#but also keeps Siffrin from getting the distance he needs to run full-speed and attack that way
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An obstacle of having major backstory plot points happen in a country no one can remember: Having NO blinding clue how to integrate that info into the main storyline.
#cousins came in clutch with wine and now I'm having Story Plotting Feelings#i've had the major catalyst for the Forgotten Island going into uber-quarantine planned since chapter 1#in the original outline draft Rose was going to be lucid and talk to Siffrin and he would get Answers from her#her name was also Silver originally i changed it to Rose in the 3rd outline draft#and she was still undead and Siffrin was Going to Learn Things they vowed their party could NEVER figure out#but then i changed that and then Siffrin and Odile were supposed to Learn These Things during the barn fire chapter#(the Vampire Hunter commenter was close to what's going on)#but then they didn't bcoz any dialogue i tried to shove in fucked up the narrative flow#so literally the only clue besides the carving in the wooden beam#is a very blink and miss it observation Siffrin makes#where the bounty hunter keeps fighting close even though that puts her at a disadvantage with her sword#but also keeps Siffrin from getting the distance he needs to run full-speed and attack that way#no clue when I'll be bringing those loose threads in now whoops
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