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I cut my hair and it looks so fucking stupid omfg đđ
#it looks fine from afar#but then you get closer and youâre like AUGHH đš yk like a jumpscare#LMAOOO#itâs kind of whatever bc I wear a beanie all the time anyways#so it doesnât really matter but like#still#itâd be nice if I had the option to not wear a hat sometimes especially during summer đ but alas#ofc I decided to pull this shit right when my college courses are abt to start smh đ Iâm setting myself up for disaster over here#itâs not awful or anything#but itâs definitely notâŠgood đ#I keep on trying to hype myself up and be like yk what itâs not that bad âșïž and then I look in the mirror and Iâm likeâŠâŠđ#LMAOO THIS IS SO UNFORTUNATE#Iâm gonna try straightening it maybe thatâll do something for me idkâŠI doubt it#I have a feeling straightening it will make it worse actually LMAOO#Iâm constantly beefing w my hair at all times bc why is it curly in some areas and straight in others and wavy in some like PICK ONEEE#the thing is if I put the effort into actually styling it w product itâd probably look fine#but like why would I spend all that time doing my hair when I could be writingggg đ or drawing!#me when Iâm doing basic necessities (I should be writing! I want to write!): đ#me when I actually sit down and have to write: đ#LMAOO
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so *flips through notes* how shall i start?
well, again, iâve decided to break my commentary into sections, so things are easier to navigate (it starts with a bunch of reactions, but if you power through it thereâs in depth comments too lmao), and i went a bit wild with arrows too (tell me if itâs better or worse, iâm still figuring out how to give long commentary). i do feel like iâll never be able to live up to my forfeit analysis tho, lol, maybe when the story is complete and i write a full series review, but for now, given that i donât have much time at hand anymore, i hope you still enjoy simpler feedback from me đ„°
regardless of anything, this turned out to be enormous once again, so a quick tl;dr: the window is honestly one of your best works â and thatâs saying something. iâm not sure it tops dal segno or forfeit for me, because those were chapters that came with a lot of really difficult personal realizations and helped me come to terms with a bunch of personal shit too. anyway, i donât think you ever need to be nervous before a drop because everything you write is gold.
so đđœ letâs đđœ start
PARTS WHERE I LAUGHED
â upon rereading this passage, i understood that reader was disappointed that yoongi didnât sent anything, and thatâs so funny because he did text her before lol
Drifting to your bed, you check your phone previously dumped on the nightstand, sighing at an empty screen before making your way into the cozy nook of your bedroom.Â
â who can blame the man honestly? i wish.
Your brother definitely muscled everyone else into rooming with each other, claiming Yoongi for himself.
â poor mr. taehyung park đ
And how deep you dug your nails into Taeâs dress pants.
Fuck, you should apologize for those marks he definitely has.
â reader was in full i like it mode of âyou still look good and it annoys me, pretty womanâ here lmao:
Why the hell does he have to look like that when youâre this frustrated? Of course heâd rock a black button-up and slacks. Of course heâd style his hair in a way that makes you wanna snatch him from the hallway. Of course heâd look the most expensive youâve ever seen him.
This is a whole other layer of upset that you didnât need tonight.Â
âȘ it made me realize that sheâll have a rough time whenever she and yoongi fight or something, âcus heâll be walking around looking like a three course meal effortlessly and thatâs just not fair.
â jungkook in the middle of it not understanding shit lmaoooooo
âI already said I wasnât going at dinner last night. But yâall seemed distracted enough, so.â
Yoongi straightens while Jungkook simply utters a confused sound.Â
âȘ yoongi trying to mend things was so funny to me omg:
âDonât, Kook.â
âBut IâââDrop it.ââDid I do something wrong?âÂ
âThe fuck? No. Letâs go.âÂ
â i love how dom became our official bs spotter too lmaoo, but iâd be so offended fr đ€Ł:Â
âWhat happened, baby. I havenât heard you like this in a long ass time.âÂ
âSad?â
âPathetic.â
â and damnn i SCREAMED when i read this omg:
âHe what? Flirted with some chick in front of everyone like heâs supposed to?âÂ
âȘ but i have to defend my baby here though, âcus i 100% get her. especially knowing sheâs been through a bunch of shit before and itâs super insecure. maybe she acted up a little bit, but it doesnât change the fact that she was hurt and we see in a bunch of little parts how sheâs still unsure about her relationship with yoongi (even calling it a situationship and saying her trust is a work in progress) so honestly? although iâm not one for yelling or being sassy and shit, i know iâd be pretty upset too. not to mention that the texts he sent after the dinner werenât about what happened, and even yoongi admitted he went about the whole thing the wrong way and shouldâve been clearer. i mean, câmon:
âThe one person that could possibly make it better this time just took this chickâs number in front of me.â
âȘ i get it. we know yoongi wouldnât actually do anything because weâve been inside his head, the reader hasnât. and i think we can all agree that yoongi messed up big time here:
âDid you end up calling her? That girl.â
[...]
âI did.â
And your heart slams into the ground. âI see.âÂ
âYou wanna know why?â
Absolutely not. âNo.â
âȘ i know he wasnât worried âcus he knew he didnât do anything, but he saw that the reader was upset about it and he still decided not to be clear straight away? ffs đ©
â again, itâs domâs world. we just living in it:
âSo make up with my future brother in law and Iâll see you whenââ
âWhat?â
ââget back. And yâall use protection, right? Cus I donât wanna be an auntie just yeââ
â that was so sexy of him:
âYou mad?â
âYes.âÂ
âGood. Stay that way.â
â LMAOOO, that makes the writing so genuine omg, i caNâT:
When you pop back into your bedroom, you catch Yoongi pinning you with amusement, almost telling him to shut up out loud.
Why the fuck does he look so hot you need to focus!
â oh, what? no, bro, donât mind me, iâm was just sucking yoongi out here:
Shit, you probably look like a trainwreck. What the hell do you say? Certainly not that you were just sucking off his best friend thatâs still very much in the room oh god.
â honestly ryen youâre SO FUNNY OMG THIS HAD ME IN TEARS:
Oh, fuck. Heâs sitting on your mattress?Â
Ironicallyâhilariouslyâthatâs better than him sitting on one of the armchairs.
âȘ and like??? đ€Ł:
Body twinging with guilt and paranoia, you gingerly sit just close enough to him, leaning away when you see nothing but the Sun on his computer. âDude, the brightness.â
â and the way you wrote this ryen omg đđđ:
Grasping for a ledge to latch onto, you remind him mid-freefall.
â đđđ yoongi istg:
âYou talk about me like that?â
âȘ also, this made me think like, whenever we like someone, we want to talk about that person all the time to everyone. so for the reader to be keeping it a secret⊠damn that must be hard, especially given that her brother knows yoongi so well and she must want to talk about yoongi with him so bad.
â i was so overwhelmed here that my laughter was manic:
Because that was your brother.
Yelling with a knock from the other side of the goddamn wall.
PARTS WHERE I WANTED TO SWALLOW MY FIST (lovingly)
â the mere mention of a balcony already had me screaming:
You even have a decent balcony, which you would be sitting on if not for the subzero temperatures outside.
â i have to say that whenever vmin is mentioned, i lowkey malfunction:
The trip had been pretty magical and fantastic before that dinner. You got to go sightseeing in the snow-capped mountains with everyone, snuck a peek of Taeâs little moment with Jimin in the hot springs, visited a quaint village with pretty shops, and even sat around a fire pit after grilling food.
âȘ they are such an interesting couple and maybe thatâs also âcus we know basically nothing about them, but oh god! i really love to get glimpses into their relationship. the last time we checked on the they were still unsure and tae was in pure angst
â i just LOVED the scene with yoongi and jungkook on the hallway. like, it couldâve been hoseok, namjoon or jin, but no, it had to be yoonkook đ©đŁ and of course we donât know if the chapter is canon and â in the case that it is â when it takes place, but ugh, just to imagine that this is post-forfeit jungkook who wants to win the reader back and thatâs post-flutter yoongi who just confessed and opened up to reader makes it all so funny and kdeofkdlfejksd
â this part had me all giddy because i remember a 3tan slice you made of reader and yoongi talking about broâs nice-jock-brother phase and before yoongi starts feeling guilty he gets all curious about those childhood stories. sidewalk too had some nostalgia moments and i liked it so much! it makes me interested in seeing yoongiâs reactions to readerâs embarrassing stories (especially knowing he was probably there for most of them too), i really love seeing them dwelling on memories:
How Yoongi had been giving you looks as you and your brother traded embarrassing stories, your whole table laughing with every single one.
