#3. a synopsis will always be enough for a basic overview. The basic overview is ��Henry was a good kid in a bad spot’.
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henrysglock · 2 months ago
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honestly seeing tfs like ten times doesn’t make you better or more knowledgeable than anyone else (particularly when you have seen it so many times and can’t even get the point of the play right or just outright lie about or misinterpret things that happened. why does it feel like you want henry to be assaulted so badly?) especially if you say the synopsis is enough, and also that’s kinda unfair to other people wanting to see the play like booking out 3 or 4 performances at a time? what the last anon said, not everybody is that privileged. some people are lucky to see it once if at all, you may have taken the only opportunity someone had by seeing it multiple times
normal people: hi, how are you?
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girlygguk · 2 years ago
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fame - jjk (prologue)
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discontinued. pls proceed knowing i will not be updating the fic anymore 🥺 love you
pairing ; idol!jk x idol!oc.
synopsis ; aera; the main dancer in one of the biggest k-pop groups in the world, Siren. debuting in 2014, it was nothing but immense hard work and perseverance (and being on the absolute verge of disbandment), but she and the four girls that grew to become her sisters pulled through. they did it. now they're performing at some of the most significant arenas and stadiums worldwide. meeting a cheeky, flirtatious and annoyingly gorgeous fellow idol that threatens to break down every wall of protection she's built around herself was not part of the plan. her career has always come first, having sacrificed and jeopardised many relationships and friendships in her journey to debut. so why does this time feel different?
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story warnings ; smut, explicit language, violent & possibly triggering scenes.
chapter warnings ; none, just an overview of the girlies
a/n: i do not know how to use tumblr i'm a wattp girly born & raised.. pls bear with me. also oc is korean to help with a more realistic (in the most unrealistic fic ever) storyline, excuse the horrible google translated korean words.
another annoying a/n: siren have idol faceclaims (besides Aera) to help bring more visuality & description to their characters. love every single girly in this story & this is not a depiction of their real life personas whatsoever
part ; prologue | one | two | drabble1 | three | four | five | ...
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KPROFILE.com — circa. 2019
Siren (사이렌) is a 5 member South Korean girl group under PARK Entertainment. This group consists of Hanna, Grace, Nali, Aera and Ha-Joon. They debuted on July 17, 2014, with the lead single "Never Enough" on their self-titled mini-album.
Siren Fandom Name: Allure
Siren Fandom Colour: Silver
Siren Dorm Arrangement:
[2015-2019]: Hanna & Nali, Grace (single room), Aera & Ha-Joon.
[2019—] They own a house together, which they have stated in interviews that they spend a lot of time together in, but live in their respective homes during promotional breaks.
Siren Member Profiles:
Hanna
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Stage Name: Hanna(한나)
Birth Name:  Jang Han-na (장 한나)
Nicknames: Hanunnie, NaNa, Eomma, Mother Leader
Position: Leader, Main Rapper, Sub Vocalist
Birthday: May 12, 1994 [26]
Debut Age: 21
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Nationality: Korean
Height: 173 cm (5'8″)
MBTI Type: ENTP
Representative Emoji: 🦒
» Hanna Facts
• Hanna was the second member to be revealed for the Siren lineup.
• She trained for 4 years and 2 months, the second longest of all the girls.
• Hanna's representative emoji, the Giraffe, was given to her by their fans as she's significantly taller than the rest of Siren.
• Hanna can speak Korean, English and basic Japanese.
• She is an only child, stating once in an interview that suddenly having four siblings was a system shock when first joining Siren, but now she wouldn't give it up for the world.
• In 2008, Hanna transferred to an international school based in Daejeon, where she learned and studied English. She is fluent and is, more often than not, the spokesperson for their group during international and regular interviews.
• Hanna's ideal type is someone that treats the women in their life with respect and is independent (via Siren's Buzzfeed interview 2018).
