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penrose-quinn · 2 years ago

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A part of me needs to add Sanzu into this backstory, but at the same time, I already like the flow and I've already cut out so much to get that right flow *sobs* and I'm trying to narrow the focus of this chapter (despite it being abt a lot of things- writing and making up shit abt Shin's emotional trauma just for it to make sense is quite something 🥲).

Also I really don't want to pull a Wakui and ignore him in the story, but I just don't know where to fit him in this chapter 🥲🥲🥲

You'd think, with Sanzu scarring Takeomi and running away and looking up more to Shin as his big brother, it just makes sense to include him here. But tbf canon is weird and the timeline where Sanzu cuts Takeomi's face is confusing lol (he had that scar since his BD days, how old was Sanzu then? Six? Seven??). So idk idk....

#pen rambles #green light #hmm i'm considering to just give him the mikey treatment #wherein he doesn't take a big part in this chapter until later #bc i want it be mostly between shin and izana and emma #and shin and the bd (by extension inui)#when it comes to the sibling conflict #it still boils down to 'shin being an adult and what that means to him and what happened there' backstory #i can't explain all the themes i'm going for bc it is a lot lol #but i do have confidence that my readers will pick up on it when they get into the chapter #(also i just really suck at explaining things outside the fic so... 👉👈)

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