#asks.katelyn006-blog

[yinyuedijun]

Hi! I am so sorry to bother you but just know that your "translation" Aventurine x reader truly moved me. I accidently came across this fanfic and the writing was so beautiful that I immediately cast everything aside and gobbled the entire thing up, it was just so captivating and mesmerizing! The monologue was beautiful, references from the beginning of the text being effortlessly placed in the end tied this masterpiece together in the most wonderful way. The dilemma was executed magnificently, it all felt so natural and not superficial - it was beautifully gradual and made so much sense. The flashbacks were perfect, both quality and quantity. The perspectives from both the reader and Aventurine/Kakavasha were wonderful. The reader was also so well written like their replies and inner monologue felt natural! I love that they were smart, usually in fanfics Y/N tends to be dumbed down which is a shame and it's not the case here at all. And most importantly Aventurine/Kakavasha were written perfectly, completely in character. A masterpiece regarding his demeanor. I appreciate you sticking to his canon, even though the circumstances he's put in in this fanfic are unfamiliar to canon you managed to portray him perfectly making the dilemma all the more meaningful! So yeah your writing is absolutely marvelous and I enjoyed every bit of this work of art ♡♡♡

Kindest regards!

WASKLEFJSKFKLD thank you so so much for leaving such a kind and in-depth comment!!! it truly sent me over the moon reading this like i'm in public and i have the goofiest face on right now LOL. i'm so happy to hear that you liked the execution (truly put my whole writerussy into it), especially that things felt like a natural and organic progression rather than a artificial problem. i really set out to put genuine human pain in the narrative and it sounds like i accomplished it from your feedback, so thank you for sharing your thoughts w me ;v;

also! i'm SO HAPPY you like the way i characterized aventurine!!!! i was honestly SO WORRIED abt how i wrote him LMAO he's such a complex character. so thank you so letting me know that, it means so much to me. also, i won't lie - i was kinda worried about the reader being unrelatable and/or a turnoff for people so i'm very glad to hear that you appreciated their character!

THANK YOU!!!! <3 i appreciate you so much!!!!