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cornerverse-mlp · 8 years ago

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Also, I had to come up with a W.I.T.C.H. AU because TBH Equestria Girls reawakened my love of the Magical Girl genre and damn do I love it.

Mostly based on the events of the cartoon, since I know it best. Not a scene-for-scene remake, but does follow the main storylines of both seasons.

No name anagram though because what can I make out of T.F.P.R.A.R

Twilight is the Keeper of the Heart/Guardian of Quintessence

Pinkie Pie is Guardian of Fire

Rarity and Applejack share the Earth Element, Applejack getting control over plants and Rarity getting control over rocks.

Rainbow Dash is the Air Guardian

Fluttershy is the Water Guardian

Celestia takes over Yan Lin’s role as a previous Guardian to lead and give advice to the girls. She used to be the Guardian of Earth. She’s also only in her late twenties at most

Luna was the previous Keeper of the Heart.

She’s kind of in her Nightmare Moon phase and has basically taken over Nerissa’s role of second season villain

Also she kind of gets a redemption arc when she’s sucked into the Heart of Meridian/its equivilant

Sunset Shimmer was the previous Fire Guardian

When Luna began her Nightmare Moon Phase, Sunset was given the Heart of Kandrakar instead

Which kinda means Luna/Nightmare killed her

She’s kind became a vengeful spirit because she was angry as fuck that she got killed and is overall kind of a jerk and even though she distrusts Luna when she comes back to offer her power she takes the offer to be alive again

Speaking of she kind of mellows out after that and then comes back to life at the end and is the same age as Twilight’s group

As for the first season stuff because I went on a tangent

Sombra is totally the evil king because tbh when I wrote my headcanon for Sombra’s backstory I took some influence from Prince Phobos

Sombra gets a redemption arc tho

Like you know that part in season 2(spoilers) where the Guardians need Phobos to get Elyon and the Heart of Meridian from Nerissa? It basically goes like that except more bonding (because Pinkie can make friends with anyone given enough time) to the point where Sombra kind of gives up the idea of being evil because he could have a normal happy life

But he doesn’t get too much of a chance because someone else is a little more evil

Also: Princess Scootaloo

I was debating about putting Cadence in Elyon’s role, since Cadence is a princess and since I put Sombra as Phobos and there, but

Cadence, even if semi-mind controlled is too nice

Elyon thought her best friend, her sister in all but blood, had betrayed her by keeping her from her real family and her kingdom

Cadence wouldn’t be that angry, even when semi-mind controlled. She’d assume miscommunication and allow them to explain

Also, Cadence doesn’t have someone in the main cast she’s close to

Like, yes she’s close to Twilight, but they even in the series they are only so close.

Meanwhile, Scootaloo has all those things

She’s incredibly close to Rainbow Dash in canon, they are sisters in all but blood

And she would be angry if she thought Rainbow betrayed her in some way.

Also she’s still BFFs with Applebloom and Sweetie Belle and they totally get to know about Meridian and the Guardians and all that because do you really think these girls would keep her from her friends once everything is fixed?

they’re the ones who break through to Scoots about Sombra maybe being evil . Like, she becomes suspicious and questions a bit more but ultimately does make the mistake of trusting him)

Chrysalis is Sombra’s second in command. And totally takes over at the end when he’s ‘going soft’

Also, since Twilight’s parents are more stable than Will’s, I’m changing the story to instead of her and her mom moving to a new city, she goes to live in her brother in a new city

This also lets me combine the two ‘I have issues with my parent’s new partner and think they’re an evil monster in disguise” plots

so Twilight’s paranoid that Cadence is actually Chrysalis in disguise

Of course it doesn’t help that when Twilight and her friends attack her she defends herself with magic

Cadence realizes what’s going on and kind of stops them and says ‘use the Heart on me I’m not a monster’ and they do and she’s normal

SO they’re like “wait why aren’t you confused and how can you use magic?”

Lol guess who was the Air Guardian?

I still don’t know who the Water Guardian should be

Maybe Shining?

Also I think Flash Sentry in Caleb’s position? Leader of the rebellion against Sombra

He has a small thing for Twilight but doesn’t get an endgame romance with anyone though sorry Flash

Speaking of romances, totally gonna toss in most of my ships. Like, you think I’m not going to have Pinkie Pie and Sonata Dusk get together in any au? They totally are.

Butttttt since I have to narrow down my Twilight Poly Ships to just one character to be Matt…….

Timber Spruce because fuck you that’s why.

