#“please make me your disciple and student” HELP 😭😭😭😭

[hannie-dul-set]

USER HANNIE DUL SET I just read break up soup yesterday and it was so incredible in every way your writing style is so immaculate and magical wow you bring everything to life. Like I'm sorry for breathing the same air as you queen 👑😔 excuse me for a moment while I yap about everything I liked most about it

Right from the start, you were so consistent with showing and not telling stuff. Like instead of just stating the members' positions you showed who owned each position through the roll call along with a close up of them doing something, which also simultaneously revealed a bit of their personality AND THAT WAS JUST SO COOL AND AMAZING AND I WAS INSTANTLY IMMERSED 😖😖

And your decision to tell the story from the povs of the org members, and not yn or jeonghan was such a genius move because it added dimension AND SO MUCH TO THE STORY THAT WOULDN'T BE THERE IF IT WASN'T THE CASE like the external point of view was so amazing to explore and it was such a great reading experience omg IT WAS INCREDIBLE UGH

I also love the way you write mingyu, your characters have such vivid personalities I love him 😔 the humour was so well executed and everything was so cool and I can't remember the last time I read something so great please make me your disciple and student (joke) (maybe) you are awesome ‼️

I'm actually not done yet, I also read love vomit and I know that you wrote it a while ago, but it was SO GOOD 😖😖😖 I never thought I would so diligently read a 36k fic because I usually don't read extremely long fics, but I would read your grocery lists, first drafts, 5th grade writing assignments, boring emails anything. It was so so extensively planned and there was nothing unnecessary, and you wrote soobin so well IT WAS SO IT WAS SO 🥹 it was so great I felt like I was living with them and experiencing youth with them and ugh

And you had the season symbolism going on and I love that shit I eat it up every single time, I love the season symbolism BUT THEN you wrote a line that went something like "choi soobin had been your spring, summer, autumn and winter" (it was probably better, I don't remember very well) and I was so visibly gagged I felt as if something divine had descended upon me, it was like a moment of clarity and epiphany and all light and euphoria in the world pouring into my soul. I love it when the full circle stuff happens, it's so it just gets me every time, and you did it so well

I can't believe you are out here writing such incredible, jaw dropping prose for FREE thankyou for existing and writing I just love you you are amazing

anywho, I hope you're having a great day 🌷

-🪿(making my debut here as silly goose anon, if I may)

SILLY GOOSE ANON!!! banger....of an alias if i do say so myself.

😭😭😭 first of all, thank you so much for taking the time to send this. ur giving me way too much credit my dude BAHAHAHHA i'm just a girl......with a hyperactive brain.......vomitting words out into a gdoc and sometimes it's coherent 😔😔.

after writing the first scene of the breakup soup on a whim, i got the funny idea that hEY WOULDNT IT BE SICK IF THIS ENTIRE THING IS WRITTEN FROM THE OUTSIDERS POV. i'm so glad the idea worked HAHHAHAHAH. i did spend some time assigning positions to all of the teeners, but not all of them were mentions so might as well drop them here now!!

chairperson: cheol vci: han vce: you sec: wonu, asst sec: seokmin treas: jihoon, asst. treas: hosh (jihoon doesn't give him any of the org money.) auditor: vern, asst aud: jun bs mngr: mingyu, asst bm: chan information officers: kwan and josh creatives head: minghao

love vomit!!!! GOD i miss my sweet soobiedoobiedoo 36k words was wild to me too considering i wrote the whole thing in more or less a week HAHAHAHHAHAH. thank u for taking the time to read all of that AND for enjoying the experience!!!!! it always warms my heart to hear people read through my very long, mundane fics bcs those generally don't do well with the general, typical tumblr audience (horny teens) 😔😔😔.

[fandom-glazed]

Here goes my very detailed comment on some of your notes on episode 10, presented by a litre of energy drink and a very wibbly wobbly general feeling. XD

Again, I love the actor that plays lwj. I have read before that his acting was heavily criticised but I find it to be extremely calculated and subtle in a way that is perfect for the character (especially in contrast with wwx, whose outgoing and loud personality is matched by his actor’s expressive portrayal of him) Seriously, who is criticising him? I’ll go and punch them!

Uhh there’s a new guy and he wears a weird glove that, I can’t help but think, would be terrible in our current situation Oh look, my favourite character!

A cocky guy in black and an unnaturally serious guy in white … I think I drank too much wine tonight. I’m experiencing double vision That is definitely not intended or anything, never! (My stomach hurts comparing them to Wangxian.)

Please tell me this isn’t foreshadowing Please tell me this isn’t foreshadowing Please tell me this isn’t foreshadowing It’s not.

And now there’s a third guy just magically appearing out of thin air My heart

Also wwx is genuinely offended that thus guy tries to match him in cheekiness He is! It’s very amusing

Why does the nie clan’s arrival feel so ominous? (okay, except for the ominous music) they’re friends and allies … right? You have to see for yourself. :P

I like these two guys, btw. Staying out of clan business, serving the world and nature. That’s my jam That would totally be me as a cultivator.

Also I take it back, they’re the wanxian mirror (or at least I hope so) Thank you.

