#OMGMGYOFKS

[loopeyfluff]

FIRST PAGE: WOW???? absolutely BLOWN AWAY BY HOW PRETTY EVERYTHING LOOKS??? The newspaper with that colour palette,,, n the font looks so NICE and the way u structured the newspaper also looks so nice??? And deuce gets a lil appearance as well (๑´▽｀๑ )) CAUSE THATS HOW COOOL HE ISSSS!!! I love the picture they chose too :D Those news photographers rlly know how 2 capture my boy well. The stripy shading in the bg is also SUCH A NICE LIL TOUCH BTW IM OBSESSED!!! I also love ur use of negative and positive space in the bottom two panels >:0 and also i like how sabo is inspecting the orange in the first page and then later u see him throwing away the orange to the seller hehehhe CONTINUITY!!! Ace looks so happy ; - ;!! Oh and I LOVE THE BACK AND FORTH BETWEEN KOALA AND SABO. U wrote them so well, and i also rlly love it when people dont write sabo as instantly remembering ace or something when he sees him in newspapers, cause like that dint happen in canon >_> ??? I also rlly like the flow of the speech bubbles! AND THE PAGE NUMBERS AT THE BOTTOM R SUPER CUTE

SECOND PAGE: deuce u frustrated babygirl they shud pay u for taking care of ace. OMG DOGGO SPOTTED I LOVE HIM!!!! i cqnt IMAGINE how frustrating it mustve been to draw the setout of the marketplace BUT U TOTALLY NAILED IT!!! LOOKS SOOO GOOOD! i love the saturated light blue for the shadows of everyone, it provides such an eyestriking lil contrast. AND LMAO THE SPADE PIRATES ALL HAVE SUCH LITTLE FAITH IN THEIR CAPTAIN HAHAHAHAHA. and I LOVE HOW EASILY SABO BLENDS INTO THE BG!!! I LOVE HOW OFF TO THE SIDE HE IS IN THIS PAGE!! LIKE HES NOT THE CWNTRE OF FOCUS UEHHAHAHAHAH. and im so inlvoe with how fast ace recognised sabo. im always conflicted on whether or not he'd take some time to notice, BUT ITS SO ADORABLE THAT HE LIKE INSTANTENOUSLY JUST KNEW. LIKE HE WASNT EVEN DIRECTLY LOOKING AT SABO OR ANYTHINT, JUST A GLANCE AND- "sabo?" oh and btw the colours of that bottom panel are GORGEOUS,,,, i love the thought bubble…

THIRD PAGE: O - O LMAOOO HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHWHWHIEJRNFJDIDJ ACES LITTLE FINGER POINTING??? BOTH OF THEIR FACES R JUST SHOCK. and wowowowo I LOVE THE ORANGE ON BLUE AND BLUE ON ORANGE COLOURS FOR THOSE TWO TOP PANELS. UGEHWHAHSH SOOO GOOD HAHAHHAHAKFIOENS. AND THEN THIS IS MY FAVE SOUND EFFECT THING, BUT THE "BOLTS" CURVING AROUND SABO AS HE RUNS AWAY??? (and throws away the orange LMAO SORRY LADY NO TIME FOR BUYIN FOOD). ITS SUH A DYNAMIC POSE N THEN THE WAY ACE REACHES OUT IN THE BG BREAKS MY HEART. WAIT SABOOO!!! anf then deuce is just leik :0 ????. URGEHHEEH THE DESCENT INTO BLUE AS THEY GET AWAY FROM THE ORANGE LIGHT OF THE MARKET PLACE INTO THE DARK ALLEYWAY IS ACTUALLY SOOO GOOD UEGEHEJDJ??? THE ORANGE ON THE BOTTOM OF ACES BOOTS,,, UEJOWDH SOOO GOOOOD???

FOURTH PAGE: so many lil details that u included in the bg to make it seem like an actual lived in alleywway,,, like did u need to add those doorways and that flower pot AND OMG CAT SPOTTING and those crates and piles of thrown away dtuff and cracked walls? no. BUT DID U AND DOES IT ADD SO MANY SUBTLE TOUCHES TO THE ENTIRE PAGE??? YESSSS!!!!! omg sabo i bet u parkoured up that garbage thjng on the bottom, i like how u can kinda see a staircase next to the wall so u can see how sabo coulda climbed up!!! omg and ace looks so small and lost with that perspectivw ; - ; where did his brother go… SABOOOOOO

|| part 1 (you are here!) || part 2 (coming soon) ||

so, did you know ace was offered a position on the warlords that he turned down? well i mean... if he had accepted, it would follow that the revs would take more interest in him, yeah? i mean, it is their job to keep tabs on the government, you'd presume that extends to warlords as well.

and as far as warlords go, fire fist is interesting.

if only sabo could work out why... then maybe the man would finally get out of his head.