning business. One out to protect. One out to seize. One growing distracted. The other taking advantage of that distraction very, very fast.
He was weak. He cared about others.
Pyros didn’t.
Using his finger to direct his next spell, Pyros lunged, the spell heading right for Blaise’s gut.
It hit.
Blaise deflated, a strangled noise making its way out of his mouth as his hands flew down to his midsection. He hugged his stomach, staff still clenched stubbornly within his grasp.
“Ou, that looked like it hurt,” Pyros taunted.
“Barely,” Blaise shot back, hoarse. Grimacing, he stabbed his staff into the ground, using it to push himself up. “I could do this all day.”
“I’ll hold you to it.” Grabbing his staff in both hands, Pyros flipped it, the tip of the crescent moon touching the snow below him. He whirled, drawing a large circle around himself in the snow.
Facing Blaise once more, he righted his staff. The tip glowed as he stabbed the pommelled base into the snow, the circle around him glowing the bloody red of his own personal magic.
Uttering a few words, magic went flying out from around him. It spread throughout the square, the magic covering the doors in a red glow. Open doors slammed, clicks and snaps ringing out all around the town.
Elves that had been running to the doors stopped as the magic hit, watching the enchantment settle. They tried to open the doors. They couldn’t. They were stuck. Locked.
And those that hadn’t made it in were trapped outside.
“Son of a bitch,” Blaise cursed, pulling himself up.
“No escape now, oh brother dearest,” Pyros said, using his staff to knock Blaise’s out of the ground. “Can’t have you undoing that enchantment now, can we?”
Lifting his staff high above his head he chuckled, the gem already glowing with a fresh set of spells.
#dani answers#someheroescarryfloss#cs spoilers#cs snips and wips#csc27s3#blaise did not get the one allotted fuck of crystal springs#but he did get to say bitch!!!!#sometimes the source of all magic agrees with the swear. and wherever it is. it deffs thinks serafina was a bitch#it's not wrong#twin princes#blangst#>:)#and yes this is the full scene!!!!! :)#the later chapters have a lot of short scenes as the action mvoes about the cabin#it's cruising heights baybe!!#cs posting
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Please enjoy my new favourite Winter reaction to anything
[Image ID: A screengrab of a draft chapter from ao3. It reads as follows:
And with that, the green cloud went out, leaving Winter with Autumn. She breathed a sigh of relief.
"You should've seen her about an hour ago," Autumn said. "Believe it or not, Summer and I actually calmed her down a considerable amount. She was blooming all over the place! Summer nearly had to tackle her down."
When the very common imagery of Summer tackling the tinniest season didn't even garner a snicker from the coldest season, Autumn hummed. "You okay?"
"As fine as can be, given the circumstances," Winter admitted, perching on the armrest of the nearest sofa. The call cloud drifted towards her, hovering beside her now. "I imagine, had you and Summer not intervened, that could've been way worse. Thank you for that."
"Of course! We all know how she can get. You sure you're okay for the time being? If you'd like to chat, I'm happy to listen," Autumn said with a warm smile.
"Oh, I appreciate the offer, Autumn. I really do. But no. Not right now. I'm just going to process what's happened and then perhaps crawl into bed and bury myself in blankets for a bit."
"Smoking hot husband included?"
"Goddess willing," Winter said, sounding exhausted. End Image ID].
#cs snips and wips#cs updates#chapter 13 will hopefully be up on ao3 like. this afternoon :)#some spots got a little buff! and this is one of them lmao#image id is in alt text and also under the cut if needed :)#dani speaks#if june was blangst month then august is blaise is a hottie month!! smoking hot hubby month! given the fiery dilf some LOVE#richard will be so excited#have i mentioned he literally stans blaise. bc he does.#crystal springs
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So something about revisiting Chapter 7 has like, lit a fIRE in my me and y'all. y'all. oh my god. Chapter 24?? holy shit. Holy shit. There's some good shit here. holy shit
#i am STOKED#idk how i'm gonna be able to wait until; NOVEMBER/DECEMBER to share these chapters with you guys im#MY GOD! IT;S GOOD! IT'S REALLY GOOD!#cs wips#cs snips and wips#dani writes#i be putting jacqueline into situations#>:)#i have to fix that last sentence as it's a bit run on-y but YEAH#u bet ur ask jack is on the outside of this like WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING OH SHIT#mans is about to be launched into the dome at mach 10 >:)
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Sorry for the late hour but here are some questions! For the ask thing!
