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utsuge · 5 months ago

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overall I think the philosophical ideas developed were really intriguing and SCAji is obviously very smart and creative. I am interested in reading Wittgenstein and I feel like in concept the End Sky II ending should've made me mad in the "it was all a dream" type deal but the way it was pulled off with Ayana and DTRH I/II and inner/outerworld etc etc; it's a nice commentary of sorts on narratology and what "storytelling" means and I really loved it as an ending. all that being said, it is very unfortunate SCAji can't write to save his fucking life and reading it was excruciating because I dont think he can genuinely write well. at all

#knocking on heavens door as an epilogue actively hindered the story and made me think lower of it than I already did tbh #which is a real shame. because like I said. totally loved end sky II #I consider khd to be some sort of violence against the story itself because of how painfully annoying it was #it just kept Going

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