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beyond-far-horizons · 2 years ago

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Going through your old unpublished fanfics is hilarious! I’ve found some real gems of KakaRin, ObiRin, HashiMito and MadaMito. Problem is they are unfinished (rude, past me!) and also go from ‘hey this is good’ to ‘Oh the cringe...’ and that weird fanfic convention of leaping between POVs in the same scene that is so hard to separate out. I got better at it, but the ObiRin/KakaRin story (my first one) is full of it. That and the one where you feel awkward to keep using the character’s name so you use ‘the raven-haired Uchiha’ or ‘the brunette kunoichi’ etc etc.

Oh and...guys...I found an ‘her orbs’ instead of ‘her eyes’ in there too. I know it was over ten years ago but....I’ll see myself out...

#hangs head in shame #naruto #fanfic #my fanfic #I was half way through a really good (if I say so myself) HashiMito story and it just stopped!#Really want to get some of the ObiRinKaka scenes published but it's hard #I love that some of the things they do in canon I've actually done previously in my stories #like I had a story where Minato and the Uchiha clan live and one where Naruto tells Obito he was inspired by past him #fairly obvious but this was when the manga first came out and I've only just seen the anime bits #Really want to finish the story with Evil!Obito hunting Rin and Kakashi and they get closer #it was hot stuff folks

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