â the amount of times yoongi called reader babe in this chapter should be illegal. iâm pretty sure iâm damaged for life
â i just love how yoongi cherishes her and loves her so much. i keep thinking of them being official, and how much yoongi would be one of those sweet as fuck boyfriends that wants to just be with his girl all the time (and from what bro has said he really is like that, so.):
âHuh? You deserve a lot more than this.â
â that you⊠wut đł
âYou know exactly why!â you whisper, grabbing him to kiss some sense into that reckless brain you love so much.Â
â this made me scream of fondness in the middle of the smut ugh omg:
âOh. No, I really do just like making you mad.âÂ
He laughs before kissing your head. âI can see that. Punk ass.â
âȘ again, this is just so wholesome fuck it:
âSo cute like this.â He doesnât explain further, but falters with a moan before laughing to himself. âHustling the shit out of me.â
â yoongi not hiding đ the man has a mission of killing us all and heâs relentless.
â DLDJFDLFJDKSKFJ:
And itâs how you can be anywhere in the world, in any situation, and yet feel so at home if heâs there. âJust for you,â you whisper, suddenly overcome with something more than yourself.
â when i tell you i fucking bawled with this:
When you finally clasp it on, you hold up his arm with a smile. âLook! Now we match.âÂ
âȘ this was the sweetest fucking thing ever and i wanted to explode. itâs all about those snippets of intimacy and domesticity. the ease with which they just⊠match â way before any chains were exchanged. and now their silver and golden links bond them too.
â i really donât know what to think about this, if iâm being honest:
When you both leave the aisle first, you miss the look that Jin shares with Namjoon.Â
âȘ itâs said in forfeit that it's been a while since jin and namjoon saw the reader and they were away during most of their relationship weâve seen, so iâm not 100% sure it means they are onto something. i think itâs more like that ask that jimin received if he was surprised to learn about yoongi and reader and he said that it kinda just made sense, so i think itâs something like that that namjin felt here â not suspicion, but a feeling like âwhat ifâŠâ
PARTS WHERE I FORGOT HOW TO BREATH
â had to say i 100% thought the reader had hooked up with the girl lmao, the WAY you wrote this omg:
What makes everything even worse? You recognized exactly where you saw her before that night.
You⊠SheâŠ
â loved that her body reacts to yoongiâs presence even if it isnât fully acknowledged:
Your heart mustâve seen Yoongi coming from your brotherâs room before you did, because its beats already stop before he fully comes into view.
â i just LOVE how yoonig calls, like every time they are texting and something mildly serious comes up he immediately calls her. he wants to hear her and talk things through, and i love it so much:
Yoongi [10:27pm]: Ok hold on
You wait for a few moments before you get a call, and your eyes bug out of their sockets because you certainly didnât expect this.
When you pick up, itâs loud as hell on his end. âHi.â
âTalk to me.â
âȘ and the same here:
âNo. I donât. So if you wanna say something, say it.â
âȘ the man wants no misunderstandings, no miscommunications, he wants clear talks and to understand the reader. he doesnât dismiss the fact sheâs upset, he wants to understand why and never makes her feel like sheâs overreacting or exaggerating, âcus he respects her feelings effortlessly
â although i was squirming âcus of the way their conversation just wasnât like happening, i kinda laughed at this too:
Yoongi [11:08pm]: Got somewhere to beÂ
You [11:10pm]: iâm sure you do
âȘ the reader was being so cheeky i was lowkey proud
â yoongi doesnât get enough credit for how mature he is: he knows he likes the reader and he couldnât give less of a fuck about being right or hurting his pride when thereâs an issue:
Goddamn it⊠Why is he giving you so many chances.
â this part was really interesting to me:
But Yoongi still doesnât let go of your head, instead palming it just a bit more into his dress shirt before he whispers, âJustâŠâÂ
And he stops.Â
Without any indication ofâ
âCan I just kiss you.âÂ
âȘ yoongi is dead scared of not deserving the reader or something, and here she was really mad with him and was being kinda harsh and he just knows he didnât do things the right way, so he was probably really scared going into her room and somewhat losing her. it might seem like a stretch, but the readerâs trust was shaken by something âsmallâ and she was already thinking about a thousand of terrible scenarios, so i donât think itâs above yoongi to overthink the situation too. and even the reader finds it a bit weird the way heâs acting:
Because Yoongi has shown you time and time again how dangerous he can be. How he can lose control in the best ways just as you do for him.Â
But right now? Devouring you like you both had been apart for months while your brotherâs on the other side of the wall?Â
âȘ i think thatâs why he acted up with the brother so close and all: he not only wanted her to understand heâs hers, but he also wanted to assure that she still with him, sheâs still there and still his too. i think one thing the reader doesnât understand is that yoongi is as insecure as she is, but shows it in a different way âcus he has all this facade while she wears her heart under her sleeve.
â i was cheated before, so i 100% get her:
âI know I shouldnât have, but my brain went straight for the worst possible scenario. Itâs, ummâŠâ
Looking away, you fight the tears that you specifically didnât want falling. The ones that you were done crying years ago,Â
âItâs happened before. Around this same time, actually.âÂ
âȘ even though i get how shitty it is to be questioned too. also, reading this brought a whole new level of understanding regarding her character and why sheâs so insecure â beyond what we already know.
â honestly this was just so damn perfect i had to stop reading for around 10 minutes to collect myself:
Itâs a thin chain, with small links and no embellishments.Â
âȘ it means so much after everything that happened, almost like their secret way of vowing their devotion to one another, through a symbol only them know the meaning and weight to.
â đł:
âYou really came here to tell me all that?âÂ
âYeah.â He snags your chin. âAnd to teach you a fucking lesson.âÂ
*breaks in cold sweat*
â jesus fucking christ when i tell you i fucking scrEAMED??????
âI know,â he laughs. âDunks are fucking untouchable right now.âÂ
âRight? Yoongi has like, fifty pairs.âÂ
âȘ i was gaping for hours after this. felt like ross saying the wrong name at the altar, and it had me thinking, âcus that HAS to set at least a seed of suspicion on his mind:
âI mean, maybe. Didnât expect you to mention him is all.â
â i have no words, just feelings:
âTeach you to think Iâm not yours.âÂ
âBââ
âAs if I donât wanna give you my shitââ
âFuâ!âÂ
ââso you can walk around everywhere with it on.â
SMUT
as you can see the division i made is kinda unregular, but please pretend this is organized.
â thatâs so fucking sexy honestly, i felt like passing out:
âI wanna forget my own name.â Â
âI can make that happen.âÂ
â i stand by my OG three tangerines commentary:
âBut alsoâŠâ Summoning courage from all angles, you place a firm hand on his chest. âCan I still be mad at you?âÂ
Yoongi falls completely silent for a moment, his stare incredulous and his chest stiff under your palm.Â
Did his heart⊠beat harder there?
âȘ can đđœ someone đđœ PLEASE đđœ dominate đđœ this đđœ man? heâs desperate:
And as he stares down at the material, something stirs in your belly, and youâre quick to wonder where any and all if this rebellion is coming from.
Maybe itâs the painfully obvious tent he has in his pants. Or the ravenous, subtly proud look in his eyes anytime you act out.
âȘ istg ryen please give this man what he wants (i know here it also means he was trying to hold back but REGARDLESS):
Gulping, you feel strangely powerful despite being the one with no clothes on. Even though heâs the one towering over, you have a feeling heâs trying hard as fuck to keep himself in check.
âȘ i mean⊠do i even have to say anything?
âIt wouldnâtâve lasted long anyway.â
âNow youâre just rude.âÂ
His lip bite is so handsome that you almost miss the dash of shyness.Â
Or was that your imagination?
âMaybe next time, doll.â
â this got me so riled up that i almost sobbed reading it:
âAs much as I wanna hear you, you better shut the fuck up, doll.âÂ
â OG reader could never and i couldnât be prouder:
âBut youâre gonna wait your turn like a good girl.âÂ
âNo!â
âȘ and the straight up iconic:
âMake me,â you hiss, lifting your head to meet his lips. âBitch.â
âȘ reader was full on:
â honestly thatâs the sexiest sex to ever sex:
âBecause you seem to think Iâm not yours.âÂ
Wait. What?Â
Thatâs the⊠Thatâs the lesson heâs gonna teach you?
âAnd Iâm gonna fuck you until you get the point.â
Oh, fuck. Heâs still pissed.
âȘ iâ i think i need a lesson too đ
âȘ not to mention that i think you dealt very well with everyone wanting angry sex because of jealousy and then staying true to their characters by making angry sex because they are pissed at their insecurities lol
â god forgive me for i have sinned:
Silent but firm, he leads you to one of the armchairs in your roomâs nook, sitting you down before giving a chaste kiss.
â and ugh this yoongi? standing tall over her?? unbuttoning his cuffs??? demanding shit????
Unbuttoning one of his cuffs, Yoongi simply stands over you while explaining, âYouâre gonna show me first.â
âHuh?â
He folds his sleeve inward before pushing it up his forearm. âHow you get off.â
[...]