Grace
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Stage Name: Grace(우아함)
Birth Name: Itō Asami (糸 あさみ)
Nicknames: Sami, Gracie, Asa, Japan's It Girl
Position: Lead Dancer, Lead Rapper
Birthday: December 9, 1995 [25]
Debut Age: 20
Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius
Nationality: Japanese
Height: 166 cm (5'5″)
MBTI Type: ESTP
Representative Emoji: 🦢
» Grace Facts
• Grace was the third member to be revealed for the Siren lineup.
• She trained for 3 years and 10 months, the girls' third longest training period.
• Grace's representative emoji, the Swan, was given to her by their fans for her dance moves are often described as elegant and swan-like.
• Grace can speak Japanese and Korean. Her members are helping her with English, and she's also studying the language.
• She has 2 siblings, an older brother Riku and a younger sister Yua.
• In 2010, Grace migrated to Korea alone after passing multiple rounds of an online audition for PARK Entertainment. When moving to the country, Grace knew very little Korean, but spending much time with her bandmates and strenuous study allowed her to pick up the language quite quickly.
• Grace's ideal type is someone that likes to eat and isn't afraid to show her off. (via Siren's Buzzfeed interview 2018).
Nali
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Stage Name: Nali (나리)
Birth Name: Cho Nali (조 나리)
Nicknames: Lily, Li, Na, PARK Princess
Position: Main Vocalist, Visual, FOTG
Birthday: February 14, 1996 [24]
Debut Age: 19
Zodiac Sign: Aquarius
Nationality: Korean
Height: 167.8 cm (5'6″)
MBTI Type: ISTP
Representative Emoji: 🐧
» Nali Facts
• Nali was the first member to be revealed for the Siren lineup.
• She trained for 3 years and 6 months, the fourth longest training period of the girls.
• Nali's representative emoji, the Penguin, was given to her by their fans as she's seen in multiple clips of Siren on various variety shows, running like a Penguin.
• Nali can speak Korean and basic English, having picked up simple terms over the years of housing with her English-speaking members.
• She has one sibling, a younger sister named Ha-Eun.
• Nali joined PARK Entertainment in early 2011 after being scouted at a Girls' Generation meet-and-greet.
• Other trainees quickly envied Nali for her breathtaking visual.
• Nali's ideal type is someone that is confident and can make her feel special. (via Siren's Buzzfeed interview 2018).
Aera
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Stage Name: Aera (애라)
Birth Name: Hwang Aera (황 애라)
Nicknames: Ra, Era, Black Cat, PARK's Secret Weapon
Position: Main Dancer, Vocalist, Visual, Center
Birthday: July 22, 1997 [23]
Debut Age: 17
Zodiac Sign: Cancer
Nationality: Korean
Height: 165 cm (5'5″)
MBTI Type: INFP
Representative Emoji: 🐱
» Aera Facts
• Aera was the last member to be revealed for the Siren lineup.
• She trained for 4 years and 3 months, the longest training period of the girls.
• Aera's representative emoji, the Cat, was given to her by their fans as her movements are strong and flexible. Her quick reflexes have been seen and loved on the variety shows that Siren have featured in.
• Aera can speak Korean and English and is learning Japanese from her bandmate, Grace.
• She has one sibling, a younger brother named Hyunjin.
• Aera attended a Language Institute for her schooling based in Seoul. There she learnt English as her second language and is fluent. She will help Han-na in international interviews when speaking English on behalf of the group if needed.
• Aera was one of the first trainees in PARK Entertainment to make the possible lineup for Siren. In interviews, it has been stated that only she and Han-na remain from the original lineup.
• On a live broadcast with one of her members, Aera stated that she chose to audition for PARK Entertainment after watching a dance performance of P.E. ex-trainee, Seulgyeon, who later debuted in another K-pop group, CLC. (via Ha-Joon & Aera V-Live).
• She often choreographed the routines they would perform in their monthly evaluations. She is rumoured to have been disliked by multiple trainees at P.E. that were trying to excel in dance.
• Aera has said she almost pursued the Vocal path instead of dance as there was double the amount of competition in the dance category (—via Siren's Elle interview 2018). Still, mentors refused to let her and told her that her skill was incredibly unique and untouchable by other candidates. (—Hanna via Siren's Elle interview 2018)
• Aera was nicknamed PARK's Secret Weapon upon debut as she was known to have mastered all areas of being an idol.
