#Twisted Wonderland would've been a lot different if she was there

[luckymousey]

Bella: and remember, kids! Hurting others is bad!

Crowley: *in the back, crying and sobbing after Bella scolded and attacked her when he returned from his vacations*

[sweetbunpura]

Time for a much needed update to my blog!

Hi, Hi! I'm Pura! I'm a fanfic writer for a bunch of fandoms! Some fics are published, some aren't-and shall remain unpublished.

I'm Black, 29, Pansexual, She/her, has ADHD (which explains so many of these little ideas I have that show up and disappear into the night)

Link to my fics: AO3

TWST Writings:

Beehive: Someone in NRC tries blackmailing Yuu to get her to date him, she says no and pictures of her get spread around the school. AO3 and Tumblr - Complete, due for a rewrite

Symbiotic Relationship: Eels and Shrimps have a Symbiotic Relationship. Jade and Floyd have that with Yuu, she treats them as friends and not enemies, in return for her friendship, they protect her. So, when Yuu gets badly injured, Jade and Floyd protect what is theirs. AO3 - Complete

Charmed by the Sea: If Yuu had a madol for being in the middle of someone's family nonsense by accident, she'd have three madol, which isn't a lot but it's weird that it's happened three times. Of course, it would've been nice if Jade and Floyd had warned her first about their parents visiting. Sequel to "Symbiotic Relationship". AO3 - In progress.

Stolen Jackets: Yuu somehow manages to gain a collection of stolen jackets from the NRC boys that they had left at Ramshackle. She decides to wear them around the campus, much to the dismay of some of the owners of the jackets. AO3 and Tumblr - Currently writing, infrequent updates. Next up: Leona (Clubwear)

Whumptober 2024 - First time doing Whumptober! So pray for me and let's see how this goes! AO3 and Tumblr

Rescue from RSA - Yuu's been kidnapped by RSA! Now Rollo and the rest of NRC has to rescue her!

Filled with Static - Yuu was already fed up before coming to Playful Land and now that it's over... She has some very choice words for the ones who dragged her into this as she has reached her boiling point...

Links to my more notable tags:

Twst Rambles: Where I ramble about random ideas I've had that refuse to leave my head, some of which may become fics.

TWST fanchild - Welcome the Fankids for some of the NRC boys~

Dorm Outfit Wars - What started as Leona being his petty self has now spiraled into all the dorms getting Yuu to wear their modified dorm style outfits.

RSA Dorm - My fanmade versions of the RSA dorms that also feature my OC's.

TWST x PKMN - Potion mishap causes Pokemon to be brought into the TWST world.

Return to Wonderland AU - An AU of Yuu where they were taken from TWST into a different world, only to return to TWST during the entrance ceremony. Now they have to renavigate a world that was lost to them with magic. Oh, and they may have a sibling or a parent just chilling at NRC, no big deal. (Also might be a sibling to NBC and RSA). If you like this idea, feel free to just make up a Yuu for this, anything is welcomed! (Moved over to @return-to-twisted-wonderland)

Sanctuary - Haha, what's this? A joke I made about Yuu and Rollo unintentionally dating has now spurned into a tag and gained a mind of it's own. It's an AU of sorts, since that would mean Rollo got kicked out of NBC and now attends NRC.

Upendi - A sort of AU where Leona and Yuu are dating. Help, I have made my Yuu multishippable and these are the results

Welcome to Ramshackle - The residents of Ramshackle: Yuu, Grim, Rollo, Fellow, and Gidel! It's becoming a proper dorm with the only outlier being they have to live within close proximity to each other! Ties in to being it's own stand alone AU or part of Sanctuary.

Twisted Wonderland OC's

Yuuki “Yuu” Homura (Yuusona)/ Bio/ Chart

-Yuu is so multishippable, I've done this to myself.

J.J. Tulgey/ Bio

Alexander Ramos/ Bio

Rouge Willow/ Bio

Jet Mordus / Bio

Rascal Gallucci/ Bio

Goliath Gallucci/ Bio

Aster Nightingale/ Bio

Xavier Soria/ Bio

Sayyid ibn Fadel / Bio

Kabir Trak / Bio

Fatun Axebi / Bio

Evan Montgomery/ Bio

Lancaster Stevens/ Bio

Ignatius Bolt / Bio

Obsidian Woodsdale/ Bio

Night Alexander (Retired, became Obsidian Woodsdale)