#MLP W.I.T.C.H. AU #Twilight Sparkle #Pinkie #Rarity #Applejack #Rainbow Dash #Fluttershy #Princess Celestia #Princess Luna #Nightmare Moon #King Sombra #Scootaloo #Applebloom #Sweetie Belle #Queen Chrysalis #Princess Cadence #Shining Armor #Flash Sentry

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princess-of-the-corner · 5 years ago

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Taking a little break from Monarch to write out some of my ideas for how Love Eater and Miracle Queen work out in the Lady Luck AU. I thought about waiting for Chat Blanc and Felix but oh well!

As the Lady Luck AU focuses on Chloé having the Ladybug Miraculous from the beginning and getting actual character development until she’s a decent person and leader of an entire team of Heroes, there is no subplot about her and the Bee Miraculous.

Other things in the AU involve the lack of a Love Square by this point(it was only a lopsided triangle to begin with, but Secret Identities have been tossed out the window), and the fact that Chloé’s parents are getting divorced as Audrey is a horrific person.

So naturally, the entire episode has to be rewritten. I have a couple ideas on how to do this, but one of the biggest ideas involves Senti!Bug, or rather, Senti!Luck sticking around a bit longer. So here we go!

After the events of the Episode ‘Ladybug’, the corresponding chapter being called ‘Lady Luck’, Senti!Luck accidentally is left existing.

This is due to a combination of the Peacock malfunctioning due to being damaged combined with the Miraculous Ladybug ability trying to ‘fix her back into existence’.

As she seems like a real person now that she’s not being puppeted by Mayura, and the fact that she doesn’t seem to have an Amok Item(I forget the technical term right now), they decide to treat her like a real person.

Before I go further, let’s discuss how ‘Sentient’ the ‘Sentimonsters’ are, along with ‘Is Senti!Luck a real person?’. And tbh, I’m going to use a computer AI metaphor.

Sentimonsters are like a program’s AI. You program them, give them enough learning capabilities and executive decision making abilities to let them do their job efficiently, but ultimately, they are just a tool.

Senti!Luck, is like this at first. Sure, she’s good at seeming like she has emotions, but she is following her Programming.

After she comes back with the Miraculous Ladybug, she is much more real, like a real person.

The crew decides to treat her as a real person, and tries to figure out how exactly to do that.

Since they’re still not entirely sure if she’s real or not, they don’t let her in on the secret identities.

Lady Luck drops her off at Chloé’s place and then later comes back as Chloé saying ‘oh Lady Luck trusts me to help you’.

Chloé even discusses it with her dad a little bit. She tells him that ‘Lady Luck trusted her to look after a friend’, and basically convinces him to pretend Senti!Luck is a distant cousin or something if asked.

Many things go into cementing Senti!Luck as a person. This all happens during what should be ‘Love Eater’.

One of the first things is a name. After all, they can’t keep calling her Senti!Luck. I’m choosing the name Astra Avalon.

Firstly, because when Senti!Bug happened in Canon, I got flashbacks to W.I.T.C.H. and Will’s Astral Drop.

Secondly, way back in the day when I was writing TOWCK, I was planning on giving Chloé a half-sister named Astra Avalon. Though at that time I had picked ‘Astra’ because I planned to make her an Akuma called ‘Star Maker’.

I’m going to call her Astra from now on in the post.

The next thing is honestly a bit of a make over

Despite being made to imitate Lady Luck, Astra doesn’t look like Chloé. There’s similarities, but between the mask and whatever Magic goes into keeping the identities, Mayura doesn’t know what Lady Luck looks like and just guessed as it would work well enough for the same reasons. Chloé and Astra could pass as related, but not identical twins.

However, they do want to minimize the chance of Hawkmoth and Mayura finding her.

This ends up being a drastic haircut and maybe a bit of hair dye, and a montage of Chloé digging through her closet and finding her an outfit.

The next order of business is seeing how smart Astra is and where to put her in school

Originally I was going to use Ms. Bustier for this, but… Kwami Buster made me switch it to Ms. Mendelieve. Maybe both work on it idk.

Anyway, they want to see what all she knows. Both in a ‘what grade level is her intelligence/learning ability?’ and in a ‘how well does she understand social norms?’ way.

They eventually figure out that she has pretty average intelligence for someone of Chloé’s age group, and a basic idea of how to act in society, but a weird blank in her knowledge on things like common phrases or popular media. It’s not a big thing, but it’s something a little noticeable.

Overall, they agree that Astra could be put in Chloé’s class, but will need some support in social interaction. Since most of the class are Heroes and know about all this, they’re all willing to chip in. Adrien is already planning a movie marathon to catch her up on things.

Cue montage of Astra loving life and being alive

The class is very friendly and understanding, and she’s enough of a blank slate that she can get along with all of them fairly well.

