#‘can’t help falling in love’ and the lackluster ‘history huh’ took me the fuck out

[yellobb]

I think the RWRB movie’s greatest flaw is that there’s too much to try to cram into a movie. Every piece of plot that isn’t strictly “Alex and Henry” has to be excluded because there isn’t even time to develop Alex and Henry properly. It’s all so rushed because the story is too complex unless you completely get rid of one of the major plot points.

Its second greatest flaw is the subpar acting that takes up 80% of the movie

Anyway, stop making books like this into movies and keep making them into TV shows instead

[dust-broken-berry]

Part 11 here, second post up in a second

Part 11: Six

“Ok go on spit it out”

    Dust said making Horror growl-

“Alright, but this is recent information, i would’ve told you sooner…”

    Horror thought of the best way today this

“So ever since It got to PJ and I guess a bit before then, I thought about asking Sci for something, anything on him.”

“Did he get you anything?”

    Blue asked making Horror scratch his head

“Eh no…but he said he knew a guy that had some history stuff, you know some books and garbage. I said ya I guess and before my stupid ass knew it, I had stacks upon stacks of really, really old books that looked like they were about to fall apart.”

“Did you read them?”

“No Nightmare I just put 'em back where I found them, of course I read them.”

“You can’t blame me, you just didn’t seem like the type of reader.”

    Nightmare said, Horror just grumbled

“Anyways, I figured out that this guy existed a really long time ago, around Underfell or maybe Royaltale.”

“How long ago?”

“It was soon after monsters got stuck in mount Ebit.”

“He’s been around for that long?..”

    Blue asked surprised, Horror answered-

“I don’t think you can even say that”

“What do you mean?”

“The guy we see now didn’t even pop up till fifty years later, after monsters first met him.”

“Why?”

    Horror thought and was unsure on how to say this, so he just said-

“Ok I’m gonna try and explain this as best as I can, because at this point it shouldn’t be that hard to believe.”

“Ok...go on?”

“This guy was like a bug, like Error in a way but then again not really. He wasn’t meant to be there.”

“So you think this mistake is It?”

    Nightmare asked, Horror nodded

“That’s what the books said”

“Ok, what else did they say?”

“They said this It was killed by his little town area but one the less he died.”

“Wait, the town killed him? Like you mean a trial or an angry mob?”

    Nightmare ask, again Horror nodded

“Ya, after a trial he was found guilty for killing some guys but before he could legally ‘taken care of’ town’s folk murdered him.”

“My guess is he didn’t dy”

    Blue said, Horror said

“Ehhh, well technically he did but he came back, I don’t know if it was because of, determination, spite, anger, or whatever but still he came back.”

“They then killed him again?”

    Dust asked, Horror answered-

“Ya and can you guess how many times he died and came back?”

“Six?”

“Wow wonder where you got that one”

    Dust looked at Horror angrily

“Ok fine all jokes aside, ya he died six times before he stopped showing up.”

“Until now…”

    Blue said in a depressed tone, looking back over at BluePrint for a second.

“Ya...and every time he came back he just looked worse, eventually looking like he does now.”

“The tar right?”

“Ya….”

“Ok...but what did he do to my son?”

    Blue said in a demanding tone, Horror asked-

“You sure you don’t want to hear about what happened to you-”

“Yes”

“...Ok well I don’t know much but I know that this one is only meant to up your magic and not really do anything else.”

“Through pain...I’m guessing…”

“Ya…”

“So what did he do?”

“He just gave the kid pain, in what way I couldn’t tell you. But I just know it’s going to be lasting…”

    As Horror said that Blue shook a bit and asked-

“So this will affect him forever?”

“...Sorry I couldn’t bring you better news…”

“You couldn’t help it…”

“Still feel the need to say it”

“Horror...can I ask a question?”

    Nightmare asked, Horror snickered a bit

“Do you really have to ask?”

“Ok don’t be snarky”

“Fine, fine what is it?”

“I wanted to know if you knew about any of Its other forms.”

“Not yet...only the one, that’s why I didn’t tell you yet.”

“I see…”

    Nightmare said, followed by no one saying anything else. It was quiet for a minute till Dust asked-

“Are...you sure that happened to-”

“Ya...that was the one thing I was sure about, like I just said.”

“Then why him? Why not anyone else?”

