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goddesspharo · 9 months
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I’m consumed by can’t fake what you can’t break up with. When a new chapter drops, I just read and consume and obsess. All my nights are spent in this universe — it takes me a week reading and re-reading to truly recover. And then right when it feels like I can live a normal life again, you drop a new chapter!
Please keep writing in this world or never write it again. I cannot bear the idea of never returning and no longer have the will within me to stop myself.
Oh my goodness, this is the nicest comment! Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad that you're enjoying it so much! It's always nice to hear when something you write resonates with someone. Especially since I've been having a complete blast writing it!
The plan was always to contain it within four chapters for the four seasons with the more grandiose plan to finish it before the new year, which hopefully will still happen -- but it's currently all hope since I haven't earnestly worked on the next bit yet. Knowing there's an ending forces me to make decisions instead of letting the characters languish in their bubbles being happy or sad or drunk forever so I hope that when and however it ends is satisfying for you!
There was a ton of stuff I left on the cutting room floor (...of my mind; I cut it before I could write it) because I couldn't let the last 30k chapter turn into a 50k chapter for the sake of MY sanity -- the idiots during Halloween (Hangman parked across from the front door with a bowl of fun-size candy waiting for trick-or-treaters to show up could be all of our roman empires if we dream hard enough); the number of drunk Taylor Swift singalongs that would happen after Nat, Sammy, and Halo came back half in the bag from the concert; at least fifteen more references to food celebs and 90s Aaron Spelling shows. Basically things that served no purpose except my own self-indulgence and also DOMESTICS! I will admit that I have found myself occasionally thinking "oh, what if there's an epilogue?" or "what if there's a standalone connected to this down the line?" but that always feels like such a slippery slope so I don't let myself dwell on it too long. There is a playlist for the fic, but I'm pretty sure that only I care about it.
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crguang · 17 days
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I want to let you know that I actually squealed when I saw that there was a new part of wasted w longing, so that was embarrassing. I giggled so much, love me some domestic fluff, I also gasped so hard at the ending that I started choking. can't believe you updated while I was in class so didn't see it until later.
kafka is so smug I hate her, I want to kiss her on the mouth so bad she's such a weirdo, but at the same time, I'm mad at her, I'll forgive her if she comes home early on my pulls tho, and also some kafka groveling, very excited to see that. also the writing is so good, like at the end I was questing everything about r's encounter's w kafka. and you said replying to someone else's ask that kafka cares atp. wdym atp? istg I love angst but I can't handle angsty endings being w out kafka also you said himeko is going to show up again, and I know that'll be funny. the cliffhangers are killing me, but I'm really excited for the next part, the plot is plotting. also the way at the beginning I literally said out loud, "oh she just got shot, it's okay."
the wanted poster is so funny, like whoever wrote it down must've seen footage of her shooting people as she breaks into somewhere and thought, damn, she is hot as fuck, and tbh that was my thought process when I watched kafka's trailer the first time.
hope your first day at uni was good! if you made me loose my 50/50 I'll---
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not the squealinggg thats so cute im flattered. it’s funny whenever yall say i post when yall are busy because it’s always 4 to 6 am here i have a horrible sleep schedule 😭 i loved writing the more domestic part cause that’s the first time they actually spend time together without sleeping together and it was kinda cuteee, if you ignore the getting shot part.
“i hate her i wanna kiss her on the mouth shes such a weirdo” is exactly how i feel about kafka im so glad im not alone… also, i meant that at this point of the story kafka already knows that she likes R; she goes out of her way to look out for them, she stares a lot, wants to help them through their dilemma and other stuff that’ll come later. in her mind shes not in love with them but she does like them. i think due to her closed off nature, a lot of the little hints of how she feels are in the way she looks at R and since this is written from R’s (sometimes unreliable) perspective, i mentioned how they can’t read her eyes yet so to them there’s no reciprocation right now. and now that they’re mad at her everything she does will feel disingenuous when it might not be. it’s tricky to write bc as readers i want people to be able to tell that kafka cares even when she’s being a little shit while also staying true to how R sees things. i do think it’ll become much more obvious starting from the next chapter tho cause there will be some grovelling involved lmfaoo.
also this was literally her at the end:
r: i will call the police on you.
kafka: i am so attracted to you right now
its funny, R is always making themself available for her and has been doing that from the beginning so kafka’s very used to this behavior and its the reason why she’s so fucking smug. but now she’s seeing a new side to them that she really likes. they’re standing up for themself and i think it’s a quality that she’d find really attractive in a person. but yeah it’s fun i love this series mainly because the idea mostly came from anons so i love hearing what yall think about it.
my first day at uni was nice!! im looking to getting my shit together honestly, i feel like an actual adult now so hopefully it helps with my mood as well and makes it easier for me to be productive cause i dont write fast at all. if you lose the 50/50 bc of me i’ll write whatever you want as consolation prize
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soaringeag1e · 1 year
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So Meg, I’m back 😂 and here are my chapter by chapter thoughts as I’m reading the chapters I have missed. Sit down because it’s long 😂😂 and I apologise in advance it’s a bit scattered 😂
61 oh no poor reader. But I’m glad Dean is there for her and support her 🥺
62 omg when I saw the warnings I was like Dean and the reader are going to get in this massive fight and they are going to be mad at each other and I’m not reading for it and wow they are even a better couple than I had imagined 😂😂 they are just so perfect. Could you find me a Dean please? I need one 😂 and I love the support system they both have. Your writing is soooo good!!
63 even though they didn’t get tuxes, we are soooo close to the wedding!!! I am so excited!!!! It’s sad that Dean had to go to the station but Sam being there for the wedding dress is just too cute and I loved the dress shopping. It’s just so normal and exciting
64 ok, domestic Dean is just the cutest and the best and I can’t believe we saw more of that on the show (not with a girlfriend necessarily but just doing normal stuff in the bunker. Anyways I’m digressing 😂). I am right at the moment when Bobby saw the tape and you are horrible to cut it there!
OMG I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT HOW COULD YOU MEG??!! Why couldn’t they just have a nice meal and evening?? Why did you have to ruin it!!!! 😭😭 That is literally the worst ending for a chapter and thank god I don’t need to wait a week to read the next one!! You better make it up! 😂
65 excuse me Meg but how dare you put so much suspense and anxiety in one chapter? Are you trying to kill me??!! The reader and now Dean are in the hands of this killer??!! I need more info NOW!! (And I will have them because I’m going to read the next chapter 😂)
66 I knew it!!! He has been shady the whole time! How didn’t anybody suspect him??!! Omg he is just sick. He’s absolutely crazy. I don’t think I’ve ever despised somebody in a written series as much as him.
How did it get so bad in the span of a few chapters?? 😂 omg Meg. First of all, I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again, your writing is exceptional. I’m really immersed in the story every time and I can’t let go of the chapters and this story. Second, how could you??!! It was all going well and now, we don’t know where the reader is going with the son of a bitch, Dean is bleeding in a barn, and the police is nowhere in sight 😭😭😭 I think you are trying to give us a heart attack. Third, I hope the next chapter is coming out soon because I need them both alive and having their wedding and to put this behind them. I’m too invested now!
After this massive rant, I can’t wait to read the next chapters and see how this will end - hopefully with a happy ending I’m watching you
I hope you are doing well and sending you lots of love xx Mel
Oh, my amazing, Mel! Your timing is impeccable, my love. Seriously, you have no idea how bad I needed this smile today.
All your reviews....
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1} If we could each find a Dean for each other, that would be great! I'll keep a lookout, but you need to keep a lookout for me too!
2} I'm glad you liked having Sam at the dress shopping. I thought it'd be cute, especially considering they have been friends for a while.
3} I also love domestic Dean. I think a lot of us do and that's why we get to live that fantasy life through our fics. We get to give him the life he deserves.
4} You know I love my cliff hangers {Evil laughter}
5} Of course I had to have this cute, lovey dovey moment and make everyone think that it was all going to be ok! Hahaha
Sadly, I'm afraid that you saw the last of the fluff when Dean called her at his car. I seemed to get pretty wordy and the entire thing that unravels now seemed to go on for a bit longer than I expected, so....more angst is ahead.
I don't know how you do it, but you always, ALWAYS bring a smile to my face and you make me feel like I could actually fulfill my dream someday and publish a book, or more. Even with all the sweet words and praises it's hard to believe your own stuff, you know.
Eventually, though. I will hold a hard copy of my work in my hands.
I'm glad you're home safe and I hope you had an amazing Holiday! But I am definitely {selfishly} glad you're back haha You're the best, Mel XOXOXO
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perexcri · 2 years
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Stancy is Officially out as my fav poly Jancy ship,😌 esp after this new fic of yours, which made me wiggle around like a delighted little sea slug.
Honestly, Nancy deserves to smoke some weed and admire her bf with Argyle. When’s the last time she’s gotten a break like this tbh?? Ever??
Jonathan Byers, simp extraordinaire for his gf and bf(f). (This fantastic dynamic feels a little bit like how I feel Merlin/Arthur/Gwen would have been if bbc hadn’t been Cowards(tm).) also…\o/ shotgunning shotgunning shotgunning sho—
Also, the undercurrent of Ow in regards to Jonathan’s Extreme amount of trauma? you somehow managed to thread a bit of Pain into this lovely interaction. (“He’s sick of being domestic–he just wants to be a teenager!” & “I’m fine,” he lies, and it’s an easy one to roll off of his tongue. He’d been doing it all his life.” &!!!! V much!!!!! “Secondary parent, half-mother and half-father, always up in the morning to make breakfast for his little brother, and always relegated to haunting the back of classrooms and the edges of hallways–the creep and the weirdo.” Crying screaming on the floor eating my phone bye). (Also also Jon doubting that Will needs him anymore, nonoo oh dear no he does need u I promise. Crying yelling throwing up curling into a ball. He’s always gonna need his big bro and Jon doubting that is sending off death flags which are oh dear 😭)
Argyle is just. Such a good, kind guy, and good for Jon and Nancy. Like a soothing lotion/sun screen on the burn that is their horrific lives.
“Jonathan and Nancy both stare at Argyle’s mouth, watch it catch against the joint.” 🤭hohoho honestly making me ship Both of them equally w Argyle,
“My fair little Wheeler” orz on the floor bye
If there is not at least One (1) interaction between the three of them in s5 that is even a quarter as good as this one, honestly I’m throwing tomatoes at the Duffers’ houses.
