#HIM IN BLACK IS SO DAMNπ©π©π€β¨β¨
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LIKE CAN HE FUCKING STEP ON ME??
GOOD LORD! HOW IS HE SO HOT??? SAKSJEHEMSLSKEHSJSS
JUST KILL ME AT THE POINT GOOD SIR-
THE SWEAR WORDS THAT I HAVE THE URGE TO SCREAM ARE SIMPLY OVERWHELMING!
WHY CANT HE BE MINE?? (Iβm very delusional)
#ni-ki#nishimura riki#niki nishimura#riki nishimura x reader#ni-ki smut#ni-ki suggestive#niki fluff#niki#ni-ki fluff#enhypen smut#LIKE SIR PUT THE TONGUE BACK INSIDE!!#STOP THIS MADNESS#I CANNOT DO THIS ANYMORE#WTF DID I GET MYSELF INTO??#WTF IS WRONG WITH HIM???#HIM IN BLACK IS SO DAMNπ©π©οΏ½οΏ½β¨β¨
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Hello Nici!!
It's been a while, but here I am in your inbox again because I am so in LOVE with g&m π«Άβ¨ which isn't a shocker really, I am in love with everything you write haha
Chapter 1
no, scratch that, your dad's ridiculously hot best friend β leaning casually against the counter, arms crossed over his chest.
okay it's amazing how you've built the tension and want from the first paragraph itself. Like you can tell something is going on, or something is going to happen between the two of them! π« π«
he looked so damn good in that black shirt that hugged his broad shoulders and a navy overshirt casually rolled up to his elbows.Β
Honestly? YUM π€€π€€π€€
you paint his so well idk which Satoru I want more, like they are all competing against each other ππ
Or did they start giving out degrees for partying these days?"
Please he sounds so old like he's about to say "Back in my days..." it's so much like him.
And he is so caring?? Like I am a big sucker for "Oh you're cold, here take my jacket" and when Satoru does it it's just top tier like nothing can beat it ugghhhh. And being surrounded by his cologne clinging to his jacket??? God please how can I experience this??
And you know when you see someone so pretty, so perfect that it hurts and you just hate it? Hate him? That's how you've described Satoru. And please, lawyer Satoru?? Destroying the other side and bringing them to tears?? that's so so HOT we love an intelligent man π€€π«Ά
"I have a feeling you could bring me to my knees without even trying."
Please I -
There aren't words to describe the woman I became after reading these words. π©π©π©π©π©
"Not really. They're all so... immature. All talk and no substance."
She is soooo real for this ugghhhhhhhh π©π€π€
Okay the truth and dare sequence? Nici you have ruined the game for me now (In a good way, of course) like whenever I see chess anywhere now I think of that one scene from s&c and now if someone ever asks me to play trust and dare I will think of this scene. Sadly, I won't have a Satoru asking me to slip the straps of my dress off my shoulders. ππ
He can make me forget my name and I will thank him for that π€οΏ½οΏ½οΏ½
And then, when you're right on the edge, when you're so desperate you can barely breathe,β He leaned in closer, his lips nearly brushing yours, βthat's when I'll make you beg."
The reader is far stronger than me because I would have FOLDED. Like speechless. A blushing, panting mess. Like his words would be enough to make me come undone.
Okay Nici, the dirty talk you write?? Seriously, you are the queen of dirty talk istg. And it just elevates the scene so much and the tension feels so hot, so tangible, I am in love with the way you write dialogues. And they are so bold too? It's guaranteed to make the readers take a deep breath and then blush. π©π€π€
I bet I could make you come just like this, couldn't I? Just with my fingers buried inside you, rubbing all the right spots until you soak my hand and scream my name."
Personally, Satoru? You can make me cum just by looking at me but hey that's just me π
Okay everything aside (which was really difficult because of how hot everything is) I am absolutely obsessed with how you've shown Satoru's feelings for the reader here. Yes, they are fucking and yes it's just for fun but for Satoru it seems more than that, where he is ready to sacrifice things and move back just to be with the reader. The way he is aware of the reader's needs and her body?? Like he isn't just fucking her, but he is worshiping her and I would be on my knees for a man like this.
But of course, he isn't the man to give everything so easily, the edging and them doing it again and again and again? Nici I am well FED. The way he is so cocky, so confident and keeps praising the reader ugh!!
Okay and Suguru is so so cutee!! Like making breakfast for the reader to help with the hangover, being so supportive about the match that she has, but also keep her in check and being a total dad by saying this like "If you can party, you can play. No excuses." ππ
And I can't believe Suguru of all people couldn't tell that the bruise on her neck is a hickey, please. And of course, he would invite Satoru to her match, how couldn't he? When Satoru said "No boyfriend, either" I think he forgot to mention that it excludes Suguru.