âDonât make me wait.â
âȘ also, watching some get off is honestly the hottest shit
â *sobs*:
Does he really have to spread his legs as wide as yours, though?Â
â this is the point in which my review became posthumous:
âWanna fuck your throat.â You whimper into his palm before he sticks a thumb inside your mouth. âPaint this pretty face.â
â i wanna say that subspace is something that makes me a bit uncomfortable overall, but the way you handled the hint of it here just made me relieved, especially yoongiâs attention and care to check on her and see if sheâs still able to consent and shit, so even if itâs not my favorite thing, i know iâll enjoy it with you writing it:
He leans down, and youâre regarding him with a strange look as he looks from one eye to the other.Â
â i loved her so much for this đ i want to be here one day:
âI dunno but I know you want it.â
â honestly?
Sliding your mouth back and forth, you make a few passes before releasing him to spit, coating him with your saliva before going again. With your other fingers busy on your clit, you feel the dirtiest youâve felt in a long time.
â when i read this my brain just stopped for a second âcus i forgot the warnings and thought they were doing it raw:
When he understands, a low curse shoots out. âFuck, my condoms are in the room.â
âȘ on that note:
âGod, I canât wait to feel all of you.â
âȘ yoongi wants it, we want it⊠so whatâs it gonna be ryen đ§?
â yoongiâs pain kink is gonna be my downfall:
âTug on my shit,â he grits, humming with eyes shut when you yank his head to the side. âFuck.âÂ
â i wanted to cry when i read this, omg i SCREAMED, what ON EARTH MR PARK TAEHYUNG:
âI gotta say⊠I get it, babe.âÂ
He smirks while looking away.
âYâall sound fucking hot in bed.âÂ
âȘ like someone said, having a drabble of their perspective coming into the house and hearing them would be amazing. but i imagine how tired you are too and the last thing i want is to put pressure on you too! if you find yourself wanting to write another drabble for us eventually, iâd definitely vote on this.
â overall like, the smut is just so fucking overwhelming in a way. there are so much at play here, so much intimacy, so many words not said, and itâs so fucking intense, the way they canât get enough of each other, how messy it gets, how they arenât barely thinking and itâs just so fucking sexy how you are able to convey it all in your writing. i mean, how can i define this as anything but deliciously overwhelming (especially with the stream of consciousness here too):
The point. You get it. You get it you get it you understand it so fucking well.
âȘ and here too:
Because Yoongi decides to switch up the pace, going slow enough to make you sob into soft lips rubbed raw.
Praise, reassurance, more praise. All of these things fall on your features and into your ears, and you hold onto him as if heâs your last lifeline.Â
âȘ and also:
When you give a vigorous shake of your head, fingers you adore clasp yours, and your hand is pressed into rumpled sheets next to your wet cheek. Youâre so caught up and entirely whole that you donât even realize where you end and he begins, donât even register that youâre coming again because heâs already made you feel that fantastic.Â
âȘ i mean, every intimate scene of them (be it just a kiss or a full on smut) always makes me think of closer. they both suck at communicating their feelings, it took that scene in forfeit for them to finally open up, so i see them often translating their feelings into touches and that portrays a heavy role in each intimate moment â and you write each with absolute perfection. we can feel the intensity of their feelings every time, how they give themselves into those moments. further evidence (thank god i was in my bed while reading, âcus otherwise i wouldâve fall):
Instead of claiming your lips again, Yoongi goes for a light touch to your nose. Which is just as fine because thatâs his to claim, too.
âšYOUR WRITINGâšÂ
â i found it interesting the way you decided to describe the house too. iâm not entirely sure why you did, but iâll lay it out here in case itâs something iâm missing, but:
But they leave regardless, and you watch as they make it down the staircase of your elaborate rented house, their chatter coating both the polished floors and the decorated walls.
âȘ and also:
Seriously, does every bedroom in this mansion-like place have a mini kitchen and living area, too?
âȘ for me later on seemed to indicate some kind of imagery contrast. because the place is just so pretty, so sumptuous, but inside reside two siblings alone (at first), feeling the emptiness that the holidays bring them. i donât know, i 100% might be reading too much into it, especially because the details arenât often pejorative or exaggerated, and it can be just you revealing the environment through your characterâs reaction to it, but yeah. welcome to overthinking 24/7.
â you have this control, that iâm sure iâve mentioned a bunch of times already, of information thatâs so incredible. you know exactly when to hold back information and how to reveal it when itâs the right time. and it creates such and anxiety and tension from the very start like:
You know theyâre meeting up with everyone else, but you canât bring yourself to join in on the festivities. Not after whatever the hell you witnessed at dinner last night.Â
Why did YoongiâŠÂ
Fuck, forget about it. Itâs probably nothing.
âȘ i mean!! we read this and are immediately punching the air like itâs nOT NOTHING BESTIE, SPILL đ© and you tease us so fucking bad like:
Frankly, you donât wanna recall how the rest of that went down again.
âȘ yes you do, sweetie, what happened đđ©
âȘ but not only regarding what happened on the trip, but before it. you drop some hints at some sour memory the sibling share regarding that time of the year:
Your brother most definitely heard you from right next door.Â
Eyes shut, you fling your hand around while making your way over to tell him to screw off. He knows better than anyone why you could possibly be in one of these moods, dinner woes or not.
â i love the creative ways in which you describe their feelings. iâve mentioned this in my commentary for the OG chapter, and iâm pretty sure i mentioned it too for forfeit, but i just NEED to point out every time, âcus i mean:
A tsk scratches your teeth before you lean the cocoa against your cup, and the kettle boils just as your blood pressure falls close behind.
âȘ you couldâve just said she was nervous and angry and whatnot, but no. and i donât know if itâs because english isnât my first language, but i struggle so much to write those types of âexpositionsâ on my own work, so i just have to cherish the way you do it.
â another thing iâve mentioned countless times, but it never fails to amaze me when you do it, is the way you use free indirect speech. there ainât no filter between the discourse and their thoughts, and what happens is a complete connection with the characters, we feel with them and we think with them, and that happens in every sentence, not only in bigger rants or rationalizations, but in smaller reactions too, for example, the lack of punctuation here that indicates also a stream of consciousness beyond free indirect speech:
Shut up. Just shut up shut up and talk again because Jungkook looks gravely concerned.
âȘ and the same here, with no punctuation, just rapid thought and impulsive words shown through free indirect speech:
But the dinner, the dinner, the dinner. You didnât ask about it, but Yoongi still couldâve said something about it right he couldâve texted well okay this really shouldnât be that big of a deal anyway maybe itâs nothing but fuck youâre still mad wait youâre saying something,
âHave fun sightseeing.â
âȘ and here:
What does he mean he lied what did he lie about he better explain quick or else⊠a pouch?
âȘ and you mastered this tool so well that youâre able to make writing feel a lot like a movie, âcus you make as visualize things through this speech, like here:
And he finally reaches to fondle your tits to push you over the edge that knock was on your door.
âȘ given that weâre inside the readerâs head, we react to things as she does and itâs not stiff, itâs so fucking organic the way things unfold and develop that ugh it almost makes me frustrated.
âȘ and thatâs why i love dal segno too. the chapter is intense not because of what happens per say or the bits of information we get, but because of how you translate those events to the page and we are 100% on yoongiâs shoes. iâm behind on my reviews (yours and all the other fics iâm reading), but i canât wait to get to dal segno and just fight you.
â i donât have anything specific here to point, other than i thought it was a really smart sequence:
Doors slam a lot louder when theyâre huge.
And leave a more prominent silence, too.
âȘ again, nothing specific, just nice and creative sentencing that had me scrunching up my nose thinking like âdamn, she writes so fucking well, not a single word is wasted to create or further establish mood and atmosphereâ:
Triple, layered, compounded silence.
âȘ same here. actually here i like how you interject their smut with this reality clashes. how the brother is a looming presence whenever they are together:
Doesnât he know heâs on severely borrowed, stolen time?
âȘ and one more, âcus this is just poetic prose at its finest:
So neither do you, simply gazing up at your favorite stars and wondering how their beholder outshines every moon.Â
â this is something that you do all the time, but i just love how you reveal stuff in ways and in moments that weâre too in our heads to notice:
âIâ Got something at the jeweler.â Lamely waving one hand in the air, you feign normalcy as you just tell the truth. âWhen we all went together.â
THINGS TO CONSIDER
â this one took me a while to figure, but i know it couldnât be random:
A hushed conversation determined that Yoongi would only stay for a few more minutes, but neither of you bring it up when a whole seventeen of them fly by.Â
âȘ but then i remembered:
â we donât know when the chapter is happening, but reading it after forfeit lead to some bittersweet moments, like:
âIâll just take you here myself.âÂ
His look of confidence has you averting your gaze in an instant.Â
âJust us.âÂ
Tonight has taken too many turns into madness. Heâs joking, right? Itâs not enough to sneak into your room with your door completely unlocked, huh?