I could've literally asked for all the questions to be answered but here's just a few. Please and thank u
54 / 40 (for no reason at all 🤫)/ 39 / 16
I am a cretura of the night, Andie! No worries about the late hour EVER lol ;)
40. If someone were to make fanart of your work, what fic or scene would you hope to see?
Oh I like this one! Let me think! Hmm! You know what's fun? Bullet points! And readmores which I will do. uh. now
Cold front hugs! Specifically the mindscape one in Chapter 6, and the pair of them leaning on one another on the way out of the pond @ the Springs in Chapter 23 of CS! Which yes, isn't a hug, but is a cute Cold Front moment
Winter grabbing Blaise's lapels in Chapter 11 while he has a whole ass crisis >:)
The fucking. (breaks window) Blinter: were those our kids? Jack: SCATTER scene lmaooooooo (from Chapter 22 of CS)
The twins doing one of these (see photo below) on the backyard deck stairs before asking Summer to play fire tag with them
^like that, but like. on all fours. with Fino squashing Fiera lmao
Honestly there's so many scenes I'd love to get fanart of/draw/EXPERIENCE but those are the ones that pop into the head IMMEDIATELY! And that's just CS, AH!. The family photo from Jacqueline Dies pt2 would ALSO be a lovely fanart to see! I actually did a shit doodle of it last week just for funsies:
My god it's so LONG. Sorry about that! anyway!
54. What’s your favourite part about the fanfiction writing process? Shoving an OC or two or five into the story and see how it goes >:). that and uploading a draft and reading it through one last time. That's exciting! I love that part! It's time consuming but I LOVE IT. It's like. THE ANTICIPATION
39. Share a snippet from a WIP
I should like. Assign these wips to numbers and start rolling dice about it. Um. OKAY! From smile shot wip "Believing is Seeing"
“Is it Grapes of Wrath?” “Yes! It actually was! Nice guess, Dite.” Dite and Xander lay on his dream cloud, just behind the chimney of Danielle’s house. Jacqueline snoozed still, curled up on Dite’s thigh. The goddess had lain back; her arms were behind her head as she gazed up at the sky, watching the clouds drift by. On the other side of the cloud, Xander lay on his back as well, one leg dangling, the other one bent at the knee as he read a book. “Alright, I got one. Two exes meet up again after a few years; shenanigans ensue, they still both have it bad for each other. Best slow burn I have ever read.” “Persuasion?” “Awh, you got it on the first go!” Xander laughed. “It’s supposed to be a misleading summary, Dite.” “I just really love Persuasion. It’s one of my favourite books! When Wentworth writes that letter? I just. Ugh,” Dite finished with a happy sigh. “It’s good.” There was a grumble between the two Legates; Dite perked up, sitting up gently. “Hi sleepy head,” she said with a grin. Jacqueline sat up, scrunching up her nose. “That was not four hours.” “Almost twelve, actually,” Xander said. “Dream sand may have had a hand in it.” Jacqueline scratched her neck and stretched her shoulders, shaking her freshly thawed hair off her face. “I didn’t melt all over you, did I?” “You did, but I don’t mind! It was just a little damp, no biggie.” “What’s the status?” “Quiet day,” Xander said, flipping his page. “They’ve stayed in for the most part. Left for errands a while ago, not back yet. Danielle’s still feeling hopeful, though.” “And she’s been meaning to text Charlie all day!” Dite said, chipper. “Can we get closer?” Jacqueline asked. “Why’d we move from the window?” “She ran to it right when she woke up and we were almost caught,” Xander said, flipping another page. “You snore.” “The fuck I do.” “You do,” Dite said. “But it’s cute snores! Like um, like every third breath is a snore.” “A honk sho or a mimimi?” “A weird cross between both.” Jacqueline looked thoughtful, then shrugged. “I can vibe with that. Side note, love that we can swear right now. Feels good, feels wholesome,” she said, hopping off of the cloud and onto the roof. “What are you doing?” Xander asked, putting down his book. “Getting closer! This one’s her room?” Xander nodded. “Quiet, though!” “I thought nobody was home?” “Her sister is.” “Alright, I can be quiet,” Jacqueline said, and, with a little hop, disappeared into thin air. “What is she doing?” Xander asked, trying to find her magical aura. Dite peered over the cloud with Xander. She surveyed the roof, then swatted Xander gently. ��Right there, look; fast moving trail of frost headed down the drain pipe. She’s being sneaky,” Dite said with a grin. Xander chuckled. “Nice.” In the distance, car doors slammed and chatter met their ears. Danielle and her Mom had gotten back from their errands and were chatting up a storm. “Things are picking up again!” Dite said with an excited squeal. “We’re almost there, Xander!”