Atlas Lakia / Bio

Staff

Howard Chestnut/ Bio

Kassie Homura (Yuu's Mother, got isekai'd into TWST) / Bio

RSA

Dorm leaders and Vices

RSA dorms

Current Ship names:

Yuu x Leona: Upendi

Yuu x Rollo: Sanctuary

Yuu x Floyd: Shrimp and Noodles

Yuu x Jamil: Desert Jewel

Yuu x Idia: Co-op Love

[raven-at-the-writing-desk]

Hi raven! i really want to share my opinion with you about certain plot point in twst. welp i think the M*ckey is an bad plot point and seems very out of place in the game,while i'm not able to explain how it feel…shoehorned??as if yana is forced to include it (because she's writing for d1sney obviously,she gotta insert their mascot) but she's not sure in what to do with him,like what the point of his existence?wil he fight OB!Grim?(i hope not because it will look very unserious); and with the current story themes i cannot see how he could affect the course of events; it would've been a lot better if he remained as just an easter egg imo

But that's just my current feelings it might change later,maybe Yana will reveal the real plot of twst very late just like Black Butler!

Sorry for ranting!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

While I do agree that Mickey was kind of jarring to see at first, I think that’s only because his aesthetic clashes with that of everything else in the game. If Mickey were presented to us as another conventionally attractive anime boy (or, vice versa, if the TWST boys were drawn as simple anthro animal cartoon characters like Mickey), I feel like the fandom shock would eventually fade into the usual excited squealing 😅

I don’t think Yana was forced to include him because of Mickey being the face of Disney. His inclusion appears to be very purposeful and serves a role in the larger narrative. He doesn’t necessarily need to fight, but it’s very clear that Mickey is closely associated with the player character/Yuu, and that he may even be the key to helping them find a way home, or to understanding how Yuu ended up at Night Raven College to begin with. Just because we have vague details doesn’t mean the devs don’t know what to do with him; there have been many hints sprinkled throughout the game that will ultimately come together at the conclusion. When we get there, it will probably recontextualize all the breadcrumbs that have come along the way.

Firstly, I think Mickey can tie in with the story without necessarily adhering to its themes. Not every character has to exist to play into a work’s themes, because themes alone don’t define the entire work. One can argue that Twisted Wonderland’s themes are “the importance of friendship” and “even villains have their own tales/good sides to them”, but even then, that doesn’t tell the whole story. There are many smaller components which support the themes or are their own things that add to the world or narrative without necessarily supporting the theme. In Mickey’s case, I believe he exists to contribute to the mirror motif and to draw parallels between him and Yuu.

Mirrors (and, subsequently, their reflections) are vital in Twisted Wonderland. There are mirrors everywhere, serving different purposes—identification, teleportation, communication, etc. The fact that Mickey is speaking to Yuu through a mirror (an important object) already calls attention to him. Mickey is all Yuu can see, and Yuu is all Mickey can see; they are reflections of each other, living in different worlds and unable to cross into the other’s. They aren’t alike at all, and yet they were able to make this connection by happenstance. That imagery alone can sell someone on the mystery of it—and, if you look at it from a certain angle, that, too, connects to the themes of friendship in a less overt way. (Similarly, we see “opposites” reflecting each other in the presentation of other characters like Sebek-Silver, the twins, Kalim-Jamil, etc.)

Mickey ties in with the dream sequences that Yuu has between and within main story episodes. With how frequently it happens and how closely the dreams tie in with real world events, it cannot be a coincidence or just something hastily slapped in to stall the main story. We also get check-ins between Yuu and Mickey at the end of every chapter, which implies that they are building up to some kind of big reveal with him (not unlike what they’ve been doing with Yuu and Malleus’s brief meetings to build up hype and emotional stakes for episode 7). There are also other strange details that haven’t been fully explained but still feel weird to point out (almost like they’ll come into play again later): Yuu being the only one who can see Mickey, and both of them not being able to see each others’ worlds. What’s more, Mickey actually makes the Ghost Camera that Yuu received from Crowley in the introduction have narrative purpose.

We also cannot deny that Twisted Wonderland itself is heavily constructed based on Disney properties, which is highly suspect; Mickey’s inclusion could hint at more serious secrets regarding the nature of Twisted Wonderland itself. (For example, the “Twisted Wonderland is Mickey’s dream world, and Yuu’s dreams are Mickey’s world” theory.) It wouldn’t be too out of place tonally considering at how dark and existential episode 6 got (and implied 7 to be). m

If Mickey were left as just an easter egg, I think the main story I think the story would have a lot less intrigue to it (due to his association with Yuu’s dreams and their struggle to find their way home). He’s basically in the same position as Grim or Malleus; Mickey is a character that we meet early on in the main story, and someone who follows us throughout it. And just as we suspect an OB Malleus and a showdown with Grim, there’s no doubt in my mind that Mickey will be integral for whatever ending TWST has in mind for us.

