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buwheal · 2 months ago

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BBLEEDING . HWAT HAPPENED ?????

#how fast did you type this response LMAO #avoiding the question because hes a BASTARD!!!!!!!!#[you've got mail!]#spamton #spamton g spamton #deltarune #deltarune spamton #deltarune chapter 2 #i almost wanted to make him say hot shot but GOD its his stupid damn catchphrase he would say it...... kicks a rock...... /j #im generally inclined not to use constant re-dished dialogue as some strange remix but he would say big shot in this circumstance #Taddaaahhhhh..you can kind of see it better..

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reginalusus · 1 year ago

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Some corrupt Spam. I don't draw him enough.

Image description: Fanart of Spamton from Deltarune, done in a style reminiscent of an old anime. Spamton leans against the counter of his shop, grinning. He's in his corrupt form, wearing a black blazer and a white turtleneck. In his hand is a cigarette; the smoke from it is animated. Beside him on the counter is an ashtray; it also has animated smoke coming from it. Every now and then, the image glitches out. Behind Spamton is his shop wall as seen in the game; gaudy blue with a painted sun and clouds splattered on it. At the bottom of the image is a caption for Spamton's dialogue, which reads: "LET'S MAKE A DEAL. TRY MY [Friday Night Workout!]! THEN I'LL SHOW YOU MY THEN I'LL SHOW YOU MY-" End of image description.

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mochiwrites · 7 months ago

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tumblr can have this snippet too <3

“So let me get this straight—”

“Uh huh.”

“Hotguy manages to knock Coldstone to the ground—”

“We are not calling him that—”

“��and he just chucks his weapon into the air and it explodes?!”

“Self destructs,” Grian corrects, looking at his best friend. “I don’t know what to tell you Mumbo, that’s exactly what happened!”

Mumbo stares at him with a mix of disbelief and disappointment, eyes wide. “But that’s — do you know how accurate your calculations would need to be for a weapon’s perfectly self contained explosion? Let alone one that’s just enough to completely destroy it without any scraps left over for analyzing?!” he cries, clearly distraught by this fact.

“Judging your reaction I’m going to safely guess it’s not very simple,” Grian answers, lifting a brow.

“Not in the slightest! It’d take me at least five attempts, maybe more! It’s a scientific feat!” Mumbo pauses at the deadpan stare Grian gives him, visibly backtracking. “And… obviously it’s bad. Very bad, goodness me.”

#hero au #I was tossing some dialogue around for chapter 2 #and help. help I love hero grian and mumbo so much #they’re so silly and goofy

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heartbeatbookclub · 2 months ago

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FINALLY

#coil #this is the final stretch unironically. all of the writing in this chapter has ultimately been about getting up to this point #this initial ending of my thoughts that i was going to do in chapter 2 #also sayori's back yayyyy!#i have a catastrophic amount of editing of the parts leading up here to do because i did cut some corners here and there #and do want my quality to be consistent and to be able to make it all work #but i finally found my transitioning point #and just need to fix it all up #then i can finally just bring it home by writing additional dialogue #which will still take a while. but it finally looks like i'll be able to finish this project before the year ends #i'll probably take a small break after. or i'll throw myself head first into something else #i'll actually probably finish some other pieces of content i've wanted to make before i finish coil #but i finally got to the stopping point i've been trying to reach for weeks #things are moving along! yippeeeeee #i'll be doing a full read through again to really make sure all the quality is up to standard and that it all flows but you know how it is #i have a few other things i want to focus on finishing before the year ends on top of this so that'll be something else on the burners #but the rest of this should be a whole lot smoother from here #i want to let myself flourish for these bits so i feel proud and accomplished and good about finishing this finally #but this has involved a lot of bashing my head against a wall so inevitably that will take time as i cool myself back down #beta reading will happen soonish.

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waywardsalt · 6 months ago

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While Ganondorf is busy as king of the Gerudo and Linebeck is often out at sea, they hardly manage to find time to spend together- but with the right timing and allowances, find time for a bit of desert exploration.

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ganonbeck fic complete!!

here's a new link to chapter 1, and chapter 2 is finally up as well.