No. Heâs not serious. You both know thatâs the longest shot in history, especially considering your situationship isnât even fully fleshed out.Â
But itâs nice to pretend.
Especially when he sounds so sure itâll be real someday.
âȘ the fact she calls it a situationship (although i get the necessity to make it official), and how she doesnât really seem to see a future for them⊠i donât know, it just made me kinda sad. like when she mentions never telling her brother about their relationship:
Because this little secret cannot be revealed. Not yet, at least. Maybe not ever since your brother would probably riot.
âȘ and even after everything that goes down:
âŠAs long as you can keep whatever this is with him up.
âȘ although, after the three of them interact and itâs nice and familiar and cozy, she does start to consider it, maybe after having her insecurities dealt with and all, but stil...:
And maybe. Just maybe.
You and Yoongi can stand much closer next season.
â we see reader might also have some sides she's not shown yet. we see how she wants to dom yoongi, how â given the fact that yoongi made her feel comfortable in her sexuality â she acts up and talks stuff too how she said in flutter that she wants to! and i mean:
Youâve been wanting to do this for so longâlonger than youâll ever, ever divulge. All the nights you spent touching yourself imagining him watching from your desk, or even right beside you on the bed, whispering things that you will never admit that you thought of yourself.Â
âȘ i know weâre all super hyped to see yoongiâs full form, but damn⊠i think we might be overlooking reader a lil bit too:
Not only that. Itâs also reaching into you and unearthing parts that you wouldnât dare show anyone else. If you were honest, youâre a bit frightened at the thoughts dripping into your mind, coalescing into a dark, wonderful pool.
âȘ or:
âLemme take them off.â
âWhy should I?â
âLet me do it and Iâll show you.â
âȘ and even:
When you fling the shirt towards him, he doesnât move an inch as it reaches his shoes.
âȘ i mean, ffs:
And you feel it. Your defiance. Coming out once more before you can even stop it, âBeing put in your placeââÂ
âȘ also this made me think this happens at least some months after flutter, âcus then she voiced a desire she has to talk more about what she wants and here she does it pretty easily (considering how hard it was for her then).
â i kinda wanna see more of just yoongi and bro talking. i donât think weâve ever had an interaction with them without the reader listening. the same goes for reader and bro, even if we have some scenes already, their dynamic if very interesting to me, the way they trust and know each other so well, and how much they mustâve been through and it translates in every interaction:
âI mean, this trip is cool and all, but holidays arenât reallyâŠâÂ
âOur thing. Yeah.âÂ
â this caught my attention, but if iâm being honest i didnât get it đ at first i thought it was because she said she wanted to forget her name, then i assumed it was so it wouldnât draw brotherâs attention, but iâm not sure:
With a passing thought, you just realized that he hadnât even been using names until then.
â ok, so i do think they lost their parents. âcus they are basically alone at the house all the time, they never reach out to their parents and the only people in readerâs and broâs life are their friends. besides, itâs often said how bro had this pressure of providing for them both and thatâs why he had to outperform at college and get a good job right as he was out too. this chapter makes me think they lost them around christmas eight years ago (although even in sidewalk when yoongi and reader were talking about some memories, her parents werenât mentioned, so who knows really):
You say itâs one of the things you have most in common, but you do kinda want things to be different. Happier. Very much unlike how you felt over the last eight years or so.
â i also think that yoongiâs stolen bracelet has something to do with his ex⊠but i have nothing to back it up lol
FINAL THOUGHTS
i wanna first thank you. thank you for being this amazing person, this mesmerizing author and this creative being. then i wanna thank you because you actually wrote this âcus we⊠asked. like, honestly what the fuck.Â
also, i know i went feral commenting every other paragraph, but the more i write my own stuff i just know how much effort and brainpower it takes to write the smallest sentence and anticipating the reactions itâll get, so i just thought iâd like someone to point those little parts out too. i did, however, cut out a bunch of stuff âcus it was definitely way too long, like. really lmao
anyway, you are incredible. as a author, to define you, i⊠well you are [insert lady gaga clip] talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique and⊠i just really admire you.
the window (3tan) (m) | myg
title:the window (m)  pairing: 3tan!yoongi x reader(f)  series:masterlist | three tangerines | fireworks | house party | basketball | stay | sidewalk talk | friends | dalo | like that | anytime | sundress season | yoongiâs interlude | forfeit | flutter rating/genre: m (18+) ; angst , fluff , smut ; brotherâs best friend au, implied age gap au  summary: you get to spend the holidays in a lavish private lodge with your brother and all his friends. but youâre just really fucking sad tonight⊠and maybe a bit mad, too. note: so in order to not fall more behind than i already am, i went ahead and combined both holiday specials into oneđ„this one came about due to window anonâs reminder about yoongiâs window threat, and everyone that proceeded to cause outright chaos all day after that. so if you want someone to yell at for this, yell at them!!! note 2: this is a holiday special! therefore where it fits/if it fits in future canon is not disclosed. so this can be enjoyed as a one-shot, but i still highly recommend reading all the three tangerines series if you havenât yet<3 itâll make things make a lot more sense. warnings: strong language, alcohol, this yoongi requires his own warning tbh, chains making a comeback who is shocked!!!, or*l (m rec), manhandling, hitting it from the back a ha ha, angst :(((, masturb*tion, exhibiti*nism, omg weâre kinda pissed yâallđł, âŠ.c*ckwarming, rough s*x, slow motion l o l, missi*nary, protected s*x, cmnf (clothed male), pain kink :)), kissing haha, !!!angry!!!s*x!!!!, c*wgirl, light d*m/sub dynamics, tense scenes, bro appearance, body worship, yoongi is deliciously aggravating, but so is brat!reader<333, ch*king (m/f rec), head/hair pulling (m/f), multiple org*sms, yoongiâs fit is basically 2022 grammys have funnđ„Ž, cute af aftercare<3 drop date: january 10th, 2023, 7:17pm est word count: 15.3k bc i canât stfu !!Â
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grocery shopping | miya atsumu x reader
request: Grocery shopping with Atsumu. You tell him to pick up some stuffs from the dairy counter(like cheese, milk, etc) but when you see him walking towards you, all he is holding is Family pack Ice creams in different flavours.đđ "But they were looking at me like 'pick us up', and so I didïżœïżœ", he explains. @nkogneatho
notes: hi dear, sorry this took so long, i was going to write headcannons or a drabble at most and then all sorts of funny ideas started popping up in my head. i included your req ofc but itâs not the main focus if thatâs okay.
characters: pro vb player!miya atsumu x f!reader
genre/warnings: mostly crack tbh, fluff, very chaotic, y/n thinks sheâs getting kidnapped and freaks, they take a ride on a grocery cart, y/n accidentally finds out her boss is a sugar mommy?,tsumu is a sweet boyfie
words: 1.5k
summary: you take atsumu with you on a shopping trip. chaos ensues.
It probably would have been a smarter choice to pick a day when the supermarket was less busy, but the fridge was almost empty and in dire need of replenishing. Today marks Day 3 of you and Atsumuâs new diet, one that he needs since heâs starting an intense conditioning regimen. You decided to participate as well in order to support him, and to get into the habit of eating healthier yourself.
You leave Atsumuâs side to take a basket, but he beats you to it, wheeling out a shopping cart instead. You tilt your head in puzzlement. âAtsumu, weâre not going to buy that much food, weâll never finish it all.â He takes your wrist in one hand and starts steering the cart with the other. âYouâll seeâ
You stop at the fresh produce section, tossing an assortment of fruit and veggies in your trolley as Atsumu perks up beside you, getting an idea. â____, letâs get steak today so I can cook for you.â You raise an eyebrow, skeptical of his abilities. And for good reason. ââTsumu, you tried to make me breakfast two weeks ago and I donât think those eggs were even edible.â He puts a hand on his hip and fakes a pout. âBabe, have some faith in me. âSamu might be the chef of the family, but trust me on this, I promise Iâm not going to poison you.â Despite still being slightly suspicious, you decide not to question him.
You grab a few salad kits for good measure then pull out your phone to tick off your grocery list. âBread, check, energy bars, check, produce, check, salad mix, checkâŠokay, I think all thatâs left is meat and dairy, letâs go get your steak.â You glance up when he didnât answer. ââTsumu?â Your boyfriend has disappeared and so has the grocery cart.
You look for him in the meat aisle. Nothing. You look in the next aisle. Nothing. Youâre about to send him a text when you suddenly feel a pair of hands seize you by waist, taking you away from the secure ground beneath your feet. Your life flashes before your eyes. Headlines of âMissing person, last seen at XX Martâ fills your mind. No way is this happening right now. I am NOT getting abducted in broad daylight, in the middle of a crowded grocery store! I have to get help; I canât go down without a fight.
