#I would draw Nayeon soon but I have plans to draw another rabbit that will help introduce another character I have planned

[ceiling-karasu]

I noticed with the eyes!

Dalnim has that dead inside look but combined with age and body language you can tell he's just young enough to still have a sense of morals and fairness, and try and do something about the situation, but mingling with others is still too much of a challenge. Which I assume the characters in your story can also pick up on, which is why they haven't completely given up on him since he still has a will somewhere in there.

Surely, the adults have seen youngsters like him plenty of times before over the years?

His classmates are probably too young to understand, especially if he just stares at them and then passes out if they try to get a reaction by yelling at him. I don't really see them as being malicious, though. From the other story in the classroom, I get the sense that they would be annoyed working with him, but at the same time, if an inspector came around snooping for traitors, and started asking his classmates about his strange behavior, they might stand up for him a bit in private.

There's quite a few jobs (like my own) that people don't know exist unless they fall into it by accident or have a rotation in the section. I can't wait to see how Dalnim finds out about the photography records job! There's a lot of jobs in the military that we don't know about until we start researching them.

The polar bears are pretty much how Nayeon and her grandfather are, so you are spot on with that! Especially as evidenced by what I think sounds a lot like the grandfather giving the 'you're a good neighbor' talk of basically:

Which is really threatening in context.

Jollin might even get that way (like the adult polar bear) if the mice and Tokgasi blackmailing him threaten Nayeon, although he would probably tell himself it was to preserve his new way of life, or that they would be blowing his cover. Assuming the grandfather doesn't get to them first, lol.

I kind of have the idea that she may have had to take care of an aging grandfather and her farm was a major food source, so she may have been exempt from conscription. Not that she doesn't have some street smarts, though.

Something I did while I was waiting for class.

I don’t know if she would be a new character of mine. But if she was, she would be working as an archivist or doing something based around culture. Idk. She isn’t a character I would place in OFP since she wouldn’t be a solider. She would have been exempted.

The quality came out a bit wonky