#(sorry but nobody needs 40 seconds of Bee rolling around on a bed)
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Hiiiii anon <3
I think Boun and Prem are doing a stellar job with what theyve been given, and they do manage to create some moments of decent chemistry, but between the masses of filler plot, the character choices and the objectively awful editing, the show feels like it’s limping along.
I’m also just getting more and more upset with how inconsistent Team’s characterisation is. One minute he’s pinning Win to a locker, or doing bits in a restroom at a bar and at least reciprocating somewhat, and the next he’s cringing and blushing and whining whenever Win flirts with him in the typical seme-uke dynamic that WinTeam were meant to break. The show started so strong with the longing looks and Team’s cheeky dismissals of Win’s flirting and now that’s all gone and we’re left with “P’Deaaaan” 2.0: “Hiiaaaaaaaaa”.
I’m gonna finish it. For BounPrem. But unless it picks up in the final stretch (🤞) I have a feeling I’ll partly be relieved that it’s over.
your post about between us Saaaaame. the way I enjoy bounprem/winteam as actors and characters so much and their chemistry but everytime I watch an ep I'm just like 'I should drop this' I HATE IT
i think this was meant for my wife @aikinn ! i haven't posted about between us today (though i agree with her post, and this lol)
#also as someone that works in TV production (albeit different genre) that wants to be a producer/director at some point: The editing is BAD#either the director is inexperienced and doesnt have the heart to kill the darlings that need to be killed#(sorry but nobody needs 40 seconds of Bee rolling around on a bed)#or the director hasn't bothered going into the edit at all and an inexperienced editor is piecing the show together with zero direction#it just feels like they're filling for time#as if they had 3-4 more episodes than they had plot or the budget to film#and its all just drawn out filler that weakens the characterisations#at least pharm was consistently like nooo hehehe im just a little guyy dont flirt with mee hehehehehee#Team you two fucked in a public bathroom less than 12 hours ago why are you suddenly like 'no... i couldnt possibly kiss him on the cheek!'#also in the episode we just watched there was a 10 second bit where 2 music tracks were playing at the same time and it sounded AWFUL???#and it just *wasnt* caught. by anyone????#also they included WaanTuul in the previously and then they just did not appear in the episode At All.#its like the producers and directors aren't even watching the show before it airs#Sad that I'm hoping for the winteam supercut of their own show#I actually think that WaanTul has a lot of potential and BeePrince would also be fun if given an actual sliver of plot#but both of them are just kinda....... there....... at this point.#maybe it'll all kick off next ep who knows but they're just so poorly directed and scripted like an afterthought :(#they were like ooh theres these two guys and theyre guys and they talk and theyre both boys........ like girl should I clap. Im not clappin#I enjoyed UWMA like its not my favourite but it was an interesting plot and mystery with a lot of potential in terms of worldbuilding#Between Us doesn't have thet going for it. Theyve tried to plaster over the plot gap with lots of underdeveloped romance plots#like background ManaoPhreuk and BeePrince and WaanTul and the occasional cameo from DeanPharm#But the compelling thing was WinTeam and their Characters are going off the rails because the scriptwriter seemingly only knows seme-uke :/#rrrrrrr#I was so excited for this show and now I'm just a bit deflated about it :(
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A brave new child
Emergence
White,
bed,
un imago ally comfortable,
ooh ow cramp!!!
massage starts
must still be asleep, rubbing feels so good, hey honey a little lower,
no response
but rubbig goes lower.
Mary?
Roll over sleepy, there is no one there,
rubbing continues, in fact it never stopped.
Sudden shock of the memory of loss, Mary has been gone for 7 months.
Adrenaline powered reactions launch off the bed, oooh shit the thud as head hits low celing is that of an underripe watermelon, darkness comes back with a flash
J oh great we over did the augmentation and requeued another one - would you stop brushing yourself and plug back in to full monitor, you would notice he is just in a state of suspended consciousness.
