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haruminyuu · 6 months ago
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bouncybrain · 6 months ago
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I don't interact with the HSR community so I'm just going to put the 2.2 spoilers here just in case because I'm so mad. I'm genuinely upset with the story. This is why I've had to take breaks going through Penacony it makes me feel like my brain is leaking and I need to rant about this at ass-o'clock
We got on Penacony and they were like "well nobody really knows all that much about the Watchmaker so like lol go find out" and then they took forever to get there.
I walked onto Penacony, looked straight at Misha, and went "what are you talking about I'm done I've found him what else do you want from me, can Dan Heng come back and play yet" because you're telling me they finally dropped us on Penacony with a storyline about "The Watchmaker's Legacy" and also just a guy with a pocket watch we hang out with in a weird dream place and thought they were being subtle? Why do I have to sit through all of this. Give us a skip button.
Repeatedly hammering information into the dialogue doesn't make for a good story, a good twist, a good hint, or even good character development/backstory reveals. There is no subtlety here. The only "mysteries" we have are just plot threads that they haven't given us any information about. Like "WOW WHAT'S THIS DEATH THING WOAHHHHHH" and then doing nothing about it until they're like "WHOOPS HAHA GALLAGHER DID IT??? WOW WHAT A SHOCK!" and then they're like "WOAH THAT'S SAM?????? CRAZY! I WONDER WHAT ELSE" and then dropping "SIKE THAT'S FIREFLY!" and now they're like "HEY REMEMBER MISHA HE WAS THE WATCHMAKER ALL ALONG ISN'T THAT WILD!" Where did the Gallagher-Death team come from? Why? There were no hints. Where did Sam being Firefly come from? Sure, having a Stellaron Hunter present makes sense, but what the fuck does this have to do with anything? I don't care. (Seeing Blade in a suit driving a car was nice though.) And, as stated, I already knew Misha was the fucking Watchmaker from the goddamn start.
Honkai: Star Rail's story could be so much better. Actually going through the story could be so much better. I am, surprisingly, capable of getting sucked into a game's story even when it has less intense gameplay than HSR. (I played "In Other Waters" around this time last year and it was fantastic! I enjoyed it a lot! Here's the link to the game on Steam if you're curious.) There's so much more to crafting a long, ongoing story with moving parts than simply dumping all relevant info in massive clumps while repeating said relevant info at any possible moment. I could critique a lot of the recent choices they make with their storytelling. I've been writing this rant while waiting TO FUCKING MOVE AGAIN. I already figured out everything they're telling me!
Just give me my new hat. And I want this next adventure to be with Dan Heng, please. Please. He pays attention and I don't have to explain something I figured out months ago.
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having-conniptions · 1 year ago
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Love In The Air episode 5 live reaction under the cut (long post)
Awwww Payu is checking if Rain got sick OHMYGOD HOW MANY HICKEYS CAN A GUY- awwwwww little forehead kiss <3
And Payu with his hair down AAAAA
At least Rain is finally getting some sleep
"I was gonna flirt then dump him, but willingly became his instead" AYYYYYYYY
MOM ALERT
"I don't get why architecture students study so hard." Rain, under his breath: "Do something else hard, more like" BOYYY HAHAHAHA
And he's borrowing Payu's sweater 😭❤️
RAIN'S ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTED FACE WHEN HE SEES PAYU WORKING OUT TOPLESS AND SWEATY
Ohhh is Payu gonna be mad? Worried? Mad about being worried?
Meeting the mom so soon huh?
Yeah he's mad cause he's worried
And he's getting a little controlling idk what to think of this
"Are you ready to be punished?" You guys just made up so I'm gonna assume you mean in a sexy way
Was not expecting "fever reducer. Rectal suppository." HELP I'M DYING HAHAHA
Oh no Rain don't call for your mom what if she actually comes in huh
Annnnd there she is with snacks. Rain under the covers thinking "don't be suspicious, don't beeeee suspicious" while Payu plays it cool - I bet he already got Rain's pants off and that's why Rain is hiding like that lol
Payu is such a smooth talker
Yup, pants were off. This was not the scene I expected but it was the scene I needed lmao
Prapai!!!! He's sooooooooo
"I was gonna ask about the cutie's friend. But it's okay. I can wait for Payu. Cause if he's a devil, then I'm a beast." TELL ME NOW HAVE THEY BEEN HOOKING UP I REMEMBER PRAPAI BEING IN A GOOD MOOD RANDOMLY AND THEN DISAPPEARING FOR SEVERAL EPISODES AND SKY HAD THAT GIANT HICKEY ON HIS NECK I SAW THE CLUES THEY'VE BEEN HOOKING UP HAVEN'T THEY
PRAPAI I BARELY KNOW YOU BUT I LOVE YOU
Not Sky sneezing because someone is talking about him I KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON
"Should I address myself as 'Wife' instead?" RAIN STOPPP HAHAHA
"We're just junior and senior. Your time to win me over is up." PAYU DON'T MAKE HIM SUFFER LIKE THAT SAY SIKE RIGHT NOW
"From now on... I'll be the one to pursue you." OH the game is ON. THE GAME IS ON I SAY
Yeah hit him with that pillow knock him the fuck out Rain I support you
"You left scratch marks all over my back last night" WELL YOU LEFT HICKEYS ALL OVER HIS CHEST I THINK YOU GUYS ARE EVEN
Rain being a little tsundere but literally only lasting for two seconds is what I live for
"I want you to choose... between becoming my wife or having me as your husband" PAYU THAT'S LITERALLY NOT HOW IT WORKS also why are they getting engaged already is this the gay version of uhaul leabians??
PAYU BUSTING OUT A WHOLE ASS SPEECH WHY RAIN SHOULD AGREE TO BE HIS BOYFRIEND (WIFE?)
WHAT DID HE WHISPER IN RAIN'S EAR I NEED TO KNOW
That's a lot of tongue ayyyyyy
Payu is so happy and in love aaaaaa why is this episode called calm before the storm I'm scared
Rain is so shy and giggly while texting Payu aaaa I love them
OH so that's what Payu whispered awwwww <3
Sky is 100% done again lmao
Oh Ple...
"I would have been happier if I hadn't just gotten a husband" for the 100th time babe you did not get married
SHE REALLY ASKED RAIN FOR PAYU'S NUMBER I AM CACKLING GIRL YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT YOU JUST STEPPED INTO
Not Rain almost publicly calling Payu his boyfriend aaaa
"I think... my brother likes P'Payu too." IS THIS GONNA BE A RAIN JEALOUSY ARC???