Anyway, lovely wonderful fic!! Hope you are having a good week and thank you for improving mine🥰
VEEEEE i'm glad you liked the Jarncy fic hehehe. i know it's not my typical wheelhouse, but it was so fun to write, so it's nice to hear you enjoyed it!! :D tbh the biggest compliment i was hoping for from this fic was hearing at least one person say they ship it a little more than Stoncy after reading it, so you have fulfilled my wish 😌 (no hate to Stoncy ofc lol)
LITERALLY let Nancy Wheeler smoke weed. or just something - she's going through it just as much as anybody else, and i think she deserves a chance to relax 😩
and you're so right about Merlin and you should say it louder
yeah we can't have anything nice around here without a little pain right :) idk Jonathan is a very personal character for me because i grew up as the eldest in a single-mother household, so there's a lot about his position in life that i relate to too much, hence the angst bleeding over a little into this fic. maybe someday i'll post that other Jonathan one shot i wrote! it's got plenty more of some of the stuff discussed in this one 🙃
and yeah him and Will :') listen the most surprising thing about this fic for me was realizing that, in this scenario, Jonathan would actually be in a very similar position as Mike. furthermore, I think Jonathan struggles with being needed like Mike, too. i think Mike's is more wanting to be needed and getting sidelined while Jonathan's is more having been needed for so much of his life that he doesn't know what his life would look like without being needed. and that definitely showed here :') my poor dude i want to give him a hug
...but that's what Argyle's for, right? GAH i thought the same thing that you said!! i think there's something appealing about having Jonathan and Nancy, who are both really tightly-wound and damaged by The Horrors, buddying up with Argyle, who's pretty mellow and chill (as long as he doesn't like, you know, have to bury a guy in the desert lol). i thought his character would be a good contrast for both of them, and i'm glad that came across :D
Vee i am once again saying that i am so glad you liked this fic :] i knew it was gonna be a kinda niche thing and wasn't sure how it would go over, but tbh, just hearing that you liked it makes me smile :] also this one really challenged me just for its subject matter and working with different characters, so it ended up being personally rewarding? listen i know people really liked irresistible, but it didn't particularly challenge me in any way and subsequently i didn't end up liking it as much as some of my other fics,,,like it was fun and all, but i didn't feel really connected to it. this one, though, made me feel a lot better!! it was fun to try something new and challenge myself!!
i'm definitely gonna be writing more byler next tho lol. i promise i've got stuff i'm working on. i just gotta get my shrimp brain organized 🍤
this has gotten so long :') anyway Vee it is always lovely to hear from you, so honestly, thank you for improving my week :] i hope the rest of your week goes well!! 💜
(also i'm still staring at your aftry art btw 💐💐💐)
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lavenoon · 1 year
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🌈is there a fic that you worked really fucking hard on that no one would ever know? maybe a scene/theme you struggled with?
💝what is a fic that got a different response than you were expecting?
💋when you leave comments on a fic, do you want to hear back from the writer?
I'll be nice and not include the compliment one here XD, but instead you are legally obligated to know that your writing is very immersive and I think you have good pacing, your scenes are fast when they need to be and slow when the mood of the moment calls for it <3
Same pattern as yesterday, had to wait until after a nap before I could get to these. Also hey, hey, hey - no fair, melting me when I'm vulnerable and forgot about the compliment lurking at the end of this again gfhdjs
🌈 is there a fic that you worked really fucking hard on that no one would ever know? maybe a scene/theme you struggled with?
Maybe. Maybe not quite it? But I remember being extra careful and so, SO anxious it wouldn't be good with the suggestive chapters of AU (Scratch an Itch, Domestic Bliss). It's just not something I have much experience writing, and I wasn't sure if me being flustered came from that lack of experience, the fear of falling short of what I wanted to convey, or because it was doing its job. Then the reviews came in and I figured oh yes, definitely did its job gfhdjs So it wasn't exactly a struggle, but definitely a lot more careful than I usually have to be, because my confidence was just lacking in terms of suggestive make out sessions. I'll probably still second guess that kind of stuff next time I write it, but yknow, baby steps!
💝 what is a fic that got a different response than you were expecting?
Definitely AU! Given that I currently have two fics up on my ao3 (and their spin offs), there's not really a lot of fic for me to talk about. But I very much thought that AU might get a liiittle more attention than my older one, which would have been easy because that one got. nearly nothing.
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This^? This is nearly 10x the engagement in all stats compared to my baseline, which I did not expect, at all. That is flooring me any time I think about it, and I'm so so glad I started writing again for such an engaging fandom <3
💋 when you leave comments on a fic, do you want to hear back from the writer?
Well, I sure as hell wouldn't say no! It's a tad self-serving, because I always like the confirmation that someone enjoyed the comment I left them. But I also know that there is literally no reason someone wouldn't enjoy my comments, since I try to follow all etiquette (largely ignore typos, if I do point out mistakes it's always just a little "hey psst" if it's something I as an author would rather fix early on, sandwiched between very excited live reactions and most of the time, reminders for the author to take care of themself and a little thank you!). So it's not like I need the confirmation, but if there's theories or questions in the comment, I always love hearing back from the author! It's about the interaction after all! But life is busy, people are busy, or sometimes anxious, so there are absolutely never any hard feelings involved if something goes "unanswered" - in the end, I leave a comment to let the author know I enjoyed their work, not to turn it around and get a pat on the back for it!
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kithtaehyung · 2 years
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Ryen!! I have many thoughts and feelings about Flutter but cannot articulate any of it at the moment. I have been reading and feeling more while reading other asks. Just know that your writing had my heart clenching in the best way possible. I felt many flutters let's just say while reading. I haven't experienced this much yearning or want(?) from two fictional characters in a long time. The smut was hot, but the feelings and emotions in the in-between, their growth. Yoongi just always seems so resolute and such a calming presence. My life at the moment has just been consumed by school and finding an internship in the midst of layoffs and soon to be recession(?) (I'm in school for web development/programming) has been anything but calming. I love their dynamic bc it's so pure and honest. And this comes purely from your writing. It's so poetic. From their banter, their care for one another. The mundane and domestic stuff. The CAT HOUSE. I'M YOURS! Like my gosh. Anyway I hope this makes sense. I wanted to get this out there to you before I never send it.
If you're in the US happy early holidays and I hope you're having a great week!
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oh, hibiscus!! it's very ok if you can't articulate what you want to in the moment. i'm always down to hear what you have to say, even if it's written a little or a lot later! (ball gave their forfeit review awhile after it's posted and it's absolutely wonderful! i just haven't responded yet.)
oh gosh, the flutters were kinda endless here... the yearning between those two is on another level and even though the feelings and emotions were different from forfeit, they still hit hard for me. idk why, but.. i love them a whole lot. that i know for sure.
in school for web dev and programming? holy hell you are amazing. sending you all my good energy to get through uni!! that's some good shit you're learning. i can understand the hecticness, though.. but i'm glad that 3tan is helping calm that a bit.
i am very glad you sent these kind words, babe. it's always nice to hear your thoughts! keeps me going when i need it, and your comments about their dynamic and the writing in general? all of it made me smile. i understood you! gahhh just, thank you so much.
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tharizdun-03 · 9 months
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it's over
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the series think it can make a reference and that's enough to be a joke worth of laughs.
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"he forgave me both times"
aaah... so once again, the series presents this as eriri's fault, no accountability on tomoya. tomoya didn't even need to apologize in season 1, and here it's only eriri that betrayed him and did anything wrong.
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lots of screaming. both from the red haired lady and constantly from tomoya, because loud = funny
in tomoya's fantasy he's not nice to women so megumi has to remind him to make the protagonist of his self indulgent visual novel nice to the girl, only every once in a while.
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i don't give a fuck lol
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there's some good stuff in this movie. lot of megumi (thank god, she's the best character) and some nice focus on writing and drawing, but just immediately bawling your eyes out on realizing you won't get the boy... ugh.
doesn't help that tomoya is both a bad person and insufferable in general, but it always rubs me weird with these sort of shows where it's all about "getting the boy" and that's what matters, or vice versa.
on a positive note, minimal horny camerawork. there's some fanservice maybe once or twice, but it's surprisingly restrained and even the few moments of fanservice is more tastefully done. thank you.
just like how i can't buy into the "i won't get to date this horrible guy", the other drama is megumi being jealous about... tomoya helping his friends? it's just a really big deal, and maybe that's a me thing, but it's such a minor thing to center so much of the story about.
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anyway, then heteronormative, monogamous, domestic bliss. i'm sure for saekano fans this probably delivered on fall fronts. i am not the audience though. but that's okay. glad to know what it's been about. the girls are cute. i'm moving on.
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overwatchworks · 6 years
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How about some domestic mcgenji?
This was supposed to be a Christmas fic, I just never got around to finishing it until now. Happy really late Christmas! Hope you enjoy! ^^
For once, Genji didn’t plan on having sex that night. He wanted something romantic for Christmas Eve, and sure, sex was fun and all, but this time, he wanted it to just be romance with no expectations of more. Gentle intimacy without it needing to go further. He wanted to share a nice night with Jesse casually, to show his love in the little things. 
Genji had actually made dinner for once, and it turned out surprisingly well. The fact that he had kept Hanzo on a video call the entire time to help him cook probably had something to do with the good results, though. 
He had ended up making an old recipe of his mother’s—Karaage with a ginger salad—and a chocolate cake. Jesse liked just plain chocolate the best. Genji could get behind that. The cake was a little lopsided, but it smelled good. And tasted good, because Genji had definitely sneaked a bite or two while he cooked. 
All in all, everything looked very nice set up on the table, and Genji was excited for the coming evening. He cleaned himself up before Jesse came home, eyeing himself in the mirror critically. Genji brushed his hair back with his hand, then wrinkled his nose slightly, messing it up a little more. 
Casual sexy, that’s what he was going for. Genji knew he could pull it off damn well, but for some reason, something didn’t seem right. Maybe he needed a different shirt? Putting on a bit of eyeliner might be nice. Was he fretting too much? Genji never fretted, that was Hanzo’s–
Before he could do anything else, Genji heard the garage door. He jumped slightly, smoothed out his shirt, then made his way back into the kitchen with a little bounce to his step. Jesse came through the back door and glanced around, a smile growing on his lips when his eyes settled on Genji. He was home early for the holidays.
