#and those people cld be his friends or lynch fam/other tdt mains

[unganseylike]

ok ive talked about my frustration w adam being fine after his cliffhanger at end of mi, but lest we forget that we were also baited w adam turmoil at end of cdth (not replying to any of ronans texts). i understand that tdt isnt supposed to be adam centric but pulling this TWICE is just mean :(

[clotpolesonly]

#literally. why was the narrative leading us to concern for adams wellbeing and then him being fine w no explanation #ok. ill give u that ronan getting paranoid over adam not replying when he was just in class cld be character relevant #and thats all ronan pov #but the end of MI is like. third person omniscent showing us all the consequences of turning off line! its kinda objective #overall theres so much foreshadowing that adam scrying alone is gonna get him in trouble! #and where were the consequences! #im not even the hugest adam girlie like im not the type to insist he get tons of screentime but like. #if ur gonna put him in the story and make us care about him theres gonna be narrative payoff #as i said earlier this week. theres a pretty clear way to put the pieces together #adam is scrying dangerously alone + inventing new self bc cant trust friends w his authentic self #=> experiences consequences but someone helps him #=> adam realizes he can expand his trust and rely on others instead of going back to self isolating instincts #and those people cld be his friends or lynch fam/other tdt mains #its a way of simply continuing his trc arc in new territory. ofc more exciting things cld be done w adam but its not his book

ok ive talked about my frustration w adam being fine after his cliffhanger at end of mi, but lest we forget that we were also baited w adam turmoil at end of cdth (not replying to any of ronans texts). i understand that tdt isnt supposed to be adam centric but pulling this TWICE is just mean :(