FanFiction.net version: X

#take 2 new post bc the og got eaten and its finished finally #ganonbeck #ganondorf #linebeck #my writing #fanfiction #loz #legend of zelda #salty talks #ooooh boy. just another link to ch. 1 bc. uh. its been a year so recap also eeehh considering that the first post is eaten yknow #the ao3 version is m bc. it fits more with the new stuff. but in ff.net its still teen bc in ff.net m is usually just straight up smut #im not versed in how ppl post ao3 links and also i dont really care but this is a little nicer than the og one #a liiiiittle self-concious abt this hot minute since i last posted anything or posted a chapter link so idk lmk if smth is fucked #im gonna play stardew valley to cool off for a bit #oh yeah uhhhh. more lots of dialogue also final bite scene #imo it drags a little in some places but i do like how this turned out

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askamnesiamoonjumper · 8 months ago

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me after editing the aau prologue for the bajillionth time

#First chapter I changed the opening bc I always thought it felt off/abrupt and wanted to have it be prince pov from the start #I wanna get in his head more ok sue me #Beyond that tho it was just some wording edits #Specifically with the internal dialogue moments I helped them flow more/feel more like thoughts #Also mj gets a bit more of their usual edge/pessimism bc the prologue they always felt a bit too “ówò sad poor smol bean” or whatever #That’s it tho chapter 4 I didn’t change bc it’s peak #Did add some teases to later things tho like snatch senses mjs soul at the end of his chap but doesn’t realize it #Or like I added the Not Now running thing in the earlier chapters bc it was more of a chapter 4 thing so I wanted 2 set it up more so boom #I think that’s all the notable edits ig like I said just description additions the only actual new thing is the opener for chap 1 👍#Also also I got to include a hc that I have that I neglected to do before but I hc a!prince used plural internal dialogue #Because lol we love dramatic irony in this house #Grace post #this reminds me tho one of these days I should look through heart strings chapter one to look for editing things #Bc I think I did that recently but I don’t remember it much tho #Mostly just when the Hat stuff starts that was the parts I never directly rewrote I just edited them so they feel out of place in my brain #Also I’d wanna edit her dialogue bc it *was* in character (after rereading her diary’s to confirm) but I wanna have her be a bit more snark #Hat is Hard bc i Need the balance of cute little kid and also smug little shit (affectionate) like she is a pain to write man cries #This is just me rambling lol ignore it I just wanted to spam aau thoughts #In other news I made shapes redesigns but I’m on the fence on posting them bc idk if I wanna spoil or not hhhhhhhhh #Nowadays I’m more chill w spoiling things than I used to be #But there are a handful of things I’ve kept shut about (ex being princes name or mjs species stuff etc)#So I’m not sure if this thing with shapes i should keep secret or just post bc I used to spoil it but idk now #Shrugs #maybe I’ll do a poll later I dunno #Ok yapping over byeeeeee

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deus-ex-mona · 10 months ago

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unnecessary comparison of the day!

volume 5’s release of one of asuna’s chapters changed the subject of her stan twt cancellation posts from mona to miyu (of frusu)!

#there are also minor dialogue changes from the piccoma release to the volume versions but still~~~~#though ngl i love how asuna is the one who has received the most dialogue changes out of everyone in the series lmao #she received one in vol 2 when. like. no one else did iirc #ily asuna frusu i wanna k n o w your after story auauaauaaaaaaaaa #but. man. now im faced with a tough decision for vol 4.#do i or do i not have asuna cuss mona out in the name of localisation or should i just tl directly?#bc so far i’ve tried to tl asuna based on vibes and such as much as possible (instead of direct tls) sooooo #i just. wanna do her justice mannnnnnn. she’s a dumbass but she’s *my* dumbass yk?#but aside from that… i gotta try my best to come up with tls for the variety show segments auaaaaaaaa #i think my little theme of attempted alliteration would work? im sorry appare☆manten you’re sunny⭐︎skies now #hmmmmamamsmmdmdkdjdmdjdjdjdjse im sorryy im goinggngngng insaneeeee from the lack of lxl album shipping updates auauauaaaaaaaaa #p l s ship my album i n e e d to inject meoto into my veins #pls cmonnnnn you cant just suddenly up the shipping price by 20 bucks and *not* ship it on timeeeee #im gonna e a t d h l if it’s the last thing i do #m. maybe it’ll ship if i finish tling the vol 3 bonus chapter today (delusional) i hate waiting for parcels smmmmmm #ok insanity over i think i should get some dinner bye

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oh-meow-swirls · 8 months ago

