#a more detailed (and expanded into Cynthia's side of things) story of what happened
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out in the field for a work trip, and on the drive i kept thinking about my fic Second Chances. i've really wanted to get working on it again, but any time i've tried to work on it, it feels like i'm...idk...pulling myself down to work on it? like, i started that fic in ~2017, so i was a younger writer at that point. while i very much have that fic to thank for where i'm at today, anytime i go to work on it to try to finish it off, i feel like i can't write at any of my current level. i also suffer from a ton of "i wish i had done [insert at least 12 different things] differently".
which eventually lead me to asking myself, "What if i just rewrite the whole thing? it would very much be the same story-- we [cynthia/diantha] dated when we were teenagers, had a bad, messy breakup, and both spiraled until we were in our late 30s, where we reunited at a much better place in our lives-- but it would get to be...more polished."
and so that's a thought i'm having
#one of the other ideas being i could basically split the fic up into two stories:#instead of having past chapters inserted here and there to offer context#i could just...write the prequel basically#a more detailed (and expanded into Cynthia's side of things) story of what happened#from when they met to when they split probably going right up into where the story originally started#(or maybe one massive monster fic--it is ME after all 😇)#it would at least allow me to fix some of the continuity errors that have always bothered me#and would maybe allow me to feel better about the story#idk#something to think about#writing tag
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The Outliers - A Guild Wars Love Story
Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapters 10 and 11, Chapter 12, Chapter 13, Chapter 14, Chapter 15, Chapter 16 , Chapter 17, Chapter 18, Chapter 19, Chapter 20, Chapter 21, Chapter 22, Chapter 23, Chapter 24, Chapter 25, Chapter 26 Chapter 27
The weekend had come and Kaleb was getting ready to see many of his comrades-in-arms once more. As he was helping Ulfgar with some of the preparations for the upcoming party, he remembered asking his old friend if he had taken Amalthia's ring size measurement.
"Hey Ulf. Have you, by any chance, had time to find out how big a ring will Amalthia need?"
The old norn stopped his work, smiled at his friend then waved for him to come forward. "Come, lad. I've something to show you."
The massive norn took Kaleb to the upstairs room he resided in during his off hours. When he saw the decorations in Ulfgar's sleeping quarters, he was amazed at the number of sculptures and paintings.
Ulfgar opened an ornate wooden chest then pulled out a small wooden box and handed it to Kaleb.
"Open it, lad."
When Kaleb did, he could hardly believe what he saw. Tucked inside the mahogany box was a large diamond ring with a solitaire, brilliant-cut gem.
"My gods, where did you get this? It's…" Kaleb was at a loss for words.
"Beautiful, yes? It was crafted from dwarven gold filigree and the stone was set by one of the finest jewelers in Lion's Arch. Take it, lad. It's yours to give to your love."
"I... I don't know what to say, Ulf. All I wanted was a measurement. I would have eventually found a ring."
"No, lad. The both of yas are like me own adopted kids. I want you to have it, and I won't take no for an answer." The old norn handed him the box.
Kaleb examined the diamond and marveled at its brilliance. "Where did you get this rock?"
Ulfgar walked over to his late wife's dresser and pulled out the tiara. Kaleb could clearly see that the largest stone was missing.
"Ulf. No. I can't accept this."
"Like I said, lad. It's yours. My dear Glorina would be smiling from the Mists right now if she saw a part of her go to you and your mate."
Kaleb bowed in respect to his long time friend then pulled out a bag of gold coins and handed them over. The old norn refused the offer.
"This is a gift, friend. Use the gold elsewhere, perhaps to buy Amalthia a fancy wedding gown," Ulfgar said with a warm smile.
"This is such an honor, Ulf. I'll never forget this. Thank you!"
"No, boy. The honor is all mine."
***
Evening came and several of Kaleb's Seraph army buddies arrived at the Jotun's Corpse to reunite with their comrades-in-arms once more. He had not seen his two closest friends in several months and having them visit their old haunt felt like old times.
"So you're a Lieutenant in the army now, right?" Kaleb asked his friend Cynthia.
"Yes, indeed. Made rank just a couple of weeks ago. So where's the misses?"
Kaleb looked at the front door and pondered. "She went on a few errands. She should be back at any moment."
Brad walked through the door as he held it open for someone else who was entering. It was Amalthia.
"Look who followed me in," Brad said as he turned to help her with some items she was carrying.
Kaleb and Cynthia immediately leapt off their barstools to help her out. Almost immediately, Amalthia was greeted by hugs from both Brad and Cynthia. Kaleb gave her a kiss then carried the items she had bought to their upstairs room.
"It's so good to see you, Ama. How've you been?" Cynthia asked.
Amalthia twitched her ears and smiled. "Just great! Kal and I have been crazy busy with expanding our little business venture."