• Aera's ideal type is someone with a good sense of humour who likes to cook and has a nice smile. (via Siren's Buzzfeed interview 2018).
Joon
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Stage Name: Joon (준)
Birth Name: Kim Ha-Joon (김 하준)
Nicknames: Joonie, JJ, Bubba, Baby PARK
Position: Vocalist, Dancer, Sub-Rapper, Maknae
Birthday: December 12, 1998 [21]
Debut Age: 16
Zodiac Sign: Sagittarius
Nationality: Korean-Australian
Height: 167 cm (5'6″)
MBTI Type: ENFP
Representative Emoji: 🐨
» Joon Facts
• Joon was the fourth member to be revealed for the Siren lineup. She trained for 2 years and 9 months, the shortest training period of the girls.
• Joon's representative emoji, the Koala, was given to her by their fans as she's known for her thick Australian accent when speaking English.
• Joon can speak Korean and English, her accent developing during her time spent overseas in Australia with her father's side of the family.
• She has a younger brother named Ji-Yeong, who resides in Australia with her Dad.
• Joon was one of the last trainees to join PARK Entertainment. She was praised for her quick learning and development from the moment she joined the company.
• Joon was known as the quirky, loud girl in P.E. Other members of Siren have said that you always knew she was in the room by her laugh.
• It was rumoured that Ha-Joon was very close to withdrawing from being a trainee due to not being able to handle the bullying and toxicity of other trainees. Former PARK Entertainment trainees stated that Aera, fellow Siren member, sat with Joon on her bed for three hours and let her cry it all out.
• Joon's ideal type is someone that knows lots of jokes and can take care of her. (via Siren Buzzfeed interview 2018).
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anjibooks · 5 years ago
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The Faithful & The Fallen by John Gwynne (Book Review)
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Epic fantasies have always been right down my alleyway, and boy, this series definitely falls into that category. My cousin and I are both fantasy lovers, so we agreed on a book exchange-- buying each other the first book in a series and then promising to read the book that we were given. He bought me Malice, book one in the epic high fantasy series. And I'll be the first to admit that it took me a while to actually get around to reading it. As with many high fantasy series, the first book started out rather slow, in fact from what I recall the whole book was pretty slow. Like any good high fantasy, it really had to establish the world and the characters in the first book so we can really get to the good stuff in later books with a strong grasp on the world and also an attachment to the characters. This is exactly what Malice does. The first few chapters of Malice are very slow. I remember reading those at a very busy time in my life and then putting the book down as it just didn't seem worth using the time to force myself through. Then back around spring break I actually sat down to finish it. Yes, I'll be the first to admit that these books are a hefty commitment, emphasis on hefty because wow those are fat books to be carrying around, but trust me, they're actually really worth what can only be described as an epic length. While the Faithful and the Fallen doesn't fall into an absolute favorites category, I can promise you they are enjoyable reads that will suck you in with an intriguing plotline and fascinating world. Overall I'd give the series 7/10 stars. I did end up binging out on the last three books after finally finishing the first. It's like the first is the giant scale up the mountain, and the rest you're on a sled going down the other side of Everest. Though they are riveting reads, I have to admit there are some very prominent flaws with the stories that really irked me, especially after finishing the series, but more on that later. I would highly recommend this series to anyone who has a love for epic high fantasy stories, the kind with individual storylines that eventually intertwine. There's war, lots and lots of war, high stakes, and some intriguing mythology. Anyway, if you're interested here's a little overview on what this series is about. It's actually pretty hard to explain without giving anything away since the scope really expands more and more after the first book, but I think it's pretty safe saying that the story starts out with four main characters-- or really three main characters and one almost main side character: Corban, Veradis, Nathair and Evnis. Corban is a peasant boy, dreaming of the day he turns fourteen so that he can join the training to become a soldier. (If you're thinking wow that's young, I don't really want to be reading a middle grade novel-- don't worry! Not a middle grade novel, and A LOT of time passes over the course of these books (which makes sense seeing how gargantuan they are). Corban ages quite a lot throughout). Veradis is a skilled soldier, who befriends Nathair-- a prince with big aspirations and plans for the future. And Evnis... well, I'll let you see about Evnis. These are only the MAIN characters of the first book, there