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was looking through old posts and i'm surprised to see that i seemingly didn't have any commentary on anything in 3 in chapter 7, 8 or 9, the posts related to 3's story go from "my first reaction when i saw yopple-bot was 'i love you. but also you are definitely the boss for this chapter-'" to "i have been in hell all day. hell being bada-bing tower." funny to me cuz those chapters are like, the best ones sdfkljsdfjfsdkjlfsdjkl-

#puppy rambles #yo-kai watch #yw3 #i love dukesville. yo-kai watch wild west. though also everyone in bbq talks like they're in the wild west-#i don't blame myself for not having any commentary on hazeltine mansion tbh. it sucks ass. i mean it's kind of fun but like #god is it annoying. i think using the mechanic of switching between nate and hailey for puzzles is a cool idea but. bad execution #very bad execution. it is so annoying #especially the section where you're in the basement and have to use the drill a bunch #... why are there prison cells in the basement anyways??????? i just realized how fucking weird that is-#i'm mostly just annoyed by the dining room puzzle tbh. i KNOW the fucking answers but verygoodsir is an ASSHOLE for some reason #and won't let me choose the FUCKING CORRECT DOORS #3's so fucking amazing tbh. i really wanna replay it soon. don't wanna have to delete a save file though #wish 3 had three save files like 1 and 2. i get why though i mean it's the biggest 3ds game klsfdjfskjfsdjksdf-#i wanna like. actually use my originyan for once. i might just end up using nyases ii instead tho fsdkljjdsfjskd-#i love every chapter in 3 after nate and hailey meet tbh. the bestie moments are so good #though also i don't think it was an amazing idea tbh. it means there's six main characters after that point #sometimes one character will go several cutscenes without talking at all. it's usually buck #he doesn't have any dialogue during any of the key quests in new yo-kai city. which is pretty amusing admittedly #i think the writers just forgot about him or something fslkdjdfslkjfsdljkdf-#i think my favorite thing related to that is like. during the stuff in bada-bing tower komasan and komajiro are there too #but they don't have any dialogue. which makes it seem kind of pointless #i get why they're there plot-wise but like. at that point you should either have them leave before you go to bada-bing tower #(esp since they don't end up in the ufo with everyone else. idr if there's a reason for that there probably isn't-)#(i think i slightly blocked out everything in bada-bing tower cuz it is so grueling)#or just. give them dialogue???#i love 3 and all but it definitely has some problems-#which is why i'm so excited to rewrite it <3 for both of those reasons. i can fix things. and also it's the best game #just. full-stop. not just the best yo-kai watch. i just think it's the best game ever #that title changes based on my current biggest hyperfixation though sfldfsjdkslfdjkfdj-#i think i'd say my overall top 5 is like. yo-kai watch 3. deltarune. ummmm. fantasy life is up there

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laugtherhyena · 11 days ago

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Actually i think this is a good time to let you guys know i never watched Sdra2 chapter 4 in full

#by the time it was getting translated i already hated Nikei so much that i couldn't stand watching the chapter #the trial much less. i haven't seen a second of the chapter 4 trial #which is a shame because i feel like my hate didn't affect by ability to enjoy the story this badly chapter 4 had the potential to be my #favorite case from Sdra2 because i think the concept/structure is really interesting and unique #i just can't say if it was executed well or not since i never watched it #the furthest I've ever gotten in chapter 4 was the scene Nikei makes ths reunion at Shinji's (?) room to talk to the rest of the cast #and then I THINK that's when Mikado shows up and that Cg of the two plays #i think that's how it went. it's been years #so yes. i never even saw the cast get to the babel tower #i mean. technically i did. but i didn't watch any of the scenes from it i was just skimming over everything to see if Ayame's statue #had special dialogue #that doesn't really count #i did watch the rest of the game tho. i watched ch5 once and ch6 a while after #but ch4? yeah. i genuinely doubt I'll ever watch it in full #maybe if some friend/mutual goes through it and drags me along to watch it I'd do it? still a huge maybe tho #on my own I'm definitely not taking time of my day to watch that. I'd genuinely have less of a problem watching the Ch3 trial again #so yeah. shout out to Nikei because i never had a character i hated so much that it affected how much i get out of a story #strangely enough I don't actually mind him when it comes to fandom content #but in canon or thinking of him in the context of Sdra2? my blood boils. this is no exaggeration #hyena ramblings #sdra2 #super danganronpa another 2

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a-casual-dragonkin · 1 year ago