Rain still has tea on his nose lmao
"Damn these fruity siblings" NO YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND I AM WHEEZING
Whoever wrote these subtitles deserves a raise
Good to know everyone looks a little dumb with a helmet like that, even Rain
Motorcycle ride giving me kpts flashbacks
My pet peeve is that we can always hear the fabric of their clothes etc moving/rustling because they were probably wearing mics while filming, it makes me feel like I'm hiding in Payu's shirt lmao
Oh hi Sky! Rain don't be shy he knows anyway - not just because you talked about it but also because I still suspect he's already hooking up with Payu's best friend (who obviously also knows about everything that's going on in Payu's love life)
AWWWW SKYYYYY aaaaa I love himmmmmmm
Lmao Payu asking about Ple
Not Payu calling Rain's mom asking for permission for Rain to stay over 👀👀👀 boy has plans I suppose
Which is exactly why we have a timeskip to the next morning lmao
Payu is humming while making coffee and I am once again reminded of the fact that this episode is called calm before the storm WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN
PAYU I'M ALL FOR YOU LIFTING RAIN UP ON THE KITCHEN COUNTER BUT COULD YOU PLEASE PUT THE KNIFE DOWN FIRST
Oh my gaaaaahddddd the singing scene
"If anyone asks, just say that you're P'Payu's wife" xD
Bonus scene: wait that was before Rain even started studying there and Payu wrote him a good luck note IT IS FATE AAAA
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partyinthemysterymachine · 2 years ago
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it hardly needs to be said that i am EXTREMELY protective of what i reveal in or about GOOMT, but i WILL say this:
i view GOOMT's...... Arcs(??) (Timeline??? ?? idfk) as separated into four books. there are four reasons to separate them into four books. i will be getting GOOMT printed when it is said and done, btw, and i can assure you that these four books will also have the additional use as a murder self defense weapon
not to mention that GOOMT also being four books alongside Harry's Filicide series ALSO being in four books may or may not have Implications or Correlations, aehdkgfdghkehghaha
oh yeah. chinhands. shit. Harry's Filicide series. yeah no that's GOOMT canon LOL i know i've talked about the Filicide series before just briefly here and there but no. no, that's GOOMT canon. hahaaha. i'm pretty sure i can talk about it bc there's like. nothing Spoilers about it so yeah let's give it a gew
so before the events of The Fuckening of Silent Hill Pt 2 or 3 Depending On Who You Talk To GOOMT, Harry was starting to seriously consider retirement, or at least taking a very long hiatus from writing.
he thought it'd be fun to knock out a book that was a very personal project. a. VERY. personal. project. it was kinda dark, it was strange and ~experimental~, as many would state in reviews. and it was called Filicide.
it was published, it received its accolades and its criticisms and Harry was like ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ and was just kind of chuckling wryly to himself that it was doing so well. and then he was going to announce that he was taking semi-retirement/extended hiatus when his agent/editor (Maggie) strolled up and /chinhand on his counter and was like. sooooooo~
........ soooooooo Filicide's doing reaaaallly well and people are wanting a sequel :) and i knoooow you said you wanted to retire, Harry. But. what if--
harry's like. mfer. jfc maggie i SAID i wanted to retire, i don't even have any more lore for that!! it was supposed to be a one-off!!! hello!!!!!! ma'am please button your blouse your advances don't work on me
sorry harry i just don't know how to seduce men with morals. anyway soooooo wouldja do a sequel oooorrrr :)c???
so basically Harry's like FINE. FINE i'll write a fuckin sequel jfc FINE but this better be THE LAST ONE--
SIKE spoiler alert it, it was not. Filicide got a sequel, yes: Infanticide. maggie was like. ummmm......... sooooo about that title,
and Harry put his foot down, like. either u publish it with that title or u aint gettin it
she's like. ok the execs said fine. but jfc, harry
Harry just ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ !!!!! what did i say!!!!!!!! so now we have two books in the series. and Harry's like pls let me hiatus now. and they were in agreement. but Infanticide did really well. people were loving it. it was REALLY off of his normal writing path and while Infanticide got some more negative and weird reviews than Filicide did, Harry super didn't care (considering the extremely personal nature of these books), his publisher loved their paychecks from it, Maggie loved her paychecks, and Harry loved his paychecks too!! so happy family right??
WRONG guess again moron. HOW'S ABOUT A THIRD and i'm pretty sure that Harry was actually in the middle of writing the fourth and last book of the series (and it was hard agreed-on this time that this was going to be the last Or Else) when GOOMT then takes place. so in the series, we have:
Filicide
Infanticide
Patricide
Suicide
which, super great dark and edgy right?? makes u think u might have an idea of what the plot of those are bc they're very personal to Harry and very uhhh Telling in their titles, right??
well. what if i told you. that the series is NOT a retelling of his time in Silent Hill, but yes, has strong connections to Cheryl/Alessa/Heather, but no, not THAT strong, but also it's a sci-fi ghost story in Space. :) now what would u think of that
anyway. throws glitter. Lore
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tsuko-san · 1 year ago
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Update~3!!!
[NOTES: I'm sorry to say this before you read a kind reminder to please don't ask me a request to put your Bluey OC here, I allready planned of which OC to pick, Thank you for reading this note.]
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Finally Adding the LAST 3 more OC's on the 2nd row... BUT SIKE... it's not over yet :'<
(Adding Hyperlinks so you can find them easily) Credits to the Last 3 OC's are
frsikyrad, HomeBlue19 & AndrewStarBluey !
If you've been in the last update, I know I shouldn't be taking requests but honeslty I want frsikyrad to add too, I try to find her OC on twitter but I couldn't find it anywhere... so for losing hope back then, friskyrad will not be in the list... UNTIL she commented her OC. knowing this I feel happy so brought her back into my list!
HomeBlue's (A.K.A Josè) was easy to do... but something was missing on him, So I used clipping and color him red to make him really stand out lol. the only colored character in this picture, Also I know HomeBlue will never see this update because he's been going to "Boot Camp" (I researched and it was kind of brutal there...) wish him good luck from there!
As for AndrewStarBluey she was very easy to do, also making her very happy as exicting to take picture with the other members, Her scarf and clothing are the one's colored. (cuz' for drawing base reasons, turn them black would be complicated to draw. I know it's obvious but I thought I would share this.)
BUT IT'S NOT OVER YET, Gonna add there more on the 3rd row and Once thr base id done. I can finally draw the FINAL drawing! Wow look how many they are!
Once I am done done I'll explain what it was and also about the censoring eyes (the censoring eyes is part of the suprise tho.)
I hope you will all see the final thing! wish me luck!
You know... I think I should've name this Project. I will officially call it:
The BLUEY COMMUNITY GROUP SURPSIE Project! (BCGSProj!)
Finally! gonna give this suprise project a name! That's all I have in this 3rd update for now! See you in the nect one! ;)
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madmilez · 2 years ago
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The re-scam
Everyone has done something in their life which could fall under the classification of wrong. Some are more creative about it than others. The re-scam was one such idea which was not exactly noble. But it was not pre-meditated it just kind of happened.
So I'm selling a fridge on Craigslist. Yes, Craigslist was still a thing at the time. I get a response from a buyer who says they are not in town but will send me a check and once I get it, they will come get the item. Clearly a scam, only an idiot would buy that story.
I think, what will it hurt to play this out and just see where it goes. I had a gut feeling. So I did. Mail me a check, it's not like there will be a tiny little criminal concealed within the envelope waiting to jump out and steal the money I don't have. So I went with it.
