#Danny’s always in pain yaaaaaay

[imekitty]

Being a whump writer means having to find a new way to say “it hurts” over and over again.

[ectospacecadet]

All of these, man. But if we want to add more detail so the readers can feel it, there’s also these:

“The blinding pain seared through his core, clawing at his skin, rendering his innards askew with agony. It was too much to bear.”

“White-hot pain burnt through my being like a hot knife through butter, my limbs stiffening to the point it felt like my bones were breaking from all the tension beneath my skin. I internally demanded for my soul to escape this broken form and find shelter elsewhere. Anywhere but here.”

Being a whump writer means having to find a new way to say “it hurts” over and over again.