Oh yeah, guess your right, Who the hell designed this species anyway? who makes a species suspend executive functionality when they receive trauma? For such a combative species you would think head trauma is when a species needs executive functionality the most.
J You got the same briefing I did, and you know that species with caretaker class emotive architecture can not maintain empathetic coherence if lower rationality is maintained through non terminal Trauma events.
Yeah, i still think it is a stupid design, it has nearly gotten This one killed on foru separate occasions,
J You forget Burma and San Francisco. Fix the emergence venu volume, this is an OG instanceanciation.
Oh, yeah, I guess that last one counts too. expanding, time relevant accutron.
Lost
I wake up and shake to clear the nasty buzzing in my left ear...
I look up and around. I must have scrambled my senses when I jumped put of bed I could swear I hit my head on the ceiling, but this hotel too. Has 14 foot ceilings, geese is this the markus inn in eureka? again?
Why'd they paint everything whit and grey?
hospital?
Never been in a hospital room without windows, maby they renovated the markus? the cheap chink bastards never do that.
I stand up, still a little shaky, I can't remember...
Where the hell is the door?
there is a panel on that wall, about hand height
Child
Follows for a while, very tan, with odd freckles, looks like he has been playing in the sun too much, long scruffy hair must be a girl. Tomboy, like jessy the polak who lived two doors when we lived in Chicago.
Child is walking right up to me just how do you do,
takes my hand? WTH, I’ve never even met a dog this trusting.
"it is time for me to see doctor this month, all children need to meet doctor once a month, it is my time.”
She, pretty sure its a Sshe, says it like a memorized line.
I am not a doctor!,
I know that, I am not some new one, old one, I am two and a half!
Where are your parents?
Parents?
Your mom and dad?
Are you broken old one? What is a your? And a mom and a Dad?
Uh uo, in this day and age to run across a street orphan
I had heard they where still all over Europe even so many years into marshal plan, but here, in the us of a?
Delima
look down, do I take her to doc rob, or what?
Doc would know what to do but he is all the way acr.o..ss...
I start to look around and notice that this isn't a real street..
I must have banged my head pretty good,
am I still inside?, inside? underground?
I don't recognize any of this, but all around me are stores and sidewalk cafe's
it is night, most buildings are dark, cafe’s closed, stores dark
Mark? Asks the child, I need to go to doctor.
I look down, alright I say, trying not to frighten the urchin.
DecisionI
ll find a cop, An encounter with the cops does not go as planned
Authority
So let me get this straight, you are an adult male, and a child told you it was time to see doctor. And you didn't take the child to doctor?
Yeah, when The kid said she didn't
Wait, SHE? is nt that being a little harsh?
Wha? you mean that mop was sitting on top of a boy?
All right enough of that! ya sick bastard! one more wack like that and your done!
Whoah officer I think there is a big misunderstanding I was jut trying to help the orphan out.
What do you mean orphan?
Like I was saying, the kid said, um, Jerry, said he had no mom and dad. Right then and there I knew something was terribly wrong.
Mom? Says cop 1
dad? Says cop 2
Yeah and I saw you two and knew you would be able to take care of it, you know child services or something.?
let me see if I understand, a child approached you, a full grown adult citizen with a full set of responsibilities and capabilities, a child in need of guidance no less, approached you, with your fine clean judicial appearance, and you bring the c.h..i.l.d to us?(he stretched out child)
Um yeah? I thought you could take responsibility. But I, not so sure now
Dam right your not so sure now.
The next few moments where a blur, because just as the cop was lecturing me about citizen responsibility and something about village children a stunning blond walked by, long neck, muscular arms like a farm girl, about my height, which is really tall for a woman, she must be swedish, her high gloss fingernails almost glow in the dark, and match all four of her crimson painted hooves.
hooves
4
I couldn't get my head around the sight
Jerry noticed too.
I moved to step between the freak and the kid but jerry was too fast
MOllY yells Jerry and runs right under the horse, woman, thing
Jerry looks up and says "It is time to see doctor"
In a voice that sounded like 6 andrew sisters in perfect harmony, “sure, hop on sweetie, but i am not molly, i am mary.