You yelp while struggling in the hold of your attacker, furiously kicking at empty space. You see an old woman a little farther down the aisle. Thereâs hope. âHelp! Somebod- â you shriek in panic before a hand comes up to muffle your words. â____! Chill out, itâs me!â You still at the sound of your boyfriend. Too late. The elderly woman approaches you, swinging her cane and nearly whacks Atsumu in the shoulder. âMaâam, maâam! This is a misunderstanding, Iâm her boyfriend,â he explains, fending her off. She slowly withdraws her cane and stares at you. âIs that true?â You meet her eyes, then mumble an affirmation, ducking your head shamefully. âYoung women nowadays⊠back in my youth, I never would have dared to cause such a scene,â she tsks, glaring at you disapprovingly before she walks away. Oops.
Atsumu sets you down, eyeing you with furrowed brows. â____. Bro, what the fuck?â You can only smile sheepishly. âSorry that I freaked out on you. I thought I was about to fall victim to human trafficking. But you know how scared I get when my mom sends me articles about girls getting kidnapped,â you point out, attempting to defend yourself. He sighs and pinches the bridge of his nose. âI told you before, nothing will happen when youâre with me. Did you forget who you were? Youâre ____, Miya Atsumuâs girl, and no one gets to mess with you.â
You instantly soften at his words but puff your cheeks out afterwards. âHmph, well something could have happened just now, and itâd be all your fault for leaving me,â you accuse, pretending to sulk. He gestures at the security cameras. âThere are cameras everywhere, not to mention this whole place is crawling with people. Besides, even if something were to happen, I would come for you. No one can touch Miya Atsumuâs girlfriend and get away with it.â He taps the handle of the cart. âAnyways, get in. This is why I insisted on taking this thing.â
â Youâre not serious. Weâre too old for this, we canât be doing things like riding shopping carts,â you reasoned. He rolls his eyes. âBullshit, me and âSamu used to do this a lot and still do sometimes. And donât lie to me, I know you want to, so get in before people come into aisle.â You bite your lip. He was right, so you donât protest when he picks you up again and places you inside with your legs over the front. âHold on tight.â
He puts one foot on the metal bar and pushes off the ground with the other, then hops on, propelling you forward, riding off the momentum. You clutch at the sides of the cart, feeling the air whip at your face, wind running through your hair. The two of you laugh in glee like children.
All was well until a womanâs back comes into view. Your eyes widen. âBaby, stop, weâre going to hit her!â He curses and immediately steps down, reducing the speed until the wheels squeak to a stop, just in time. You turn towards him to scold him. âI knew this was a bad idea; that was so dangerous! We could have hit this lady or even gotten hurt ourselves trying to avoid her!â
âVery fortunate that you didnât, Miss ____,â says a voice. A very familiar voice. You twist your body back around, looking directly into the stern eyes of your manager. You take a moment, becoming conscious of your current state: hair disheveled, clothes in disarray, legs dangling over the edge of a shopping cart to top it all off. Is there a worse way to encounter your boss outside of work? You hastily straighten up. Well, straighten up the best you could in the situation. You smile nervously. âMs. Wright! Wow, hi! What a coincidence seeing you here!â You notice a young man standing beside her. âOh, I didnât know you had a son. Heâs really handsome, you must be proud,â you added. She purses her lips, clearly displeased. âActually, Miss ____, heâs not my son, heâs my boyfriend. We have a busy agenda today. If thereâs nothing else, Iâll see you at work on Monday.â
Your face turns white as you process what just happened. The atmosphere is silent. Atsumu starts to push the cart, waiting until you make it to another aisle before bursting into laughter. âMiya! That was so not funny. I canât believe that happened. First, she sees me in this state. Then, I mistake her boyfriend for her son? I even called him handsome! Oh my god, itâs really over for me.â
âCalm down, she said to see you at work, itâs fine. Plus, itâs not your fault you didnât know she was a cougar. That sugar baby must be living the lif- â You gasp and reach up to cover his mouth before he says anything else. âShush, Atsumu! What if sheâs still around? Yeah, Iâm definitely going to see her on MondayâŠso she can fire me!â you groan. âJust get me out of this stupid cart so we can finish buying what we need, I just want to go home so I can curl up and scream into the blankets.â He smirks. âOh, you want to scream in bed? No problem, leave that to me.â You slap his arm, and he feigns hurt.
While at the cash register, you realize that you forgot a few items. âShit, âTsumu, I forgot the butter and yoghurt. Can you quickly go grab those?â He nods. âWait here, Iâll be fast.â A couple minutes pass and you grow worried, watching the employee scan the last of your groceries.
You finally see your boyfriend return with his arms full. Except, what heâs carrying are massive pints of ice cream. You cross your arms. âAtsumu. What did I just say? This doesnât look like butter and yoghurt.â
He peers at you with puppy eyes. âBabe, you canât blame me. They were calling out to me and begging to be picked up! Besides, I got both your favourite flavour and mine. We need this for movie night.â
âWhat about the diet?â
âItâs not a big deal. Also, you seem like you need this after what happened. And I feel like I might have been responsible for some of it. Just a bit.â
You sigh and pay for the ice cream. Heâs got a point. Guess youâll have to make another trip to the store tomorrow.
a/n: actually this is the first time iâm writing a crack fic, but i have crack hcs in my wips if anyone is curious! iâm not even sure if this is funny or nah lmaoo please let me know
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Hey there! Could I please get a fred Weasley x reader where the reader is a Slytherin, but befriends everyone all the same, maybe with the trope of her being best friends w the twins and everyone trying to set her and Fred up bc there's so much tension? But they're terribly oblivious? I absolutely love this trope lmaoo. Thank you and have a wonderful day!âšâ€ïž
This is cute-- How in the world do you guys come up with this adorable stuff omfg.
Warnings: Abuse, swearing, panic attacks, slight NSFW conversations, set in a non voldy world.
You were a strange one. A Slytherin with a Hufflepuff personality. Honestly anyone that knew you questioned if for once the sorting hat was wrong for the first time. You had friends EVERYWHERE. Fred and George had heard of you, people saying even Filch could find you enjoyable to be around. Once they heard that, oh boy, they had to meet you. Fred and George finally did by the lake one day. Fred was talking to George, noticing a few cracks from limbs in the tree they were standing under here and there. Finally they had an answer as to what was making it do that when they heard âOH SHITâ followed by âINCOMING!â followed by you falling right into Fredâs arms. âMy bad, I was trying to get a bird back in its nest.â You apologized, hopping down the the ground. Fred blinked a couple of times, looking at the tree and then you. âUh... twig.â George said, pointing to his head to indicate you had a twig in your hair. âHmm? Oh! thank you!â You realized. âDid... You just fall out of a tree?â Fred asked. âYouâd be surprised on how much that happens. Oh are you those twins Iâve been hearing about?â You asked. âProbably. Iâm Fred--â âThatâs George, yep I know.â You nodded. â...Who are you?â George asked. âOh-- Iâm Y/n!â You said. âOhhhhh. See this is beginning to make sense now.â George nodded. Fred was just... Staring at you. It wasnât a perplexed face of âWhat the fuck just happenedâ. It was more: âThis girl is.. Pretty?âÂ
The twins started having more interactions with you. But there was the day you three became friends that neither of the boys will forget. Fred and George were sitting in the library. Reading? No. Napping? Yes. Well, until you slid into a seat. âY/n?â Fred yawned. âAct. natural.â You said with this wild eyed look making George raise a brow. Then Draco ran in... With green hair. Fred was now awake and you were hiding your face in a book. âHave you seen Y/n!?â Draco growled. âNo... But I see you decided to wear your Slytherin pride today.â George snorted. âYou.â Draco growled. Then he noticed you laughing. He pulled down the book. âYOU!â He shouted. âShit!â You gasped before Fred slid a chair in front of Draco, George bolting with you. You all hid in the one place Draco would never be caught dead in. The Gryffindor common room. You collapsed out of breath on the couch laughing with the boys. âWhat in the world made you do that?â George wheezed. âHe decided to be a dick to my friend this morning. I got revenge. Tomorrow Iâm thinking blue. Heâs been giving Ravenclaw trouble lately.â You laughed making Fred snort. âYour idea is amazing, might I suggest we rig an exploding ink pen?â George said. âWith silver ink, because red just seems to clash with that boyâs eyes.â You said making the boys laugh harder. âOh I think weâre going to enjoy having you around, wonât we Freddie boy?â George asked. âIndeed Georgie. Indeed.â Fred chuckled.