The check came. They knew it too cause they started blowing up my phone. Their story was that they accidentally sent me an over payment. Over buy about 2k! Will you please cash the check and return the extra to them and I can keep an extra 100 for the trouble. Lol
I put it together before this point and knew what I was going to do. I took the check to a bank in a 'nice' neighborhood. I waited til someone came thru who looked like they had 2k in the bank and I offered 50 bucks if they could cash it.
The first person I asked agreed. I had to sign it over to them and they cashed it and handed me 2150$ I laughed outloud walking down state street. I finally replied to the scammer and thanked them for the free money which the poor bastard who cashed it was now liable for. ..... sorry man.
The re-scam..... great name second to car sike... which will be in my next post.
I suppose I should mention, I recommend trying this as there are plenty of ways to make money without screwing people over which is against my own personal policy. We all make mistakes when we are young. Some more than others. I still do crazy things but none of them really hurt anyone. Anyways,
Thanks for reading. Much love.
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rayroseu-reblogs · 1 year ago
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OOOOHHHHAosuqiixiaxj!!!!!!😎😎🙌🙌🙌✨✨✨ *sweats in replying days later...*
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Usually, I interpret dorm tierlist as "least to most likely" I'll approve and relate of this dorm's rules, aesthetic, character, and story-
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7. My least favourite would be Octavinelle-- Its a really pretty dorm thoughh I like TWST version of underwater dorm 🥺 but it got the least fave because... I wouldnt fare well underwater im not a good swimmer, the people there feels like theyre scheming i wouldnt handle it for one day there and I'm still salty about the whole "were stealing ramshackle because it would be more profitable than Yuu having it!" fiasco KDKAKD sorry not sorry Azul 😩💥
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6. Next up Savanaclaw💛 THEYRE DEFINITELY MUCH HIGHER than Octavinelle 😭 cuz I love hot weather dorms, my element 😎🙏🙏 so plus plus plus points for Savanaclaw for having that!!! Tbhh they couldve done more for the outer architecture of the dorm but I love the furnitures of this dorm, looks homey tbh
As for the dorm mates,,,, I'm definite straight up NO with their policy that the strongest survives there IM A WEAK ASS BTICH JAJSKA and i like... lazing around but I'm not Leona so sike ig. I love Ruggie and Jack MOST ESPECIALLY JACK, i feel like hes a great student to be around, yk always striving you to work hard, I need more people like that irl honestly 😭
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5. i havent completed book 6 of ignihyde yet but im not really much of a shut in and im not nerdy enough for computers so i probably wont vibe with most people there because im probably going to be considered like a normie lol, as for ortho and idia, i havent seen much of them and honestly im not the biggest idia fan 💥 so not much of an opinion of them. i love their dorm architecture though, its so cool💙 ive placed them higher than savanaclaw bcs atleast here i wont have to wrestle with some random people lol
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4. pomefiore!!!! ooooohhh i love this dorm but im really really not sure if i'll fit in so right now i just feel like im an admirer from far away for this dorm of beauty 😭💜 i love the story, i love vil rook and epel, the idol arc was so great!! i also relate to vil a lot about wanting to spite neige just a bit lol i understand that feeling so well augh💥 AND HIS OVERBLOT FORM IS ONE OF MY TOP FAVOURITES OF ALL 💜💜 i think i wouldnt fare well with the constant criticism even though vil or whatever pome student didnt mean too much about it and just want to help💥
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3. third will be scarabia !! theyre honeslty a tie between heartslabyul i believe these two dorms are most compatible with me- i love their dorm's motive is mindfulness and kalim's the dorm leader!!!! thats alrwady the luckiest sign you'll be ok at nrc... atleast lol i feel like twst en didnt tell its story greatly bcs i honestly enjoyed reading this book through fan translations instead- jamils struggle kinda hits home ksksks ALSO HOT WEATHER DORM 💕💕🥰 and did you see the furnitures for this dorm??? very beautifulll i love their dorm uniform as welll it looks easy to move in and comfortable. 10/10 best dorm for hospitality and management, literally unproblematic, (probably bcs of jamil 😭 )
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2. 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 you know first anythings are always special to me, so heartslabyul ♥️♥️ if theres any book story that twst perfected currently itll be book 1!! I LOVEEE the characters, the build up, the ending, and riddles overblot form!! it was all too engaging and well written, i could feel they worked hard for the first dorm to introduce twisted wonderland !! hm, i kinda like that they have a set of rules to follow even though theyre nonsense akdkks, im probably going to be like deuce if im in this dorm; clueless but trying hard.😩✨ wouldnt mind being in this dorm, unpopular opinion? but i really like their dorm uniform♥️🥰
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1. oh dear here goes...😭👍💚💚💚 diasomnia i feel like theres so manyyyy diaso stans and im just a pebble in contrast of them skslksks anyways this dorm was what started me to play twst in the first place so it was bound to be my best fave lol i wont say much because most people here already stated why this dorm is so loveable-- its the unique cast and the found family dynamics💚💚 also my beloved malleus is from heree soo😳💚😳💚😳💚 i WOULDNT WANT TO BE IN THIS DORM HOWEVER THOUGH the pressure of always being excellent and elegant?? AGHH ITS LIKE POMEFIORE BUT WITH SAVANACLAW HARSHNESS 😭💥 i'd die if the dark mirror sorted me here 💀
a major part of why i like this dorm even though its policies and aesthetic is a complete 180 of me, its the characters..😭👍 All four of them are just so relatable, i see myself in each of them like weuuwusuw did yana toboso wrote these in accordance to what i am..😎💥💥
im most related to silver thoughh-- literally im like him who is raised by a single father whos often absent/travelling, so he desperately wants to be independent to help him ABHSJSS😭😭
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at lasttt, tbh as much as the 7 dorms are awesome, i think i would love to be in ramshackle the most, i dont mind cleaning and im a traditionalist through and through so i wouldnt mind not having technologies for a while💥 i dont mind its literally a haunted house, ive been wanting to see ghosts but atlast my paranormal experiences are next to nothing😔😔 the only trouble i would get here is having to supervise the majority of nrc students like jsidosk my mental health could never... 🏃‍♀️
AJJSIA ITS FINALLY FINSIHED OH GOODNESS THIS HAS BEEN IN MY DRAFTS FOR SO LONG OMFG😭😭
tagging @cancerdust96 and @roxanavanrouge2400 hehe i feel like u two are diasomnia stans as well-- so im curious as to your reasons for liking themm💚😊😊
hey a little tag game i want to try!!! order your favorite twst dorms from least fave to favorite!
Scarabia: their characters on their own are good but seeing them together makes me extremely uncomfortable?? it’s probably because the orientalism plus people shipping together..it’s not jamil and kalims fault but i have a complicated relationship with scarabia
Octavinelle: idk they just don’t stand out to me. jade is neat but i feel like the tweels are overhyped. don’t really have an opinion about azul
Savanaclaw: again the characters are great but. as a whole they don’t stand out to me. i love jack and ruggie but leona 😬 if you got rid of the sarcasm and smug expression he would be a cool character (i kin him more than i would like) but i feel like he’s wasted potential. also book 2 was the hardest to get through because it was so boring it really did them dirty
Heartslabyul: the card guys!! don’t really care much about them either..i usually like alice in wonderland vibes but their dorm uniforms are the worst things i’ve ever seen. WHY DO THEY WEAR T-SHIRTS?? other than that i don’t have much to say about them.