are a lot more characters and storylines woven in throughout the next novels. Anyway, that was a sucky synopsis so here's a real one: A black sun is rising … Young Corban watches enviously as boys become warriors under King Brenin’s rule, learning the art of war. He yearns to wield his sword and spear to protect his king’s realm. But that day will come all too soon. Only when he loses those he loves will he learn the true price of courage. The Banished Lands has a violent past where armies of men and giants clashed shields in battle, the earth running dark with their heartsblood. Although the giant-clans were broken in ages past, their ruined fortresses still scar the land. But now giants stir anew, the very stones weep blood and there are sightings of giant wyrms. Those who can still read the signs see a threat far greater than the ancient wars. Sorrow will darken the world, as angels and demons make it their battlefield. Then there will be a war to end all wars. High King Aquilus summons his fellow kings to council, seeking an alliance in this time of need. Some are skeptical, fighting their own border skirmishes against pirates and giants. But prophesy indicates darkness and light will demand two champions, the Black Sun and the Bright Star. They would be wise to seek out both, for if the Black Sun gains ascendancy, mankind’s hopes and dreams will fall to dust. Things I loved about these books: the plot and the character development. These are really plot and character driven books. And trust me when I say they have truly FANTASTIC plots and character development. Seriously if you compare the characters from the first book with the last book you'd think they're completely different people. And you got to travel along on that journey to see them become those different people. That's pretty amazing-- getting to see all the choices and key moments that lead to different things. Like a fearful cowardly boy growing into a courageous leader. With its huge cast of characters, this series really provides great and interesting perspective. And the plot? That's explosively good. Like I love all the planning with that and the intertwining mythology. To go along with the plot, the action is really well written and will keep you on the edge of your seat, really putting you right there on the battlefield with all your favorite (and least favorite) characters. Things I did not like about these books: the relationship development. While the plot and the characters are great, the way the relationships are written and built up to just isn't satisfying. Like, you can see that a lot of time has passed so it makes sense for those connections to have been made-- definitely not an instalove connection, but it almost feel likes instalove because you never get to see the small moments building up to those relationships becoming a relationship. I'm not just talking romantic, I'm also talking just about friendships and connections in general. Basically what you get to see with the relationships is the very beginning of each one, maybe a couple of words hinting at whatever in the middle and then the fully formed relationship at the end. What's really missing is that middle bit, the building part that helps the reader to really grow attached to said relationship. Because of that, there weren't many created relationships that I much cared for throughout the story. The relationship building definitely takes a backseat to the plot, which leaves me feeling a bit empty seeing as a truly satisfying action/fantasy story has a good balance of both. It's been so long since I read the series that I honestly couldn't tell you what my favorite book is, it's either Valor or Ruin (Book 2 or 3), but I can't remember which. They're both good-- actually they're all good, so it's really hard to remember which one stood above the other. My favorite characters would have to be Cywen and Storm, though I did like Veradis (I sorta see him as a sweet puppy in my eyes haha) and Corban. (SLIGHT SPOILER AHEAD, LOOK FOR NEXT PARENTHESIS FOR END OF SLIGHT SPOILER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW MY LEAST FAVORITE CHARACTER) My least favorite character, without question would be NATHAIR. Seriously, I despised him throughout all the books. I was always waiting for him to have some sort of redemption in my eyes, but he never redeemed himself to me. The amount of texts I sent my cousin ranting about him is probably absurd. Seriously, I think I remember saying something about wanting to push him off a cliff just high enough to break all his bones but not kill him so that he would just have to lie there dying. Anyway... More on that in the spoilery section of the review just so that you know... I don't spoil everything for you. (SPOILER OVER) Anyway, those are my thoughts on this series! If you're interested in the slightest, don't be afraid to pick Malice up! And if you're bored during Malice JUST PUSH THROUGH IT. It'll end up worth it, I promise you that. SPOILERS FOR THE ENTIRE SERIES I'm sorta lazy so I'm just gonna copy and paste some of my texts to my cousin about this series haha. (About the disappointment in the lack of showing relationship development) "Like