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ok, so i didn't know about the newsletter that came out for Wallaru, but believe me when i say that i am. not too fond of the phrasing

i am fully on the side of "the young wizard is Far From Okay." (indeed influenced from @/stormbreaker101)

so to see that the writers went down the path of "the player is happy about being the hero, despite their actions" doesn't. sit right with me. it's prolly just to keep the ESRB rating to be like E10+ or whatever, but it jus. doesn't make sense to me

#wizard101 #w101 #the Young Wizard is FUCKED UP and there's no way you change my mind from it #at most they have some sort of legacy or title to their name that they have to uphold that might vaguely lead to the Wallaru desc.#but it's like. damn it deltarune tangent bc it's the best comparison i can make rn #it's like Kris post-chapter-2-secret-boss fight.#like they are severely mentally fucked up afterwards and there's dialogue evidence they aren't fine at least in the moment #so what's stopping the Young Wizard from also being mentally fucked up seven ways from sunday?#it would make more sense if there was even the vaguest hint of the wizard being not okay #i also realize now i might be late to it #but shush abt that. i just had time to think abt it n i literally didn't know abt it until today with screenshots on here #that n it doesn't fit my headcanons abt Samantha. that girlie is the furthest thing from okay

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the-acid-pear · 1 year ago

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One of the most beautiful things Deltarune story has is the fact that you cannot remove its tragedy, because it's thru that very same that hope and love is born. You cannot change the past but you can take what you learnt and thru it build a brighter future.

#luly talks #some things are rough and nasty but they need to happen so lessons can be learnt and so one can grow from them #its a game about the importance of mistakes and you see it everywhere #like i tapped on this lightly today in a post about spamton #for as tragic and painful as his fate was it needed to happen #he needed to try it. to try reach heaven #se tenia que sacar el gusto como quien dice KSJGHBNUY #half joke because yeah like.he had to do it and realize thru his own actions that he was reaching for the impossible #and thru that he grew and was like well maybe i can at least do something else #same with the ending of chapter 1 #ralsei had to heal the king to understand that you cannot be good to everyone. even if it costed everyone's lives.#hell EVEN WITH US in one moment i adore in the ending of chapter 2 #when you're talking to catty (katty?) and threre's that dialogue option about family #and i dont remember the specifics but its so normal to pick the ah family is good tho <:) option #bc taht's what we would think yeah. but she makes it very clear that that's not something kris would say #and when i first saw that i was MORTIFIED like omg im gonna get a bad grade in being Kris #but... i think its part of this all too. because we are learning how kris is. how they even were before us.#had we not fucked up maybe we'd have not know that #this is a game about doom and hope both <333333333 #deltarune

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buwheal · 3 months ago

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Ok we'll pry about something different - what ya up to bigshot?

#He was smug at first but the dialogue and pose seemed very shocked/scared so i leaned in to it a lot cause its funny lol #[you've got mail!]#spamton #spamton g spamton #deltarune #deltarune spamton #deltarune chapter 2 #A more unique pose this time because i need to do some silly things outside my comfort zone cause theyre cooler lookin #hes either good at lying or really bad at lying no inbetween its a coin flip every time #get you a man who can do both #both pathetic loser and semi-competent--(red buzzer) a little competent-- (red buzzer) uhm.... /j

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pireofvamps · 2 years ago

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hey hey hey hey YOU!!!!!!!!!!

i finally finished a butterfort fic that has been sitting in my docs for so long….

#roguefort cookie #butter pretzel cookie #butterfort #fanfic #squint when you read chapter two because i rushed it all today because i fear if i don’t finish it today it will never be done #please read it i put my soul into chapter one #i may draw some of the scenes in the future #still in art block bht wooo i hope you enjoy the read #UMMMMMMM IDK WHAT TOO SAY BUT im no writer so any criticism or tips is appreciated #squint at the dialogue on chaptwr 2 i kinda went ooc but whateva

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1tsjusty0u · 9 months ago

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man. flowey is still alive (or asriel) people think he died and a part of him did die but hes still alive. hes still alive and he had to live with the 1 (one) person he remembered being Actually Fun and understanding him is (mostly. narachara theory lives on + theyre there. To Me.) dead and everyone else is just a character in a game of which will run out of dialogue to say and hes trapped underground with the same people and same places in a neverending world where he can reset and reset but nothing will change he will still be haunted by an emptiness he literally cannot leave and Has to live with it and in the end. its alright. like hes presumably happy with papyrus in the undertale alarm clock dialogue. he has a ways to go but everythings a little better and maybe he can too.