Hi Mary, that judge would not take me,
Then the horse woman turned her head toward me, and I saw her face for the first time, I had noticed her face before because I was distracted by her chest, and other things. I am, usually distracted by a good chest, but this was especially distracting because this chest was smallish, and I like most of my buddies, like a full figured girl, but bare as the day she was born.
I looked up into those eyes that where the brown of fine Hershey chocolate, o ly those eyes where 4 sizes to big and set so far apart.I could not look away, the world started to spin those lovely watery huge horse sized, oh i had ridden my aunt pearlies mare once when we visited for easter. I was scared half to death pf the huge animal until it set its huge compassionate and amazingly intellegent eyes on me. And now those eyes where starig at me, those same deeply intelligent eyes, only they where set in jane mansfields face,
where I had seen compassion as a child now all I see was disgust and contempt.I started to feel dizzy, the world started to spin, I must have been really drunk. In my army days, I’d get so drunk Id passed out, I knew I could shake this, it must have been a side effect of hitting my head,
I shook my head squeezed my eyes, and started to say "Miss, let me explain"
I think all I got out was before that beautifully twisted face came within an inch of mine and with all the indignant righteousness of reformed preacher she uttered one word,
one accusation, and the voice of a heavenly being quite struck me dumb
"irresponsible"
My vision narrowed, everything started to go grey,Thankfuly one of the cops said something to this breathtaking freakshow
you making that official Mary?
“yes bob" said the Andrew sisters like it was their next top 40 hit
Alright you, come with us, I wish I could say I was sorry, but I became a cop because I thought that someday there would be someone who would drop responsibility and I would be right there to pull them out.
At which point I had the presence of mind to loose consciousness for the second time this short morning,
Judiciary
I woke up on a bed in a white room, not unlike the one I started the day in, no cops and no recollection how much time had passed.
“You give us some concern Mike”, says a voice from somewhere,
My head is throbbing and my left ear is buzzing lowder, before it was just honey bee, now it’s a pissed off wasp. I sit up slowly this time, and try to shake the headache.
“Ah I see some residual swelling and latent pain receptor firing, I'll shunt that momentarily”.
Then before I can say anything the throbbing stoops and my vision clears.
Wow, “I didn't even feel the shot doc”,
I turn but there is nobody there “Doc?”
“You will visit the judiciary now.” Is the only response I get, and it must be coming from some overhead loudspeaker only I can't make out where the grill is
a door opens and the lights in The room start to dim. Dimming lights in a hospital? fancy.
It has the desired effect I get up to leave.
”Thanks for fixing my headache doc”, I say to no one I particular, could you fix the buzzing in My ear?
There is no buzzing in your ear.
Judge
you, a member of the judiciary are hereby sentenced for the crime of irresponsible, and attempted displacement of communal parenting responsibility. As you well know the punishment for this crime is the harsest we can administer: banishment.
Wait, what? Member of the what? I'm a licenced and bonded private detective, I do personal security work. What's going on here? where am I?
Are you claiming you where unaware at the time of these crimes?
“No. I am not claiming anything, I am demanding to know where I am? And I know I have a right to habeas corpus.”
“Habeas corpus? I gotta look that one up..”
“What? No human legal system has been based on presumption of asymmetric information in, over 300 years.”
“This distraction is Irrelevant. A child did in need of guidence approached you?”
“Yes”
“And you failed to nurture, protect, guide, support and educate that child as is your responsibility under article 2 of the luna founding constitution.?”
“The Where? What? There is no such article in the US constitution, and the only only places I have heard of called Luna where bars.”
“Claims of asymmetric information will not be heard in this court! We have complete recordings of the whole incident. The facts are not in, nor have they ever been, nor will they ever be in question.”
“The only answer remaining is what was going through that human head of yours!? Explain yourself, why did you take that child to the police of all people.”
