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theres-whump-in-that-nebula · 5 months ago

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Had to adjust filters to find this again. Here is a part from TTTLTEL, which is supposed to be a movie script but I don’t know how to write a movie script and I don’t have the budget for a movie:

With one swipe of the hand, one act of desperation, she was pinned to the floor by two-hundred eighty-five pounds of dead weight: the price of mercy, a broken nose.

This sounds way better and makes way more sense with context.

Tagging: @i-eat-worlds @whumptress @redd956 @astudyinpanda @angst-is-love-angst-is-life

or whoever is dying to share their last line

(no pressure)

Tag Game: Last Line Tag

Thanks for the tag, @mintflavouredwhump :)

Rules: In a new post, share the last line you wrote and tag as many people as there are words (or as many as you feel like).

Here's mine, from some fanfic in progress:

He feels dirty and used, crusted with dried blood and blackened with soot.

Tagging (only four, because thirteen would be a lot): @brutal-nemesis @theres-whump-in-that-nebula @whumpinthepot @thoughtsonhurtandcomfort (no pressure!)

#Tag game #Basically Suzanna over here [slaps roof of whumpee] is trying to save someone from a vampire she’s not sure is dead or alive #and even if she’s dead she’s like “shit I can’t leave this poor old woman’s body to be desecrated!”#And as she’s fireman-carrying her away the vampire she just doused in holy water #— who is grabbing at everything because she’s in pain — grabs Suzanna’s ankle #The sad thing is I don’t even know if I want to keep this scene in despite it being a good scene…#I need Suzanna to be able to get away from this with a bite and without receiving the really really bad head injury I want her to receive #Because that will be a result of the vampire’s husband getting pissed off that his wife is dead and needing to know who killed her #Thereby pushing Suzanna into Raskolnikov mode (throwing up fainting and feverishly lying in bed with survivor’s AND killer’s guilt)#So when he finds out it’s Suzanna he obviously is like “well if you break it you buy it; you’re my wife now”#(and by “wife” we mean “vampire convert chemically brainwashed to love an actual demon lord”)#So she fights back and does something else to make him more pissed off and so he just ends up throwing her HARD into a wall #cue fencing response… and then someone has to call 911 and I have no idea who how or why #But I also want her to cauterize her bite like Peter Cushing before this goes down… and she can’t do that with a traumatic brain injury #So someone has to bite her at some time between those two events

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