Fidele and Maquin... You don't really get to see the development... You see them meeting and you know they travel together and all the sudden they're in love and willing to sacrifice anything for each other. You know it's happening in the background but there's no good lead up." ​ "Or Veradis and Cywen. You know they travel together and have been talking but you don't actually get to see any of it." Interesting fact: Veradis and Cywen were actually the only relationship that I actually did fall in love with. the rest I didn't really actually feel much connection to. I spent MANY late nights saying I'd read till the next Cywen chapter, or saying I'd read until they reunited... Only that took a VERY long time haha. And then much to my irritation-- actually anger-- there was never actually any good romantic pay off, despite the fact that I waited two long books for them to reunite and then when they do NOTHING HAPPENS. They barely interact. UGhhhh. Here's a cleaned up text that I sent about that "And I'm also pretty pissed about Veradis and Cywen. I literally wait two and a half giant books for them to be reunited and when they do nothing happens. Then at the end of the book I'm like cool, maybe some interaction? Nope. They still don't get together. It's strongly implied they WILL because they think about each other so often, but nothing actually occurs. Just another example of how the plot revolves around all just action as opposed to having some focus on the characters' relationships with each other." And on my opinion on the finale: "Very epic, had fun reading it BUT as a finale I was a bit disappointed. Right after this huge epic battle it just feels rushed to finish it-- I'm not left with the closure I was expecting and feeling like I needed. Perhaps an epilogue would have done the book good as it would help wrap up some loose ends and leave me a little more satisfied." And if you're wondering about my Nathair hatred. Wow. That's an endless well to be diving in to. In fact, I'm not even going to post the majority of my texts about them seeing as they are pretty evil with LOTS of cursing haha. I just thought Nathair was so full of himself, on a power high for the majority of the first few books. I really was looking forward to seeing all of that come crashing down, and when it did I thought it might open the door for some great character development that might actually lead me to liking him. Unfortunately... when it came crashing down for Nathair it didn't matter because HE STILL CHOSE TO BE A DICK. UGh. Also I was hoping for MORE from his death scene since he's been such a big series character, but it ended pretty quickly for him. Good that it was Veradis that killed him though. Don't have much to say about the prophecy stuff other than to say I LOVE that it wasn't a real prophecy and that it all ended with just humans being evil as opposed to it being about gods. (Yes, Asroth was involved, but it was Nathairs choice to CONTINUE ON and all his choices actually that lead to that war. ) Anyway, those are my scattered thoughts. Thanks for reading :) Anj
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incomplete-nano-stash · 6 years ago
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Synopsis of Time Wolf’s Missing Sections: Introducing Project Time Wolf
Although there wasn’t a response at all around Project Princess Eighteen Wheeler, I’m going to try the same thing with Time Wolf. Bear with me.
The manuscript for Time Wolf currently ends partially into Chapter 12 (not enough to post; it basically goes to the plan to fight Wolf Technologies by sending Stephen back to the day he first got into the TX-31). Time Wolf wound up at a little over 18,000 words, and in this case it’s because life got in the way.
So what was the plan?
Utter chaos. Tiffany mentions to Stephen in Chapter 12 that every time he changes a timeline, he creates an offshoot from his original timeline, so whatever timeline he creates by stopping himself from travelling in the first place will be where he spends the rest of his existence. However, time can only handle so many offshoots from how it’s supposed to go, and as such timelines start to unravel, eventually contributing to Stephen’s growing madness.
Yes, Stephen’s losing his mind slowly but surely as he continues to travel in the TX-31. He starts having flashbacks of events he has no possible way of witnessing. No matter what he does to change the timeline, he still winds up destroying society as we know it by rising to the top of Wolf Industries, and one way or another he always destroys his family. The strain finally causes Stephen to crack, travel back to the original time travel incident, and kill himself ... rather, the version of him who first gets in the TX-31. The resulting paradox ripples completely through time, creating a disaster of highly epic proportions, eventually leading to a desolate world in the midst of the nothingness, the remnant of Earth existing outside of time, creating its own new timeline from scratch. The human race is forced to begin again, from a core group of people, including Stephen, Tiffany, Laricia, Ian, and three copies of each person from different timelines.