But this chapter has been so fun to read!! I love how you write Satoru in all your stories, they are so different from each other yet the same somehow? Like they would totally get along if they all met but at the same time they will be distinct from each other? Ahhh idk how to explain this.
And the reader? She is so bold and challenging, knowing exactly what she want, even when it may not seem right. And confident too! Like she knows what she is and she is owning it and man I am so in love with her too.
Okayyyyy, moving on now otherwise I'll never shut up
Chapter 2:
And never mind that the man himself was sitting right there in the stands, looking unfairly good in his crisp light blue shirt and dark shades, his hair tousled and his lips curved in a sly smile that made your thighs clench.
Satoru fucked her last night and now he is fucking her up on the court please. π©π€
And oh my god the way my mind instantly went to baseball Satoru man he looked so good that day, but then again, when has he not served??
Eye on the prize, not on the dick.
But the dick is the prize. π€€ππ€
"Champ? You okay in there?"
Suguru calling her champ is so cute - I am so in love with this soft version of Suguru, he is totally that worried dad, so concerned about his daughter aaahhh.
Okay, Satoru coming to check up on her? Maybe I am looking a little too deep into it, but it feels like Satoru wants to do a lot more - say a lot more and comfort her, but he also feels like he will be crossing a line there, going to the unknown territories, something that even he isn't comfortable with, so he just settles for what he knows he is good at haha.
And oh how he just gets straight to the business without wasting time, instructing her? We love a man who knows the value of time and doesn't beat around the bushes please
Okay I feel so bad for Suguru please πππ like little does he know his daughter is not doing vodka shots but its his best-friend settled comfortably between her thighs
"I'm so damn proud of you, you know that? Win or lose, you're incredible.β
I am sobbing Nici like see?? So fucking supportive please. As if he is testing the water, and trying to see how far he can get aahhhh.
"What can I say? Our girl was on fire today. I couldn't help but get a little...excited."
Satoru is such a prick sometimes please like you'd wanna punch that pretty face of his but then caress it too.
The whole scene where Suguru kept mentioning the girls Satoru has fucked in the past kept and the reader glaring at him reminded me this:
Well, kinda lol. ππ
And Satoru finger fucking her on the dinner table with her friends and family present?? Like is he insane? Does he have no manners? Is he out of his senses? Do men like this exist? Where can I find a man like him? What's his address?? ππππ©π©π©
I love love LOVE how Satoru CANNOT keep his hand off the reader. Its like he got to taste what he craved so desperately and now he is not willing to let go. At all. And the reader being equally into it too. like they matched each other's freak please π€π€
And does Satoru has a 'getting caught' kink? Like my man is almost eager about it "oh let you dad see this shit too"πππ
I have said this before and I will say it again, Nici. The dirty talk??? OUT OF THIS WORLD.
And I feel like Satoru is someone who would love the 'well-fucked' look on his partner, just like you've shown it. Like of course he would never mess it up if the reader has but in the effort for an event for something but after the event? Oh you are absolutely getting destroyed
You were fucked.Β
Okay I love this cycle of getting fucked then getting fucked pleasee πππ
Oh and Suguru is so MAD. Like I can just imagine that drunken delight leaving him, replaced by anger and awareness. I lowkey picture him being like that scene where Riko got shot tbh - like going from all smiles and happiness to whatever you would call that π
Oh I am sooo excited to see how reader and Satoru handle things. And with the reader's friends and family around? Oh its gonna be so stressful!!
But this series has been so fun to read Nici, like I think you've nailed it and its exactly what you've described it to be. It's amazing, and you are amazing for serving us with mind blowing stories one after the other. ππ·
I hope your university is being kind to you, and please don't worry about the updates - I hope you are focusing on yourself and taking care. We can wait for the updates! π«Άπ«Ά
Lots of love to you! xx
ahhhh tasha, thank you so much for your incredibly thoughtful and sweetly detailed message about g&m :'')) i always feel so bad for being so late to reply to these long messages but i swear they are the best and always bring the biggest smile to my face !!
and thank you for saying you liked the dirty talk in this story ahaha. i feel like i always run out of ideas for that and find it so cringe, so i'm glad it worked out well for you & so glad you picked up on the hints of deeper feelings developing on satoru's side. really wanted to show the layers of their connection beyond the physical.
& can't wait to explore the fallout of suguru finding out and all the messy dynamics there lol. drama and angst ahead for sure.
thank you again for your lovely message and kind words and all your support and encouragement. you're the best <3
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