Pomefiore: THE GAYS okay they’re awesome. this is mostly because of rook i just really like rook. and rookvil. epels great to actually. also on the complete opposite note their dorm uniforms are amazing (maybe even my favorite) i would totally wear them myself. but even though they’re in the top three i don’t really think about them more than any of the other dorms.
Ignihyde: okay of course my second favorite dorm is the cute family. what did you expect. but also they are so interesting?? book 6 has been the best book so far especially with all the lore. also ortho is best boy AND LITERALLY A ROBOT. how can you not like precious robot boy who loves his brother. also their designs are cool the hades hair and teeth are very gender.
Diasomnia: you already knew this was coming. my beloved dark romanticism found family dorm<33 i am literally obsessed with them okay. not only are their designs peak gender but they’re WRITING is so. augh. just the contrast between them. we got two faes who are centuries old and have experienced years upon years of hardship. war. suffering. and then we have two (one and a half) humans who have never experienced loss. or grief. they are honest and hardworking and loyal, they represent youth and joy!! and yet they all have so much LOVE and TRUST for eachother it makes me go INSANE!!!! also you can never miss with gothic aesthetics and fairies…literally the greatest thing out there
anyways in conclusion i think any dorm that isn’t diasomnia and doesn’t have tragedy and fate weaved inside them are plain and boring. if i placed your favorite dorm low feel free to tell me why im wrong and why they are the best!! i would love to hear :)) (also feel free to include ramshackle too)
tagging: @rayroseu-reblogs @ethanwinterfan69 @drdepper @shrimpyjustwrites @llondonfog @wondergeek @frogeloise @morays @hxneylavendxr @teslathelame @the-v-lociraptor @anotherlavendergay @chaoticsnacc @aloodonut @valsol-909 if you guys would like<3
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chatonnoir · 3 years ago
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honestly what are your thoughts on the whole love rivals plot.
Stupid, pointless, and a waste of my time. On god this "failed attempt to get over their crush by dating someone else" plot could've been done in like 2 episodes. The fact is that Adrien didn't love Kagami and Marinette didn't love Luka and the two of them were simply trying to move on from their original crushes by making an attempt at dating people who they found attractive and who had crushes on them. Both of their relationships literally lasted like 2 episodes. The buildup was pointless, the same effect could've just been achieved by having each of them receive a random love note/confession from an attractive classmate in one ep and try to go on a date in that same ep to get over their heartache, only for it to not work out (yknow, like what happened in Frozer, lmao they literally could've just ended the plotline there.) Imo the time they wasted on developing Adrien and Marinette's romantic relationships with their rebounds should've gone to developing Adrie/nette as well as their friendships with Nino and Alya. If they wanted to add to Marinette's stress in Season 4 by having her realize she can't even have a love life while she's the Guardian and Ladybug, they could've had her trying and failing to get over Adrien after the "girl I'm in love with" moment in Puppeteer 2 and had her messily try to date over just 1-2 episodes. OR they could've skipped that entirely and instead actually given her the opportunity to hang out with Adrien but then switched things up and had HER be the one who can't hang out with him or who has to cancel/leave in the middle because of her superhero duties!!!! Have her angst about that!!!! Have Adrien feeling Some Kind Of Way about it!!!! That would've been delicious!!!!
ML started as a nice subversion of the love rival trope by having the love rivals be Themselves, but then ....... felt the need to put in love triangles as well in season 2? Which just felt redundant and also served no purpose other than creating another excuse to keep Adrie/nette apart/keep them from getting close to one another for whatever reason. If you couldn't tell, the way Adrie/nette isn't allowed to get close without being sabotaged/artificially kept apart at every turn is another annoyance of mine lol. I won't get in to it too much here or else I'll get totally off topic for several paragraphs, but one example is Riposte. I remember being excited when I first watched Riposte because Adrie/nette playfully bonding over fencing was cute and I thought "oh Marinette is joining the fencing team!! They can get closer and hang out more regularly now and Marinette will get more comfortable with him and--" ..... Sike! It was just to introduce an unnecessary love rival! The love rival is the one who gets to benefit from seeing Adrien regularly the way I wanted Marinette to and Marinette is going to continue rarely if ever getting to hang out with and get to know and get comfortable with Adrien! Great. :)
The point of a love rival is usually to spur a hesitant/shy character in to action so that they don't lose their love interest to the rival, to make an oblivious character realize their feelings when seeing their love interest with the rival bc of the Jealousy, or to make a character who is being romanced by the rival realize their feelings for their true love interest because of how wrong things feel with the rival. None of that happened! Marinette wasn't motivated to make a move on Adrien because of Kagami (or by Kagami, I love the trope where the rival is the one to tell the protag to act). Adrien didn't realize his feelings for Marinette because of Luka. We did at least get to see Ladybug jealous of Ryuuko with Chat Noir and Adrien (subtly) jealous of Luka with Marinette, but nothing Came of That. They ultimately just realized neither of them can date while maintaining their secret identities, which the show really didn't need a whole drawn out multi-season love rival plot to tell me.
At least this nonsense granted me the gift of Mari/gami if nothing else lmao
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i-need-air · 4 years ago
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Hybrid!AU Wolf!Bakugou Katsuki HCs Part 2.
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Summary: Part 2 is here! While in part 1 it was mostly adoption and how he'd behave with you as a roommate, part two is him ✨ realizing things ✨ followed by how he'd be in a romantic relationship.
Word Count: 2k words [ oops, I did it again ]
Notes: So I said it'll be out in a few days but three [3] people asked me for part 2 and I'm a sucker soooooooo!! I could've just written a long ass fic but whatever, I thought I'd make it shorter in headcanons... hah lol right. Enjoy!
Part 1 here!
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× he's a wild wolf so he's very active; like you need to understand he needs to go outside if not he'd get impatient, more aggressive, snappy, so once you took him on an easy hiking trail near your house and he loved it so once or twice a month you both go together to different places [ he demands it ]
× it's hard to keep up with him bc he's literally genetically engineered to be better than any very fit human being but he slows down for you
× morning runs at 5 a.m. bc he's insane
× is also a grandpa
× watched all documentaries on any streaming platform you could provide to him, also loves reading
× as months pass and you start to have your routine in order, word comes to you that an acquaintance is looking for a security guard at his mechanical shop two streets away from your house
× you casually mentioned it to Bakugou because he was starting to act anxious whenever you'd leave the house, so you assumed he was extra bored
× seriously, the house was spotlessly cleaned, he cooked amazingly and was occupied with your old laptop and going around the city to explore, but you guessed he wanted more independence?