also the fact he thought chara came back to life Literally in the genocide run is so fucked up you dont understand. he sees frisks body as charas, like he literally comments on mistaking frisk for chara (now mistaking Us for chara), and he asks how they got there, until he realizes toriel must have brought them for a proper burial. but he still asks why they came back and if they heard him calling to them do uou Know about that??????????????????????????? thats so fuckignt. ofuejwowgekedjbrleoegroejehr

also theres a video about flowey being loveless and i like it a lot. aro + personal struggles yknow. people can be happy and not love

anyways sorry. this is why im not for reviving asriel/just a flowey post the. previous post got me thinking

#GENUINELY THINKING ABOUT UNDERTALE MAKES ME SO MUCH MORE INSANE THAN BOTW EVER WILL ITS VERY FUNNY #i think its just on a whole well. 1 i once was unfortunately hyperfixated on that and it passed 2 deltarune is taking over and the friendsh #ip analysises from that (of which i need to save)#and 3 undertale is a short game. its the length of deltarune chapters 1 and 2 and if you A know what to expect it might not hit as hard (ex #cept for undertale the song) and B i think it has a bit of trouble building things up because of its shortness. i think. i need to watch so #meone play it for the first time to see how accurate that is #anyways sorry flowey dialogue makes me lose it constabtly. hes barley there except for in genocide and some neutral runs and yet

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mikurulucky · 11 months ago

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Someone out there has actually translated a chapter of Otoko Oidon, one of Leiji Matsumoto's earliest manga.

Ya know, as slovenly as he tends to be, Nobotta's design is legit adorable by times lol.

He a lil guy. A lil bastard with a bit too much old fashioned pride, but a lil guy nonetheless.

#lil guy #leiji matsumoto #leijiverse #otoko oidon #chapter 1 was translated by someone back in 2016 #and i don't see no chapter 2 translation sadly #eh i'll put this one in the back-burner WAY in the back #maybe some day this'll get a proper translation #seems kinda neat if a tad depressing in concept #couldn't help but read his dialogue in a southern/appalacchian accent lol it just kinda fits

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aroaessidhe · 2 years ago

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2023 reads // twitter thread

Song Of Silver Flame like Night

YA wuxia/xianxia inspired fantasy

a girl in a colonised country with a mysterious seal on her arm left by her mother before she was killed

when a state magician finds her, she escapes with a boy to his school of secret traditional magic practitioners, and discover the secrets her mother left her

powerful demon gods

#Song Of Silver Flame like Night #aroaessidhe 2023 reads #with the caveat that i am clearly not the audience. i kinda hated this lol #for a few very specific reasons #i think there’s interesting concepts & worldbuilding #but i am just so burnt out on girl-and-boy-with-no-friends-and-instant-attraction-travelling-together as the centre of a story yknow #this random girl dies and then after she’s referring to her as her best friend but like….i didn’t get that from their single conversation.#it almost feels like shoved in last minute because of feedback of no other female friendships #when there’s finally another woman it’s the stereotype of a mean girl. and they are just calling each other bitches and whores….like jesus…#she is so one dimensional but also in concept she is 20x cooler than the mc sorry i’m rooting for her now #from the end seems like they’ll be forced to work together and probably become reluctant allies/friends in book 2 or something but like….#if that was intended from the beginning you have to make the initial hatred make sense in the first place #also boys getting all embarrassed by periods……it’s 2023. come on. it's not cute and endearing.#if ur looking for dragons bc of the cover. there are barely dragons. the one shows up in like the last chapter #also the audiobook narration is one of those where the normal narration is a normal voice but the dialogue is so cartoony?#like the girls have such high pitched voices.the boys have the deeper voice. except for like random side boys who have comical ones.#idk none of them sound like real people #things i did like: the magic i guess. though to be quite honest the colonisers metal based magic seemed more original and interesting asdhgf #i thought there were some interesting elements to the dudes backstory #oh another thing i disliked is theres a side character with a cleft lip and the MC brings it up EVERY TIME like like.....what.#every time she sees him shes like. ppl used to discriminate #against this and call them (a bunch of slurs) and say they're cursed but actually maybe it's just a scar. people used to call them slurs btw #. i am going to bring this up every time i look at them.

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