The summary of this one: Charlie tells Danielle about what his Dad REALLY does. Trouble in paradise has Dite on ALERT; determined, she hatches a lil plot and drags Jacqueline and Xander along for the ride. It's been fun to write! This trio of Legates is my fave lmao. They get into situations, and it's tripled when Charlie hangs with them!
16. How many fic ideas are you nurturing right now? Share one of them?
Honestly? Too many! If I had to count, excluding wips, it'd be uh....eight, I think 🤔🤔🤔
My favourite one right now is Diteline Valentine's Day featuring Diteline kiddos! Dite's working and Jacqueline gets the day off. There is a cuddle puddle after Dite leaves for work. The kids ask Jacquie about what Diteline used to do on VDays before kids. Jacquie tells them all about their romance and such and says that every day is VDay with the four of them for her! They decide they wanna do something nice for their moms despite Jacquie's reassurance. Shenanigans ensue!!! Robyn wears a blanket cloak! Eira/Bianca didn't sleep! Joy has been awake for hours bc Valentine's Day! It's a recipe for disaster!
thanks for sending these in 🥰🥰🥰
#dani answers#alpharra#long post#crystal springs#cs snips and wips#dani doodles#really really drafty doodles lmao#my god i have so many art ideas and talent the size of my pinkie lmao#BUT WE WILL GET THERE! HELL YEAH!#Thanks again andie!#ask box shenanigans
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😈, 🛒, ✨, ❌, and 👀!
😈 Has there been a point in a story where you did something just to be playfully mean to your readers?
Every time Jacqueline mentions @shittyelfchild in Frostmas, it is done on purpose just to hurt @shittyelfwriter because I love her >:)
I also made Blaise 6'1 just to be mean to Richard lmao. That was recent and a delightful overdramatic petty moment!
🛒 What are some common things you incorporate in your fics? Themes, feels, scenes, imagery, etc.
evil uncles. this one confuses me a lot. my uncles aren't evil, they're just. you know. thy suck. but they aren't evil and haven't like done anything bad to me? one doesn't like me and the other one is too right leaning for my liking most days (and also very inappropriate with jokes tbh)
i do a lot of fluff and hugs and such. i like hugs and fluff. they heal me as much as taking a bat to glass did sunday! lots of setting matching the atmosphere, like pathetic fallacy but instead of weather it's the location, location, location!
i very much enjoy imagery that's like. idk how to explain it. but it's like this:
SHIT LIKE THAT!!!! kills me dead EVERY TIME. I LOVE IMAGERY.
✨ Give you and your writing a compliment. Go on now. You know you deserve it. 😉
My dialogue fucking SLAPS. I am so fucking witty with these fucks it's ASTOUNDING.
❌ What's a trope you will never write?
ANYTHING miscommunication related. ESPECIALLY if it's v stupid like y sees x talking to z and hears something out of context and instead of asking them about it, ghosts them and dips. HATE that, REFUSE to write it!!! AH! IF IT'S GONNA BE MISCOMMUNICATION, IT'S GOING TO INVOLVE HUGE ELEMENTAL/MAGICAL BLOWOUTS. AH.
👀 Tell me about an up and coming wip please!
hehehehe okay okay okay. Okay. Okay. This one wip. That I have yet to start. BUT AM GOING TO START. Is STEAMY. Involves the following:
dite and jacquie spending the night together for the first time in the traditional sense (they fuck)
dite is the goddess of pleasure. so. it's mind blowing.