"Yeah, I heard. Our folks heard about the way the two of you cleaned out that pack of undead over in Seaside Village. Nice piece of work there." Brad complimented her.
"Thanks. He and I work so well together. The coin we earn is just a nice perk."
Ulfgar walked up and boldly gave both Cynthia and Brad a big hug. "So good to see the two of yas again. No worries, all drinks are on the house."
"Ulfgar!" Both of them said in unison as they returned his hug.
"So you're Kaleb's new landlord? I knew that slob could never afford a place on his own," Brad said in jest.
"I heard that, bro. And who says I can't afford it... huh?" Kaleb returned the jab and laughed.
Ulfgar passed out the drinks as Kaleb and Amalthia snuggled close together and Brad and Cynthia did the same.
"I heard you guys have been knee-deep fighting the undead up in Sparkfly. Making any headway?" Kaleb asked.
Brad took a draught and shook his head. "It's a stalemate right now. Those Orrians are endless. It seems like every time we de-animate a bunch, at least two dozen more crop up."
A small, skinny, shaggy-haired young man came running into the bar shouting to the top of his lungs in a panic.
"A bunch of charr are heading this way. They've got weapons galore."
Amalthia looked up and cheered. "It's my warband!"
Kaleb looked at the young man. "It's okay, Flipper. They're Ama's friends... I least I hope they are."
She pointed towards the door and nodded with a smile as she waved to them once they entered. "Hey guys, over here!"
One by one, members of the Blade warband stepped though as humans in the tavern backed away in fear. The leader of the group, Krenesh, seemed to relish in their fear and made every effort to accentuate his menacing facial expression. Navina followed, acting indifferent to the people around her. Bogo and Tovu, on the other hand, made it a point to wave at everyone in the establishment.
"Greetings members of the mighty Blade warband. As owner and proprietor of the Jotun's Corpse, I bid you a warm welcome," Ulfgar said as he waved them over and offered them a selection of drinks.
Amalthia leaped off her seat and gave each member of her warband a traditional charr style handshake by grasping at the base of the forearm. She started with her leader; Krenesh then did the same for each one until she worked her way to Tovu.
"Hey. How did you make it into our warband?"
Tovu said sheepishly. "Nice to see you Amalthia. All of my bandmates were killed in a separatist attack. I was the only survivor. Thus, I became a gladium. If it weren't for Bogo, here, I would still be one too."
Kaleb, meanwhile, reached out his hand to Krenesh. "It's good to see you again, sir. I hope all is well with the Blades."
Remembering their last odd encounter, Krenesh only returned a half-hearted handshake. "Yeah. Couldn't be better. Is the beer around here any good?"
Navina shook her head. "Is that always the first thing you've gotta ask whenever you go someplace new?"
"Oh. Good to see you too, Navina." Kaleb saluted her as well.
She held up her stein returning the gesture. "Same goes for you, loverboy."
"Navi, I missed you!" Amalthia said as she gave her warband sister another hug and clanked her stein in toast.
"Missed you too, cub. So now you and this human are a permanent pair, right?"
"For as long as the other draws breath. Yup!"
As Krenesh began drinking from his mug, Brad approached him from the side.
"So you're the leader of Ama's warband? Name's Brad Pendragon - second in command and best friend to that joker over there," he said as he pointed in Kaleb's direction.
"Damn straight. Mine's Krenesh Howlingblade, but everyone calls me Kren. I heard you're pretty mean with a shortbow. Ranger, I take it?"
Brad smiled as he pointed to himself with pride. "Yup! Mid ranged is my specialty. In fact, I've got a whole team under me who covers that element of the battlefield. Most attackers are caught completely off guard by our strong midline defense."
"Don't listen to this guy. If given the chance, he will brag you ear off all day," Cynthia said as she reached out to the warband leader for a handshake. "Lieutenant Cynthia Waterstone, Thirty First Platoon - I'm in command of this loser here."
Brad looked at her in surprise. "Loser? Wasn't I your fiancé just a few days ago?"
"Like I said, loser." She had to rub it in further.
Kaleb overheard the conversation. "Woah. So you finally worked up the nerve and proposed to her?"
Cynthia laughed.
"Forget it. It was I who proposed to him!"
Brad tilted up his mug and swallowed. "That's what I like, a woman who is aggressive."
"She's your mate, then?" Krenesh asked.
Brad laughed. "I guess you could call her that. She's more like my boss."
Krenesh looked at him straight in the eyes and said in a much more serious tone. "Never let her out of your sight when in battle. I can tell you this from experience, there's nothing worse then... seeing something bad happen to someone you care about."
The charr staggered off with the mug in his hand. Amalthia noticed then walked up to Brad to fill him in on the details.
