#but I'm not stresing on that one yet

[ahumoki0]

Running on fumes of less then 4 hours of sleep, I managed to get most of the work done.

There's still two parts left, and using Revit always takes longer then I think, but I hope I can get this ready by Wednesday without another all nighter

[b-h-art]

i just wanna thank you all here on tumblr who'(of not bd origin)s been sharing all the news and posts of Bangladesh. Seeing people care, seeing people actually fckn wanting to stand up for us even tho you didnt have to.Also after all, many people of our own didnt stand up for the martyred people either and most probably tomorrow's gonna be a day of huge bloodshed too. The student league of the current government (bcl) have been taking preparation to meet the students tomorrow in the capital and they've even posted about killing off every protesters who're demanding the govt to give up power and also spreading rumors that they're gonna kill us all off in 7 minutes-which yes is ridiculous im just adding this to say how much confident the government party still is that they're gonna just wipe off the protest and they're not gonna stop at any cost. But, fortunately, the students are not going to too. I dont know how many activity status dots in messenger will go off for forever tomorrow. I dont know how many replies our group chat will have after tomorrow. But still for the blood already shed, the brothers and sisters already martyred, the students will still InShaAllah come out in the streets again following the leaders. Many of us can do nothing but just share posts and encourage the ones who can go there. And here on tumblr i see so many people supportinh OUR cause beside palestine ,sudan, congo and others. and I'm so grateful for that. Even after many of our own are murdering their own brothers and sisters for a cup of tea yet there still is humanity living in every corner of earth. I'm so grateful to you guys for reminding me that.

ps. the awami students league, even tho they werent active today in the capital massacared cumilla and sylhet district (please add more if you know) Even after the prime minister called for a peaceful meeting with the students to settle this once and for all. The students declined demanding her resignation for letting so many students be killed. The army cheif held meeting nationwide and declared they're not going to interfere and also the police surrendered to the students. (which yes is kinda sus if u think about it)

pss. please feel free to comment and notify me if i left out something or said something wrong, im only a human keeping up with so many things happening around me and stresed out very fckn much thank you

FREE VENEZUELA!

FREE PALESTINE!

FREE CONGO!

FREE CUBA!

FREE SUDAN!

FREE BANGLADESH!

This is the link to a video showing more than 1lakh people of all walks of life joined today in a gathering in the central shaheed minar (memorial for the language martyrs ). I just wanna say, ei deshetei jonmo jeno ei deshetei mori.

[pomrania]

Man, I still love the cover art, its vibes are IMMACULATE.

In case it becomes relevant, I'm looking at the PDF version. And I'm taking down notes as I go; later I'll want to do a second pass on it, once I've seen what's all here. Referenced page numbers are the numbers shown on the page.

Ooh, that's an interesting ampersand, I don't think I've ever seen anything like that before. The font so far (I'm just on the table of contents) looks nice, I shall have to pay attention to what it's called.

Typo in the last line of the table of contents, "PLayset".

Page 5, I was GOING to say I had a minor quibble with punctuation for the second sentence, then I noticed it's changed from how I'd seen it in the post, with dashes instead of commas; I approve.

Still page 5, typo: "will lead many places" should be "lead to many places".

…the ampersand with that font, although cool, DOES always make me think it's an @ symbol at first glance, which is mildly distracting. That might be something you consider a feature, or a detriment, I wouldn't presume to know your mind; just noting out my experience.

9: Ah, so there's the built-in option for a God-eater to not be one of the Folk?

11: typo in the first paragraph, "explicity" instead of "explicitly"

12: …I know the alliteration works in terms of word-initial sounds, but I kind of want it to be "Kreaturous Ken" or "Creaturous Cken". Same with "Extra Eorgans" / "Oxtra Organs". "Polycephalous" likewise stands out as only being one word. None of this should be taken as any kind of serious criticism.

13: "Cunning crafter", "you can work it without tools" is ambiguous as to whether the "it" is "your flesh" or "a particular natural material". And if it's the latter, then I think it should still be clarified as to whether one's flesh COUNTS as something made of that material and thus a valid target for this.

14: "Defensive dermis", some questions as to the meaning of "do nothing else". Like "taking a physical action" makes sense as something that would stop it, but what about talking.

"Dizzying display" mentions "a few minutes"; jotting this down here, about whether that refers to in-game time or around-table time, it might be resolved later but I don't know what I haven't yet gotten to.

15: "Firm flesh", there's no oxford comma in the last sentence, which isn't an inherent problem, but you've had the comma in other situations so I'm wondering if its omission was intentional or accidental here.

16: "Mobile members", if something is "with effort" and it's "over the course of a few minutes", does that mean that effort needs to be applied for that entire time?

23: I don't remember whether you use "themself" or "themselves" for the gender-neutral singular; there's an instance of the latter in the first paragraph.

Hm. So a Bulky one of the Folk, they'd be *quick math* average human adult height at maximum?

30: typo in the first sentence, "discplines" should be "disciplines".

31: "The art of ascension", if "normal gravity immediately reasserts itself", I assume it doesn't end the Art because that would have been mentioned, so you could let go of whatever put you over weight, and then continue to mess with your gravity?

32: "The art of autonomy", I don't remember offhand if "hinderance" is the right spelling of the word, I'll see what Firefox spellcheck says about it when I go to post this. ((It dislikes that spelling; so I assume it should be "hindrance" instead.))

36: "The art of utility", typo, "currently be Stresed Out" should be "Stressed".

37: It feels weird to have "Internet" capitalized like that, although that might be an intentional choice.

And that's where I'm going to pause and post what I already have.

Playtest draft 0.4 of Eat God is up! This version includes a reworking of player character Traits, clarifications (and, in most cases, moderate buffs) for most Arts, a whole new semi-freeform magic system for when none of the standard options are quite bullshit enough, and most importantly, The Clockwork City, a complete playset (this game's version of an "adventure", though they don't work quite as you might expect if you're familiar with pre-written adventures form other games) co-written by @cryptotheism – a name I trust many of this blog's followers will recognise.

Like my previous early access projects, this one has been moved over to itch.io for better exposure. Pay-what-you-want pricing is enabled for those who'd like to contribute to the game's ongoing development, but I encourage you to hit the little "just take me to the downloads" button first; there's no sense paying sight-unseen for something that's still a work in progress!

In terms of player feedback for this one, I'd love to hear any thoughts you might have on any of the newly added rules or playset material, with a particular emphasis on the new Expressions stuff; those currently lack worked examples, and it would be useful to see what people come up with in the absence of any direct guidance.

As always, questions, comments, and bizarre rants are welcome; you can put your two cents in either in the notes of this post, or via the Penguin King Games Discord server – there should be a channel for Eat God set up already.