So the mischievous three were introduced to the world. You had this policy though: Only prank the assholes. So that automatically meant a lot of kids from Slytherin. With each prank you got closer to the boys. Specifically Fred. Something about him just drew you in, like a moth to a flame. George wasnât stupid either, he could see the looks you two would give each other. When you all entered your fourth year, you had started helping out with their little underground business. You spent the first two weeks of summer that year at home but actually ended up staying with the Weasleysâ. You seemed... A little off though. Fred and George both noticed you begin to space out at times, giving off almost this sad look. Whenever theyâd talk to you though, you looked at them like you normally would. Something was wrong. They could feel it. It wasnât until they met your father at the station they realized what was going on. He seemed to snap at you a lot, making you go completely silent. To anyone that didnât know you this was a normal response. To the boys though, you always had something to say. If you were quiet, this was because you were afraid. Not disciplined. You sat on the train in complete silence. Neither of the boys were sure if they should ask you about your dad. You focused on the rain drops on the window. âIâve always liked the rain. What about you guys?â You finally asked. âMakes me tired as shit.â George said making you crack a smile. âHeard one of Harryâs uncles is teaching this year.â Fred said. âI think I remembered him mentioning that. The Remus guy?â You asked. âHeâs standing in while Quirrell is away.â George nodded. âAs long as it isnât like last yearâs substitute.â You groaned. âFucking Gilderoy.â All of you said in unison making each other laugh. âI swear a simple breeze makes Quirrell catch something.â George sighed. âHe does end up getting sick a lot. Remember when he got chicken pox?â You asked. âYou wouldâve thought the bastard was dying.â Fred nodded. âHe has the immune system of an infant, I swear.â you laughed.Â
You all sat around in the Great Hall, you catching a glimpse of who the new substitute professor was. He had a scar on his face and it reminded you of something. You just couldnât figure out what. Eventually though, you came to like the way Remus taught. He had a sense of humor. Not that Quirrell didnât it was just very awkward when he did finally crack a damn joke. Remus rose a brow when he saw your first and last name on the roll call. âMiss Y/n, is your mother perhaps Persephone L/n?â Remus asked. Fred rose a brow. âShe was sir.â you said, making George look up. âWas?â Remus asked. âShe passed on when I was eight sir. Why, did you know her?â you asked, earning a couple of students to glance at your response. âI did. Very kind woman. Who did she marry?â Remus asked. âCassian Lestrange sir.â You responded, making everyone now halt. â...I see.â Remus nodded. âSomething wrong?â You asked. âNo offense.. I truly mean none. But I genuinely cannot see Cassian as a father.â Remus admitted. You nodded looking down. âHeâs... An interesting man.â You muttered, your look distant and pained. Remus noticed, but changed the subject. Fred looked back at his desk. He had no idea about any of this, much less a distant relation to Draco. Judging by your reaction to the questions though, Fred decided it was best to leave it be. You enjoyed Remusâ class, him noticing a few similarities to your mother as you interacted with other students. You always had a smile on your face when you spoke to others. But the one thing he always noticed was the looks that you and Fred would share. George usually paired up with a girl but Fred ALWAYS paired up with you. You two worked well together. It almost reminded him of two other people he knew... Today though, wasnât the best of days. It was time to practice Boggarts. You already knew what yours was, but you werenât ready to exactly displayed to the class. You however walked forward and did it anyways, holding your breath as the Boggart began to shift. Finally it did.
Into your father. You opened your mouth to say a spell but nothing came out, your hands shaking as it inched forward. Fred looked at you and then the boggart, quickly pulling you back with one arm and shouting âriddikulusâ. You couldnât still your breathing and it only seemed to be getting worse. âY/n? Look at me.â Fred said, ignoring the students watching you. Remus locked the closet and you hyperventilated. âClass dismissed.â Remus said, shuffling the other students out. âI-I canât-- b-breathe.â you whimpered. George ran over and you gripped your head. âY/n. Iâm right here Love, follow my breathing.â Fred said softly. You followed his movements. âWhatâs your favorite book?â George asked making Remus raise a brow. âS-sense and Sensibility.â You answered, still regulating your breathing. âPersonally Iâm more of a short story man, what about you Freddie?â George asked. âNot big on reading. More of a napping fellow.â Fred answered. You let out a small laugh and straightened your posture. âWhatâs your favorite class?â Fred asked. âP-probably this one.. with the exception of t-today.â you answered. Remus reached into his drawer and handed you chocolate and a bottled water. âThank you professor.â You muttered. You sat down and sighed. âY/n... I hate to ask this, truly I do. But is there anything going on at home?â Remus asked. You didnât say anything. âI... Donât want to answer that question.â You finally said. Fred frowned and George exchanged a look. âBoys, do you mind leaving us for a few moments?â Remus asked. Fred kneeled to you, looking at your face. âIâll be outside if you need me. Okay?â He asked. You nodded and he got up, leaving with George.
The door closed and Fred let out a long sigh. âI am going to kill her father, want to help?â Fred said. âHand me a shovel.â George said simply. âWhy didnât she say anything?â Fred asked. âShe doesnât even want to talk to Lupin Fred. You saw her face, she most likely didnât want to remember.â George said. Fred looked at the door and sighed. âWe canât let her go home George. Not this summer.â Fred said. âIâm with you.â George agreed. The two boys became a bit more protective over you. But they found it so strange that you still kept the happy go lucky personality despite going through all of this. Then Fred found you one night in the astronomy tower with a blanket. You were propped up against one of the stone archâs and looking at the night sky. âY/n?â Fred asked. You looked over at him. âHey Fred.â You said with that smile. He sat across from you. âWhat brings you up here?â Fred asked. âInsomnia. And cookies.â You said. âCookies?â Fred asked. You scooched closer to him, pushing a tin of cookies to him. He took one and you sighed looking at the stars. âCan I ask you something?â He said. âSure.â You nodded. âWhat keeps that smile on your face all the time?â He asked. You let out a long breath, thinking over a detailed answer. âLots of reasons. I have two kickass best friends that will fight for me no matter what, I have really cool teachers, I have friends who are like family.â you answered. âBut... I keep that smile because some times someone just needs to see the good in the world. I wonât lie to you. My life is much darker than I think you accounted for. But if my smile provides someone else some light then damn it Iâll keep this up.â You said. Fred looked at you surprised. âY/n...â He muttered. You looked at Fred and he said nothing, pulling you into his arms. You slowly hugged him back and he sighed. âI swear if anyone tries anything with you again, I will personally send them to their grave.â Fred said making you laugh. âIâm serious!â Fred said, not being able to keep a straight face seeing your smile. âShut up and take a cookie.â You laughed.Â
You two were found passed out the next morning my Luna. You were in Fredâs arms and he was holding you close. You two never brought it up, despite the fact that both of you were blushing like crazy when you woke up. It was now CRYSTAL fucking clear how Fred felt about you to George after witnessing a snowball fight between you two that resulted in Fred tickling your sides and making you laugh during a Hogsmeade trip. You smiled in his arms, faces inches apart. If Fred and Georgeâs jackass brother hadnât gotten into a fight with Draco, George was 95% sure you two wouldâve kissed.Â
You seemed distracted by something else though, and that was your professor. The scar on his face- why did it look familiar? And why was Remus going to Snape for a secret potion? You noticed that he was pretty secretive about his personal life and Harry never answered the question of where the mark came from. You took what you like to call âThe Granger Approach.â Which was basically reading until you had a reliable answer. Fred sat with you the entire time, napping or talking to George while you read. Both boys were passed out by the time you found an answer. âOh... Shit.â you realized, making Fred open an eye. âFind what youâre looking for?â George yawned. â...Yeah and I think Remus is going to be absent tomorrow.â You said looking at the full moon through the large glass windows. âWhyâs that?â Fred asked. âHeâs a werewolf.â You said in a whisper. Both boys looked at you with a âYou canât be seriousâ expression. âWhat makes you say that?â Fred asked. âRon said something. Harryâs class saw his boggart. It was the moon.â You said. George blinked. âIf our little brother is your proof thatâs not exactly reliable.â George said. âHow do you explain the potions he gets from Snape, or the scar on his face, or the fact that he was leaving campus this afternoon?â You asked. âHe was?â Fred asked. âHe was sneaking around but I noticed him.â You shrugged. âAlright. Say he doesnât show up tomorrow. Who fills in for a substitute?â George asked. âProbably Snape.â you grumbled. âYouâre a Slytherin and you donât like Snape? My God you really are a strange one.â Fred teased making you smile. George rolled his eyes. âDo we ask him about this?â George asked. âNo. We leave this alone unless Remus needs help.â you said. âHow in the hell were you not sorted into Hufflepuff? Like honestly?â Fred asked. âI have no idea. Luna says its never wrong though.â You shrugged.Â