so much so. jacqueline straight up sprite sleeps about it
dite thinks she fucked her gf to death. she goes on an adventure and learns about sprite sleeps from, regrettably, jack
when jacquie wakes up she's MORTIFIED but dite is v good at like, spoiling her and they spa about it and she's like okay this was pretty amazing, i just had sex so good it knocked me the fuck out
THEN SHE LEARNS IT'S A) BEEN 3 DAYS AND B) DITE ASKED JACK ABOUT SPRITE SLEEPS AND TOLD HIM W H Y
JACQUELINE IS LIKE THIS IS MORTIFYING HE IS GOING TO ROAST ME I NEED TO HIDE AND PROMPTLY GOES TO SEE MELUSINE OF @kscribbs's fic Miller's Law fame (which, if anyone reading hasn't read it, please do! K is a brilliant writer and I LOVE LOVE LOVE ML sO MUCH. IT'S GOT ME AS BAD AS DITE GOT JACQUIE)
Idk why she does this, Jacquie just told me she goes to see mel about it and Mel was like "absolutely she does" and I went "cool, gr8, let's see how this goes"
Well, Mel makes her a cupperty and they chat and like she feels less mortified after Mel roasts Jack probably and then Mel's like "woman. you got shagged so good you literally went into a coma. let's celebrate that"
AND THEY DO
AND THEY GET VERY VERY WASTED ABOUT IT
AND THE NEXT DAY JACQUIE WAKES UP LIKE HA! THAT FUCKING HAPPENED! OH SHIT I MISSED ELLE'S BDAY
and when she texts Elle and explains why Elle is liek FUCK YEAH BUDDY, HIGH FIVE, GIMMIE THE DEETS AND LET'S CELEBRATE ABOUT IT
I have yet to start it but I KNOW the beats and some of the best lines of dialogue (my favourite being "I love your dress! It looks good on you! But it'll look even better on my bedroom floor >:)" followed by a squeaky 245 and Jacqueline going "sorry, it's going to WHAT?!?!"
My god. She's so funny. She gets so flustered around Dite. What a nerd >:)
ANYWAY THANKS FOR THE ASK! SORRY FOR THE RAMBLES, BUT ALSO NOT SORRY LMAO. I am dying to write the above thing but have yet to find the time/open the doc/work out the kinks of the mel and jacquie bits, but my god do I want to have this thing existing. it's so, so fucking funny ajhdfuiehorjeo
#dani answers#someheroescarryfloss#ask box shenanigans#long post#sorta#cs snips and wips#writing#ty for sending!!! :)
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13,284 words.
There is still a THIRD to go.
So after some SHITTY MATH. There's going to be anywhere from 18k to 19k this chapter.
FUCK
(I know it's basically almost the same but I can't decide which I prefer. For context: they are, in fact, sticking it to The Man this chapter)
#dani speaks#crystal springs#cs snips and wips#dani wips#i am DYING AT THE LENGTH#BUT FINALLY WORKED OUT HOW TO GET PAST THE PART I HAVE BEEN STUCK ON#SO HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME! I AM FREE FROM SCENE TRANSITION HELL! 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳#polls#i have once again forgotten to add a results option for my me. oof
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"How's editing Chapter 25 going, Daniella?" You say.
Well--
#FIRMLY GRASP IT#it's going great. i am doing so great and wonderful and normal right now. i am not ready to explode bc i had to rephrase action scenes lots#so NORMAL and OKAY and deffs DIDN'T think of a one-hit ko title for this chapter no sirree#cs snips and wips#cs posting#dani speaks#and yes i saw the im instead of embedded#it's been fixed#as has several OTHER typos#whew i am exploding. this one better make everyone who reads explode#then we can all explode together#cute!!
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Do you ever intend to write more about the eleven months of Jack community service (before the start of Crystal Springs)? While reading the new version of the chapters on Ao3, this line grabbed my attention: "Letter time with Santa was drool, but he found that those were the best times to mend bridges with Santa, and eventually, Carol." I'm intrigued about how their relationship evolved from hostility to friendship
Oh my god, I absolutely LOVE this question! I've never really thought about it tbh, but it would make a good smile shot or two, wouldn't it?
I've been rotating this question around my brain all evening, and figure this is as good a place as any to share some surface thoughts on how their relationship evolved in those 11 months leading up to Crystal Springs:
Scott did NOT warm up fast at ALL. He only agreed to give Jack another chance BECAUSE Mother Nature and Bernard were like no, this isn't a trick, it's legit, dude
January was HARD
Jack reported for duty right away, offered to help all over the place
First day in Jack gets them both cocoas. Santa does NOT drink his because who KNOWS what Jack did to it
(Nothing)
Anyway, January, bad, Jack is like doing as MUCH as he can to help where he can and Scott is just watching like a HAWK, man is NOT taking any chances with Jack this time around, no sir
But Jack doesn't do anything bad? He's a little silly, kind of an ass still, but the Workshop, surprisingly, doesn't implode
He is actually helping in some places. Scott's wildin. He's like there's no fucking way. He's being this earnest? Fr? He's not plotting or scheming or causing shenanigans?
Bernard's like look dude, I don't wanna say I told you so but...¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Carol I think warms up to Jack first! She eventually convinces Scott to lay off a bit, he's had AMPLE time to DO something but hasn't, has just been helping out like they sentenced him to do
And, y'know, it seems like he's really actually trying to make up for what happened!
