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10.8
Jock
10.8
We lost
Written by smoothie smith
        We see the players walking into the locker room
They are met by the coaching staff
Diana
“today is the day” the players look at each one
Jake putting on his jacket
Jake
“how do I look ��
Curtis
“like a star, now we don’t know what they will throw at us but be patenit and trust our players ”
Jake
“lets go “
They go into the room
Jake
“bring it in “
Zach
“team on three one two three team”
We see the warm ups
Jake comes out to the bench
Jake
“lets go boys “
He claps
We see the girls coaches in a conference room with a tv
Rebecca
“this is going to be a good game “
Al
“albert will light out on each out “
Criag
“coach I don’t see hayes winning this game”
We see the student section fired up
Students
“I believe that we will win!!!!”
PA
“welcome to the regional finals between John hayes Bulldogs and your Rufus King Generals “
They go through the starting line ups for hayes
PA
“now the starters for the  Generals of  Rufus King starting at guard a 6”4 Senior number 10 Zach Mootz , at the other gurad a 6”3 senior number 24 Albert Halpert , Starting at forward a 6”5 number senior  23 Luke Johnson , starting at the other forward a 6”7 Senior number 35 Tracy Anderson and starting at center 6”11  Junior number 55 Evan Peters “
Everyone clapping
PA
“and the head coach of the Generals is Jake Schalow,asst by Curtis Gosz, David Jeffers Diana Hardy and John Carter “
Jake crouches down
Jake
“lets go boys “
Evan jumps center
The game starts
Generals get the ball start
Jake
“Motion !”
Student Section (in background )
“KING ! KING !”
Jake
“keep running it “
Basket good
2-0
Jake
“20”
They hit a 3
3-2
We see the conference room
Rebecca
“well they got a fight “
King hits another 3 by Albert
5-3
Alan
“you were saying, my dear “
Rebecca
“ok”
Hazel
“come on let's go “
Zach gets a steal and a basket
Coach
“Timeout “
Radio
“it’s a 5 point lead with 12 mins in the first half “
Jake
“hey keep attacking keep attacking “
 Albert
“team on three “
They break up
They keep playing
Jake
“run New York “
Hayes gets a steal
And a basket
Jake
“that alright keep playing “
Albert
“come on “
Albert hits a three its 18-16
Jake
“get a Stop!”
Diana
“Jake we need to play Triangle “
Jake
“next pos “
Diana thumbs up
They get a stop
20-16
Jake
“Triangle “
Hayes hits a three
Jake
“you five get in “
Blocking foul
Albert
“come on “
They shoot two free throws
Jake
“they are all over the place “
Curtis
“keep playing “
They get a turnover
Subs come in
 Hayes hits a three
Diana
“wake Up Cade !”
Albert
“come on conor hit one “
Nelson hits a three
Jake
“TIMEOUT!”
Ref whistle
Jake
“30”
Curtis
“wake up”
Jake
“wake up guys its 22-18 they are attacking the outside turn up the press”
They keep playing
2:30 left in the first  half
22-18
Albert
“14 up “
Cade gets a pass passes it to conor  easy two
22-20
Students
“Come on play d”
Jake
“You four get in “
1:45 left
Ball out of bounds
Luke zach  tracy and evan come back in
30 seconds
24-20
Albert playing tight d
Jake
“come go for a steal “
Albert gets a steal
Runs up passes to Luke
Luke hits a three
24-23
Jake
“22!”
They get in it
Zach steal
Passes to albert
Albert hits a three at the buzzer
End of the first Rufus king 26-24
Jake
“that’s the way”
They go to the locker room
Fade out
    We see the girls coach
Donna
“give me some popcorn “
Alan  
“you said it “
Rebecca
“wow “
Craig
“What happen “
Rebecca
“you were watching “
Craig
“I know I am shock that’s what I am trying to get at “
We go back to the locker room as jake writes stuff on the borad
Jake
“what is working for us “
Tracy
“transition “
Albert
“our defense pick it up “
Zach
“we are getting everyone invlod “
Jake writes it on the borad
Jake
“ok now the negative I am  seeing a lot bad play at the start of the game we need to clamp down on that ok this second half is ours “
Albert
“hey we got keep playing lets go “
Team
“team on three one two three team!”