[rosietrace]

20 for any of yours. GO wild

Hoo boy.... There's a whole lot of scrapped concepts so bear with me-

{ Note: This is more focused on the NRC ocs since they happened to be more flawed in comparison to the other TWST OC's }

1. Freyah was originally going to be inspired by Alice Liddel

Back when I first made my TWST OC's, Freyah was one of many who I had a lot of difficulty on who to twist them from

So at first, since there wasn't an "Alice" in Heartslabyul, I initially chose Freyah to fill that role

The original concept was for Freyah to essentially be an inverted version of Alice

Examples being:

If Alice wore blue(At least mostly depicted wearing blue), Freyah would wear red

If Alice slowly realized she wanted to leave the madness of wonderland, then Freyah would never want to leave and embrace the chaos

And so on and so forth

But as time went on, I decided to change the concept after rewatching the Tim Burton "Alice in wonderland" movies; And made Freyah twisted from the Red queen

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2. Frisk was originally meant to have a completely different Unique Magic/Signature Spell

Originally, Frisk was meant to have a much different Unique Magic in comparison to the one she currently has

For an explanation, her OG UM(Unique Magic) would allow her to make others feel like they're falling down a rabbit whole and their biggest fear would meet at the very end. This would've also been a reference to her original inspiration being the white rabbit

But after developing Frisk's character outside of being a "mother hen", I ended up changing her UM because I felt it was too edgy for someone like Frisk

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3. Grey was originally going to be the vice leader of Savanaclaw

Okay so for context-

The original concept was for Grey to mockingly challenge Leona to a duel for the role of vice leader. And Leona would reluctantly agree

And after 30 minutes of brawling, Grey would eventually win. And by default that would've made her the dorm head of Savanaclaw

BUT, Grey was much more petty in her earlier concepts and decided that she'll just be the vice leader as to not harm Leona's "ego"

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4. Yuuta wasn't meant to exist

I originally intended for my version of Twisted Wonderland to not have a "Yuu" cause I thought (at the time) it wouldn't help progress the character arcs of my ocs and their storylines

But after some thinking for a few weeks, I eventually decided to include my very own "Yuu" for TWST

And I actually have two fun facts about Yuuta!

Yuuta's name was originally going to just be "Yuu", but I decided to change it

His last name "Sumeragi" was chosen after I watched an episode of Kakegurui-

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5. Lumina's V/A was going to be Natsumi Okamoto, who played Nishinotoin Yuriko in the live action Kakegurui series on Netflix. I then decided to change it to Nanami Karin, the actual voice actress of Yuriko

6. 5 of the 6 female NRC ocs had their V/A's chosen after rewatching a few episodes of Kakegurui

Freyah: Hayami Saori/Yumeko Jabami

Nyx: Minami Tanaka/Mary Saotome

Lumina: Nanami Karin/Yuriko Nishinotoin

Grey: Mariya Ise/Midari Ikishima

Victoria: Miyuki Sawashiro/Kirari Momobami

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7. Victoria and Malleus's relationship was originally going to be more "Forbidden lovers" than "Enemies to lovers"

My reasons for the sudden change in romance arc is more based on how I'd view their relationship so-

But it's mostly because I thought enemies to lovers would suit them more since Vic's family seems like the type to teach her that the Draconias aren't to be trusted and that she shouldn't talk with them. And vice versa

Plus I listened to Ruelle's "War of hearts" way too many times and I always associate that song with Malleus and Victoria

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8. Victoria was originally going to be inspired by the Evil/Beautiful queen's crow

Now I really didn't have much of a reason to change my mind

But upon further inspection on how my characterization for Victoria and ESPECIALLY her unique magic, I realized that it would probably be for the best that she'd be inspired by the magic mirror instead of the crow

Plus, the magic mirror played a bigger role in the story. Moreso than the crow

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9. Azrail's name was originally going to be "Perse" (Pronounced "Percy")

Azrail's name was originally going to be a shortened version of the name "Persephone" that also happened to be a reference to the popular webtoon; Lore Olympus

But after a while, I simply decided to change his name cause admittedly... I forgot his name, so I had to change it-