"Kren lost his closest mate in battle. He still gets worked up anytime subjects like this come up."
Brad bowed his head. "I'm so sorry, Ama. I didn't know. Please give him my condolences."
"It's okay. Navi just told me that Mia was expecting cubs when she was killed."
Navina rapidly gulped down a tall mug of ale while sitting alone at the edge of the bar. As she did so, a scrawny unkempt human approached her from the left side and asked in a leering voice; "um, what kind of drink do ya have there?"
The big female charr took another swig then glanced down at the strange looking little man.
"Alcohol."
"Um. What kind, exactly?" He asked in a sheepish voice.
Her gazed pierced his beady little eyes. "Who wants to know?"
"Lager?"
She shook her head.
"Mead?"
She growled.
"Um... Ale! That must be it!"
"You guessed right after your third try. That must make you pretty smart... for a human."
Flipper smiled upon hearing those words. "May I buy you a drink?"
Her gaze turned to a scowl. "Are you trying to hit on me?"
"Well, I uhh..."
"Cause if you were, I would claw your damn eyes out. Just because my warband sister is into your kind doesn't mean the rest of us are," Navina snarled as she took another draught of ale.
Kaleb saw what was transpiring and rushed in to intervene. "Flipper! What's up, my man!"
"Ohh. Hi, Kal. I was just offering this lovely lady a round of ale," the scrawny kid said nervously.
Kaleb put his hand on the boy's back and laughed. "Look, Flip. She's really not your type. Trust me on this. How about you run to the back and fetch us some fresh casks. Okay?"
"Wait, I was just..."
He was interrupted. "No buts... just go. After all, a thirsty charr is a cranky charr. Now run along."
Reluctantly, Flipper yielded to Kaleb's demands and headed towards the cellar.
Navina looked at Kaleb and commented. "You just saved that meat's life. Any longer and I would have had to wipe his remains off from under my boot."
"Flipper's not a bad kid. He just wants to screw anything that's got a hole somewhere between the legs. I've had to chase him out of the sheep pen on more than one occasion." Kaleb chuckled.
"What's with you male humans and sheep?" Navina shook her head in utter revulsion.
The two male charrs, Bogo and Tovu, noticed a large rectangular object hanging above the bar. Realizing what it was, Tovu asked in an enthusiastic tone, "I wonder what time it is?"
Bogo looked at a nearby cogwheel clock. "Oooo. It's almost time!"
"Hey. Bartender - anyway you can turn that thing on? Project Transmog is about to come on."
Ulfgar shook his head.
Why in the Great Bear Spirit's name did I allow that asuran to talk me into purchasing one of these things?
"Hold on. Let me find the control."
The two charrs looked at each other and grinned ear-to-ear.
Ulfgar found the remote and flipped on the device. Within seconds, the once blank rectangle was now filled with an image of a female sylvari preparing various vegetarian cuisines.
A human patron shouted out loud. "Put it on the Arena Channel. There's supposed to be a tar pit death match between the Twin Sons of Destruction and the Annihilators."
Ulfgar grumbled as he started flipping through the channels.
"Hello ladies and gentlemen. Welcome to the Bernie Lomax show. I am your host, Bernie Lomax. Today's topic - gods, do they or don't they actually exist?"
He flipped through to another channel.
This channel depicted a large male charr holding a blowtorch as he began welding together a part to a massive war tank. "Today on Heavy Thunder, we are gonna soup this baby up with five turrets and twenty..."
Ulfgar flipped the channel once more. Krenesh called out. "Hey! Leave it there! I wanted to watch that!"
Bogo and Tovu said in unison. "We called it first!"
Flipping the channel once more to a garden show then to a travel program, Ulfgar finally commented. "Y'know. It is this thing that will truly be the doom of Tyria."
The revelries continued into the early morning hours as Kaleb's and Amalthia's friends had become more acquainted with each other. By this time, Krenesh discovered that he had much in common with Brad and the two of them shared war stories until both were passed out from too much drink. Likewise, Cynthia and Navina found common ground in discussions involving the male species. Bogo and Tovu were beside themselves when Amalthia showed them the outfits that Ariyana had designed. Each of them gave their opinion on the style and composition of the garments as well as which one looked the best on whom.
Once the festivities had ended, both Amalthia and Kaleb were exhausted - not to mention, quite inebriated. Kaleb found enough strength in his body to hoist his passed out mate into his arms and lay her out onto their bed. As she lay prostrate across the sheets, snoring with drool dripping from the side of her muzzle, Kaleb couldn't help but smile. His mind, however, was clear enough to plan what he wanted to do the following day. He clutched the boxed ring in his hands for a moment then carefully slid it beneath the bed, safely out of her sight.
Tomorrow was going to be the big day.
(All chapters have been posted to AO3. Chapter 27 is posted here.)
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