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#Toy Story 4 rewriten
isaaclovestoystory · 4 years
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Upon a rewatch I've decided that I'm going to rewrite a big majority of Toy Story 4. So without further ado, here we go.
So the opening stays the same for the most part, as it shows how Bo left the group, but I think all I'll change the ending of that scene. So instead of Bo telling Woody to go with her, She should be telling him to stay with Andy, and he reluctantly agrees, (I'd also have Jessie and maybe Buzz be there, just to show they had a friendship, as Pixar confirmed they were, and the actual movie literally only had them interact once at the end of the movie). So then the montage happens, and we see the toys in the closet. 
Now things happen slimier to the movie except, Bonnie doesn't forget about Woody and includes him in play time. Also Jessie calls Dolly out on her bullshit. Honestly Dolly refused to let Woody talk, even know he had more experience than she did and she was never called out on it, not even once. That was just stupid writing. anyways Woody goes to kindergarten with Bonnie, she makes a friend with a little girl, and goes home to be told that they're going on a road trip. Woody tells the toys, Jessie jumps up and down, she's full of excitement from it. and the other toys are happy. Jessie and Buzz show affection, (This is mirroring Mr and Mrs Potato Head in Toy Story 2) , and Woody feels alone.
That night, Woody sits at the window, looking out at the big round moon. Buzz and Jessie climb over to him. they talk about Bo and how much Woody misses her. (If you wanted you could have a song here, but you don't have to, These movies usually have at least 3 sung songs in the movie). the next morning the toys go on the road trip, montage happens, we see Poultry Palace, Pizza Planet, Dinoco and just Toy Story cameo's galore. Then when the RV is parked , Woody, Buzz and Jessie talk about their inner voice (Don't worry Buzz isn't confused), (So this is just Woody saying that his inner voice is telling him to go find Bo, but he doesn’t want to leave his friends) Woody looks out the window and Thinks he sees a glimpse of Bo's dress and goes to investigate, and in the process he falls off the van. Buzz and Jessie watch in horror as 2 dark creatures take Woody away. Jessie attempts to leap into the action and free her brother but Buzz stops her.
Woody is taken into the woods. He is taken into a hole next to a tree trunk and dropped into a basket. He looks around and see's that his attackers was just 2 remote control cars with a few toys on them. He hears a female and turns seeing Bo Peep. She wears her TS4 outfit, with a grey jacket on top. She has a small gathered skirt on the back of her legs (Original dress). they talk. she tells him about Santa Bear, a bear who looks like Santa Clause, He's kidnapping toys and enslaving them, and forcing them to build him a gigantic empire, and that Bo's part of the resistance, that's fighting against them. Woody joins them.
Bo takes Woody to Santa Bears palace made of cut down tree's and tells him about how she was almost cut in half by him. While they are going back they are ambushed by a few of Santa Bears goons. They throw Woody onto the dirt and attempt to rip his arm off. Bo quickly dispatches them (This is here to shows how bad-ass she is).
That morning Buzz, Jessie, Bullseye, Rex, Slinky, Hamm. Potato Head and Trixe go out to find Woody. they travel into the woods, and find Tyre tracks, they start following them. Woody and Bo talk to Duke, Ducky and Bunny, Giggle, Gabby Gabby and Wheezy. Woody talks to Bo, and is about to tell Bo that he loves her, they hear toys call out in shock and horror. they hear laughing. Santa Bear walks in, He talks with Bo and threatens Woody with a knife and leaves talking more than half of the toys with him. Woody and Bo argue about what they should do and Bo takes her group away to go fight Santa Bear and save her friends.Woody feels down and starts to go back to the RV. 
Santa bear finds Buzz, Jessie and co. he attempts takes them as well, but Jessie is able to get Buzz and Rex out of his clutches and they escape while, Jessie and co are taken.
Woody goes back only to find out that most of his friends went out to find him. Woody talks to Mr. Pricklepants, who tells Woody that this is the hero's low moment and that he can save everything. Woody leaves to go help his friends. Bo and her group try to fight, but Santa Bear's small group of toys overwhelms them, Bo is taken prisoner, and her group is taken to a small area where the rest of their friends and Andy's/Bonnie's toys are, (Except Jessie and Bullseye) Woody finds Buzz and Rex, who tell him that Santa Bear  took Jessie and Co. and they go to save them. 
Once at the tree palace, Woody and Buzz split up. Buzz and Rex find the toys and free them starting a battle. Buzz escapes the fight and searches for Jessie. Bo is tied to a pole in a throne room. Santa bear sees the battle below. Santa Bear attempts to be with Bo, but she refuses. He doesn't take no for an answer and attempts to be with her, but is stopped by Woody. while they fight, Bo frees herself and uses Santa Bears knife to rip him open. (We don't see this happening, but we do see fluff). Woody and Bo run out to help with the battle.
Buzz runs out of the palace and see's a fire and see's Jessie and Bullseye tied up, close to it. Buzz fights the goons, and Jessie uses a stick to untie herself and Bullseye. They watch as the fire stars getting bigger and bigger, Buzz and Jessie get on Bullseye and start galloping away from it. Woody and Bo see the flames and start running, all the toys run, the fire roar behind them.  
Back at the Rv, a bunch of fire fighters try to put out the fire, while the toys desperately try to escape the flames. Jessie and Buzz ridding on Bullseye grab Slinky and Rex, and escape the forest. Mr. Potato Head, Hamm and Trixe escape right after them.They see their a way away from the humans, and start making sure that everyone's okay. Buzz is holding the weeping Jessie (She thinks her brother was killed in the flames) and Bullseye.
Woody and Bo run as fast as they can, Bo's leg is grabbed by Santa bears top half. She attempts to kick him away, and Woody throws him into the fire.He fire-lifts her and runs out of the woods holding her in his arms. Jessie sees Woody and Bo. She hugs them, and they all watch as the fire rolls out of control. Bo spends a few minutes telling the toys about her friends, especially (Giggle and Gabby Gabby).Bo knowing that there's nothing left for her in the woods, she decides to join Woody and Co at Bonnie's, they sneak back to the RV, and just a few minutes after they got back to the RV, they were told to evacuate, as the fire was getting out of control, and might have civilian casualties. As the RV leaves Woody, Buzz, Bo, Bullseye and Jessie watch as a helicopter tips water on the fire.
The during credits scene, is just the introduction to Forky with the rest of the toys, Buzz, Bo and Jessie help Woody teach Forky he's a toy, and The girl toys become best friends. We see that the Fire fighters were able to stop the fire, in the post credit scene. And that’s it, I know its bad, its probably wore than Cars 2, but like, still, I wanted to try to rewrite TS4 and I did
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