#bit this just points out how the author may not know hoe to make cui buqu and feng xiao look interesting withou the other | Explore Tumblr posts and blogs

junemary · 8 days ago

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Idk if it's the translation but in later chapters, the characters do seem to be all over the place. Not that peerless' focus point was ever in the antagonists but the villains are way too dumbed down in front of the protagonists in later chapters, even looking like the author had run out of ideas on how to make the characters look competent. This is par for the course in a lot of danmei so it's not like it's unreadable or anything, but I did get used to the inicial quality of the text and now.. it's just sad to see such a good story suddenly hit a plateau like this :(

#peerlessramble #the love story part of the book is still the same though #bit this just points out how the author may not know hoe to make cui buqu and feng xiao look interesting withou the other #which is a shame!! because they're so interesting on their own. she is obviously hesitant to elt the characters spend time apart #bit it's by separating them that we can learn more about them #see what other characters might bring out of them #that is to say that I think feng xiao's lurking presence in the beggining of guangqing arc is to the detriment of the story.#if memg shi xi really wanted to she'd make cui buqu be interesting even without fx there #or maybe she wasnt able to because of popular demand idk #ultimately it's fine and I'm gonna read it anyway but #it could be better!!!#jesus I type like a troglodyte #wushuang

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