    Blue asked, just making Horror sigh

“Because BluePrint was important to you and PJ”

“Both of Its victims”

    Nightmare said, Blue sulked

“God damnit…”

    He said putting his head in his hands

“This is my fault...I know I shouldn’t be thinking that way but I still can’t get the thought out of my head that this happened to him because of me…”

“Berry it’s not your fault…”

    Dust said, trying to reassure Blue. Nightmare took the hint and left dragging Horror behind him. Horror was confused so asked-

“Hey why did ya drag me out?”

“Horror you need to learn how to take a hint, because the fact that you have to ask is...disappointing to say the least.”

“So now I’m a disappointment?”

“No you can just be an idiot sometimes”

“Well sorry I’m not that smart”

“You know you’re now calling yourself an idiot, right?”

“Hey I’m fine admitting that I am very stupid”

    They both laughed, Nightmare saying-

“Haha well you’re not that dumb, you at least found something on It.”

“At Least? Geez how high are your standards?”

    Nightmare chuckled

“Well you should at least take the compliment.”

“...”

“What is it?”

    Nightmare asked, making Horror sulked

“I know I already said it before, but I wanted to know everything or at least a bit more before I-”

“Just stop”

“Huh?”

“Look, out of everyone here you were the only one that took any initiative to look and find information. Me along with everyone else just waited till it fell on our laps.”

“Oh uh well thanks?... But it’s not like you guys didn’t find anything.”

“Horror”

“Eh?”

“Could I take a look at those books?”

“Ya sure if you want. I didn’t look at them all yet, and oh some of those books I can’t read so-”

“I may be able to help you with that”

“You could try but it’s not like spanish or something”

“I would think”

“Sooo you know like-”

“I’m self taught and I had a lot of time on my hands as a child, to say the least.”

“And that’s how you spent your free time?”

“Ya? Why?”

“Well as a kid I spent my free time you know watching TV or fucking around outisde.”

“You think I had cable TV near a tree?”

“Your AU is weird so it wouldn’t surprise me”

“So you think that we were so strange that we somehow had cable TreeV?”

    Nightmare said sarcastically. Horror stopped for a second and started laughing. Nightmare snickered and said- 

“It wasn’t meant to be a joke”

“It was still funny”

    Nightmare just rolled his eyes, then stopped

“Oh shit”

“What?”

    Horor asked, Nightmare just pointed in front of him

“Just look”

    Horror looked up, and said-

“Oh...well that’s a pretty oh shit moment right there.”

    When they looked up they saw Ink walking through the hospital doors. The two monsters just stood there for a second, thinking about what they should do next. So Horror just said-

“Welp I know you said we should fuck off but I think we should go back and tell Blue and Dust that he’s here.”

“Ya that’s a good idea”

    With that they turned back around and speed walked down the hall, back into the room. Blue and Dust looked over confused, and Nightmare said-

“Ink came here anyways”

    The two were now more surprised to hear that, with Blue yelling-

“You said you stopped him!”

“We did. He was down and gone so we thought we stopped him. But I guess he came here anyway.”

    Horror said angrily, Dust and Blue sighed

“Shit…”   

    Dust said as Blue grabbed his arm, making it so Ink could see him. Blue said-

“Go help them deal with this”

“What about you...and him…”

    Dust said looking over at BluePrint

“I’ll be ok, and he won’t wake up for a little while…”

    Blue said reassuringly, Dust was still uneasy but left the room anyways. He asked-

“So where was Ink?”

“He was just walking through the doors”

    Nightmare answered

“So he may already be coming over here…”

    Dust growled, as Horror asked-

“Do you think he would even be allowed over here?”

“No but you know him, he can’t be stopped easily”

    Dust said, as they were about to turn the corner when Dust stopped.

“He’s there isn’t he?”

    Nightmare asked, Dust nodded and said-

“Ya but we’re not fighting in a hospital, we don’t want to get the boot from this AU to.”

    Nightmare sighed

“I guess that’s reasonable”

“So we’re just gonna wait till he turns the corner?”

    Horror asked, Dust just said-

“Well do you have any better ideas?”

    Horror just shut up and they waited till Ink turned the corner. Ink didn’t look surprised, and he just sulked.

“Oh...well I should’ve expected this…”

    Ink said, followed by Dust snickering and saying-

“You knew this wouldn’t be easy”

“Ya I did...but I have a right you know...to see him…”

“You lost the right, and luckily Blue four years ago”

    Dust snarled, Ink sighed

“I know what I did was bad...horrible even...to Blue...and BluePrint…”

“Then why are you here?”

    Nightmare asked, Ink answered-

“Because even though I only saw it briefly, I saw that there were cracks on BluePrint’s skull...right?”