× little did you know you were right but so wrong lol
× so Bakugou stared at you intensely and asked "Where?"
× it was as easy as telling him the location, him nodding and you thought he'd consider it; you didn't put any pressure on him because he already did so much to help around anyway
× well guess what bitch, next day he comes up to you saying you gotta co-sign his contract [cuz fuck society] meaning he got the job
× he was perfect for it because tall, intimidating, muscular wolf guy? who'd even mess with him? do they have a death wish?
× well, even before this he started to be... soft
× but once you really did show him you support whatever he wants to do, you give him his freedom and liberty of choice, he just reaaally changes, man
× he gets touchy, like his hands stay one second longer on your skin, he uses any excuse to have them on you, even his eyes follow you everywhere
× like c'mon, it's obvious but you didn't wanna put too much thought into it because we're respectful here
× not like you had a big fat crush on him and slowly started to realize it too
× sike bitch he knows
× you think his super-hearing didn't catch the way your heartbeat spikes up every single time he touches you? *please*
× i think he knows before you know
× meanwhile he is working to discover his feelings too
× so your relationship slowly turns into a couple's like relationship but without anything official and of course no kissing or such [ sadly ]
× would get jealous easily
× basically because nothing is talked between you two and deep down is insecure
× why the hell do you smell like other people? was it just a hug or something else? hell, why would you even hug people when he's right there??? just ask and don't touch some extras????
× another thing he does is getting very close to you while you talk to somebody else; scoffs and glares at them too
× ok so!! gifts! he really appreciates any gift you give him but scolds you if you do because you genuinely don't need to do that
× of course he just scolds you and calls you an idiot so I do hope you already learned his language
× it basically means that you shouldn't have done it, he's really grateful but seriously you shouldn't have
× like that one time you saved up money to get him a good computer and he forgot how to speak for like an hour
× the softest thank you ever afterwards
× still sounded rough but he was shocked as fuck
× one thing that remained in your brain were his friends, as sometimes he'd mention them
× so you took it upon yourself to find them, of course with his permission
× gets genuinely overwhelmed and plays it off saying he wouldn't mind knowing where those idiots ended but you didn't miss the way his voice trembled
× for you to find them you needed names and any information he could provide so that's when he, after a long silence and a mesmerized look on his face, started really talking about his life
× which was fucked; won't get much into detail but he was indeed in a fighting ring, people came and bet on whoever was stronger, he even had to fight his friends, everything was filled with abuse and their conditions were subhuman...
× just overall awful
× you couldn't help but hug him tight, feeling him shake in your arms
× with a hesitant voice he asked if you really did think there was a chance to find them
× just couldn't believe how amazing he felt in your arms
× or how your determination that night made his heart clench and took a big weight off his shoulders
× anywho;;;; after his first paycheck he takes you out on cute dates
× never calls them that, just demands you dress up [helps you out cuz boy got style] and takes you to a nice coffee shop or something
× AND on your fifth not date cuz you're not official but there's this weird tension between you date he finally kinda s n a p s
× you honestly didn't expect the waiter to flirt with you, he came out as very pushy and even if you were a lil uncomfortable you smiled and brushed it off
× when the waiter suggested giving you his number the sandy blond hybrid growled
× which i shit you not made the whole coffee shop freeze
× and you froze too
× but neither of you could say anything because the oblivious fuck kept talking
× basically joking about how you should keep your pet in a leash, to which you got up, threw some money on the table, grabbed Bakugou by the hand and leave before he'd rip someone's head off
× it only took you to touch Bakugou's arm to calm him down as he followed behind you wordlessly
× so you stood outside, angry, deep red eyes on your figure
× and silence
× his hand still in yours
× it was warm and amazing and you felt angry but your heart was beating loudly; angry at the waiter that you wanted to go full Karen on and get fired but excited because that growl shook you to the core, as if you could tell it was territorial and it was because of that pig flirting with you and did Bakugou Katsuki just lace his fingers with you?!
× "Oi." he interrupted your thoughts
× he turned your frame towards him and pulled you [kinda harshly] into him
× you'd make a comment about it but brain empty, just Bakugou Katsuki blushing
× "You're mine, you get it?"
× skdjflglykshs
× it sounded like he asked but it was a demand so oops you're his now ok bye
× like I said, boy isn't dumb so he lowkey knew you felt something too
× legit from there on he's just soft as fuck
× has a hard time opening up but visibly tries for you
× still continues to be a pain in the ass, Bakugou Style, but with a loving teasing attitude behind it
× his eyes give him away all the time
× they shine whenever you're in his field of view so congrats because, and this is the best part:
× WOLVES MATE FOREVER 💕💓💞💗💝💟
× oh yeah, he's yours, no takebacks
× he isn't one to half-ass the relationship; you're his now and he'll do anything for you
× big time touch starved it hurts
× because he is shy
× so whenever you introduce him to hand holding and cuddles, he can't get enough
× not big on PDA [ and not recommended since human-hybrid relationships are kiiiinda frowned upon but it's getting better ]
× although at home it's another deal
× seriously cuddle him; he's big into the protector vibe so he's a big spoon almost exclusively unless it's to sleep on top of you
× speaking of! accept that even if your relationship isn't that intimate, he'd still hint about sleeping together in the same bed
× so you better catch on when he does because he'll just click his tongue and call you needy
× while dragging you to bed
× sleeps holding you, his nose in your hair or in the crook of your neck
× unless it's summer then stay on your side 💅
× you know those kisses that just scream "I can't get enough of you"? that's his whole kissing vibe in a sentence
× hell, even the gentlest kiss gives that vibe away and it'll 100% leave you breathless
× doesn't have experience but is a very fast learner
× pays very close attention to your body language
× really into biting your skin enough to leave marks
× wear his hoodies
× no, I'm fucking serious, wear them now
× his chest puffs and he turns into a blushing mess when you do it the first times because his scent is on you
× scenting is a big thing for him so of course he's gonna love it
× 10x more territorial because now he has a mate to protect
× jealous but trusts you
× still very jealous though
× let's all pretend he is definitely not scenting you before you go out because it's in his nature and it is embarrassing
× the first time he tells you he loves you it's when he's feeling vulnerable
× the search for his friends is still on-going, he feels less than adequate as a providing mate, is pissed at the world for treating him like an inferior animal when they created him, everything is piled on his shoulders and whenever than happens he closes off
× you notice immediately
× will not tell you at first
× it's only when you go to bed and he turns his back to you when you really know it's bad
× even if you fought before, he'd angrily snuggle you at night-time
× now it's so different
× hug him, whisper sweet nothings in his ear, pull a blanket all over you both and big spoon him, he'd start shaking and talking in no time
× will hide his tears from you but you'd know
× "You're the best fucking thing that happened to me, [Y/N]... I—... Shit... I love you so much."
× neither of you slept that night
× excuse you? drink some water and pray to jesus;;; you talked about feelings, ok? communication is key in a relationship, puh-lease
× [ i have this whole nsfw hcs post already cookin in my brain so maybe I'll make it happen cuz y'all know he has a mating season and all that comes with it 👀 ]
× back to being children of jesus here
× thanks the moon, the heavens and all the gods for putting you in his life; boy didn't believe in destiny but deep down he thinks you were meant to be
× you still better wash the dishes or you'll get your ass kicked.
