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charmac · 8 months ago

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DUDEEEE pls more dennis pov ive seem posts of u saying its gonna be macs pov for a while but omfg i loved the chapters where its dennis’ so bad

It's not that I don't enjoy it, but that I think the audience being in Dennis' head too much is... a little dangerous. Sometimes I write stuff from Dennis' POV and then re-write it from Mac's (the beginning of Chapter 9, for example, was originally Dennis' POV).

So, it's unfortunately more of a narrative decision on my side to keep out of there. There's is always potential to go back, it's just trickier for me (and more spoiler-y for you) to give Dennis' perspective on things. How do you build angst if the reader is aware of both sides! I have yet to figure that one out, but the night is still young.

#sugar daddy au #ask #*looks through my 'outline'*#so i can give you dennis pov maybe chapter 16 earliest #bc i do have a dennis pov scene written for that #but i was planning on rewriting it from Mac's pov lol #cos i also have a mac pov scene for that chapter #though those scenes could be broken up between chapters..#the struggle...#btw my chapter outlines are like 1-3 words and then that becomes 20k words #nightmarish #also any chapter they fuck for real i gotta write from the top so tha too limits things #dont worry in chapter 33 we'll get back to dennis #thats a joke its more like chapter 20 #hey thats not too far away #ok back to writing #i am struggling to get a scene right in this chapter rn if you cant tell im procrastinating

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