Waitwaitwaitwaitwait I had to reverse this to watch it twice. please correct me if I got anything wrong: Baoshan Wanderer taught wwx’s mother whose name (title?) Is zangze wanderer? And she’s this guy’s sister? So he and wwx are related. And also wwx’s mother is dead 😢 Cangse Sanren, WWX’s mother, was a student of Baoshan Sanren, as was Xiao Xingchen. They’re not related by blood. I know the way they say it sounds like they are, especially WWX calling XXC his uncle, but it’s similar to the way the disciples call each other brothers and sisters. I think the translation of all these honorifics is quite difficult. Yes, the reason the Jiangs took him in was because WWX’s parents died on a night hunt when he was a child. I think this was previously revealed, e.g with Lan Yi (in the famous rabbit ice cave).

Meng Yao is gonna cut a bitch one of these days, isn’t he? (And frankly, I’d understand :/) He would never.

That’s just… my shit you know? I’ve got something for characters that are incredibly restrained and barely show emotion, but who just can’t help themselves around this one specific idiot I think your heart must be made of stone if it doesn’t melt with him

But seriously, I think I see myself in these kinds of characters? I’m not nearly as repressed as lwj, but I do have to overcome quite a lot to openly show my love. It just hits me where it hurts when these characters than click with someone who is way more outgoing than them I believe this is what makes this story so extremely compelling, tbh. Sometimes I find it rather scary how much of these characters I see in myself.

“Wei Ying, I have to go” 😭😭😭 Aaaaand there we go.

Bta, the nie clan leader’s sword is three kinds of awesome It’s my favourite, maybe... definitely among my favourites! (It’s called Baxia btw., in case you needed useless trivia. XD)

Like sure, Meng Yao was acting suspicious but … holy shit that escalated quickly You have no idea. XD

Okay, so he seems to survive the … stab to the chest. I’m confused … That sure is a recurring thing in this. Surviving wounds you shouldn’t be able to survive. XD Also, my best boy Wen Zhuliu.

I’m fascinated by Meng Yao! Me too, pal, me too. He is such a well developed character (all of them are, what is this)

..........Wow this got LONG. And definitely not a means to procrastinate drawing or anything.... Sorry! ^^’ This episode is a lot though, so I’m gonna say a lot

The Untamed, episode 10 - watching notes

Still chilling with a bunch of bodies

Again, I love the actor that plays lwj. I have read before that his acting was heavily criticised but I find it to be extremely calculated and subtle in a way that is perfect for the character (especially in contrast with wwx, whose outgoing and loud personality is matched by his actor's expressive portrayal of him)

Uhh there's a new guy and he wears a weird glove that, I can't help but think, would be terrible in our current situation

A cocky guy in black and an unnaturally serious guy in white ... I think I drank too much wine tonight. I'm experiencing double vision

Please tell me this isn't foreshadowing Please tell me this isn't foreshadowing Please tell me this isn't foreshadowing

"Lan Zhan. Are you still bored?" Lol. So eager to impress :D

And now there's a third guy just magically appearing out of thin air

I love how our original three are just watching this as if it's their favourite program

They're basically us

Also wwx is genuinely offended that thus guy tries to match him in cheekiness

Why does the nie clan's arrival feel so ominous? (okay, except for the ominous music) they're friends and allies ... right?

I like these two guys, btw. Staying out of clan business, serving the world and nature. That's my jam

Also I take it back, they're the wanxian mirror (or at least I hope so)

Oh no, whose name alone could make wwx look so sad? :(

Waitwaitwaitwaitwait I had to reverse this to watch it twice. please correct me if I got anything wrong: Baoshan Wanderer taught wwx's mother whose name (title?) Is zangze wanderer? And she's this guy's sister? So he and wwx are related. And also wwx's mother is dead 😢

Oh god, wwx looks years younger in this scene :'(

Meng Yao is gonna cut a bitch one of these days, isn't he? (And frankly, I'd understand :/)

Another aside: I'm starting to notice patterns in the way certain clans dress and style their hair: the nie clan men all wear braids for example. I like it! (Might try to recreate Meng Yao's hairstyle sometime)

Lmao. Somehow, people vomiting seems to be entirely out of place in this show :D

Every time lwj does his almost smile, my heart melts

That's just... my shit you know? I've got something for characters that are incredibly restrained and barely show emotion, but who just can't help themselves around this one specific idiot

OMG IF YOU PUT IT LIKE THAT LWJ IS BASICALLY CASTIEL AND WWX IS HIS DEAN!!!

This is me falling for destiel all over again, except its actually focking canon and the costumes are way cooler :D

But seriously, I think I see myself in these kinds of characters? I'm not nearly as repressed as lwj, but I do have to overcome quite a lot to openly show my love. It just hits me where it hurts when these characters than click with someone who is way more outgoing than them

Wwx being poetic when he's drunk, on the other hand, is also something i can relate to :D

"Wei Ying, I have to go" 😭😭😭

You don't understand I'm actually clutching my chest right now! This is not okay. They cant just part right now! How dare you leave when he's sleeping on your roof!?!

lwj's voice ... 😏

Aaand now the Wen Clan is coming. See lan zhan, you should have stayed!!!

Bta, the nie clan leader's sword is three kinds of awesome

WTFWTFWTF

I DID NOT EXPECT THIS TO HAPPEN SO QUICKLY

Like sure, Meng Yao was acting suspicious but ... holy shit that escalated quickly

That was him, right?

Or wait.... I'm so confused ... now he sacrificed himself?

But I know I've seen pictures of him in later episodes

Okay, so he seems to survive the ... stab to the chest. I'm confused ...

I'm fascinated by Meng Yao!

Again, I got a feeling he will cut some bitches (again) after this! This can't end well

What an episode! 💯💯💯

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