Sure enough, Remus didnât show up and Snape took over class that day. Fred, George and you all exchanged knowing glances but overall didnât say anything. The school year finally came to a close and you were honestly sad to see Remus go. The crazy thing was: That day when you explained your boggart to Remus, he told you that his door was open to you if you needed to leave home. You declined but Fred was hellbent on you staying with them for the summer. He hated the idea of you being potentially in harmâs way. This offer you accepted. You showed up, bags in hand with that same beautiful smile. Molly was of course excited to see you and you were happy to be there. The Burrow honestly felt like home. You and Fred had so many moments though that made the whole family go âDude. Kiss already. PLEASE.â Specifically when you saw a spider and screamed, practically climbing up Fred while he killed the damn thing. âYou managed to go into the forbidden forest alone and came back unscathed but a small spider scares you?â Fred asked, your legs having a death grip around his torso. âTHEY ARE FUCKING CREEPY FRED!â You whined. âItâs smaller than you!â He laughed, holding you up. âSO IS A GRENADE!â you whined. You hopped down and eyed the dead spider. âAfraid itâll crawl--â âFRED IT HAD BABIES!â You screamed, climbing right back up him, more directed to his face. âOh for Christâs sake--â He said, enchanting a broom to sweep them out. âYouâre a Slytherin. All of you have creepy creatures for pets and you are terrified of..â âFred faced you as you were linked to his side, inches away from him. You looked in his eyes, almost as if you were looking for something, swallowing hard. âWhat the hell happened here?â Ron asked, seeing the two of you. âI saw a spider.â âOH GOD WHERE--â
George was tired of this tension. Yes, it was cute to see his brother head over heels. But my GOD WERE YOU FUCKING DENSE. BOTH OF YOU. How could you two have so many OBVIOUS moments that would make people who barely knew you go âOh so they like each otherâ But you two still be clueless to the otherâs intentions. You two also talked endlessly to George and Ginny. Both of them would sit there listening wanting to say something, but kept their oaths of silence. This year things were bound to change though. You see: this year was a Triwizard tournament. Other schools were coming to this shindig. And a boy from Durmstrang seemed awfully fixated on you. You were friendly, inviting him to sit and Fred would just be internally screaming the whole time watching you. The Durmstrang boy would do things that literally made Fredâs eye fucking twitch: playing with your hair, complimenting your smile, constantly looking at you. You were oblivious to this being flirty though, unaware of the boyâs crush on you. Finally one day Fred had to talk to you about it. He could not stand watching this little fucker with you. âYou should talk to her Fred. Tell her how you feel.â George said. âAnd if she doesnât feel the same way?â Fred asked. George practically slammed his head down onto the table in frustration, releasing a long groan. âJUST. ASK. HER.â George whined, making Fred jump. âGood God man, whatâs gotten into you!?â Fred asked. âNOTHING FRED. ABSOLUTELY NOTHING.â George groaned, getting up and making Ginny nearly die of silent laughter.Â
You were in the library, grabbing a few books for a herbology project when Fred popped up, scaring the shit out of you. âChrist! Say something when youâre behind me!â You breathed. âSorry! Sorry.â Fred apologized. âWhat do you need?â You asked curiously. âWhatâs going on with you and that Durmstrang kid?â Fred asked. âWhat do you mean?â you asked, moving down the aisle, looking for a specific book. âDo you like him?â Fred asked. âHeâs cool.â You shrugged. âNot like that Y/n.â Fred huffed. âLike what?â You asked. âRomantically. Do you like him romantically?â Fred asked. âWha-- no!â You gagged. Fred felt a wave of relief wash over him. âWhy did you want to know?â You asked. âItâs just... He acts like he likes you. Thatâs all.â Fred said. You stopped and turned around, a questioning squint on your face. âWould it have bothered you if I did?â You asked. âYes.â Fred answered, no hesitation in his words. âWhy?â you asked. Fuck. Fred did not think this through. âIt just wouldâve.â Fred said. âAgain, why would this have bothered you?â You asked. âNo particular reason!â He lied. âAnswer the god damn question before I ask out Luka out of spite!â You snapped. âYou do that and I ask Angela out!â He said back. You glared. âOh that bothers you!?â Fred noticed the expression. âYes it bothers me!â You said. âWhy!?â Fred asked. âI asked you first, you dolt!â You said. Both of you were quickly becoming aggravated, glaring at each other. Fred couldnât take it anymore and slammed his lips onto yours, resulting in you dropping the book in your hands and cupping his cheeks. You two eventually pulled away for this stupid thing called air and you let out a small laugh. âWell shit Fred, if you wouldâve just started with that I wouldnât have had to ask.â You laughed. He smiled, his hands around your waist. âYouâre lucky weâre in public or else I wouldâve done a lot more than that Princess.â Fred said in your ear. You looked at him with a smirk âIf I knew making you jealous would make you act like this, my God I wouldâve made friends with this kid ages ago.â You laughed. âOh bite your tongue.â He chuckled. âHmm, Iâm thinking I leave that to you.â you teased. He shook his head, kissing you again.Â
George caught you two and he actually screamed âHALLEFUCKINGLUJAHâ at the top of his lungs, making both of you jump. You three ended up in detention (you and Fred were in trouble for the book mess), George telling you two how the past few months were absolute hell. âI have been watching you two jackasses, trying to get you to DATE since LAST JANUARY. ITâS OCTOBER.â George complained. âIt wasnât that bad!â You laughed. âNot that bad-- NOT THAT BAD!? FRED TALKS MY GOD DAMN EAR OFF ABOUT YOU AT NIGHT-- I DONâT SLEEPâ George whined. âHas he now?â You asked, smirking at Fred who was smiling. âYouâre always on the bastardâs mind! And I have to listen to Ginny complain to me with the same issue-- âY/n was talking about Fred again to Hermione. Something about if given the chance sheâd definitely shag himâ.â George quoted making you choke on air and cough as Fred looked at you with an amused smirk.  âWould you now?â Fred asked. You rolled your eyes âWhat was it you said to me a few hours ago-- âYouâre lucky weâre in public or else--ââ âI remember what I said Darling, I just wanted to know where your mind was.â Fred teased. âOh you know exactly what Iâm thinking you little shit.â You griped making him snort. âOh God Mcgonagall better come back soon, Iâm locked in a room with two randy jackasses.â George prayed aloud. âRelax weâre not going to shag.â Fred said. âThank god.â George sighed. âThatâs not until three.â Fred yawned making you snort and George slammed his head on his desk. âDRINK HOLY WATER YOU UNGODLY SINNERSâÂ
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Ryeeeen, I have been avoiding tumblr all day so that I don't get spoiled and looking forward to finally getting home and being able to appreciate the masterpiece that I knew this chapter was going to be.
And I was absolutely right. I am so blown away by this chapter and you'll probably be able to tell in this very long post. I just decided to put all of my thoughts as I was reading, so this is a lot, I'm warning you.
From the beginning making me go đ„șđ„șđ„ș with that "Not after legitimately missing your company."
The way I fucking gasped out loud when I read Namjoon's name oh my god and then Hobi's too lmaoo. I'm so invested in every single little 3tan detail it's insane.
"When he straightens, the ring on his chain swings into his chest." hmm why this detail about JK đ€đ€đ€
âAll that reading and you couldnât read an invite.â lmao love this studio dynamic too and excited to see more of them whenever you decide to write about them.
âCall went fine. Theyâre almost done. But! Thatâs not important. I saw her.â aaaah it's so exciting when things from the spoilers and previous chapters come together but also this makes me so nervous.
"Is all this what having a future is like? " aaaaw Yoongiii đ„șđ„șđ„ș
"As the room rides the high of Jungkookâs announcement, Yoongi decides that he wants more of it. In a lot of other aspects of his life." đđđ hmmmm
âHave you ever loved someone?â JK coming in with the loaded questions.
âYou might remember her. Actually, yeah! You know her brother.â my worst fears have just been confirmed and I am not okay. But also of course they would both be in love with OC, she's amazing.
"As Jungkook nervously laughs, Yoongi feels himself shutting down. Slipping, falling, plummeting back into the dark. Below where he was before, which was already considerably cold." nooooooo I already feel so much pain and I fear that this is just the beginning.
" He doesnât even have you.
So why does this feel like a loss?" âčïžâčïžâčïž
"What does he have? Not much. Just a history of getting around and a bruised as fuck heart." nooo Yoongi baby you are so much more than that
"She was right.Â
Everyone will eventually leave him.
And heâll end up alone. " who hurt my baby like this, I need to know so I can hurt them 100 times worse
"It affects how he feels sick that heâs gonna end things." đđđ
I knew he was going to feel like he isn't good enough for her and their relationship wouldn't work out. But I believe that OC can help him realize that isn't true.
"He didnât even know his shoulders were tense until he heard your voice.Â
After a beat, he silently sighs. He doesnât think heâll ever get tired of hearing you over the phone. " they really need to be together because they make each other so happy đđđđ
âI just need to remember what itâs like to kiss you.â oh my god the line's here. I can't even explain how I feel right now because there are too many emotions at once.