“Well, hey there, beautiful! How was your day today?” Jesse greeted, Genji meeting him halfway and stretching up into a kiss.
“Mm, good! I spent a long time cooking dinner for us, and it actually turned out pretty well!” Genji told him proudly. Jesse grinned, setting his wallet and keys on the counter before toeing off his boots.
“Smells delicious. Lemme just change real quick, then we can eat.”
Genji nodded, then went to the table as Jesse took a turn for the bedroom. He patted the tops of his thighs absently as he waited, staring at the food. Hanzo had told him to keep it in the oven until Jesse was almost back to make sure it didn’t get cold. 
Genji wondered if he had kept it in long enough. Or maybe it had been too long? What if it was overcooked? But the oven had been off, right? Did he even remember to turn the oven off at all?
“Woah, this looks real nice, darlin’! Thank you for makin’ all this.”
Genji blinked and looked up, glancing at the oven as he did so and noticing it was indeed off.
“Yeah, of course! It’s a special night, after all.”
“Every night is a special night with you.” Jesse hummed, winking at Genji as he sat down. 
The ninja blushed a bit–still, after all this time, Jesse could charm him–then cleared his throat.
“Well, I mean extra special, then.”
“Oh yeah! I seem to recall Christmas eve bein’ a special time of year for couples…Romantic, shall we say.” Jesse teased.
“Shush, you lived there for at least two years. You know the rules.”
Jesse chuckled, Genji grinning as he started to serve some of the food.
“Thank you, hon. This is really nice, and there’s nothin’ I’d want to do more than spent tonight with you.”
“Why are you so smooth…? This is supposed to be me wooing you, not the other way around!”
“What can I say? I’m talented.”
“Yes, that you are.” Genji giggled. 
They picked up their chopsticks and began to eat, trading stories about their day. Genji would smile and laugh at the little things Jesse would tell him, and Jesse would listen carefully to whatever Genji told him, even if it was just mundane little every day things. 
When dinner was through–with no small amount of cake eaten after–they did the dishes together. Jesse would tap his hip against Genji’s every time he passed the sink to put something away, and Genji retaliated with a little flick of water sent in his husband’s direction. There was a coy smile that quirked Jesse’s lips up ever so slightly throughout the evening, Genji watching his expressions carefully after he had caught on to it. 
He was hiding something. Genji decided to say something about it after they had sat down on the couch to snuggle.
“Did you like dinner?” He asked casually, glancing up at Jesse through his lashes. The cowboy grinned, pressing a kiss to his forehead before responding.
“It was delicious, I loved it. Thank you very much for makin’ it.”
“Well, I had Hanzo’s help for most of it…”
“Still. You did a wonderful job, hon.”
“Thank you! So, what took you so long to get home?” Genji questioned, raising a brow when Jesse faltered.
“I thought I got home early…?”
“You told me last week you were getting off at three. You came home at five tonight. Where did you go? What are you hiding?”
“Damn, you’re good.” Jesse cursed lowly, Genji grinning.
“Hanzo wasn’t the only one trained in this kind of thing. So? What is it?”
“I have no idea what you’re talkin’ about.”
“You just said I got it!”
“Hon, it’s Christmas, I ain’t going to tell you what I was doin’ until tomorrow! You’ll find out then.” Jesse huffed. Genji crossed his arms over his chest and pouted.
“I hate surprises.”
“I know, but I have a feeling you’ll like this one a lot. It’s worth the wait, trust me.”
“Can you give me a hint?”
“Uhh, let’s see…It’s a present, and I picked it up earlier.”
“That wasn’t a hint, I figured that much out on my own. Come on, give me a real one!” Genji complained, Jesse chuckling before biting his lower lip in thought.
“Alright. You’re gettin’ two things. They’re soft. That’s all I’m going to say about it.”
“They’re soft?! That could literally be anything but a rock!” Genji groaned.
“Well, hint numero dos, it ain’t a rock. You’ll see tomorrow!” Jesse retaliated with a little poke to Genji’s side playfully. 
The ninja giggled, scooting closer to Jesse and staring out the window. There was holiday music playing in the background, Jesse humming to it while toying with Genji’s hair. Genji smiled to himself and closed his eyes, enjoying the peace. At least, until Jesse gasped and made to stand up.
“Woah, Jess, what are you–”
“Look, it’s snowin’!”
Genji followed his husband to the window and looked up at the sky. Sure enough, little white flakes were floating down gently. Jesse always loved to see snow, and it never failed to get a reaction like that out of him. Genji figured it had to do with growing up in a desert area, the snow being somewhat of a wonder to the cowboy. 
The ninja smiled, wrapping an arm around Jesse’s waist. They watched the snow fall, together.-The next day, Genji woke up wrapped up in more blankets than he remembered falling asleep in, and there was something missing. Someone missing. Genji lifted his head from the pillow, glancing around blearily.
“Jesse…?” He called, rubbing his eyes. Genji slid his hand into his hair, pushing it back before standing.
“Jesse? Where are you…?”
Genji shuffled into the living room after putting on some fuzzy socks, pulling the sleeves of his hoodie down over his hands. The Christmas tree cast a warm glow over the still mostly dark area. A glance outside showed Genji that there was a thick layer of snow over everything, and it was quiet on the street. 
Genji looked around the room and into the kitchen, crossing his arms over his chest. No one was around.
“Jess?”
Genji startled at a sound coming from the sunroom, whipping around to face it in a defensive stance. Sinking down lower, Genji snuck over to the door. Peeked through the window. He frowned, straightening.
“Jesse?”
Said cowboy looked up, a smile growing on his face
“Heya, darlin’! Just in time! Took me a little longer to get this ‘cause of the snow.” Jesse told him happily, motioning to the big box at his feet. 
Genji’s eyes dropped to the box. It was wrapped with a shimmering green wrapping paper with a red bow on top. And then it moved. Genji’s brows furrowed.
“It moved.” He announced, Jesse putting his hands on his hips and standing up taller.
“Yup!”
“Okay, just making sure you knew.”
“Mhm!”
Genji stared down at the box.
“Well?” Jesse motioned again, raising his brows.
“Well, what?”
“It’s yours, that’s what! Open it!”
Genji was about to respond when the box made a suspicious sounding squeak. The ninja squatted down in front of the box. It had holes in it. The box moved again. The pieces fell together.
“No. No…No way.” Genji murmured. He lifted the lid of the box, gasping and dropping it when he saw what was inside.
“No way!! No way no way!!” He squealed, hands clapping over his mouth. 
Two puppies–an all black German Shepard and a husky–stared up at him with matching red bows on their collars, wiggling around the box.
“No way, Jesse!! I thought–I can’t believe–”
“Now, I know we just wanted one, but they were the last two from the litter at the shelter, and I couldn’t just leave one all alone there. So, there’s one for both of us!” Jesse announced, Genji picking up the husky with another squeak.
“Oh. My. God!!!”
He pulled out the other one and carefully set them down next to him, Jesse sitting across from him.
“I told you they’d be soft.”
“They’re so cute, oh my god!!”
The puppies wandered around, Genji reaching out to pet them any time they even came relatively close while Jesse made sure they didn’t get into anything they shouldn’t have.
“How did you get them here?” Genji asked, the german shepard sniffing his leg. The ninja picked it up and held it to his chest, cooing at it softly. 
“I picked them up this mornin’. The shelter let them stay the night so I could surprise you.”
“They’re so, so cute…” Genji whispered. He pressed a kiss to the puppy’s head, and Jesse smiled.
“Well, I’m certainly glad you like them. The one you’re holdin’ is a girl, and the husky here is a boy.” Jesse told him, wiggling his fingers in front of the husky. 
He laughed when the puppy yipped and chased after them clumsily, Genji giggling and letting his puppy down.
“Do they have names?”
“Yeah! The husky is Shay, and the Shepard is Lucy.”
“Awww, those names are really nice! Hello, Lucy and Shay! You’re our puppies now, so expect to be loved tons and spoiled!” Genji told them happily, watching their tails wag as they wandered around in delight.
“You wanna take them inside? I set up a little pen in the dining room.”
“Really?! I didn’t even notice!”
Genji scooped up the German Shepard again, holding her close as he followed Jesse inside. He smiled at the puppy in his husband’s arms, the little husky looking around with perked ears and a wagging tail. 
The dining room was sectioned off with a little gate and some towels, two crates filled with blankets and plenty of toys sitting in the corner. Jesse set Shay down, Genji letting Lucy join her brother. They dragged some toys over, Genji stepping over the gate and sitting down to watch them.
“I love them so much!” He squealed, Jesse leaning over and pressing a kiss to his forehead.
“Good! It’s about time we got some pups, we’ve been wantin’ a dog for ages.” 
“They’re perfect, Jess. Thank you.”
“You’re welcome. Merry Christmas, darlin’.” Jesse hummed. 
Genji turned his head to give the cowboy a proper kiss, smiling into the press of their lips.
“Merry Christmas.”~~
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starboundanon · 2 years
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Fuck you fuck you fuck you (affectionate)
How dare you write How To Domesticate so well T_T Like in others' hands it may just be all ooc stuff but justified b/c of Luke's gender but you still keep Luke true to himself, he's just...in some Circumstances. It's so wonderful to see Luke more in his right mind in the recent chapter, scheming and being defiant and all (and it'll be nice to see him back with his father and Din as well...). And you're a good writer flat-out, too, I'm always excited when I see you update
Can't wait to see how Luke having Grogu changes things! I'm sure Din will be enamored in short order, especially if/when he sees Luke happy with Grogu ("My riddur,,,with an adopted foundling,,," *the most Mandalorian of tears* *scoops them both up in his armored arms*), and while Vader may take a bit longer to warm up ("Someone /else/ trying to steal my son's affections, ugh." *smashes many things with the Force*) he'll see Luke happy too and accept it.
Thanks for writing! Brb gonna be in pain and on the edge of my seat until next Sunday
♥️ What a joy it was waking up to this lovely ask, anon. I’m very glad you liked the chapter; in-character Luke and creepy Gideon were both a lot of fun to write, so I’m relieved it was enjoyable to read.
I teased quite a few months ago that Gideon would be wholly unprepared for the chaotic hellstorm that is Luke Skywalker, and I’m stoked to reveal all the wonderful ways this “helpless Omega” fucks shit up. Grogu helps quite a bit, but I think it’s going to be cathartic to watch Luke cause wanton mayhem after 60,000 words of being under total Alphan control, lol. It’s going to be an Adventure and if I’m honest, I’m probably looking forward to Sunday as much as you are.