They start the second half
Hazel
“here we go “
  We see the refs
Ref
“Charge”
Jake
“oh gosh “
Curtis
“hey keep playing “
Jake
“albert 23”
Albert signals 23
Hertbeat in the background
Jake
“hands up “
They get a turnover before the whistle
Zach
“what!’
Ref
“technical foul
The boooing begins
Jake
“on who “
Ref
“stay back”
Ref
“technical foul 20 white”
Curtis
“for what “
Ref
“back off”
David
“at least give us why “
Ref
“that’s your final warning  “
Jake
“drop it “
they watch hayes hit two freethorws
jake
“timeout “
Ref
“Timeout white what do you want “
Jake
“full “
Ref
“full timeout white “
Radio
“it’s a full timeout with 5 mins left in the game the generals lead is cut to 32-31”
Jake
“hey drop it and play ball we are 5 mins away keep shooting keep running your offense cade get in for zach “
They break out of a timeout
Diana
“curtis tell him to run 23”
Curtis
“jake 23 on a make “
Jake
“I’ll think about It”
Albert
“hey get back in this game the way we been playing for four weeks “
They play on
Basket after basket
Dule of fates playing in the background
(we see slow moving from players and coaches )
 We see the 2:00 min warning the score hayes 39 King 39
Jake
“come on”
Curtis
“we got ten run it “
Jake
“let’s go “
Ref
“shot clock “
Turnover with 1:49 left in the game still tied
Curtis
“Jake !”
Jake
“yes”
Curtis (Signing)
“we got two timeouts 1 and 1”
Jake thumbs up
 Under a minute 41-41
We hear the student section screaming and waving flags
We turn to the girls staff
Alan
“I love March “
Rebecca
“you said it “
They watch hayes miss a freethrow
The girls coaches
Craig
“get the rebound !“
 We see jake run and screaming
Jake (jumping )
“TIMEOUT!”
The whistle blows
Ref
“timeout !”
Jake
“30”
They all hudle up
Jake (screaming/diana signing )
“hey we got one shot if  we shoot it get the rebound do not let them get a break away “
They break off
 We see girls staff
Alan
“the moment of truth “
Zach just sits on the ball hayes gets a lot of pressure
He fumbles
10 seconds left
Rebecca (while watching the tv)
“oh god”
Jake
“FOUL!”
Hayes shoots it with 2 seconds
BANG at the Buzzer
Final Score Hayes 43 King 41
Slow motion as the coaches are stunded as the students and hayes players mob one another
We see coaches shaking hands
Jake
“lets go will deal with this later “
They shake hands
We go back to the coaches
Criag
“oh my… god “
Donna
“Wow”
She storms out of the room
Heart beating
Fade out
We see the team in the locker room
Screaming of Evan in the background
Evan
“FUCK!”
Albert crying as he goes outside then comes back in
Albert
“guys come here please “
Everyone gathers around albert
Albert
“this lose kills us I know that and please bare with me ok “
He chokes up as the staff comes in the room
Albert (countie crying )
“I love this team so much like a second family I love the coaching staff you guys are a blessing too this lost that buzzer should not define me or anyone of u I know it will be hard to get over it but please we are family forever ok “
We see Diana crying
We see albert crying and getting a big family hug by everyone
The coaching staff watch
Jake
“everyone get out go see your family come back in 15 mins “
They all leave
We see Curtis and helea  
Helea
“hey”
They hug
Helea
“I can take hazel and micheal  home if that’s what albert wants “
Curtis
“yeah that’s fine “
Helea
“what about luke “
Curtis
“I’ll take him home”
Helea
“ok,hey hang in there ok I love you I will see you in the morning“
Curtis
“ok, I love you too”
Helea goes by hazel and albert
Micheal
“hey helea “
Helea
“hey, I am so sorry”
Albert
“thank you “
Hazel
“do you want us to go “
Albert
“yeah,I will call you ok”
Hazel
“ok,love ya”
Albert (kiss hazel on the head )
“I love you too”
 Curtis see that goes back into the office
We see the girls coaching staff running
Craig
“oh my gosh”
Donna
“unbelievable “
Rebecca
“shut it”
They walk over
Hug and greeting players and coaches
David walks away in the bathroom
Craig
“hey guys”
Zach
“hey”
Craig
“I am so sorry”
Zach
“thank you “
They keep talking
Rebecca and Curtis are having a chat
Rebecca
“yeah I know “
Curtis
“I don’t know what to do next “
Rebecca
“don’t worry about that right now”
Curtis
“I know it’s just bad right now “
Rebecca
“have you thought about contacting him at all “
Curtis
“I don’t know what to say”
Rebecca
“hey why don’t you come to my office tomorrow and talk about it “
He nods
Rebecca
“so on a lighter note what do you want to do about tonight “
Curtis
“I have to take albert home and then I don’t know “
They countie to talk
We see Jake and morgan along with jake father
Morrgan
“hey huby”
Jake
“hey “
Mike
“hey son”
They hug
Jake
“that’s hard to sink in “
Mike
“I’ve been through those believe me it’s worst then it is “
Jake
“yeah “
Moragn
“when  are you going to be home “
Jake
“I am going to come home late I want to spend time with the guys “
Morgan
“that’s ok I will see you when I get home “
She walks away
Fade out
   We see Coach Jeffers walk out of the restroom
Student
“hey what the hell “
David
“I can’t talk right now “
He looks at Coach schalow who is talking to his father Jake smiles at David then turns to Morgan
Crowd (chanting)
“Park! Park! Park!”
