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milfbro · 2 years ago

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I think about christopher lee doing that reading of the phantom of the opera so much

how many a bad writing is just the result of the writer having their own inner voice when reading the writing back that just doesn't translate to the next person?

#ph4ntom of the oper4 isn't well written it's just this little horror novel designed to spook some bourgeois in the belle epoque #but the ending as read by lee was so tragic and sad and you really feel for that dickhead #when i read it #it just sounded like the book was stalling for time #all Daroga this #Daroga that but nothing was conveyed in that conversation it just sort of happened and then the book ended #I felt less than nothing #so you know. you gotta practice writing before you can understand rythm and voice and stuff #that's why fanfic written by 12 year olds is so clearly written by someone who doesn't know that other people can't see inside their head #gaston is not a good writer but his work can be great #i guess what I was missing in the ending of the book is the fucking. why was that scene happening #besides the fact that the book needed to account for how the phantom died asdfghjkl

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