She’s hella curious since even if she has an understanding of things, she doesn’t quite ‘get it’ until she does it herself.

From music to food to tv shows, it’s all new experiences and she enjoys all of them with a hell of a lot of enthusiasm.

Where everything goes wrong is a combo of Lila being a fuck and Astra having a breakdown over the standard ‘oh god I’m not a real person’ thing.

Lila figures out that Astra is Senti!Luck.

As a liar herself, Lila is good at figuring out other people’s lies. She realizes something is up with Astra due to how many lies everyone else is spinning about her, and eventually finds out.

While the info is filed away for the next time Hawkmoth Akumatizes her, Lila decides to confront Astra and threaten her.

Basically, it’s a ‘you help me, and I won’t tell everyone you’re a Sentimonster!’.

Said help would be things like turning against Chloé and friends, getting any dirt Lila could use against them, backing up Lila’s lies, etc.

When Astra refuses, Lila gets all ‘come on, they might be friendly now, but what do you think will happen when they find out what you really are? Our so-called Heroes didn’t even want you around! Just dumped you on some brat with enough resources to keep you alive’.

Cue existential crisis

I mean that literally. Astra begins to question how ‘real’ she is. And to make the AI comparison again, it’s the ‘Sure I feel things, but do I really feel them or am I Programmed to?’ thing.

She also panics over the fact that Lila might be right. As far as Astra knows, only Chloé really knows that she’s just a Sentimonster. The rest of the class has been nice and friendly, but would they do the same if they knew that she wasn’t even Human? Just a Magic Construct that happens to imitate Humanity enough.

I guess it’s a little similar to the Robustus situation, but tbh there’s also the added in ‘Sentimonsters are something evil’ thing added in.

Of course this is enough for Hawkmoth to Akumatize her.

Due to the nature of Astra’s Akumatization, Hawkmoth now knows that she’s Senti!Luck

That’s bad for a few reasons.

I’m debating on Astra’s Akuma form.

Miracle Queen is still an option, being able to control Miraculous holders.

Star Maker though, I could bring her back. Star Maker has the power to create fighters out of Constellations. Think kinda like the Ursa Major/Ursa Minor from MLP. She could use the Zodiac against the Zodiac!

Eventually Miracle Queen/Star Maker is defeated.

Astra is still upset, but the Heroes decide to tell her the secret identities. They didn’t abandon her, and the ‘normal civilians’ she’d been befriending knew what she was the whole time.

She’s still a little sad that they didn’t trust her in the first place, but they explain that even if they trust her, they weren’t sure how much influence Mayura still had over her.

But Mayura had made another Sentimonster during the fight and wasn’t able to control Astra like she did with Feast.

As for what happens to Astra after, I’m not sure. I’ll have to see what happens in Season 4. Unfortunately.

Maybe she stays. After all, she’s a real person now and Hawkmoth can’t control her more than he can control anyone else.

On the other hand, he still might try something with her, so it might be better to send her away. Like the ‘My uncle lives about an hour away from the city and he can take her in’ kind of way.

Either way she is safe and happy!

As for the plot with Master Fu and the Miracle Box…

Lady Luck doesn’t have to go to him all the time because all the Heroes are permanent, so Hawkmoth wouldn’t be able to reliably make a plan that would let him follow her to the Guardian.

And even if he was just waiting and hoping she would, Astra is the only Akuma this time, so it would happen after she’s Akumatized.

Maybe Lady Luck tries to add a new Hero. Maybe Master Fu himself slips up.

Actually, so far I’m thinking that no one slips up.

Master Fu sees how far the Team has come, and especially how far Chloé has come as their leader.

He realizes that they really don’t need him anymore. The only time anyone really comes to him about something other than handing out more Miraculous is either training Chloé as the new Guardian, or Mylene visiting(Something she does so that Master Fu can still talk with Wayzz, since he misses his friend.)

And honestly, with the training there’s very little he can teach that isn’t either clearly outlined in the Book of Miraculous Bullshittery, or things she’d need to learn through experience.

So Master Fu decides to retire.

While he names Chloé as the new Guardian, she does say ‘this is a hell of a lot of responsibility for one person, so the whole team is getting part of this’. Basically creating their own Order of Guardians, in a way.

Since he’s retiring and not ‘giving up Guardianship as a last resort’, the memory wipe thing doesn’t happen.

Instead, he meets up with his girl(I forgot her name like an asshole, sorry), and they leave the country.

Chloé still has his number, just in case he’s really needed, but for the most part he’s still hella gone.

So, again, I might change some things depending on Felix and Chat Blanc, but for now…. >:3c

#ml spoilers #Lady Luck AU

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