Thank you for this lovely comment, you brightened my whole day. 💋
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1. 2, 3, 11
1. describe your comfort zone—a typical you-fic.
i mean, i've said this before, but i like low-stakes, conversational stuff. there are no monsters or murders or other mayhem that needs to be solved. just people thinking about what they're going to do with their pretty normal lives. music, food, and maybe dancing. probably dancing.
2. is there a trope you’ve yet to try your hand at, but really want to?
i'm not sure! maybe a more earnest attempt at enemies to lovers. it's not bad by any means, but as you know, i really prefer romances that come out of friendships (or, more specifically, friendships that were almost always gearing up to be more). like, someone could very obtusely read lucy and will as an enemies-to-lovers ship, but they're absolutely not. they were always best friends! they had tin can telephones! they depended on one another! the only thing "enemies" about their relationship is that lucy pretends like she's not in love with him, which sometimes leads to some cold or insensitive comments, but in this case, she's really more of an enemy to herself. this answer really got away from me, but all of it is to say that maybe i could give genuine enemies to lovers another try. i don't see it happening on this blog, though. but maybe with emma.
3. is there a trope you wouldn’t touch with a ten foot pole?
i'm not a fan of the "romance was started on a bet" thing. it's dumb. i don't like it. i suppose there are better incarnations of it than others, but on the whole, it's not appealing to me at all. yes, i know that the very first iteration of lucy and will got married because their best friends dared them to. but that was different. they wanted to be together, and they were looking for any external excuse to do the embarrassingly domestic thing they already longed for. it's not the same thing if you're both in on it! however: i will say that i'm glad that this rendition of lucy and will get married without a dare. it's nice.
11. is writing your passion or just a fun hobby?
i mean, it's a passion. it's what i do for a living, and that's not the kind of job you choose lightly or because you don't know where else to go. i don't necessarily make any money writing stories, but i do sit down and professionally research/crank out words. they're all about movies and american history, but it's still all writing (and it's still all very, very connected to the work i do in this space). so even though i'm not actively seeking out formal publication of some story involving these characters, they're part of my passion. i think about them all the time. i think about them as characters on the fringes of my academic research, like they're the ones showing me what their teen years were like as mall-going film spectators. it's a fun, personal, and revealing way to further animate and anthropomorphize my scholarship (literally my life's blood), and it's a passion i can't give up.
it reminds me of the first of three creative writing classes i took in college. there was a student in the class who waxed poetic about how writing was his escape, and even though it probably shouldn't have, it made me angry. i was mad that he thought writing was just an escape and that we were all here for the escapism, for our own personal entertainment. and it's not like i don't feel entertained by writing stories, and sometimes, i do turn to these characters in times of personal unrest. but writing is not, in general, an escape for me. it's who i am. if i were to escape from it, then there would be no more me. and i want there to be me.
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hiimsociallyawkward · 3 years
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his father's son
ayoo back again. these are always so much fun to make because otherwise it's me just yelling at my ipad of everything i'm thinking while exercising and singing show tunes and that's never fun. basically, all of my thoughts while watching his fathers son. hi bestie @lady-ofmagic-andstars
OH
IS THIS WHAT I THINKI IT IS
KNIGHT RUNNING?
CAMELOT RED WITH THE CAPE FLUTTERING?
PLEASE
SAL;DFJSADLKFJASLDKFJASLDF
KNIGHT MERLIN
HE ACTUALLY LOOKS SO GOOD HOLY CRAP
ASLJSALFASD AND HIS FACE WHEN THEY FIGURE OUT THAT THAT THIS IS AN ATTACK
STOP THE EPISODE JUST STARTED 🥵🥵🥵
omg merlin is still wearing the cape wtf he looks so good pls bbc have mercy
go away now agravaine.
let me relish in the joy of merlin wearing a cape
damn
you're welcome for this btw 😎😎
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stop 😭😭 not arthur thinking that he's not worthy
ok i wish knew arthur knew his destiny but also i know why he can't know but i just don't want him to be sad because he's doubting himself yk???
i actually hate agravaine actually stop i feel like it's harsh but drop dead please 🤪
arthur is so good he just wants peace. agravaine please stop you're making him doubt everything that he is
i wish arthur listened to merlin but after watching this ending i can appreciate it
'i can't just kill a man in cold blood' 🥺🥺
arthur don't push him away he's just trying to help 😪
merlin has his blankie 2x this episode and you better believe that i'm commenting both times
arthur is just. i feel so sad for him sometimes. he's still so young and he has to rule a country now and just-
i get why arthur is doing what he's doing and such but i'm still sad.
alskdjfaslkdfjasdf jeez arthur not knowing abt merlin's magic is just. wow this episode is starting off strong 🤪🤪
ARTHUR DON'T BE MEAN 'stick to what you do know'. i mean. fine i'm just sad. SOMEONE TELL ME WHY I'M SO SAD SO EARLY ON IN THE EPISODE IT JUST GETS WORSE I NEED TO STOP
agravaine please leave now
ok that was hot how arthur walked in after the fact though. 'arthur pendragon. pop off'
arthur just wants peace i'm so sad he doesn't want to kill him but jsalkdfjsal;dkfjasdf
watching spn i watch the beheading a lot so i was expecting it but this is merlin haha
GWEN
WHY IS SHE THE BEST I ACTUALLY LOVE THEM TOGETHER. fvck you agravaine. actually die. please STOp
ok so merlin says 'dont push your friends' and while arthur says that he doesn't need anyone, at least he doesn't say that merlin isn't his friend. it's the little victories 😭
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these castles are actually gorgeous
agaravaine please die now. stop
you manipulating arthur by claiming these things will make arthur into a good king is just making me so sad
fricken 'appropritate person' aalskdfj;alskdjfasldf
i literally just want arthur to be happy
dude i'm like 13 mins in and i'm angsting so hard over this
'a matter of the heart'🥺🥺
agaravaine die please :,)))))))
ok i'm so sad for arthur
he's still so young and he has the weight of his entire kingdom on his shoulders. he just wants to be a good king for his citizens and he wants peace and every good thing is just taken from him. he doesn't want to kill caerleon. he wants to marry gwen. and we have FREAKING AGARVAINE. this is why we can't have nice things.
ok the arthur using merlin as a punching bag transitively but also literally?? idk my head is blank. but like; merlin is letting himself be used as a punching bag and also it's his 'duty' to let arthur use him as a punching bag? idk idk thoughts?
stfu i don't want these white old men saying long live the king
pls chill
alright alright morgana
she is actually p good at getting onto annis's side so i'll give her props for that
oh shoot kneeling down to the queen? this is a power move but not a power move yk?
CLOAK
ok this is dumb but i love seeing merlin meander around with his little chores
ok what is bbc thinking when they have the "oh i'd never sleep in a bed with merlin" am i supposed to laugh? well i'm not. alrighty then
gwen :,) look at her in her pretty dress
you're breaking my heart right now arthur
you're BREAKING GWEN'S heart right now arthur
laksdjf;laskdfjasdlfkj I. JUST. WANT. THEM. TO. BE. HAPPY. please i need to read fanfic i'm angsting too hard over this
you tell him gwen. you're a badass and arthur is a sadass
i will not take gwen hate or slander
oh frick i was voted onto my school's hoco court so basically i had to walk across the football field and i felt so awkward and arthur walking down the step while everyone stares at him; i wonder if he feels as awkward as i did
LMAO 'he's not alone gwen' and pan to the arthur standing on a cliff alone?? pls
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aw the domesticity 🥺
leon ruffling merlin's hair and that clink was such a good clink
where were these knights last episode. i'm suing
saj;flasjslad and arthur just loking at them fondly pls. he's so sweet i love him
'he's our king' that line makes me feel stuff
arthur sdfsd;as i just want him to be happy
MERLINS BLANKIE. WHY IS HE SO CUTE
bruh 💀 i laughed at the pure absurdity of him tripping over the tent
ok ok you know that vine 'two bros chilling in a hot tub 5 ft apart bc they're not gay?' that but 'two bros, chilling in 2 separate tents 5 ft apart bc they're not gay'
was- was that supposed to be a slap?
arthur is so earnest here and i love him he's the sweetest
sa;ldkfjsldfa arthur being protective over merlin
annis is such a badass. actually queen energy here. literally
merlin saying that they're friends again and arthur not denying it :,))))
these knights are so honorable
stfu agaravaine
'only one person who is just an honorable... ME' - arthur pendragon. HAHA sorry i cackled at this
agaravaine. i stg if you look at morgana like that i'll actually gank you
you absolute freak pervert person
alright ik morgana is evil and everything but i stan her improvement in magic
like- can merlin please get on with learning more magic??
as;dlfkjasdlfkja THE RING. dude i can't rn
merlin saying 'camelot needs you alive', i'm going to say yes.. but also if we swap out 'camelot' with 'i' then this is just a perfect insert line for fanfics :,)
THANK YOU OLD FRIEND. PLS you can't do this to me
aw when arthur asks if merlin is ready and merlin says ready
dude this episode is making me a lot more sad than it should
dude what is annis's champion. like look at his shoes??? they're leather?? literally stab him in the foot and we're golden.
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youre welcome for the feet pics ;)
ok idk abt you guys but i can't write fight scenes with swords that well so i just base fights off tv and stuff and if you want inspo this is a great fight to write
legit the first battle with arthur and lancelot in the courtyard? yea i stole that
omg even with the champion is on his knees he's still taller than arthur??
alsjfalskdjasldfkjas ARTHUR AND MERLIN MEETING EACH OTHERS EYES AND ARTHUR NOT KILLING ANNIS'S CHAMPION
dude the trope of 'you make me want to be a better person'?? please i live for this stuff
ok the knights saying long live the king? i love that
alright alright annis&arthur
annis is ACTUALLY queen energy i love her. i love her pop off queen
oh shoot annis hit morgana where it hurts. bring up uther that's right queen
oh yes more castle pics 🥵🥵🥵
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a aaw the ceremony for them
merlin and arthur are PALS i love them togehter
stop. there are so many words but i'm so glad they're lads
arthur is lying so awkwardly on that bed HAHA
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DUDE THIS IS SO PRETTY AND CUTE AND OH MY FRICKEN ALSKDFJALSDJFASDLFKJASDL. alrighty then
yes arthur you're a dumbass you're lucky that gwen is taking you bad she's a frickin badass biatch who doesn't need you
alright arthur say what you mean why don't you
are we.. are we gonna kiss rn
THE SOUND TRACK PLEASE I LOVE IT. THE ROMANCE SWELL I ACTULALY LOVE IT
THEY'RE SO PRETTY TOGETHER
i love arthur in his night clothes and his bare feet. like that just makes it feel so much more domestic and homely and they love each other and just everything they're actually everything. THEYRE SO CUTE.