She's seen plenty of students in her time who pull themselves up by their bootstraps like this, and I'm sure she makes a Charlie comparison to soften Scott up a bit
Scott relents a LITTLE bit. Only a bit.
I think in February he notices how Jack's literally going all over the place, and finally one day he's like HOW are you doling this all. WHERE is the energy coming from. WHAT the actual fuck
And Jack shrugs like it's the right thing to do! And I have energy for days, it's fine
And Scott's like okay. Okay maybe stop spreading yourself so thin? Let's narrow things down. Stuff you hate? You don't have to do it
Queue Jack being like thank GOD because let me tell you toy making? JUST NO. Splinters? Slivers? And these undersized tools? STRONG PASS
A bad joke is made and Santa actually laughs
Jack's like oh! That was a laugh! I got you to laugh!
And Scott's like it was low hanging fruit, it was bad and that's why I laughed, this means NOTHING
And Jack's like, sure, sure, I'll soften you up Claus, just you wait! Cocoacinno?
He does, actually, drink this bevvy. He is pleasantly surprised when Jack doesn't actually do anything to it, and even more surprised that he finds it quite tasty--the man can make a drink.
February turns into March, and by then Jack's kinda found his stride and Scott's let him do some things with him, a bit for him to keep a close watch on him, and a bit bc he finds himself appreciating the company
It's kind of nice to have an. ACQUAINTANCE. That isn't an elf.
That's how letter time starts; Santa sits and reads and responds to letters, and Jack joins him and just kinda. Yap yap yap yap YAPS. Dude can CHAT. And it's not completely annoying! He's got crazy good stories, knows a lot of dirt about the OTHER Legends, and is always very nice to Carol and Buddy
He also sometimes has some very good things to add to the letters when Santa's coming up empty
"See? He's helping," Carol says, for the umpteenth time, and Scott's like "Yeah, yeah, yeah."
He's been around for a hot minute, too, and Scott finds himself enthralled sometimes with Jack's stories of ancient cultures he was around for--especially Rome!
Again, surface thoughts! I imagine it was gradual, and took some time, and took a lot of other people warming up to him first before Scott was like okay. Okay cool. I can trust this guy now! There's some other things I think that helped, too. I think he was v good with Baby Buddy as he got more towards the toddler end of the spectrum! And I think he had some like, heart of gold kind of moments too!
It's very VAGUE tbh! I just know for sure it was gradual, and took time, and a whole lot of patience and I'm sure blowing off some steam via snowstorms every so often too, lol.
I think I answered the question! sorry for the word vomit, apparently I am incapable of being succinct and too the point 🙃🙃🙃🙃
Here's a funny little excerpt from the CS notes that I imagine happened some time during Letter Time, to illustrate how I think letter time helped (like 4 o'clock coffee with my aunts! They stop, have coffee with each other and just chat and shoot the shit and I always learn so many new things about them every time I'm at one!)
When I wrote this spur of the moment funny, it was a) because of this vine and B) post Crystal Springs, hence the Jacqueline mention (mother fucker just cannot STAY OUT OF A CONVO WHEN SHE IS NOT THERE. She plagues me), and C) deffs a DM to someone based on the slahses instead of actual italics lmao.
Word barf aside, this is how I imagine letter time went for the most part: Scott doing his thang, Jack chattering away! It's probably why buddy knows so many words at just under a year old :P
ANYWAY. SNIPPET:
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#ask box shenanigans#dani answers#purplewizard#thanks for the ask! i really really liked this one tbh#it was a damn good question!!!#i hope you don't mind the word barf#i do not know my limits and if i did. i deffs would not play within them (speak that is)#the santa clause#the santa clause 3#crystal springs#cs snips and wips#bc this could be a very good smile shot or two tbh#also hi purplewizard! i'm glad ur doin well! it;s been a hot minute since I've seen you in my notifs#so ur ask was a v nice welcome surprise!! :)#I wonder if anyone else has thoughts on how their relationship developed???#if so I'd LOVE to hear them!!!#CS IS A SANDBOX AND WE ARE ALL PLAYING IN IT#ANWYAY Carol joins them a bit later#that's how I imagined it when I was tidying up that chapter#tidy up. rewrite. WHAT'S THE DIFFERENCE#i'm out of control either way lol#but like. she tells scott to lay off but only starts to warm up to jack#when he starts chilling with them during letter time
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Not me opening up my notebook for CS and seeing this as the last note I wrote yesterday:
#dani speaks#dani wips#cs snips and wips#this was two days ago#i did take a nap when i got home#it was a hella nice nap!#anyway the jacqueline just like. JUMPED out
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