“Well, when the kid,Joey,Joey,When Joey told me he didnt have any parents.”
“Wait right there, here is the replay “
I am about dumbstruck as the best 3d cinema I have ever seen popps to life, but I’m not wearing the red and blues. it replays the conversation exactly, my shock at this wonder goes completely un noticed by the judge
“What possessed you to ask a CHILD such a question?”
“You mean ask who the child's parents where?”
“Are you now claiming insanity? Are you claiming to not know the distributed responsibility matrix of child rearing? The way you, and every other human around has been raised for 3 generations?”
This time my dumbstruck confusion was not lost on the court, and for the third time I felt the world Round me start to spin.
“Sir, Your honor, you keep referring g to me as a member of the judiciary, but I am just a regular joe, and unless I got elected by special vote of the people last night I am still just a joe. And....: as I began a tieraid about kids having a proper mom to cook clean feed, and a dad to lay down the law and bring out the belt.. It was looking like into a mirror.
The judge looked as dumbstruck as I did
Judge said , to no one in particular, “why did no one check this guys history prior to the event?”
“Did anyone notice that judge mike here did not EXIST an hour before the incident?” “I thought not.”
“Well, mike, if that is your tpreal name, I'll start with the easy part. Ill explain everything because obviously you have been the victim of some kind of prank. And it is not like your the first meme seaplane joke gone awry.”
“You have been referred to as judge because of what you look like, members of the judiciary take the classical ancestral form as an honorarium for all those who have gone before, that have stood, and caught with the might of will for an ever better place.”
“The offense, we dispensed of individual parentage over 3 generations ago. You see, about the same time as human economies where coming to and end wit the first high volume quantum coherent state sintering printers we got to the point where need of material goods beyond critical infrastructure was dramatically reduced. Humans returning to small communities, getting away from industrial urbanization, discoveries that the requirement for intimate single parent bond was a result of a hostile world.”
“You see, Mike, we’ll call you mike until we get your real personality back, we built ourselves the perfect world. No great need, no hunger, everyone has access to all information. But we still need taking care of as humans, our youngest and oldest. Think of it as our new economy, we trade bonds in caring and nurturing.”
“Jimmy did not know his mom and dad, because shee has no concept of single parent. “
“We all get paid for taking care of children and elders. Single parenting was outlawed 4 decades ago as monopolistic anti competitive behavior, “
“free access to children, naffta newborn and free family trade act allowed everyone access to the ability to provide care for children. “
“The egyption and indonesian constitutional dissamblies of the early 21st century. sparked a Debate about what to do in a post scarcity world. The Debate went well. But Exposure to the debate, near created a cultural tsunami, and forced macro introspection.”
“The founding of the luna colony gave humanity its first opportunity to create a functioning society, and focus all of its resources and capability to create and nurture well adjusted humans. “
Debate
Unknown entities debate this hu
selection placement,
morality of culture shock,
morality of tampering.
He is from their pre space era
for alt makers sake. We are supposed to get emerged just look at yourself, un modified form nonetheless, procreational cavity, enhanced frontal glands, at least I took a fashionable quadrepedial hydagoniousequis form.
I have had 3G io. Propositions in the last cycle alone. just think that it would extend our goals to introduce an even more divergent seed.
This man was a soldier, we meticulously tracked and he is personally responsible for the resurrection queuing of 34 of his own species, not to mention his eating habits.
33 of those queuings where conducted in a moral envelope and under cultural coseration called "war" only 2 of those actions occurred outside of that envelope, and both where third party queuing prevention, and the las resulted in his own premature queuing.
I just think that we could extend the desired impact by introducing specimins with a higher confirmed proclivity for intraspecies destruction, Mengla, Cacey, that Russian mass murderer?
Your points are well founded but you concede to the underlays primary point.Before assent and progenitors carry forward Spanish cycle shock must be existing experience set. And the seed must exhibit sufficient ambiguity. Reluctant assent to the underlays wisdom.
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