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ANYWAYS i'll be back next week to endlessly rant about a servant of two masters. thanks i love you bye 😘
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secretsandwriting · 3 years
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This is what won as well as responses to almost if not all the comments left.
After this I'll make the new one to go over some of the options you guys brought up to refine it.
Ok, so first here are the things that are done and will be in the next one.
Y/n will be a vigilante. (83.3% voted yes)
Enemies forced to work together (76.7% voted yes)
Enemies to lovers (76.7% voted yes)
Dating to stay undercover (53.3% voted yes, 23.3% voted its fake dating, thats always an option)
Fashion (76.7% voted Fashion)
People might die. (36.7% voted just not the batfam and co, 26.7% voted no please let everyone live, and 26.7% voted maybe as long as I don't like them)
Angst response is easier to show then to type out.
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So now were on to the three questions where you could type your answers.
Things you don't want.
+ means there different requests I put together
Stalker ex boyfriends + SA and yanderes + Crazy ex + Allusion to s*xual *ssault + dark themes, r@pe, abuse, cheating + S**ic*de. It's a really bad trigger for me. If it ends up in play, trigger warning in advance.
First off, I don't really want to do any of these and I know I've done some of them before so I get why you're bringing it up. I'm actually trying to avoid them more now because its not the best for me to be writing them and all that.
As for the dark themes, its based off DC so I can't promise that not coming up as for trigger warnings, I'm not the best at them but I do try to put them before any part that has things in them so that's a given. But for the most part the only ones of these I see happening is the dark themes and those would mostly be the normal Gotham things.
Pet’s Dying, My pets dying lol
I mean, I figured out a way to help stop that so you don't have to worry about it.
Really gritty violence?
The nice thing about smau is that people don't normally post that type of thing on social media, escpecially if your trying to keep your identity secret. Also I don't like how I write things like that so I try to avoid it. There might be mentions of it happening but I doubt I'll ever go into too much detail on it.
SLOW BURN LIKE NO SIS I CAN'T HANDLE THAT
Well, since undercover dating won there won't be too much to slowburn.
If it is enemies to lovers, please don't make them too antagonistic
No this would be my favorite version of enemies to lovers. They may be enemies but they know that the other isn't actually that bad but they have pride so its really just petty in general.
IF YOU KILL THE MAIN CHARACTER AGAIN IM COMING FOR YOUR KNEECAPS
Jokes on you I took my own knee caps
jason being a whore
I love this but you don't want it which almost makes me sad but ok anon. I'll try not to make Jason a whore.
No kids: just everyone being young and living it up without being too idk domestic?
Ok, idk how to avoid making it too domestic but I'll try.
Anything you do want?
Having to live together. Cohabitation
Easy. I got you anon.
Titus and co as well as Jason bestie + bat cow 💕 + reader may be enemies with dick but reader and damien have a brother-sister bond
These three kinda go hand in hand and I like all of them.
Soulmate au? Secret dating?
Probably not soulmate au and secret dating would have to be a side relationship because Dick and Y/n would be fake dating. So I could do it, but I need another couple to do it with.
Stupidly cute fluff + happiness maybe + Some sweet domestic fluff is always nice :)
Already wanted all of these in it, so you three are thinking on the same wavelength as i am.
SASSY PET RACCOON LIVING HIS BEST LIFE , FAKE DATING where maybe ONE of the batfam still don't believe that they are dating and try everything to prove that they aren't which leads to Dick and reader to try absolutely anything to convince everyone
I love it. Thank you. However the pet raccoon isn't confirmed yet as there were a bunch of other options people put in so I'm going to have that one run again.
john mulaney quotes
THE FACT I NEVER THOUGHT OF THIS I TRULY SAD. THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME!! THIS WILL DEFINITELY HAPPEN
Flustered Dick, even if lowkey + Dick's ass
I'm combining these simply because together, they give me some great ideas.
y/n having literally EVERYONE wrapped around her finger (maybe one exception idk)
Ok, but really. This is a great idea. Everyone just loving her but one of them sitting in the corner like. "Idk man, something about her isn't right..." Proceeds to sip drink.
CAR CHASE CAR CHASE And maybe slowdancing in the rain
So these were sent in by the same person. I like both! I like both a lot. I just figured out how to do a car chase in smau so its all good!!!!
Soft, moonlit whispers as one of them bleeds deeply + Dicks reaction to love interest being hurt, badly. I always love that. + fluff, and angst (maybe reader getting injured really badly)
I might get in trouble for this, but I do like the ideas... A lot...
More action
I'll try! I've found it a little hard with smau and I'm not the best action writer but I do want to add more action so I'll try to figure out how to do more.
Anything else or is it all covered?
pls for gods sake, for my sake, for your sake, don't kill the pets
Ever since I got this, it was one of the first so its been a little while. I keep wondering if its a threat? But again, pets dying isn't planned. I should have enough to go for plot so that there is no need to kill pets.
A lil bit of CRACK just batfam crack in general oh and maybe BATCOW making an appearance
The only problem with batcow, is pinterest doesn't have many pictures of cows that look like they could be pets because there are rarely people with them so thats why batcow hasn't shown up. Since I have more time to plan this one, I'll look for more options and see if I can find any.
what if, and hear me out, we made it gay🌈? or, at least, masc fem reader?
No, simply because I'm not comfortable writing it as the main relationship/character. I've tried before and I didn't like it in the least and scrapped a week work. So If I tried I doubt I would finish it, if I did, it wouldn't be good because I would probably just give up part way through. So I can definitely do ships and all that that aren't the main but for some reason every time I've tried to do it as a main relationship, I hate it. Sorry!
it would be cool to have more poc or lgbtq rep
I'm actually planning for more poc to happen in the current one. I noticed lack of poc not long ago and confused myself as to why so there will definitely be more representation.
As for lgbtq, I'll try. I was planning on trying to have at least one ship or something because I haven't. But as long as its not the main relationship I can do it so that I'll at least post it.
kiss ily muah
I love you too! muah! I really needed this, thank you!
NO KIDS PLEASE AND THANK U
Ok, No kids and you're welcome.
If there is an instance of fashion, could they help each other get ready, and laugh and joke a lot?
You genius you! Of course I love it!
Nope everything’s perfect! love from yours truly fuzzycloudsz <33 + All covered + All good! + We good + That's all. I love your stuff. + its covered !!!@ cant wait!!! + All good
I'm glad I got everything then! Thank you guys! I'm glad you like my stuff and that your excited for the new one!
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I'm sure others will ask this but what are you thoughts on the episode of SCK?? I love your in-depth analysis lol. I personally loved it!!! Also can I just say that the edser/hanker chemistry is off the charts lol. If this was the first episode I watched ever, without subtitles, their scenes would be a giant neon sign that says "THESE CHARACTERS ARE MADLY IN LOVE!!!". Eda was beyond cute/in love/adorable in this episode with serkan, girl has got it bad and I wish she didn't have her stupid grandmother and these insecurities in the way ahhh. I really love the Ayfer/Aydan duo, they're fun when they're together and Ayfer wasn't annoying like the last few EPs. Also, Balca can go choke lol, I'm so glad Serkan didn't fall for her trap for him to stay over!! He was like nah come to the party (my girl is waiting!!!). Was serkan about to tell Eda that he had to stop by her house? He seemed really nervous. ANYWAYS, I love EdSer and am going to go watch their scenes 1000x before next week 😭🥰
Thank you! I love Edser too!!!!  Like you, I enjoyed this episode, though it was despite some of the narrative issues (that I posted about here.) There were good, meaty Edser scenes, which is why I watch this show. Once again I'll start with the non-Eda/Serkan thoughts and then get to the feelsy stuff at the end.
Babaanne's introduction did not disappoint. The actress has the right energy for the role. I guess we now know why Eda has been adamant about cutting her out of her life, Babaanne is next level controlling and vindictive. We'll have to see how she develops and what her endgame motives are. Does she want her revenge more than she wants her granddaughter and daughter in her life? Or does she think if she wins and arranges everything including an advantageous marriage for Eda, Eda will eventually go along and decide it's awesome and reconciliation will come about that way? *evil laugh* She doesn’t know her granddaughter at all if she thinks that’s a possibility. 
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I enjoyed her non-Balca scenes, especially when she was going toe-to-toe with Eda. That scene in Serkan's old upstairs office was intense, both actresses really brought it and kudos to Eda staying true to her defiant character. No one pushes her around. Prepare yourselves to see her waver a bit, I'm sure it's quite jarring to see your loved one in jail and know that he's there because of you, but she'll get to the point of fighting beside him. I have no doubt.
It was nice to see Ayfer protecting Aydan and Seyfi, it made for some great comedy and it was a good change after all of Ayfer's annoying, unrelenting negativity in general and about the Bolats. We'll see what happens between the two now that they appear to be vying for Chef Alexander's attention. Nesilhan just cracks me up when she's portraying Aydan play acting, the stilted voice she takes on is always hilarious to me, like when Ayfer was introducing "Aisun" to Serkan.  As we move forward, though, I want to see some badass Aydan. She  was introduced to us as a force of nature, so I hope we see that woman, a woman who will go to the mat for her son and Eda, emerge at some point. No hiding from Babaanne long term. Everyone needs to gear up to fight!
Peril and Engin got married! Their scene at home was really well done and gave me a bit better insight into them and why they might work. The only thing I was disappointed about here was that Serkan was not their witness. He counts them as some of his only friends and they didn't call him? Come on, show!  They could have easily structured the ep to have him get the call while there was chaos at his loft that morning and it would have been the perfect excuse for him to grab Eda and head to the wedding leaving the moms and Babaane to Chef Alexander.  It wouldn't have changed anything about the episode because Eda still could have gone to do her thing after the wedding and everything else would have been the same, except it all would have had a bit more heart. Missed opportunity there. 