Now that I write out a synopsis, I realize I really created a mess for myself. There’s no possible way I could’ve written that coherently in context. So how would you have handled it if you were me? The same rules apply, write your own chapter to Time Wolf and send me a link to the post. Once again, I’m not planning on publishing this, so go wild!
I’ll soon be posting the next incomplete Nano. :)
Reference Links:
Time Wolf
Overview + 1 + 2 + 3 + 4 + 5 + 6 + 7 + 8 + 9 + 10 + 11
Princess Eighteen Wheeler
1 + 2 + 3 + 4 + 5 + 6 + 7 + 8 + 9 + Project Princess Eighteen Wheeler
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lowcostempire · 5 years ago
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The Elevator Pitch:
The elevator pitch is a very compact synopsis of what your project is all about that you can tell someone in less than 45 seconds to a minute.  The following major headings are used for a very basic elevator pitch.  They are the following:
1.         Call to action
2.         Why you?
3.         Why now?
4.         What/who?
They call it "elevator pitch" for a reason. It is a super quick synopsis and a great exercise to organize your thoughts.
Call to action:          You can also think of this as your "what if" statement.  Sample:  What if I can provide a low cost, easy to use, super effective method that takes the place of tire chains in bad weather areas?
Why You?    Each year, extensive damage is done to city highways and local streets by the use of tire chains.  Our solution causes no damage and is super effective in the traction it provides and the piece of mind it gives the driver in heavy storms.
Why Now?   Being that we are trending towards more severe winter months, this amazing cloth tire covering will save city municipalities millions of dollars in damage and will help to prevent many an accident created by tires that cannot grip a slippery or icy surface.
What/Who?  From the parent who takes their kids to school to the tractor trailer driver, our innovative easy to attach cloth tire cover will change the way every class of driver is able to cope for the better in heavy snowstorm areas.  
So above is our elevator pitch.  Notice, we gave the interested party 1) a very clear and concise overview of the project and we did it in a way that was 2) easy to grasp, easy to see why it is innovative, easy to understand 3) why it is unique and 4) exciting enough for a savvy business person to recognize the opportunity being presented.
The Expanded Elevator Pitch: Practice With Passion, Energy and Be Compelling.
Finally, there is an expanded version of the elevator pitch.  It is a bit more involved and might take an additional 30 to 45 seconds but it is worth exploring:
Call to Action:          What if I can provide a low cost, easy to use, super effective method that takes the place of tire chains in bad weather areas?
Mission Statement:            Our goal is to provide a low cost, easy to use cloth tire covering which is cost effective and damage free to highways when utilized in heavy snow fall areas.
Unique Differentiators:     The current competition uses tire chains which are a hassle to put on but for the most experienced trucker and tire chains are known to break as well as cause damage to roadways that will now be a thing of the past due to our new product.
So What – Benefits:           Our tire cover is easy to put on and easy to remove for the every day consumer to the professional.  You don't have to be a mechanic in a gas station that grapples with tire chains.  The comfort level that it gives the everyday driver as well as the professional trucker is priceless and the market price of $10.00 per pair cannot be beat.
Marketing Opportunity:    Since this is a unique product we have the entire country to market to let alone Asia and Europe.  This is a great ground floor opportunity that will afford us to market this product to every fleet, every gas station, every car supplies store, every car lot, every municipality, every place that sell autos, parts and tires of course.  This is a wide open opportunity and the time to get involved is now.  The product speaks for itself.  This product "the cloth tire covering" is a welcome relief for a long standing problem.
Burning Problem:  The problem that we currently face is alerting the public that the old solution of tire chains for heavy snow areas is an expensive and damaging method that is mainly utilized by truckers and other heavy vehicle operators while the vast majority of every day drivers struggle with their snow tires that do not always grip an icy or snow slick road thus jeopardizing their safety.
