#I just want to derust my writing a but tbh
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I have written a bunch of test inner dialogue for Odile at this point in hopes of being able to write some duo looping stuff but the more I write her the more I realize that I think my main issue is that I am just not feeling Odile second person narration. I see "you" and go ah yes Siffrin. Unfortunately this means I might have to bite the bullet and try writing with the dreaded "I"
#rat rambles#stars posting#this is mostly unfortunate because I have I believe literally no experience writing first person stuff#well in narrative I mean#but I have a vision. and to do so I think first person would work best here#plus then I could have a fun thing of different narrative styles depending on the pov#I want to build a piece of writing where if 'you' is so much as muttered you grimace and are filled with dread#not to promise Ill actually be writing a full fic Im just playing around with the idea#I just want to derust my writing a but tbh#I rarely post things I write regardless but it's still been at least a couple months since Ive rly sat down and written smth#the real roadblock for me with this au rn is the massive loop shaped elephant in the room#I need to force myself to go mental over them so I can properly Get them instead of just having vague ideas#but my brain just isnt latching despite the concepts being the kind of stuff I tend to adore in stories#and ultimately this au is more abt a triangle than a pair so I need to get that last point down already#I see the vision but my glasses fell off#and odile stole them to equip later
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