I've decided that Ferit is a catch. At the beginning of the show he was just so naïve, that he seemed foolish, but he's really turned into a sweet, upstanding man. You hold on to him, Ceren. The irony in his relationship with Serkan is just outstanding to me, because ALL of this started because Serkan was willing to upend his own life (and Selin, Ferit and Eda's) will the sole goal of keeping Ferit out of his business, and now here we are 24 episodes later, Selin is long gone, Eda is the love of his life, and Ferit has turned into a solid, trust-worthy business partner and friend who is putting Babaanne in her place on the first day. Love to see it. 
Balca, that snake just gets more unhinged as we go along. Good GAWD. WTF is wrong with her? Her eventual comeuppance better be big. I'm really to the point that I can't enjoy any scene that she's in, it's just too maddening, because neither Serkan nor Eda are taking her seriously enough. Which I realize they don't know what we know, but dang I hope Serkan is finally connecting the dots because her behavior is not normal. As Eda says, who gives a gift like that to their boss? Who calls their new boss instead of the police when there's an intruder in the house?  By now he should be able to figure out she's manipulating him.  
Also how was she not daunted when she called and Eda was there?  What did she think would happen when he came to get the gift when he had Eda to get home to? On top of everything else she's shameless and delusional.  As for the gift, that was creepy AF. Did she seriously think that her boss, who she's known a week, would be romanced by that?  Or any man for that matter? Did Selin give her the impression he was so arrogant that this would be the perfect thing for him? As much as I want less of her on screen, I would like to know the thought process behind that embarrassing monstrosity. Because it was not a savvy move. But the good news is that no one was more creeped out by it than Serkan Bolat. It seemed to really unsettle him, which it should. It was nice to see Eda getting over her jealousy, perhaps that came with her decision to try and move forward. Before she was in this state of flux, deep-down wanting Serkan to be hers, but not being able to admit that and feeling an outside threat during that confusion. 
I saw some criticism of Eda because she was openly mocking and dismissive of Balca. However, while I agree her behavior was a tad immature at times... Balca was totally asking for it.  She's been at the company for mere days and her weird, manipulative, obsessive behavior is totally inappropriate. Also if she didn't take a hint from Eda opening mocking her, Eda picking out her gift from Serkan, Serkan deferring queries about his NYE plans to Eda, Eda being at his house when Balca called, I think we can safely say that Balca in unaffected by any of Eda's behavior, thus Eda isn't hurting anyone. While Balca is over here, claws out, trying to start a war. Balca is the villain here, not Eda for recognizing and making fun of it.
Despite the emotional inconsistencies between Eda and Serkan in this episode, during one scene they were hot, the next, one or the other was cold without rhyme or reason, there were many great conversations. I really enjoyed their conference room scenes in particular. Serkan confident and calming her down, Eda being enraged by Babaanne, but listening to him and letting him calm her down. 
His little Eda Bolat coffee cup gag was priceless, he did succeed in both diverting her and flirting with her in one suave move. Also a nice bit of foreshadowing there, which there was a lot of this episode. Not just this and the bouquet catch, but also every single one of their domestic scenes. 
As I said in this post, the rewrite, or whatever happened this episode, did cause some pretty big emotional inconsistencies from scene to scene. I know most people loved the scenes when Eda went to find Serkan, but it was a little whiplashy for me.  We go from Serkan being calm and collected and happily flirting with her about being Eda Bolat at the office, to a short time later him being moody and standoffish with her at his house? It's understandable that he would be upset at her suggestion that she leave the company, but I would think the man that broke her heart for her own good, would understand why she might think of  leaving in order to get rid of someone who is threatening him! 
It just felt like a weird time for him to hit his threshold with her, especially since this was when they were supposed to be heading to Paris (huge writing fail that there was no "Oh I guess we have to postpone Paris" throwaway line).  However, perhaps that was accelerated for him in the face of a real threat?  Like if it was just another day he's fine with her waffling and their little contract game, but he feels in his bones that this is go time and he needs to find out if she's ready for what's coming?  (Look at me finding reasons for the inconsistencies as I answer this ask, lmao).
Then the shaving scene was interesting. She starts by saying "Leaving was a dumb idea, I'm still here, I'll be by your side," which YAY and seems to me to be a huge step forward for her.... but then he doesn't feel it. Why exactly, didn't he feel it?  So then she transitions to the biggest head scratcher of the episode for me, and I really hope it's a translation fail. She basically references the movie they saw and says,  "If I could erase all memories of you, I would." Um... what? Is she really saying to him she wishes they never met? I sure hope there was some modifier in there, like "bad" memories only or something. It seemed way harsh and inconsistent with their feelings for one another. However, once he starts talking about being a machine before meeting her and his heart being too heavy without her, the dialogue is pretty great. He really bares his soul and she reciprocates with intimacy.  The second half of this scene is absolutely lovely. 
The visit to Aydan's house was interesting.  At some point I'm gonna need Aydan and especially Ayfer to step up when it comes to Babaanne.  Ayfer ran scared the whole episode and it's just not fair of her to leave the burden on Eda. Hopefully, she'll get there. There was a reason Babaanne told Eda not to tell Ayfer about the threats, and threatened harm to Serkan and family if she did so. I'm guessing Ayfer may be better equipped to deal with her mother than was suggested in this episode. The conversation about Eda running from her grandmother as a child and losing the bracelet was very affecting and well done, and thankfully Serkan was out of his sulky mood and in full-on supportive boyfriend mode. Phew, good to have you back, Serkan.
That throne Babaanne brought in was something else. Worth a good laugh. However, I feel like it highlights a few cracks we've already started to see in Babaanne's scary façade. First, there's the one I just talked about, with Babaanne not wanting Ayfer to know what she's up to, so we now know who might be successful in opposing her or might know things that could shut her down.. her daughter. Then this ridiculous throne move had to be her way of unsettling everyone, but as we see that fails with Serkan. He's pretty unflappable when it comes to her nonsense antics. 
Then Babaanne singles out Balca as her ally, which on one hand, it was astute of her to figure out who was the outsider, ripe for the picking, but she straight up choose the wack job, who let's face it, is not going to be all that competent of a foot soldier for her, because she has no allies and she's not in anyone's confidence. Plus she made that critical error with the present being so off-putting to Serkan. Balca might be able to cause problems, but she can’t get Serkan to transfer his affection for Eda onto her, so her usefulness here is limited. Babanne needed to try and fool someone like Melo, Ferit or Leyla. Prey on the nice ones who might try to be accommodating just so everyone gets along. 
Anyway, I loved the Edser scenes in the office, he brought her lemon water! My heart.  And I loved the meeting with the inner circle. Serkan has a plan! Of course our boy does, he wouldn't be Serkan Bolat if he didn't. It's always fun to see how much they all trust him to lead them through these tough times. He will once again emerge victorious. It just may take some time on this one
Note Blaca wasn't invited to that meeting, someone already can sense she can't be trusted. In the meeting later with Babaanne, I loved how Eda was sitting next to Serkan at the head of the table, totally squared off against her grandmother. That blocking was not by accident. It showed them facing her. On the same side. Together. United. That's what we call foreshadowing and that's how they're ultimately going to defeat her. Together. 
It's interesting to me that earlier in the day when Eda tells him maybe she should leave the company he gets upset, but when she shows up at his house and straight up says they can't be together, he's completely calm and is his normal confident self, talking her into staying the night with his usual ease. I'm thinking her manic rambling about him getting tired of her and her grandmother separating them was just too obvious of an emotional spiral after an exhausting day (that lasted 47 years and multiple wardrobe changes) so he didn't take any of it to heart.
As for the reason she needed a place to stay, WTF is Ayfer doing letting Babaanne stay in their home??  Kick her out for the love of God. I don't mind, since it gave us this fabulous sleepover, but come on woman, at one time you were strong enough to remove your niece from her which could not have been easy, where is your backbone now? Find it. Fast. 
LOVED LOVED LOVED every second of domestic Edser. How cute are they? Serkan wheeling her dinosaur suitcase was so adorable. And how cute is it that he bought hot chocolate for her? And THEN, THEN when they went to look at the stars? My heart melted clean out of my chest when he said, "I'm already looking at the most beautiful star."  Remember in 13 when he asked her, "How are you real?" and she basically told him to be careful or she'd get spoiled and expect that kind of romance all the time? Well apparently the romantic robot has an endless capacity to generate heart-stopping one-liners so she really needn't have worried. 
Eda's phone call with the girls was another whiplash moment for me. So wait... all episode her trepidation has been around her grandmother interfering or Serkan getting tired of her, but now she's back to wondering if he can change? Ne? And she isn't articulating what she wants him to change, or talking to him about change at all, only asking her friends if they think it's possible?? The change thing made perfect sense to me in eps 20-22, because she was coming off of his lie that broke her heart, but now I can't figure out what she wants from him. I think this is another casualty of whatever writing changes happened in this episode. I really hope the writers pull it together and figure out what the character's headspace is and stick with it. It's one thing to yo-yo from episode to episode, but to yo-yo scene to scene is too much. 
I know that they're trying to create suspense for whether she would meet him to ring in the New Year, and start fresh, but there are much more elegant ways to do this than constant retread conversations that don't make sense in context with the scenes that came before. Honestly, this episode had a LOT of wonderful scenes and humor and heartfelt moments, but it also felt like a franken-episode,  like if different writers were assigned different scenes and then they assembled the episode without going back to smooth out the tone and emotions.
That leads us to Serkan discovering Eda in the bath. What do we think was going through his mind there? lmao. He looked exceptionally pleased and he did the jokey flirty thing, taking a mental picture, but then when she comes downstairs in her jammies, he has gone into stone-cold work robot mode. I suppose the best I can guess is that he knew she was confused, he knew he had convinced her to stay under the guise it would be platonic and the "last time." 
He's always been a gentleman with her. So perhaps he felt compelled, for her sake, to keep it in that place, but seeing her in the bath send him into overdrive and the only thing he could do is throw himself into work to make sure the situation didn't go any further before she was fully ready? That's my best attempt at explaining it.  Still she was flirting hardcore with him when she came downstairs, it feels like that was the moment he's been waiting for since episode 19, and he let it sail by.  Ah well, at some point soon both their engines will be revving at the same time and we’ll finally get to the sexy times. 