We see outside the gym where the cardinal Hayes fans celebrate
(indistinct clamoring)
Fade out
 We see Jake office where Jake and Curtis and the rest sit stunned
(shouting continues Faintly)
Diana just looking at the wall
Josh is watching tv
(sigh)
Jake
“10 years of coaching and I feel like my headstone will say we lost to Hayes”
(door opens)
John comes in
John
“they’re waiting “
Curtis is looking at everyone
Diana
“I can’t do this, I don’t know why but I can’t go in that room and look at my players “
Jake
“look guys 13-11 making it to the regional finals we started 4-8 we owe it to our players “
Curtis (crying)
“I am so blessed to be able to work you guys “
Jake walks over as Curtis counties to cry
Jake
“look I don’t want you to be hard on yourself “
Curtis
“no because “
(stammers)
Jake
“look I want you to know that whatever happen out their tonight doesn’t erase the fact that we as a coaching staff love you “
Curtis
“for what screwing up on a fucking scouting report “
Jake
“no for your work of 14 years at this school we had a game plan and we just could not come up with the results “
Curtis looks at Jake
Jake (counties)
“and you did a great job “
They walk into the locker-room
(Center face)
(camera clicking)
Jake
“anytime when a young team comes into our gym and dose that it’s a disappointment and this game I am disappointed  with the outcome of the game but I am so proud of this season with what we had and were we started and I think the coaching staff will agree it was a very emotional season for all of us and tonight is nothing more than more of that I want to thank my seniors Luke ,Albert ,and Zach thank you to you we love you so much I am proud each and every one of you guys in this room and that includes the best coaching staff in new York coaches  “
Curtis speaks up
Curtis  
“I don’t know where to begin I want to thank the seniors the coaching staff this year was a hard year this season was supposed to be like the 27 years coach gosz had and like last year make back to state and win we as a team hope and tried but didn’t get the result however I am not going to be negative this season was a learning process for me as I struggled from a 16-11 record to a 13-11 this year but I want to thank our seniors “
He chocks up
The seniors come and embrace him
We see the players balling
We see Curtis cleaning out his coaching office
Jake
“hey smoothie “
Curtis
“did you see outside, people are celebrating their celebrating Cardinal Hayes victory celebrating the lost “
Jake
“are you coming back next season “
Curtis
“no no no I am to tire for it, I was ready to take a break before this season started with everything that happen with Matthew and myself my marriage I know what it is I know what my image  at the school is still good and my career is still great but it’s not me right now “
They both sit
Jake
“maybe you’re lucky that is what it is ,maybe you have to have a break once in a while when you get here something that you have to make right for the school and your legacy at the school ,something that you are proud of ,when I was in high school we won two state titles at Buffalo Central I went 65-4 in my three years I think that I want it to be just like that at Rufus king but I don’t want to be like that team because I want to create my own legacy here at King , when I got to state last year I thought It was going to be like those years that gosz had and I was ready for that I never saw it coming but that is why I coach in march for games like this “
Curtis gets up
Curtis
“I know, Jake want to get a drink “
Jake
“yes “
They walk out the coach’s office
Albert in the background
Albert
“Birds flying high you know how I feel sun in the sky you know how I feel breeze driftin on by you know how I feel it’s a new dawn it’s a new day it’s a new life for me ooh.woo-woo-woo-woo.”
The lights turn off
Fade out
End of 10.8
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