Extra:
× you did find some of his friends, little by little, and even if he acted nonchalant, like k das cool, it was obvious he was extremely happy
× so they did get adopted too
× you got in contact with them on social media and they were all very excited about meeting
× so it was a chaotic meeting with a dog hybrid called Kirishima and a mouse like vibrat yellow guy called Kaminari
× they all were looking for Bakugou too since they were very worried about where he ended
× Kirishima shed manly tears when seeing Bakugou
× as they instantly welcomed you in their small group, they informed you both that the majority of the squad was adopted and they're in contact, while they're still actively looking for the others
× cue to the softest expression you've seen on Bakugou in public followed by "That's good"
× silence
× shock and silence
× Kaminari turning to you and whispering "You did this" with a hand on his heart, lips trembling as he wiped an imaginary tear
× insert instantly snappy Bakugou
× when everyone laughed and continued to make plans to meet up with the others, he just looked at you conversing with them, soft expression again on his features and his chest warming
× "Oh! Look, he's doing it again! Quick, take a pictur—"
× "SHINE!"
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paradise--line · 3 years ago
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This is me being Aro
Hi people :)
This is just me being Aro, nothing to see here.
Okay in all seriousness though, this is my short story how I figured out I'm Aro before society said "You suck lol repress yourself". And then I said "SIKE" and became green again. :)
My mom keeps teasing and insisting me to date people, and not even queer people, just cis boys and men only. I said no to her, but yeah that cost me a beating :(. I don't like being told who to date, who to be friends with, or how I should dress "to impress". It's not even professionally either which is an extra bummer >:(.
Over the years, many boys keep pulling me into their dating frantics and I keep stomping on their feet to get them away from me, but they always come back. It was done mainly just to humiliate me later.
When I finally did date however, it's honestly a lot of work. I knew it wasn't for me since I still want to figure out what to do for my future [At the time of this writing...yeah I still do lmao].
Plus, having squishes rather than crushes is already good for me, mainly because the only thing I wanted in this world is to at least have an acquaintance that doesn't make fun of me or threaten me in any way.
I knew that peak friendship is what I really wanted all along. So that's why I'm Aro again after all these years.
Plus, this is a Reverse Uno Card for my mom who said that "I can date later" LMFAOOOOOO
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m0e-ru · 3 years ago
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Hi Hey Love you nd your art but what is your take on the relationship (not romantic but like, interaction wise/thought wise) of Nana-Chan and Mimi? I don't remember but have you done any scribbles of them?
Thank youuu 💕💕💕 and you can say relationship! Of course I'll regard it as platonic (english is weird).
You can look through my Nanako tag and see I've drawn her with Mim (considering I love to plug that cryptid into everything that coincides with my interests HA).
These two in particular being the clearest presentation of their relationship I've made so far: 1 2
I'll admit, either I haven't thought about these two interacting enough or I find their relationship hard to tackle considering both of their perspectives, I have...yet to properly solidify anything.
The one thing to remember about Nanako's perspective is that she initially found Mim, the attendant, to be "weird" or "scary."
Although the narration says Nanako's looking at bancho, it's clear that she's looking at the attendant. Her model even approaching bancho and looking up at him.
11:57 https://youtu.be/nOS7zw34dj0?t=717
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Which she clarifies later on 3/20.
46:48 https://youtu.be/5Q0RABx5-5M?t=2808
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That being said, au-wise, with Nanako warming up to Mim after hearing Souji talk about them, I think Mim would be afraid of Nanako.
A six (6) year old girl (she turns seven (7) in October) whose mother died recently, and with her father being busy as a detective, she's been left alone at home majority of the time until her cousin stays for the year. Being a child, she has nothing to suppress or hide from others to have her own Shadow. And her only desires are things as simple as loving her family and friends, keeping the company she already has, and yearning for her late mother which manifests in (albeit, shared) her TV studio in the world of the unconscious.
And a cryptic entity born of a collective unconscious, serving them as a deity and executing a plan to fulfill it. It's not as if they're meant to be remembered by anyone at all. They might as well be forgotten; imperceiveable, really. Slapping together a temporary identity just to shake hands with a few people. Why bother sealing the little gaps seeping out fog only perceptible to those they'll never meet again. First impressions? What about no impressions.
But there was an impression.
A guy twice a little girl's height does their best not to crumble in front of her, to say the least. Afraid of children being more perceptive knowing the truth better than those older than them and simply not being aware of it. Being piercingly blunt and honest as per their nature as individuals still learning about the world around them.
What if you were a decaying mass with a face you can't change bound to fulfill a duty that could end the lives with the same will that powers your existence, hiding under a myriad of physical and metaphorical layers. And you hear
"Oh, thank you!"
"Thanks for taking care of big bro."
"You're really pretty!"
"You really are big bro's big bro."
No, no, no. Go back to being afraid. Go back to never remembering.
It takes twice the effort to try and smile.
(more under cut where I'm less poetic and this is getting long lol)
sorry for getting poetic lol woww i love being dramatic /gets dragged off stage/
Mim can take compliments from anyone else which they could easily brush off. But from kids who probably aren't even aware of euphemisms yet Mim would probably die.
s: wow senpai youre really pretty for a guy
m: haha jk right whatever lol
n: mister attendant i think youre pretty
m: say sike rn
For clarification, yes Mim would still act in their attendant facade with Nanako but it takes twice the effort to be with her.
Having to swallow everything nice she has to say about them and keeping up the clown act to be consistent with everyone they meet.
It's hard to feel spite or plain heartlessness and 'i dont give a shit about what you think about me actually' bc Mim is growing their own heart after it unwillingly tore apart from them, while they gradually returning to the caretaker aspect of their whole being that they lost at the same time. So they care about a child's opinions taking them as how other people may actually think about them if they ever admitted it, especially the fact this same child is connected to so many people and Mim already knowing if this game they enabled keeps up, she's going to inevitably get caught up in it making them fully aware of her fate.
And as much as they already care about her, they aren't supposed to stop the game they started since they're bound to their duties that they begin to loathe, but also at the same time take personally since, at its core, it's meant to better the lives of the people they've grown about at an intimate level ever since they turned human themself and /shepherd's cane cartoonishly pulls me off stage for the second time/
Do you know how much guilt piles up on literally everyone associated with Nanako by November when shes kidnapped and hospitalized?¿
Out of everyone, Mim doesn't want Nanako to care about them the most. They don't want her to think that they, a monster formed by the cognition of the collective, is "pretty" or "nice" or "kind" or "funny." Mim cares about Nanako and they don't want her to go down that line of thinking and be betrayed by her beliefs based on how Mim presents themself.
But then again, it's already been a long while ever since they made "themself" different from "Izanami." So maybe Nanako's allowed to think that way.