The next morning was 100% adorable. Serkan Bolat serving breakfast in bed. I swoon!  What a sweetheart, because I'm pretty certain that Serkan does NOT like crumbs in his bed so this was a big gesture. And you could see how much she appreciated it, despite teasing him about the portion size. Eda, that breakfast would have been just fine by me, but if the girl has a big appetite, so be it.
Also, Edacim, it would be a lot easier to buy your "confusion" if you hadn't brought him a heartfelt gift that would have taken a good while, like weeks, to procure and then sketched in it for him!!!!  She had to have been planning that for some time.  Anyway, a very sweet gift and one of those moments where actions speak louder than words. We all want to hear Eda say the words "I Love You," but she just said it very loudly here in the form of this gift. Even if she wasn't fully aware she was saying it. It's obvious where her heart is, she just has to give herself permission to follow it.
This ep also brought the funny when half the cast of characters barged in on Edser’s little love nest. Good for both Eda and Serkan for refusing to be a part of the subterfuge for Babaanne. I'm hopeful we're going into a secret relationship/engagement storyline, but at this point I like that neither were cowing to her. Eda is an adult and it's nobody's business but her own where she stays the night! 
It cracks me up that Eda and Serkan were discombobulated by the intrusion, had the silent #married conversation, and headed upstairs together. Mostly because they are the two in the dark, what are they going to figure out by going upstairs alone? What they really needed was to talk to any of the other people to find out what in the hell was happening. Not that I blame them for wanting to escape that scene together. However, what was beautiful was their connection in these scenes. They were functioning as partners, as each other's person, as the one each turns to when they need support (or escape).  And that's really saying something since they were in a room full of the people they're both closest too.
Finally, I'm glad they spoiled the final scene in the fragman, because I would have been too stressed watching Balca's psychotic efforts in keeping Serkan away from the party, and Eda, if I hadn't known he would make it.  As it was, it  was too much to watch. They've done absolutely nothing to make her even a little sympathetic. I feel zero empathy for her, I don't understand why she's willing to take these risks. No man is worth it, girl! Especially not a man you just decided you wanted because of his initials!  The character needs to serve her purpose and go. Soon.
As for Serkan making it in time, THANK GOODNESS. I don't think Eda could have handled being stood up again. Even taking her call was a mistake. That's why we have voicemail, Serkan. And clearly he should have called the police on his way. I sincerely hope that he finds out the break-in was a fake and that's what makes him realize what level of crazy he's dealing with. I assume, because he didn't know what else to do, he left Balca in his home and that's what he wanted to tell Eda right before the police arrived. I shudder to think what damage she might do there alone. Installing a hidden mic or camera for Babaanne? Going through his things? Planting more items. Ew. If that spec is right the place will need to be fumigated.  
Serkan's gift was, of course, perfection. Talk about love in gift form, and did you notice that one of the charms was an "E" and one was an "S"? A sweet, heart-felt detail and a nice little nod to which initials really matter on this show.  Interestingly, after a full episode of inner turmoil, once Serkan arrived, Eda seemed to be all-in. She was bubbly and happy to see him and definitely acting like he was her date. And then the hug! Finally! They've obviously been physically close in recent post-break up episodes, for example elevator, pottery, dancing, skating, but what a relief to finally have this pure, intentional display of affection from her to him. Also a cheek kiss! This show, I swear it makes me grateful for the most chaste of moments.
As I said in another ask, I think the, "Will you be my girlfriend?" was in Serkan's head. We didn't see him say it, she didn't respond and the audio was hollow like it was a thought or memory or dream. However, what I can't answer is why we heard that. Why put it in there? We know he wants them to get back together, so that line doesn't inform the audience of anything they don't already know. So maybe proposal foreshadowing?  On the other hand, there is the line earlier in the episode that was voice over added after the fact (when Edser are in the small conf room and Serkan says he’s going home) so maybe they added the audio after the scene for some reason? I don’t know with this episode anything is possible. 
Then, of course, Babaanne ruins their moment with her evil plan. Next episode will she be sitting on her throne stroking a hairless cat Because it feel like Babaanne may like a bit of evil aura to surround her. Anyway, next stop... jail! I'm honestly excited to see how the next ep plays out. We're going to go through some things, so prepare your soul, but I honestly think we may end the ep in a better place. (new cliffhanger notwithstanding) We shall see. 
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the perm picture TTT thank you ^^
aww the domestic scenes with the babies' grandparents had me unconsciously smiling from ear to ear :))) so cute
i don't know why but i have somewhat of an iffy feeling about the youtube thing? i wonder what will Baekhyun think about it
but also the scene with Kyunghee and her sister shown what a nice person OC really is. i guess seeing the girl excited about her dream felt like a "life injection" for the lack of a better word?? after she was so exhausted about work and earning money i guess seeing someone genuinely just doing something because they like it is refreshing
>< that was a nice detail in the story, i think!
though lmao at the Kyunga being nasty towards OC and then "please tell Baekhyun I sad hi" ..... girl...
OK THAT PHONECALL??? "A kiss? How can I do that for you? Hm?" EXCUSE ME??? no cause the moment i read this, like my head immediately re-played this exact sentence from that one instagram Live the real Baekhyun did a couple years back .. i see what you did there, very effecttive yes. yes his "hm?" .. yeah.
and it's so cute how OC notices the similarities between Jun and Baekhyun aaaw :((((
so much happened in the chapter. somehow i feel more uneasy about Baekhyun revealing some problems at work. so when he comes back and on top of that sees Junho.. ouch. but also I don't think that there will be any huge fight, seeing Sonhee and hearing the explanation will surely clear any misunderstadnings up?? i think it's obvious we're all interested to see how they will talk it out but i just have to say I'm looking forward to it! i guess their fight and the subsequent talk was one of my favorite things in this series!
A huge welcome dear! Finally someone on Tumblr who noticed the insta live reference!! thats EXACTLY him ㅠㅠ very flirty pls... >.< 
thank you for noticing the details! i usually write the scenes so that the characters personalities can come up and be revealed in a subtle manner, and thats why every sentence counts so when someone points it out Im always happy 🥺 Kyunghee unintentionally became a little inspiration for our OC though as you say, not sure about this YT thing... ^^
ALSO!! YES! We need to keep in mind that Baek has his own stuff at work! We can only imagine how much he has to go through as the youngest professor in the department! He rarely talks about whatever is happening, so... the bomb can drop anytime!
“their fight and the subsequent talk was one of my favorite things in this series “ THIS!!! 💖🥰💝💞💕🤗🤗 thank you. it represents their relationship haha. im glad you trust Baek! i said this before but they really are now that couple that cannot go to bed after a fight - they need to go to sleep being on good terms  🥺
as always, im very grateful for your generous comment, it really means a lot and lifts my spirits! ❤😊 i wish you a great start of the week!
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hihi!💕 could i ask for a matchup for magi and bsd, please? i'm a straight gal, 5'2"/157cm, 52kg, long brown hair (which i love braiding), blue eyes + glasses. i really enjoy wearing something casual and comfy (sweaters, hoodies, scarves) but elegant clothing preferably with something floral is also lovely!
as for personality, i'm an infj and a virgo, usually quiet and polite around stangers, but i tend to warm up to others rather easily and become friendly. i'm not good at conversations but i try😅 around friends/family i'm still the listener type but definitely more opinionated and excitable. i will become headstrong (or even fierce) when something i stand for is being neglected though. i try my best to stay positive, reliable and hard-working. i may be a mom friend and nag a bit but can never stay mad at anyone for too long, it takes too much energy i suppose, haha.
i enjoy singing, hiking with my dogs, meditating and reading (fantasy and horror). can and will go on about geography and writing if given the chance. also, i'm hoping the ones i get don't mind my bad jokes (puns, dark humour, sarcasm) cause i can't make a good one to save a life :') i love sweets, dogs, and nature. can speak four languages. thank you so much, i hope this wasn't too long or a bother to read! have a great day😊
{you’re welcome, thank you for the ask! you’re fine, it wasn’t a bother at all ^^ i hope you have a nice day too and enjoy the matchup! sorry if it’s not too good or a little short, it’s only my second one so i’m still getting used to it >.< -s}
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{.⋅ ✯ ⋅.}  KOUHA REN  {.⋅ ✯ ⋅.}  
loves putting little braids in your hair, kind of matching his, if you’ll let him, honestly just gushes about how cute you look with or without the braids anyway. probably likes to match outfits (or at least outfit styles) with you sometimes-- idk he just seems like he’d be sentimental like that-
he likes to get you nice elegant clothes, lowkey bordering between just getting you gifts normally and spoiling you
where you’re quiet and polite, he’s quite bubbly and informal, you balance each other out and get along well when you know each other better, and aren’t around new people or strangers
likes to tell lots of stories to you, sometimes he can’t even help it, so he’s happy you’re a good listener. of course, he’ll be quiet for you if you want to talk more instead of listen. he loves seeing you excited to talk about your own opinions in detail, wouldn’t dream of stopping you whenever you are
also just one proud boi when you’re fierce about what you stand for
likes to show off that he’s with you in a way, like “this is my girlfriend, isn’t she lovely?” and will talk about your favourite qualities about yourself, giving you confidence boosts whether you needed them or not
he’s glad you’re reliable and somewhat of a mum friend, you can keep him in check when he’s more childish and excitable
gets a little pouty if you ever get mad at him, either pouting or the living embodiment of the pleading face emoji until you cheer up
he likes your jokes, especially your puns even if they’re silly and you don’t think they’re any good. also fairly sarcastic himself so as long as your in a good mood, he’ll often respond to your sarcasm with his own
i hc he has a sweet tooth, honestly he almost always has sweets somewhere in his house and doesn’t mind sharing. he likes getting sweets that come from other countries too, so the both of you can try something new that you might like
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{.⋅ ✯ ⋅.}  OSAMU DAZAI  {.⋅ ✯ ⋅.} 
he likes watching you braid your hair, like, not like him sitting there in silence and watching you but talking while you do, idk there’s just something so nice and domestic about it that he likes especially in the mornings. lets you play with his hair and style it too if you want to, more often than not keeps the style for the day even if you weren’t doing it for him to keep in
steals your glasses. he gives them back when you ask him to or when you need them, but he still steals your glasses
like kouha, proud of you for being fierce and standing by your opinions or if something you stand for is being neglected. if you’re defending your opinion against someone dazai just lets you do your thing, like believes in you to stand your own ground if that makes sense??
teases you (gently) for being hardworking, but not as much as he teases kunikida for it
likes listening to you sing and depending on how serious you are, will join you jokingly
doesn’t like dogs and, in the nicest way, is at first slightly put off about yours, but he’d learn to love your dogs as he has more good experiences with them. kinda like that meme of dads being like “i don’t want a pet so it won’t be my responsibility” and then there’s a pic of them like napping with the pets-
probably asks you to read to him sometimes if you’re up to it, he just likes the domesticity as he does with spending mornings with you
you have similar senses of humour, so even if you think your jokes aren’t that good they still make him laugh, or cheer him up. he’s also happy to have someone who’ll like his attempts at jokes, compared to kunikida who just finds them annoying
will ask what languages you know and sometimes google random phrases from some of them, either to use them just for fun or to purposefully mispronounce them to tease you in a way, but only when you’re in a good mood
so he likes teasing you and stuff but doesn’t push your buttons too far, it’s more like “friendly banter”-
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army-author · 6 years
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Oh. My. Gosh. Just finished Written On Our Veins and was that one of the best stories I've ever read or what? I'm still in tears! So marvelous! You are an exceptionally gifted writer-- gosh! I can't even fathom at how you put such a masterpiece together! It's divine.
