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dollwrites · 5 months
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if you expect anything other than “go cry about it” when you comment on my fic that has proper tw something about how it’s romanticizing rape, kidnapping, and forced breeding youre going to be disappointed SKSKSKKSA like what do you want me to say “yeah it is”
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screampied · 5 months
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I was a Little Late for my analysis.. I DONT HAVE WORDS BUT I HAVE SO MANY WORDSSSSSSSNDKDNJSNDJWNDWHD
THE BLOWING ON THE OUSSY PART AT THE START??????? MISS MA’AM, THE HIGHLIGHT OF THE FIC. (Jokes). IMA KEEP IT REAL … I HEARD THE WHISTLE LOUD N CLEAR I COULDNT HELP IT I WAS GIGGLING FOR 10 MINUTES 😭😭🙏🏾🙏🏾‼️‼️ THEN HIM TALKING ABOUT MY BAWDY LIKE ITS YOURS YOU HAVE ITTTTTTT 😻😻😻
TOJI BEING MEAN AND SHIU BEING ALL SAUVE LIKE UGHHHHH…………. ALSO. THE TOJI WITH THE MEAL THING? “Best fucking meal you ever had.” 10 STARS!!! WOULD EAT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! AND SHIU??????????????? PHEWWWWIEEEEKEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THAT MAN HAD ME BITING EVERYTHING.
IDK IF YOU WERE TRYNA IMPLY SHIU AND TOJI HOOKED UP ONCE BUT THAT LINE WITH THE PECS AND THE “cmon toji, let her suck. I would too.” HELLO?? THEN THE “your tits— I mean your pecs, are fuckin huge.” AINT NO DAMN WAY. BOY BFFS FUCKING TOGETHER MAKE ME GEEK IN FICS. I NEVER RECOVER. it got me wanting that irl I SWEAR IM NOT A HOMIE HOPPER IF I WANNA JOIN THE BUNNIES ALL AT ONCEEEE ☹️☹️☹️
I WAS LAUGHING MY ASS OFFFF WHEN THE6 WERE HAVING THE PHONE CALL W THE SHES BUSY LIKE KFMAOOAOAOAOA then he said who tf am I listening to. GAGGED. SILENCED, MUTED IF YOU WILL. REMOTE VOLUME WENT FROM 100-0 QUICK FAST, SHARP SHARP..! IM NOT READY FOR THE CONFRONTATION. BUT IM READY FOR REREADING THIS EVERY MINUTE BC HOT DIGGITY DAWG, YOU ATE THIS UP NO CRUMBS LEFT BEHIND VEVE 😻😻😻
— pearl anon <3
PEARLY :(((((( UR SO SWEET U DONT KNOW-HOW MUCH MOTIVATION THIS GIVES ME EOFOHOHLHL IM SO HLAD U LIKED THE FIC :,)
literally i added the blowing part bc u were talking about it n it made me think hmmm i never wrote that so let me add it 🧞‍♀️🧞‍♀️.
LMAOOOO the toji tits part i loved writing it then making toji a big softie baby he’s so cute. shiu’s so hot i want them both BAD.
LOLLL who knows maybe they did maybe they didn’t 🫂 RKOGOHLH THANKYOUUUU SMM ikr the ending tehe best part :P
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caliwashere · 3 years
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TGKDN Ch 19-20 Thoughts & Spoilers
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author publishing two chapters at once is the best thing to wake up to 
context: TGKDN is a jjkxoc (additional add-ons: dad!gojoxoc, yutaxoc, megumixoc) fic called Tsuki Ga Kirei Desu Ne. It’s linked in my bio in case anyone wants to read it. I don’t own TGKDN or take credit for the story/OCs! I’m just a fan!
spoilers below ⬇️
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-author added a lot of new content for the “It May Be Last” chapter wow
-the demon slayer references to douma, inosuke, and his mom thooo kinda ironic that douma’s the one out here calling ppl demons 
-when going on a trip with a homie turns into getting tortured by a janky cult 
-megumi’s in the closet 👀 (lmao im sorry it was right there)
- not both fushiguros (megs and toji) being traumatized by a gojo (gojo and hiyori (ik shes adopted but she’s technically legally a gojo cuz gojo is her legal guardian) in diff ways 
-just a question: can’t hiyori just use her innate curse nullification ability to get tsumiki out of her coma or is that not how it works?
-yuta not being good at making jokes is canon both in tgkdn and jjk (that joke about gojo having a gf lmaoooo) 
-MAN NEEDS TO TELL HER HE LIKES HER SOON BECAUSE I CAN’T STAND THIS ANYMORE 
- i want couple yuta and hiyori content plzzzz one of them needs to just confess 😭
- ok ok this is just my theory but the flashback words that stopped hiyori from fighting were definitely said by KAZUHA cuz i can’t think of anyone else who could’ve (maybe Hiyori’s sister but like if u do then math then Asami disappeared when Hiyori was like 5(?) so I don’t think Hiyori would remember something like that)
-it also said “dying wish” AND WHO DO WE KNOW THAT’S DEAD?!  EXACTLY! 
-so maybe kazuha was like hiyori’s moral compass or he still is and that’s why she hasn’t killed anyone like she only beat the cursed user in Ch. 6 (”best friends”) into a coma 
-i think it’s interesting that instead of hiyori just being against killing, it’s actually something preventing her from doing so 
- i can’t wait to see how this “promise” to not kill turns out as the story progresses especially in later jjk manga arcs
-she’s probably gonna snap eventually and end up breaking that promise or something cuz we’ve already seen her lose her cool (aka in Ch. 6 with the ribbon + cursed user guy) and when the higher-ups/Kyoto students targeted Yuta 
- i think someone she cares about a lot will get super hurt/die and that might push her off the deep end and make her relinquish the whole no killing thing (there’s a lot of ppl to choose from considering what goes down during the shibuya arc)
-at least that creepy cult guy (douma-knockoff) died
- angry/protective dad gojo makes me feel things but like his adoptive daughter is hotter (sorry not sorry) feral hiyori is just *chef’s kiss*
-asofnaisof feral gojo and hiyori together?? that would be amazing ( i wanna see them work together in a fight aifnasofa)
- i also wanna see her work with maki in a fight like they fight together AND her with yuta (maybe a mission together??)
- geto killing the non-sorcs because they hurt hiyori even tho they were brainwashed is peak writing by author because that’s 100% something jjk canon geto would do after he went off the deep end
- the “we know who you pretend we are” by the two girls geto took in hit me in the feels man 
- i need more young gojo and geto with hiyori content (one chapter wasnt enough author plzzzz)
- geto’s perspective rlly highlights just how hard it was for him to end up choosing the path he did and it also makes me cry
- the realization that hiyori will probably never get the closure she needs with geto like they wont ever get to talk it out (even gojo gotto during that kfc break up) hurts me
-its almost time for the death parade arc yall 😭
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