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penrose-quinn · 4 years ago
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Waaaaaah I love the excerpt! I love From Eden! It's easily one of the best written fics I've read and I'm so siked that you're updating another chapter 💖 Your writing is phenomenal! Hope you're getting enough praise for it because it's so beautiful and captivating to read. I appreciate the research you put into this because I'm half Italian and the details you put in Easter reminds a bit of home :))))) I haven't been to Sorrento, but this is making me want to go there lol. Don't know how to say it but there's something very satisfying with the religious imagery and how it just delivers regarding the whole theme with MC and Prosciutto. The symbolisms with MC's Stand and the flowers are interesting! I've only heard about folk healers from others but it's interesting how you wove it into the canon lore. Oh yeah I also looked up the painting and it's so pretty! I see how it really says a lot of their relationship. I know you put unhealthy relationships in the tags and there's the stalking too but I really want to ship this so bad. I'm horrible 😭 👉👈 but mutual pining is my weakness 😩 There's something in the way you write them that's so meaningful and bittersweet. Like I get MC for not wanting to put up with his bs anymore but him not wanting to move on yet is so selfish but human.
That there’s a rare genuineness in there he can’t find in anything else that makes him selfish and starved because people like him are just beggars, piss-poor at mercy, and cruel enough to kill one of their own; a sentiment he doesn’t mind committing when the consolation comes with a paycheck and a twisted kind of satisfaction that he’s done it.
I love this line so much 😩❤️💔 It's terrible but it humanizes him. Cuz he's still an assassin and I don't think he's capable of empathy BUT THIS. I think if he does actually *love* someone it'd be twisted like this. You're right to tell us that he isn't a good guy. This is the same guy that would kill everyone in the train. Prosciutto wasn't really my fav but I was craving for some La Squadra content and your writing of him is so good! I really want to read more about him from you! 💖
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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS, ANON GDJDLALAKAHAJAKA ❤️🧡💛
I wasn't really expecting love for From Eden, but this makes my heart leap :')
I'm happy you enjoyed the excerpt! (that scene is actually longer than it is and it drags) I'm so glad I got the culture right. It's a little weird how similar some aspects of the culture of my country is with Italy, but it's one of the things I enjoyed writing. I've never been to Sorrento either, but I'd love to go there too! Ahh, we can never go wrong with religious imagery haha. Oh thanks for mentioning it! I love the Stands in Jojo so much and I really want to make one up whenever I have the chance. I thought adding folk healers in the lore is something interesting to explore because it seems plausible, considering how there are already more bizarre things existing in the world of Jojo. Magic and mystical saints don't seem that unlikely. Couldn't agree more! Régnier's painting is something that stood out to me when I was making a reproduction of it awhile back and that's where the muse began for this piece. Oh, you're not horrible, anon. A lot of good relationships do turn south at one point, and because of their circumstances, the pining just hurts to write about (and don't we all long for it? The pain only makes it sweeter).
I'm so happy you thought so! The prick is really being selfish here, but it's understandable. It makes him human, yes. It's what I really want to have a grasp on when handling his character because I don't think we get to see much of it in canon, if we exclude his last redeeming moments in the train scene (still, that doesn't excuse him for being such a gorgeous prick tho). I'll never see him as a good guy tbh. Besides, I already like him flawed and a little fucked-up. It makes sense to me because he's still an assassin, but that doesn't really take away that he's still just a man in the end. He's still gonna make screw-ups no matter how much of a smartass he is, and no one really screws up more than people who're still hung up on their exes lmao. Anyways, thank you for sharing this! I'm so giddy with everything you said and I hope the next chapter of From Eden doesn't disappoint! ❤️💜
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threeletterslife · 4 years ago
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helloo it's me again, hehe. is it okay if I ask some tips on how to write the perfect ending for a story? I'm planning to make my story have a sad ending, but at the same time I want my readers to feel some sort of comfort afterwards?? It's sort of like Titanic, where Jack dies in the end but he and Rose reunite in paradise. sorry i make no sense jsjjs
hi!! of course it’s okay to ask for tips LOL that’s lowkey what i’m here for (:
sad endings are one of the harder endings to write because not only do you have to convince the READERS that this is the best ending for the characters but also you have to convince your CHARACTERS that the ending is basically what they deserve lol (the sad ending should NOT be sudden; you should be building up towards it from the beginning)
sad endings with comfort are even harder BECAUSE after basically making your reader drown in their own tears, you have to hand them a tissue (figuratively) and literally tell them ‘sike lol here’s some fluff to make up for that bloodbath’
and the way you’re going about that is great! if you want to offer comfort to the readers after a sad ending one of the best ways to do it is through reunition!!
here are some in-debt tips to go about writing a good ending for a story:
IN GENERAL/WARNINGS
OK SO THE ENDING OF EVERY STORY IS SO FUCKING IMPORTANT LIKE YOU CANNOT BS THROUGH THIS EVEN IF YOU TRIED
this is because the last thing the reader reads in your story will be your ending
it’s literally the last impression they will have of your writing AND the story
you need to make sure the ending STICKS
i will say this. a sad ending or a jarring ending (something that is not cliche, basically) will reside in your reader’s memories more than an ending that is commonly used in the ff world
warning: there is such thing as a common sad ending too, so beware of that
but i’m not saying common/cliche endings are bad. i’ll tell you later how to finesse one of those endings
endings should never be abrupt. that’s kind of a common mistake that i see a lot
most people writing a beautiful introduction. but then they get to the middle and don’t know what they’re doing. I’M TELLING YOU NOW THAT THE MIDDLE MAKES UP THE ENDING
whatever happens in the middle of the story SHOULD lead to the end
this means that either you write the middle WITH the end in mind, or you write the end WITH the middle in mind
SAD/BITTERSWEET ENDINGS
what constitutes as sad? think about that for a sec
what makes people sympathize with others?
i think knowing someone (like knowing what they’ve been through, their hardships, their likes, their dislikes, their journey) really helps me sympathize with them when someone bad happens
it’s human nature to care about others that we know well
so your goal should be to make sure your readers know your characters enough so when your characters are undergoing a crisis, (as bad as it sounds), the readers go through one as well
if the sad ending involves death, then what would the surviving characters think of it?? the key to getting the waterworks on in the audience is putting a big emphasis on the surviving characters’ reactions to the death of another character. if the other characters are heart-wrenchingly mourning the death, then chances are, the readers are too (humans mimic each other’s reactions lol)
if the sad ending involves a breakup, then the literal saddest way to end that is to use simplicity. a breakup is messy. it’s emotional. don’t decorate it too much with actions and physical descriptions. what makes a breakup sad is what the characters are feeling inside—not how horrible or disheveled they look in the state of the moment. (it’s even sadder when the characters seemed really compatible at the beginning of the story)
if the sad ending involves separation, i think there are two ways to go about with this. separation can be really fucking sad. (especially when it’s between two close friends.) in order to capture the depressing emotions, the characters should feel when that happens, you need to carefully describe why these characters must separate. then, you need to clarify their thoughts on the separation. they must separate because of this, and they would rather not leave each other, but they have no choice. it’s even better to talk about their empty futures without each other
the other ending with separation i personally really like is a bittersweet ending. it’s when the two characters must separate and they both accept that fact. if they had the choice, they would probably not separate, but circumstances worked out against them. there are fewer tears reading this kind of ending, but you get that punch-in-the-gut feeling when you write it well. in order to perfect the bittersweet ending, i find that it’s easiest to focus on the future. the characters must separate for the better—for their own futures. the situation at the moment (separating and saying the goodbyes and all that) may be shitty, but it’s a small sacrifice for a better future
HAPPY ENDINGS
not all happy endings are cliche
but the thing is, most of the happy endings are cliche
and there’s nothing wrong with that
you know why?