Tag Line:      Road Gripping Peace of Mind
Excerpt from my book Low Cost Empire Volume 5 - Getting Ready For Investors
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lowcostempire · 7 years ago
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The Valuable Elevator Pitch: No matter what you do, you should be able to tell people what you do in a few sentences. I covered this topic in the book Low Cost Empire Volume 5, Getting Ready To Pitch that I wrote a few years ago. You may already have your own version of an Elevator pitch but either way I believe this will help. The Elevator Pitch: The elevator pitch is a very compact synopsis of what your project is all about that you can tell someone in less than 45 seconds to a minute. The following major headings are used for a very basic elevator pitch. They are the following: Call to action Why you? Why now? What/who? They call it "elevator pitch" for a reason. It is a super quick synopsis and a great exercise to organize your thoughts. Call to action: You can also think of this as your "what if" statement. Sample: What if I can provide a low cost, easy to use, super effective method that takes the place of tire chains in bad weather areas? Why You? Each year, extensive damage is done to city highways and local streets by the use of tire chains. Our solution causes no damage and is super effective in the traction it provides and the piece of mind it gives the driver in heavy storms. Why Now? Being that we are trending towards more severe winter months, this amazing cloth tire covering will save city municipalities millions of dollars in damage and will help to prevent many an accident created by tires that cannot grip a slippery or icy surface. What/Who? From the parent who takes their kids to school to the tractor trailer driver, our innovative easy to attach cloth tire cover will change the way every class of driver is able to cope for the better in heavy snowstorm areas. So above is our elevator pitch. Notice, we gave the interested party 1) a very clear and concise overview of the project and we did it in a way that was 2) easy to grasp, easy to see why it is innovative, easy to understand 3) why it is unique and 4) exciting enough for a savvy business person to recognize the opportunity being presented. The Expanded Elevator Pitch: Practice With Passion, Energy and Be Compelling. Finally, there is an expanded version of the elevator pitch. It is a bit more involved and might take an additional 30 to 45 seconds but it is worth exploring: Call to Action: What if I can provide a low cost, easy to use, super effective method that takes the place of tire chains in bad weather areas? Mission Statement: Our goal is to provide a low cost, easy to use cloth tire covering which is cost effective and damage free to highways when utilized in heavy snow fall areas. Unique Differentiators: The current competition uses tire chains which are a hassle to put on but for the most experienced trucker and tire chains are known to break as well as cause damage to roadways that will now be a thing of the past due to our new product. So What – Benefits: Our tire cover is easy to put on and easy to remove for the every day consumer to the professional. You don't have to be a mechanic in a gas station that grapples with tire chains. The comfort level that it gives the everyday driver as well as the professional trucker is priceless and the market price of $10.00 per pair cannot be beat. Marketing Opportunity: Since this is a unique product we have the entire country to market to let alone Asia and Europe. This is a great ground floor opportunity that will afford us to market this product to every fleet, every gas station, every car supplies store, every car lot, every municipality, every place that sell autos, parts and tires of course. This is a wide open opportunity and the time to get involved is now. The product speaks for itself. This product "the cloth tire covering" is a welcome relief for a long standing problem. Burning Problem: The problem that we currently face is alerting the public that the old solution of tire chains for heavy snow areas is an expensive and damaging method that is mainly utilized by truckers and other heavy vehicle operators while the vast majority of every day drivers struggle with their snow tires that do not always grip an icy or snow slick road thus jeopardizing their safety. Tag Line: Road Gripping Piece of Mind! Develop your Elevator Pitch and try it out on your friends and family for feedback. Commit the pitch to memory. If you are in charge of your marketing for your business then you need to read this book. I guide you through the use of using your phone to cover all major Social Media sites with your useful articles and links to your products and services. Reach all major sites quickly and easily at any time. Social Media Marketing On The Go: Running Your Own Personal Marketing Firm From Your Phone or Tablet Create Space https://www.amazon.com/dp/197942361X/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1509836293&sr=1-1&keywords=Social+Media+Advertising+on+the+go Kindle
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