    Ink asked, but no one answered so he continued

“Look...I know you guys are figuring out what me and Error did… But I’m being honest, I’m here to help BluePrint…”

“Why here? Why now?”

    Dust again asked in an agnery tone, again Ink answered-

“Because he is my son...and I want to help him… I don’t want to help him for anyone else but him…”

“What about you?”

    Horror asked, Ink looked up so Horror continued-

“Is it to make you sleep better at night, knowing that you helped out the son that you just left for four years? Is it so you can tell your kids that they have another brother that they can see and love ‘Just as much as you do’? Or is the only one that you’re doing this yourself?”

    Tears began to drip down Ink’s face, he put a hand up feeling the dark inky tears.

“Or somewhere in that lackluster soul of yours is there an ounce that still cares about that kid.”

    Horror finished, and Ink didn’t say anything for a second, then he spoke-

“Ya...you’re probably right… This may just be for me, to help me sleep at night, to tell my family that I still care, or it may be that somewhere in my being I do care… But it doesn’t matter the reason, I just want to see my son and I want to fix him…”

    Dust sulked and said-

“If I let you go…”

“Dust what are you-”

“You’ll fix his scars?”

    Dust asked, cutting Nightmare off before he could intervene. Ink answered-

“Y-Yes”

“Then…”

Dust turned around and said-

“I’ll ask Blue...I know he’s gonna want what’s best for him…”

    Ink looked over at Dust and said-

“He’s like another son to you i-isn’t he?..”

    Dust stopped for a second and he said-

“I… I guess he is…”

    And with that Dust walked back to Blue, with Horror and Nightmare staying behind to watch Ink. He went into the hospital room

“Berry…”

“Ya…”

“Ink’s here and-”

“He wants to fix BluePrint…”

    Blue sighed

“I know…”

“...”

    Blue thought, putting his head in his hands and saying-

“I can’t be selfish….I need to worry about BluePrint. If Ink doesn’t fix BluePrint’s scars...then they’ll be with him forever...I don’t think I would be able to live with myself if I let the only help for him just walk away…”

Blue paused for a minute, not saying anything after that. Dust just said-

“I’ll go get Ink then…”

“Thank you”

    Blue said as Dust left the room again, and went back down the hall. He saw Ink and told him

“You can go”

“Are you sure?”

    Nightmare asked

“Yes”

    Dust answered as the four went back into the room. Blue was still sitting next to BluePrint, he asked-

“You can fix him?..”

“Y-Yes”

    Ink said, Blue just sighed

“Go ahead…”

    He said, prompting Ink to take out one of his smaller paint brushes and start painting away the cracks. As he did the design on BluePrint’s head grew.

    Then after a bit he was done, Blue thanking him

“Thank you…”

“You’re welcome”

    Silence only followed Ink’s words, so he said-

“Did...you want to talk about-”

“No not now, not until I know he’s ok...even though I know you and Error did something to me...but I don’t want to talk about it right now.”

    Ink sighed and smiled

“I’m happy...that you care this much about one of my c-creations…”

    Blue looked over at Ink, angered and confused

“Your what? . .”

“You may not want to talk in depth about it right now...but I think I should tell you what he really is…”

“I know what he is, and I know-”

“Blue…”

    Blue tried to argue but he couldn’t, every time he thought about BluePrint being made it’s something different. Maybe one day he would think that BluePrint was born the normal way, other days that he and Ink accidentally made him with their magic. But still...he was never sure…

    He wiped his eyes before he could start crying and said-

“S-So...he isn’t mine…”

“Wait what? No, no...he’s a lot more of you than you could ever imagine…”

“What's that supposed to mean?”

    Ink thought of the best way to explain this, and started saying-

“After Error...screwed up, I was left to try and clean up the mess. At first I was just going to wipe your memory, and place fake ones over it. But then I realized that if you went to any of the others and said something then the whole illusion would be shattered…”

“Why would you need to wipe my memory?”

“Let’s not get into that now...anyways you were somewhere, can’t remember specifically where but you ended up spilling-”

“That ink stuff you had? It could bring life to things, I remember that.”

“No...no you don’t”

“...”

“Yes...that stuff could bring life to things...but it could only do so much. It made BluePrint, well most of him...but that’s all it did.”

“What do you mean that’s all it did?”

“It made a creature without a soul, a being, or anything. BluePrint was just a husk when he was made, and I didn’t realize he was a thing till I went back and checked on you…”