because so much content has accumulated over the years that there is no doubt that hundreds, maybe thousands of ideas will repeat
at this point, it’s hard to figure out what’s not cliche. literally EVERYTHING has been written and done lol
so honestly, i say, you shouldn’t really give a shit about cliche or not. don’t overly try to avoid cliches because you might accidentally make your ending sound forced (we don’t want that)
happy endings are pretty easy on the spectrum of endings because it’s probably easier to write happy characters than sad characters (at least for me)
but because it’s easy to write these happy endings, you might get tempted to abruptly end the story (you might even do it accidentally)
the best way to go about this is to bring something that the characters probably repeatedly talked about throughout the story back and stick it in the last line/paragraph somewhere
i.e. say your character A and character B were best friends at the start of your story. through the course of it, character B deals with trauma/internal dilemmas that lead him to be pretty sad. character A describes him having slouched shoulders all the time. but when character A and character B recognize their love for each other, things start to look up for character B. the ending can be character A and B together in a scene, and character B’s usually slouched shoulders are straightened, yk ‘cause he’s finally truly happy
it was a random example but i really like to bring in the little details to wrap up a happy-ending story!
COMING UP WITH THE ENDING
honestly, this section is gonna be short because i think this kinda comes with gut instinct/following your heart loll
when you’re writing your characters, there will come a point in time where you literally feel like you’re them (because you know them so well)
ask yourself what do you think your characters will do? then write it out!
whether you want a sad/bittersweet/happy ending is gut instinct lowkey
i usually set the tone of a sad story right away so people know what they’re getting into
it’s better to know your ending while you write your story (or else you’ll have to go back and edit the beginning and middle to connect with the end)
but sometimes, you might not know how to end your story. then it’s good to base the ending off of what you’ve already written
i feel like this sounds like bullshit, but it’ll make sense when you actually experience it loll
oh god i have no idea if this is sufficient enough yikes... if you have any more questions, feel free to send in another ask! (:
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you're absolutely right! txt really pulled off the rock genre so well! 😭 ooh guitar buddies!! 👀 i also recently got back into piano! but i can't read sheet music anymore so i just listen by ear now :( hbu! do you play other instruments too? hm book recs? 🤔 ig it depends on the genre you prefer, but one of my fave books would be the miracles of the namiya general store! what kind of books do you like to read o: - secret carat 🎁
which kingdom perfs have u watched! (and was there one among those that left an impression?) when you love someone is def one of my fave day6 songs 😭 but omg it's so hard to choose faves - maybe 'walk' and 'time of your life' as well! do u like to watch kdramas? and if so, do u have any faves! 👀 i would def rec my name but yeah as u mentioned it is very violent shiogeksl damn icb cheol rly got replaced like that 😭 LOL the power soonyoung holds - secret carat 🎁
which kingdom perfs have u watched! (and was there one among those that left an impression?) when you love someone is def one of my fave day6 songs 😭 but omg it's so hard to choose faves - maybe 'walk' and 'time of your life' as well! do u like to watch kdramas? and if so, do u have any faves! 👀 i would def rec my name but yeah as u mentioned it is very violent shiogeksl damn icb cheol rly got replaced like that 😭 LOL the power soonyoung holds - secret carat 🎁
ahh ur absolutely right about 247! it does give off kdrama vibes! aww oh noooo ;-; anything based off second life is bound to be very heavy angst 😩 a roadtrip! that sounds so exciting! i hope you two have a good time :D aww stupid covid ruining everything :< hopefully you're able to go to japan and korea soon too! 🥺 hislges i play mostly story-rich adventure games on steam (i just love a good plot) but i've been playing genshin and animal crossing a lot LOL hbu! do you play any games o: - sc🎁
AYOOO INFJ 👋 that's so cool 😭 LMAO DRAMATIC AND EMOTIONAL IM HISGJELK boo seungkwan is a mood sometimes fr since it's christmas now! i'm assuming you've done your secret santa with your cousins? 👀 how'd it go! and what did you get o: we normally just go to an aunt + uncle's house and the extended family members just gather for some food and conversation 😅 OH! how i wish it would be warm here too but alas winter rly said sike 😭 - secret carat 🎁
HIIIIII it's very very nice to meet you teehee <3 and sorry for taking so long to reply omg </3 i was going to yesterday but then the inside seventeen thing came out and i ended up going insane w my giffing and slept at 3am </3333
ooh!!! fair enough </3 i played piano for around ten years and then i stopped wjejhejwn i don't really remember sheet music that much tbh </3 what songs have you been playing :o i play the trumpet (band kid </3), bass, electric guitar, ukulele, and the recorder!! OOOHHH!!! i don't think i've ever heard of that series :o what's it about and what's your favourite genre :o i generally read fantasy or slice of life! i haven't gotten back into fiction in a while and have been reading collations of essays bc i'm boring and quirky like that <3
i don't really remember but i watched wolfgang, and a couple of the collab performances! i also watched skz's first performance on it. i don't think any really stood out tbh :sob: but that may be bc i wasn't paying a lot of attention to them wwjkjme and didn't rewatch? what about you? OOHHH TIME OF YOUR LIFE IS SO GOOD OMG!! i do!! i'm currently watching (mostly crying) through The King's Affection - it's very very good ^^. but my faves would be:
1. hotel del luna
2. strong woman do bong soon
3. start up
4. it's okay to not be okay
5. weightlifting fairy
what about you??
yeah :sob: my dad had watched it and i asked him if it was any good but he was like it's really violent so idk if you'd like it, so i didn't end up watching it. it's the power of drunk hoshi tbh </3
i don't normally read angst but it was so well written so i was just Sad for like a week hwejwenenkje we probably can't go anymore bc the covid situation is getting really bad rn </3 maybe next year. thank you!! i hope you're able to visit your family!! OOOO!!!!!!! that's inch resting!! i like story based games too^^ i don't game much wheujwehjewn i only really play mario kart :sob: but i did play the sims for a bit </3 OOO GENSHIN AND ANIMAL CROSSING!!!!! i've heard of both but only attempted to play one hwjhewnjwe
it went well!! some of my cousins that weren't gonna come, ended up coming so it ended up playing out well <3 i got an album!! OOOO!!! yeah that's what we generally do to but everyone comes to our house lol wjdds did you get anything for christmas :o it's like. 40 degrees :sob: you don't want it to be warm </3
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