Awwww :’) Thank you so so so much! I’m so glad to hear you enjoyed it! ‘Written On Our Veins’ was one of my favourite fics to write, so I’m really glad it brought you joy (and some tears too, sorry about that!) I’ll always hold this story close to my heart, and I’m glad that other people get to enjoy something I’ve created!
(I’ve answered your other messages under the ‘read more’ section, since there was a lot to reply to 💖)
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog said: I’m screaming! Red Faced was so precious and hilarious! “She knows too much.” Like, straight out of an action flick before the line, “She must be eliminated.” I’m dying from how wonderous this story was! Gosh, Christmas Hobi stories are literally my favorite. No joke. He is the epitome of Christmas, I swear. So I’m just going to go into my little shell here and squeal and die some more, don’t mind me. I love your stuff! Ah!
Asdfghjklll thank you once again! Seeing all this love in my inbox made me so so happy! I’m really glad you liked ‘Red Faced’. Christmas and Hobi really do go hand in hand, he’s just so filled with sunshine, he warms up all that December snow :’)))
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Metallic Snow was sooooo fluff and sweet, I think I got diabetes! I think I came across this story some time ago, but never got to finish it as it was probably one of the ones that was left on my page as I walked away for a day or so to go about my life and tumblr and my phone conspired to refresh my feed and just go back to my home… But anyway! I’m just so glad that I found it again! Fate brought me back. Lmfbo.
Aw, it makes me so happy to hear that you found ‘Metallic Snow’ again, and that you like it! It truly was fate!!!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: I’m crying. A Story Book Ending was marvelous! My heart can’t take just how perfect your rendition of The Nutcracker was, with some liberties, and a gaurded Hoseok. Like, my head is spinning and my heart is in a flurry of emotions. I’m still reeling from the magic you wrote into the story– your own. Phenomenal! You’d better bet your butter balled butt that I’ll be reading the rest of your Hoseok works, even if it kills me! Heartache and all. Lol. Because that’s just what great Hobi stories do.
Ahhhh thank you :’’’’) Man, your comments are all so nice, and kind, and I’m crying over here, reading through all this! It makes me so ridiculously happy that my writing can have this kind of effect on you! I really loved writing ‘A Story Book Ending’, the nutcracker story is fun to re-write because of the magic and fantasy of it all! I’m so happy that I was able to capture some of that in my own writing!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: I’M CRYING. Soulmates or Strangers was so sweet, sugary and fluffy that I am fanning my cheeks and clenching my poor, bitter, lonely little heart! That ending had my heart in my throat, swelling to three times it’s size, leaving me gasping–choking–for anything to alleviate the bittersweet ache in my heart that I self-deprecatingly crave. I’m a mess. I’m a puddle of mush– a blob of goo left behind by your sugary tales of romanticism. And what is this pistachio latte and where can I find one?!
Aw man! Thank you so much! This message is so sweet as well, you’ve left me clutching my heart, overcome with love! I’m so happy my writing can have this effect, because as a writer, it’s my goal to stir up all these emotions in my readers! :’) Thank you so so much for your kind words!
(Also, pistachio lattes are so so good!!! There’s a small Itallian cafe in the city I study in, and it sells these lattes, and they are just… so delicious!)
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Give Me Sunshine left me feeling so warm and fuzzy! Thank you for writing such sweet little pieces! (Even though it’s the sweet fluff that hurts the most, so I’m left with some residual nausea as well. Don’t ask me why– I’m a wreck. Don’t look at me.) But all because you’re such a fantastic writer and I have loved everything I’ve read of yours so far! I’ve come away smiling like a fruit loop and that’s because of you– so thank you! And Hoseok. But the Hoseok that you write, so it’s all you lol
Aw man, ‘Give Me Sunshine’ was one of the first fics I wrote for this blog! I’m glad it’s still getting love even now! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! :’) It makes my day to know I made someone else smile!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: I am sufficiently crying now. Like, my head is grating, stomach in knots, bile rising, throat constricting… Sorry, Mama was remarkably written and well drafted, as all the other works of yours that I’ve read, but something about this angst had me feeling like I was being personally attacked, and yet– not. Lol. I know I wasn’t. Like, it hit so close to home on some things, and then shot way out into left field in the same moment. Anyway, phenomenal use of writing to the readers subconscious’.
I think ‘Sorry, Mama’ is still one of the saddest fics I’ve written, even though I’ve written fics where worse things happen. It was quite a personal story for me, which is probably why it’s so filled with emotion. Anyway, I’m so sorry that I made you cry, but I guess I’m also glad my writing was powerful enough to get that reaction?
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Just read Anniversary (Hoseok’s Scenario) and that’s literally just what I needed after reading that pile of steaming angst that had me up to the bathtub’s brim in salty tears. Lol. Anyway. This was so precious and sugary sweet! I loved it. Always!
Aw yay! I’m glad I was able to repair the damage after ‘Sorry, Mama’!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: BAHYE SATAN!! White Chocolate Chip Cookie has so many emotions stirring up inside of me for only having 400 words and I can’t handle this! Don’t look at me. I love white chocolate chip cookies, and cuddles, and warm blankets and hot chocolate and– GIXKYDKHU. NO. NO NO NONONO. *cries in the club* Why must you torment my heart, so? I know it’s my own fault for reading the cavity-inducing fluff, but when you put it out there, and it’s so phenomenal– I CAN’T RESIST THE TEMPTATION! You are satan.
I love cookies and cuddles and warm blankets and hot chocolate too! Which is why I loved writing this fic so much :’))) I’m so sorry for putting the temptation there for you, heheh!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: But you’re also an angel. >.
I’m conflicted too! Am I an angel? Or a devil? You’re giving me very mixed signals haha! But no, sorry to disappoint, I’m not a Korean man! I’m just a girl with a lot of stories in her head :’)
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Oh my gosh. Okay, you really need to stop. (But please don’t.) Kissing Santa was so freaking precious and my stomach is in knots and I am dying on the inside and– NO. Just– no. Lmbo. The whole scene was just perfect, my heart is overflowing in warmth and cotton candy and sugar plums and I just want to cry into hot chocolate by a fireplace wrapped in a blanket. You are too marvelous at this!
Ahhh I’m glad you liked it! I have a soft spot for domestic family aus, so ‘Kissing Santa’ was a lot of fun for me! Thank you so much for all the compliments, I’m blushingggggg!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: The Nutcracker was remarkable; phenomenal; splendiferous! I love Christmas so much, and along with it The Nutcracker, especially Tchaikovsky’s musical suites composed for the theatrical/ballet adaptation. I just love how you refer to Hoseok as the Nutcracker, himself, making it all the more romantic and enchanting. I know the Christmas season has passed, but I honestly would celebrate Christmas all year round, just for the feeling and tidings it brings. But, then it would become dismal.. 🤷🏼‍♀️
I love Christmas so much too! Especially the build up to it, it never fails to stir up all these happy and nostalgic feelings for me! And yeah, Tchaikovsky’s music for the ballet is so nice, I like to listen to it when I’m writing! :’) I’m so glad you enjoyed this story!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Ecstasy is For… was brilliant; magnanimous. One in a million. Wh-what? I’m not crying! You’re crying! I should really stop. I’m getting too deep! Lmbo. My emotions are clouding my judgements and now reality is mixing with fantasy! Who is what and what is why?! Just kidding. No, but seriously, your work is truly remarkable. I adore everything I’ve read, even if I wind up crying like a messy toddler. Lol.
asdfghkllll I can’t handle all these compliments, my heart is going to explode!!! :’’’))) Thank you so much!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Uuugggghhhhhh. Lucky Black Cat is so precious and cute and I want cuddles and coffee. Lmfbo. Everything about it was to die for! My poor little heart is putty in your writer’s hands.
‘Lucky Black Cat’ was a lot of fun to write! I love supernatural/ witch aus, and adding a barista au on top of that is just perfect. I’m glad you enjoyed it, that makes me super happy!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: Oh my God. Growing Pains is so fluff and precious and hilarious and I just CAN’T with how fabulous it all is. That freaking ghost. Lmfbo. There’s some show or book where this old ghost haunts a dorm (or was it simply a house? Idk) but he was a funny old guy who liked to tease the couple, but was also a pervert, so he liked “to watch”, but they’d usually catch him and yell at him to get out. I wish I could remember! Lmbo. Anyway, that’s kinda how I picture this guy.
Oh my gosh, that old ghost sounds so funny! I’m laughing at you imagining the ghost in ‘Growing Pains’ that way! I mean, when I was writing it, I was more imaging the ghost as being well meaning, and wanting to get two hapless souls together, but this interpretation is way funnier!!!
@folkpunkrock-littlewing-blog​ said: UUUUGGGHHHHAAAA…! Silence to My Noise. Just. Ugh! So cute. I mean. I can’t. Oh God. My heart! The flutters!
And MY HEART is fluttering from all the love you’ve sent into my inbox! I’m crying from all of your kind messages! I really appreciate all of them! They brightened up my day, and I’m really grateful for the time that you took out of your day to read all those stories, and to tell me what you thought of them! It fills me with joy to know my stories can have these kinds of effects, and it’s inspiring me to write all the more! Thank you so so much! I can’t quite express how happy all of this made me, just know I’m smiling like crazy right now!
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