âFine. What do you want for dinner? Seokjinâs back in town so weâre gonna hang at the house.â wait oh my god lmaoo. We are all fools. At least I can keep calling him bro, I'm too used to it at this point.
"You knew your brother had a thing for Yuriâs older sisterâand frankly, you donât blame himâbut to see how flustered he always is when it comes to her? Itâs too good to ever pass up." cuuuute
"Thereâs a bowl of water next to his unwelcome mat. " cat dad Yoongi is too damn cute of a concept.
"One thingâs for sure: their whole life would transform simply because they tried. Theyâd enter a phase of their life that theyâre always going to remember, intertwining with a man theyâre never gonna forget." đđđđđ
"Of course, this could just be another byproduct of your worrying, so you blaze past it. No more of that, remember? Heâs proven himself over and over that you donât have to second guess." đ„șđ„șđ„ș
"Damn. All the excitement that you were harboring the whole day seems suddenly ponderous, weighing your shoulders down before plummeting to kitchen tile." đđđ my poor baby
âI could answer for him.â ...
âBut you should probably ask him straight up.â Omg he's such a little shit
"Oh, you hate him. Where are your boxing gloves?" lmaooo very relatable
"You basically admitted everything under the Sun.Â
Without even knowing if your feelings would reflect off the Moon." Ryeeen the way you word things is so beautiful.
"If they stop talking because of you, a day wouldnât go by without you feeling like absolute shit.
Fuck.
You think back to what you thought in the car, wondering what you would do if your brother ever saw one of your friends without you knowing.
Just the thoughtâa thought you didnât think youâd ever have to considerâmakes your stomach roll and keel over. Itâd be so weird. You would feel so⊠betrayed." I'm glad that at least OC can rationalize why her brother would feel upset if he found out about her and Yoongi. Because I'm too blinded by my want for them to be happy together to be understanding at this point.
"Itâs okay. Your steering wheel can witness all your tears on the way home. Or maybe not home. Wherever you decide to go. Taeâs? Reiaâs? Domâs? Yuriâs like you said you would? Any. Any of them really." I'm so happy she has so many people she can go to when she feels like this.
âThank you for the food,â you rasp out. Bolder yet still on the verge of collapse, you vacate your chair. âLooks like you win.â  Nooooođđđ
"Because there isnât someone pushing you up against a door this time. No one asking you to give them a good luck kiss." there are real tears in my eyes at this point.
âCoward!â Damn, I don't even know what to say at this point. đđđ
"And why wouldnât he? Jungkook probably talked about that damn ring he has on his chainâthe same one you still have in your bottom drawer. " ah there it is
"Yoongi.
This old, silly man.
A man that really needs to follow his own damn advice." YES MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY.
âI want all of it.â I have been waiting for one of them to say these words for so long and it feels so good
âBesides.â His little huff of laughter stings. âIâm fucked up, doll. You deserve a lot better than me, anyway.â I really hope he realizes that's not true soon đ„șđ„șđ„ș
âBaby. Stop.â Hell yeah, girl! Use that pet name!
"Something in you switches immediately. Because this isnât about you anymore; something is up with Yoongi." Something about the way they are just so protective of each other really shows how much they care.
âWhat?â Why the hell is he running? Donât let him back away so easily. Not when heâs finally opening up. âYouâre more than enough.â Yes yes yes. I knew I could count on OC to try to dispel all of those thoughts from his head.
âI wanna be happy.â ...
âAnd I want you to be happy, too.â That's all I want too, my babies đđđ
"The you from a year ago was brave enough to come here in the first place. Youâll be damned if the you a year from today wonders what couldâve happened if you stayed." I'm so proud to see how far OC has come. Throughout all of the chapters she has been growing and growing but this chapter really shows how strong and amazing she has become. I love that for her, truly.
"What you feel for Yoongi is endless. An ocean. Deep, and blue, and vast, and terrifying." đđđ
"As you pull him in impossibly close, a thought pierces through you like lightning. That maybeâjust maybeâhe speaks through actions, because his mind already says too much." They understand each other so well
âYour dick is big and I wanna suck it.â Lmaooo what the fuck.
âBut Iâm really fucking into you, doll.â why does he have to say it like that??? I'm going crazy, I have no idea how OC can live like this
âThatâs what I donât get. You donât need to do anything, I just⊠You make things make sense.âÂ
âOh.âÂ
âAnd youâŠâ He sighs. âYou make me feel safe.â oh my fucking god
âI meant from myself.â Poor baby omg đ„șđ„șđ„ș
"Your throat depletes in size. What has he been going through this whole time? What other destruction has he been inflicting on himself? Where is this darkness stemming from? " omg now OC is having the same thoughts we were after reading 3tanDS. I feel you, girl, it's a lot to process.
"So youâre gonna help him. And youâll start by finally listening to what heâs been trying to drill into your mind. By saying everything youâve wanted but never had the guts to say, clutching him like heâll disappear if you let go." yes yes yes.
âYou.â A tear rolls. âAll of you.â ...
âWhatever you want.â...
âItâs yours.â This whole moment was so beautiful, Ryen. Them being so vulnerable made me so emotional, I'm so proud of both of them.
"Because he will always wait for your lead, and youâre starting to understand and love that more and more." đ„șđ„șđ„ș
"You always do with him, even if you donât think you are, even if it starts with you doubting yourself while holding a headboard. Yoongi brings out the darkest parts of you, showing you that they can be the best ones." They help each other to be better in so many ways đđđ
âAnd you only wanna fuck if I keep the chains on.â drunk OC knows what's up.
âAlmost got me for a sec,â he drones. âI know my girl can last longer than that.â Not the my girl omg. Like I haven't been through enough in this chapter already.
âWho do you think I am?â you rasp.Â
Hissing laughter, Yoongi leans forward to plant a wet kiss on your sweaty forehead. âMine,â he simply states, like itâs been fact this whole time. " oh my fucking god
âIâve been yours.â đđđ
"The finish line is right up ahead. Youâve been through the mud and the rain, but you haven't been alone.
Because Yoongi has been running with you the entire time, picking you up when you needed it, and removing obstacles you didnât even know were coming. Heâs been here, here, here, watching you take every step every inch of the way." I really hope they get to that finish line with as few obstacles as possible. But whatever happens, they're so strong together that they can get through anything, and this chapter really proves that.
âFeel like yâall can pick up where you left off.â Nooo, I had so much faith in you, man. I really really hope that bro can still come to terms with Yoongi and OC's relationship once they decide to tell him. Because all of their relationships with each other are truly precious and I hope they can stay that way.
Fuuuck, the ending as always has me on my toes. But I'm honestly kind of glad that we won't get to see that conversation for a while, because I don't think I'm ready for it and I would like to pretend that it's not happening for a bit lmao.
Ryen, this was so perfect aaaaah. I can't express how much I loved this chapter and even with all of my incoherent thoughts I poured out here, I feel speechless.
I really am very proud of OC and Yoongi for talking it out the way they did, because it's truly a very hard thing to do. But I'm so glad they didn't leave everything unresolved đ„șđ„șđ„ș
I really need some time for this chapter to fully sink in. There is so much to process and think about. I'll no doubt be rereading and being blown away by your genius. Thank you for this perfect chapter đđ
forfeit (3tan) (m) | myg
title: forfeit (m) pairing: 3tan!yoongi x reader(f) series: masterlist | three tangerines | fireworks | house party | basketball | stay | sidewalk talk | friends | dalo | like that | anytime | sundress season | yoongiâs interlude rating/genre: m (18+) ; angst , fluff , smut ; brotherâs best friend au, implied age gap au summary: something is up with yoongi. note: alright, yâall. i wonât say much here, other than thank you. thank you all endlessly for the support that youâve shown me and this series thus far. itâs been one heck of a ride, and a huge part of that is bc of all of you. i will leave the rest of my mushy thoughts for the end bc the wait for this has been long enough! note 2: if you havenât read the three tangerines series yet, read the other parts first! it will all make more sense. lastly, this chapter wasnât betaâd bc i wanted it to be a surprise for everyone! warnings: pov switch (just one), cursing, house party, yoongi in glasses<33, angst, choking, crying, pen*tration, studio talk, jk is here and he is blond lmao, BRO REVEAL FINALLYYY, hair/head pulling, hitting from the back, protected s*x, uhhhhhhh 34+35 l o l, oral (f/m rec), rough s*x, kissing (yes, this is a warning and iâm warning u that itâs a warning), a struggle, spanking, assss play, yoongi is rude, overthinking, did i say angst?, alcohol, weed mention, spitting, manhandling, cowgirl, the chains!! stay!! on!!, body worship, obligatory âyoongi on the phoneâ warning :)) drop date: october 25th, 2022, 7:17pm est word count: 22.6k holy hell
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