#The Great Scriptening
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It is done! The entire Death Machine script, scanned for your reading pleasure! It is, alas, a whole file full of PNG and not one single pdf as i originally wanted to do, but hey. Free movie script! Jack Dante is in there! There鈥檚 alternate scenes and dialogues!
You can find it all here on my dropbox!
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primarygold.wad Author: Membrain/Scripten Date: 06/04/13 Description: Primary: Gold is an updated version of my first map release. It is very, very large and is sprinkled with a great number of encounters based around several varying locales. Gameplay is best described as a mix of classic Doom and an action-adventure title
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im doing it im finally getting the entire Death Machine script scanned
#death machine#Brad Dourif#John Sharian#Jack Dante#Stephen Norrington#The Great Scriptening#starting w rough scans and then I'll probably do some touch-ups#11 pages in let's gooooooo
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i must've shared this before, but hhheeeyyyyy Canon Jack Dante Backstory
#look it's in the film but I think it's pretty much universally agreed that some bits of that computer voice are kinda hard to make out#Death Machine#Jack Dante#The Great Scriptening
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In the original introduction for the Trio they're all sitting together watching TV and i just think that's adorable
#i don't care if the description tries to make them seem cool they're nerds and we all know it#also reading the whole thing it feels like casting a white guy for Yutani was. very much the best move?#bc then he comes off as a huge weeb who made super questionable tattoo decisions#instead of the horrible stereotype we would been stuck with if they'd casted a Japanese actor??#it's an Improvement even if it'll forever be unclear if we were actually supposed to think Martin McDougall is uuuhhhhh Japanese#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening
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Fun thing i just noticed! The bit about GIC in Cale's line here was kept in the final version of the script, but all other mentions of it were cut? So you don't know for sure what GIC is exactly, except oh wait, here's this little line that got lost in the rewrites...


#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening#tiny bit of Hayden Backstory unlocked!#funnily enough the pink pages are the most recent ones! so clearly even that part was still a draft
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When Hayden screams NO!! right after this bit I'd always assumed it was because she expected the bullet to ricochet and maybe hurt someone (which happens!), but this line here sorta seems to imply she was specifically worried about Yutani? i just think it's neat??
#Warbeast still has him pinned down at this point so yeah if it fell it would've dragged Yutani down with it!#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening
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Warbeast being adorable is so important
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Raimi being #relatable
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The bit about Yutani first refusing Hayden's help and then accepting it later isn't in the script and I'm just so happy it eventually got added 馃挅馃挅馃挅
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Final line on the left, with the original draft on the right! Love the little change they made here, giving a different vibe on how Hayden is planning to handle things.
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Wait was it the music or was it the phone, Cale, this is confusing
#the paragraph where she rambles about the kid dying is actually kinda chilling?#i think the bit mentioning how the sound of the sink just Keeps Going through it all is a pretty creepy touch#but the whole situation is just. how did this happen exactly.#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening#gonna re-read the early backstory next and hate every moment of it wow I can't wait
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Early script had Cameron being experimented on instead of some random person we hadn't seen before, and that's way more horrifying tbh?
#Cameron being the guy from the opening scene!! he's Cameron Unit 4#you barely see the name for half a second#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening
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Love how here it reads like John is terrified, but in the actual film he just sounds super exasperated in a 'ah fuck Ridley's gonna do something stupid' way
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Early script!Hayden Cale had absolutely zero chill and i will never get over it
#even in the rewrite they still mention that she 'grabs Scott's arm painfully'#it's like wow ma'am calm down#Death Machine#The Great Scriptening
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